2021届高考二轮英语书面表达优化学案14 ：依法治国 WORD版含解析.doc

1、2021届高考二轮英语书面表达优化学案热门话题： 依法治国假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论, 同学们观点有分歧, 各自理由主要如下表所示, 请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。赞同反对1. 重建该园辉煌景象1. 保留原样更为合理2. 中华文明具体体现2. 警示人们不忘过去3. 旅游新景点3. 其他建筑同样反映中华文化(如故宫、颐和园等), 重建并非必需4. 如部分恢复, 可与废墟对照, 让人们记住历史4. 破坏该地生态环境注意:词数:80左右。参考词汇:故宫the Palace Museum颐和园the Summer PalaceStep 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第三人称时态一般

2、现在时, 一般将来时段落布局开头点题:简要说明这次讨论主题段落:陈述两种不同的观点结尾:表明自己的观点。Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:fall into ruins, original, reflect, comparison, reasonable, remind sb. of sth, advisable, promote(2)佳句 Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chi

3、nese civilization. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district. Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:支持重建的人认为通过这么做, 我们可以看见花园的原始景观;它反映了中国文明。一般表达:Supporters of rebuilding the garden say that we can see the original sight of the garden, and it reflects the Chines

4、e civilization. 句式升级(倒装句, 定语从句)支持重建的人认为只有通过这么做, 我们才可以看见花园的原始景观, 它反映了中国文明。Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. 要点2:如果我们重建它的一部分, 它就可以提供一种对照让我们记住历史。一般表达:If we rebuild part of it, it will provide a

5、comparison and help us remember the history. 句式升级(过去分词作状语)If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history. Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860. Recently my classmates had a discuss

6、ion about whether it should be rebuilt or not. Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and

7、 help us remember the history. Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isnt neces

8、sary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district. Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan, which will add beauty to the city. Whats more, the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development o

9、f the local. 保护野生动物世纪金榜导学号以 “Protect Wild Animals” 为题, 写一篇短文。要求包括以下要点, 可适当增加细节, 使文章完整通顺。要点:1. 意义:野生动物与人类的生活息息相关;2. 现状:野生动物正在被过度捕杀;3. 后果:a. 生态平衡被破坏;b. 人类受到大自然的惩罚;4. 建议:a. 严惩盗猎者;b. 提高环保意识; c. 建立自然保护区。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Protect Wild AnimalsWild animals are mans close friends. They

10、 not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are being over-hunted, and some species are dying out. If it goes on like this, man is to be punished. In order to stay away from the seemingly faraway disaster, man has to do something. First, effective laws must be passed to give the illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, we must set up nature reserves to provide the animals with comfortable habitats. Third, peoples awareness of environment protection should be raised to a higher level.