（河南专版）2022春八年级英语下册 Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came写作能力提升练课件（新版）人教新目标版.ppt

1、写作能力提升练 UNIT 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。一些突发的灾难或事故留给人们的记忆是悲伤的、长远的。平安和健康是那么重要，我们要从事故中吸取教训，避免类似伤害再次发生。河南人教版八年级下假如近期你所在中学的校刊开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请你根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。要 点提示：1.在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。2.女孩要离开时，发现树下有一位老乞丐，他看上去很饿。3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。4.乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。5.你很感动

2、参考词汇：乞丐beggar;感动be moved_【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.当我正买早餐时，我看见在我前面的女孩买了一些面包和牛奶。While I was_,I saw a girl in front of me_.buying breakfast buy some bread and milk2.当她要离开时，她发现树下有一个老乞丐。When she_,she found _.3.那个女孩走到他身旁，把她的早餐给了他。The girl _ and _.was going to leave an old beggar under

3、the tree came up to him gave her breakfast to him4.当那个乞丐向女孩道谢时，她什么也没说并且微笑着走了。When the beggar_,she said nothing and_ on her face.5.我被那个女孩所做的事感动了。I _ by what the girl did.said thanks to the girl went away with a smilewas moved【巧妙衔接】简述一件事情时，用一般过去时和过去进行时。这两种时态配合使用可以建立起上下文的逻辑联系。全文按照事情的发展过程来描述，运用连词when 或w

4、hile，使文章过渡自然。【精彩范文】On a cold morning,while I was buying breakfast,I saw a girl in front of me buy some bread and milk.When she was going to leave,she found an old beggar under the tree.He looked very hungry.The girl came up to him and gave her breakfast to him.When the beggar said thanks to the girl

5、,she said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.I was moved by what the girl did.Her kindness touched me a lot.I decided to learn from her and be a kind person.I should help the people in need from now on.在你的生活中一定有一些难以忘记的经历，请你根据下面的提示，以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇英语短文，描述一次让你难忘的经历。提示：1.

6、When and where did it happen?2.What were you doing when it happened?3.How did you feel about it？要求：100 词左右,可适当发挥。_ _An unforgettable experienceIf you ask my unforgettable experience,I will tell you a story about me and a little dog.Last Saturday afternoon,I took a walk in a park nearby.When I was go

7、ing back,a dog walked after me.It followed me until I got to the door of my house.When I was opening the door,it was sitting on the ground and looking at me_ _sadly,as if it was saying,“I got lost.Could you please help me？”“What a poor dog！”I thought.Then I let it in and gave it some food and water.After that,I put up a notice in our neighborhood.The next day,the owner of the dog came to my house and took it away.He thanked me a lot before leaving.I was very happy because I was able to give others a hand.