2014高考英语二轮复习专题复习课件：书面表达 第一讲　提纲式书面表达(文字信息类).ppt

1、高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场第三部分 写 作高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场 书面表达第一讲 提纲式书面表达(文字信息类)高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场角度1 议论文【典例】(2012江西卷)某 英 文 报 社 举 办 以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文：1你为什么喜欢读书；2你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。注意：词数120左右。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【思路点拨】第一步：审题谋篇

2、1审题：体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第一、三人称2谋篇：(1)首段点出主题：我喜欢阅读；再陈述喜欢阅读的理由。(2)第二段给出自己喜欢的书籍类型，并陈述原因。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场第二步：确定要点1词汇从阅读中受益匪浅benefit a great deal from reading books从中挑选 choose from.提高写作技能 improve writing skills拓宽某人的视野 broaden ones horizon高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场2句式(1)众所周知，书籍是人类进步的阶梯。(as we know)As w

3、e know，books are the ladder of humans progress.(2)但是最令我感兴趣的是科学方面的书。(what)But what interests me most is science books.(3)一方面，读书能提高我们的写作技能，拓宽我们的视野。另一方面，读书能丰富我们的生活，使我们得到乐趣。(For one thing.for another.)For one thing，reading books can not only imporve our writing skills but also broaden our horizons.For a

4、nother，it can enrich our life and provide us with great fun.高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场第三步：连句成篇【范文赏读】I Like ReadingI like reading very much.First of all，when I was a little girl，I was interested in reading picture books on science and history.Books give me a large amount of knowledge.When I am reading，

5、I am so addicted to the book that I can forget all the unhappy things.So its a very good way to relax and reduce the pressure.Second，my mother is a Chinese teacher.She is always encouraging me to read more.Shebelieves that reading is a good habit，and it can help develop my thinking and learning abil

6、ities.高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场Different from others，I always read the books of Jin Yong.I dont think we students cant read those kinds of books.From Jin Yongs books，we can see how a hero grows up.My favorite book is The Hero of ShottingEagle.Its one of Jin Yongs masterpieces.It tells us that as long

7、 as were hardworking，everything can be successful.I become more confident.Reading is a good way to do everything.Friends，if you want to be clever，please read.If you want to be friendly，please read.If you want to be a wise man，please read.高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【赏文酌句】文章开篇点题，前后呼应，内容充实，表达流畅，条理清晰。first

8、 of all和second的使用，使得文章层次分明，段落清晰。使用so.that.表达了自己对于阅读的喜爱。另外，词组be addicted to运用得十分恰当。进行时态与always连用表达一种喜欢和赞扬的情绪，提高了文章档次。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【佳句模拟】1be addicted to对入迷，上瘾模 拟 As a teenager，youd better not be addicted to cigarettes.作为一个十几岁的青少年，你最好不要迷上抽烟。2进行时与always连用，表示“老是”“总是”。模拟Dont be always translati

9、ng everything into your own language while learning English.学英语时不要老是把一切东西都译成自己的母语。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场3排比句是写作常用的修辞手法，尤其是在演讲稿中，可以哄托气氛。模拟We study hard in order to be wise，to be powerful，and to serve our country well.我们努力学习为了睿智，为了强大，更为了更好地为祖国服务。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【知识链接】考生要对所提供的信息进行有效地重组，审清题意，文

10、章主旨等，内容表达完整，思路清晰，观点积极向上。充分关注行文的连贯性和文章的层次性，有理有据，表达到位。最大程度地做到句法无误，句式优美，符合英语的表达习惯。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场角度2 应用文【典例】(2012全国卷)假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：1时间：周五晚8点至9点2地点：学生俱乐部3内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4要求：备小礼物注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场Hi Susan，W

11、ere throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday._Yours，Li Hua【思路点拨】第一步：审题谋篇1审题：体裁：应用文书信时态、语态：一般现在时、一般将来时为主；主动语态为主。人称：第一、三人称2谋篇：内容重点：生日聚会。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场第二步：确定要点1词汇give sb a surprise，keep him in the dark，hold a party，prepare a little present，light the candles2句式Wed like to invite you to

12、 the party.The party will be held.Theres going to be.第三步：连句成篇高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【范文赏读】Hi Susan，Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday.Wedlike to invite you to the party.We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it.Well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Frid

13、ay，after the evening classes.And its going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he comes，well light the candles and sing“Happy Birthday”together for him.Thenthe cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games.Itll be nice to see how excited he will be.Im sure youll ha

14、ve a good time at the party，too.Yours，Li Hua高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【赏文酌句】文章思路清晰，要点完整，表达流畅到位。连词so，and，then使用恰当，动词last，excite使用得体。句式Wed like to.Itll be nice to.较好。【佳句模拟】Wed like to.我们想模拟：Wed like to hold a party for him.我们想为他举行一次晚会。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【知识链接】1邀请信包括宴会、舞会、晚餐、聚会、婚礼等各种邀请信件，形 式 上 大 体 分

15、 为 两 种：一 种 为 正 规 的 格 式(formal correspondence)，亦称请柬；一种是非正式格式(informal correspondence)，即一般的邀请信。2邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但是也很考究。书写时应注意：邀请信一定要将邀请的时间(年、月、日、钟点)、地点、场合写清楚，不能让接信人有任何疑虑。例如：Id like you and Bob to come to lunch on Friday.这句话中的星期五所指的是哪一天并不明确，故应加上具体日期，“Id like you and Bob to come to lunch on next Friday，

16、May the fifth.”高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场角度3 记叙文【典例】(2012山东卷)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1参加英语角的益处；2坚持写英语日记的作用；3英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【思路点拨】第一步：审题谋篇：本文要求以李华的名义写一篇文章来介绍一下课外学习英语的经验。时态应以一般现在时为主

17、。第二步：确定要点：写作时应列举出参加的三个主要活动及益处，保证要点全面，并尽量使用所积累的高级词汇，如participate in，take part in，manage to do，in addition，whats more等。第三步：连句成篇。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【范文赏读】My name is Li Hua.I feel honoured to have the chance to share my outofclass English learning experience with you.First of all，I often participat

18、e in English Corner，where I can talk and communicate with students and foreign teachers.Not onlycan I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western countries.Secondly，I insist on keeping a diary，which can improve my ability of expressing myself in English and help me to put what I

19、ve learnt to use.高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场In addition，I often surf the Internet and browse EnjoyReading，which enlarges my vocabulary and helps to improve my reading speed and my reading comprehension ability.Furthermore，it opens a window for me to see the world.Its because of this and my effort in cl

20、ass that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school.Ihope my experience will be of some help to you and I also wish for your advice.高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【赏文酌句】文章五段布局，条理清楚，叙述简洁明了，句式优美。亮点词汇：honour，participate，in addition，effort等。亮点句式：.feel honoured to do.not

21、 only.but also.insist on doing sth强调句型where，which引导的非限制性定语从句等。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【佳句模拟】1be/feel honoured to do sth.做某事感到荣幸I was honoured to have been mentioned in his speech.很荣幸他在讲话中提到我。2not only.but also.不但而且Not only the students but also their teacher is enjoying the film.不仅学生们在欣赏这部电影，他们的老师也在

22、欣赏。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场【知识链接】1多使用词组、短语以增加文采，增强文章的表现力。如文中share with，participate in等的运用。2多使用复合句可以使句式多变，行文更加丰富多彩。3正确使用连接成分和过渡性词语可使全文结构紧凑，富有逻辑性，更具说服力和感染力。如文中in addition等。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场体验高考高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场防范1 表达信息不完整在文字信息类(提纲式)书面表达中，题目要求所给信息点繁多，但不管多少，一定有主次之分，考生应根据主题内容，表述详略得当，不可遗漏题目要

23、求中的信息。防范2 条目式汉语翻译提纲式书面表达往往提供条目式要点信息，考生切忌把提供的条目要求一二三四地翻译出来，如果这样做，一是表达没有主次之分，二是所要求表达的字数不够，更重要的是这不能算作一篇行文连贯的文章。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场防范3 避免低级错误【典 例】There are many ways to know the society.Forexample by TV，radio，newspaper and so on.At the age of ten，my father died.I against your proposal.在第一句中，for exa

24、mple与and so on矛盾，应去掉and so on.第二句话，作者想表达“我十岁时，父亲去世了。”句子逻辑主语不当，应表达为：When I was ten，my father died.第三句中作者漏掉句子的谓语，误把against当作动词，应为I am against your proposal.总之，在书面表达中要避免一系列的低级错误，给改卷老师留下好的印象。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场防范4 正确使用标点符号英语标点符号同汉语标点符号有所不同。值得注意的是：汉语句号是空心圈，而英语句号是实心点。英语无书名号“”。高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场

25、【高档作文点评】(2012安徽高考)假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。注意：1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：文科arts；理科scienceGood afternoon，everyone，Welcome to our school！_Thanks！高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场学生写作高考命题视角考场失分防范专题知识清单高考阅读现场名师点评1.结构清晰，层次分明。覆盖了所有内容要点。2.语句通顺，过渡自然，标点正确。Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，Last but not least等过渡词的使用，使文章过渡自然，浑然一体。3.decide on，in great demand等高级词汇的使用以及It is difficult for me to make.等高级句式的运用，充分证明了作者对语言的驾驭能力。4.总之，本文达到了外在美、结构美、词汇美、句式美、衔接美的要求，为满分作文。