2021届高考英语二轮复习专练：35分写作规范抢分练三 WORD版含解析.doc

1、35分写作规范抢分练(三)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020合肥市高三第二次诊断检测Last month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match. I took the place with my classmate, Wang Bin, who had been serious injured before the match. During the match, I try my best to move and pass the ball. I shot a

2、couple of time but I scored none, what made me very worried. All my teammates comforted me but they gave me a lot of encourage. We played as a team and did everything we could win the match. In an end, we won 6563. It was a fantastic memory that would be worth treasuring it forever.第二节书面表达(满分25分)202

3、0兰州高三诊断考试春季是充满希望的季节，但也是各种传染病多发的季节。假定你是校学生会主席李华，请代表学生会给你校英语报“青少年健康”栏目写一封主题为“健康生活，远离病毒”的倡议书，内容包括：1简述倡议目的；2提出防范措施；3倡议共同行动。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：传染病infectious diseaseDear fellow students，_The Student Union35分写作规范抢分练(三)第一节答案与解析：Last month I got a chance to take part in our sc

4、hool basketball match. I took the place my classmate, Wang Bin, who had been injured before the match. During the match, I my best to move and pass the ball. I shot a couple of but I scored none, made me very worried. All my teammates comforted me they gave me a lot of . We played as a team and did

5、everything we could win the match. In end, we won 6563. It was a fantastic memory that would be worth treasuring forever.with改为of。介词误用。此处表示“我代替了我的同班同学”，take the place of意为“代替”，为固定用法。serious改为seriously。形容词和副词混用。修饰形容词“injured”要用副词，故改为seriously。try改为tried。动词的时态误用。根据文章第一句中的“Last month”可知，本文讲述的是过去发生的事，故此

6、处要用一般过去时。time改为times。名词的单复数误用。time在本句中意为“次”，为可数名词，且根据其前的“a couple of”可知，此处要用复数形式。what改为which。关系代词误用。此处为非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个主句，故要用which来引导定语从句。but改为and。连词误用。“All my teammates comforted me”与“they gave me a lot of.”之间为并列关系，不存在转折，故要改为and。encourage改为encouragement。动词和名词混用。a lot of意为“许多”，后接可数名词复数或不可数名词，故用名词enc

7、ouragement。win前加to。动词不定式符号漏用。此处的“we could”为定语从句，且从句省略了“do”，修饰“everything”，故要用“to win”作目的状语。an改为the。冠词误用。in the end意为“最后”，为固定用法。删除it。代词多用。“that would be worth treasuring”为定语从句；修饰“memory”，其中“treasuring”的逻辑宾语为“that”，故it多余，应删除。第二节参考范文：Dear fellow students，Spring is coming! It brings us hope as well as a

8、 lot of infectious diseases. Some measures are supposed to be taken to protect us from the virus.First of all, people with cold or flulike symptoms should wear masks to prevent viruses spreading from person to person. Of course, dont forget to wash your hands properly before eating or after using th

9、e toilet. Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease. If possible, avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas, shopping malls and Internet bars etc.A healthy body results from good healthy habits, so lets act together to fight against diseases and create a better life!The Student Union