《全国校级联考》河南省许昌市三校2015-2016学年高二下学期第四次联考英语试题解析（解析版）WORD版含解析.doc

1、（考试时间：100分钟 试卷满分： 120分 ）第I卷第一部分 阅读理解（共两节，共20小题；每小题2分，满分40分）第一节 （共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项A、B、C、D中选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。AThere was a gardener who looked after his garden with great care. To water his flowers, he used two buckets(水桶). One was a shiny and new bucket. The other was a very old and

2、 dilapidated one, which had seen many years of service, but was now past its best.Every morning, the gardener would fill up the two buckets. Then he would carry them along the path, one on each side, to the flowerbeds. The new bucket was very proud of itself. It could carry a full bucket of water wi

3、thout a single drop spilled. The old bucket felt very ashamed because of its holes: before it reached the flowerbeds, much water had leaked along the path.Sometimes the new bucket would say, “See how capable I am! How good it is that the gardener has me to water the flowers every day! I dont know wh

4、y he still bothers with you. What a waste of space you are!”And all that the old bucket could say was，“I know I am not very useful, but I can only do my best. I am happy that the gardener still finds a little bit of use in me, at least.”One day, the gardener heard that kind of conversation. After wa

5、tering the flowers as usual, he said, “You both have done your work very well. Now I am going to carry you back, I want you to look carefully along the path.”Then the two buckets did so. All along the path, they noticed, on the side where the new bucket was carried, there was just bare earth; on the

6、 other side where the old bucket was carried, there was a joyous row of wild flowers, leading all the way to the garden.1. What was the old bucket ashamed of?A. His past. B. His aging. C. His manner. D. His leaking.2. What does the underlined word “dilapidated” probably mean?A. dirty B. dark C. worn

7、-out D. ordinary-looking.3. The new bucket made conversations with the old one mainly to _. A. take pity on the old one B. laugh at the old oneC. show off its beautiful looks D. praise the gardeners kindness4. Why was the old bucket still kept by the gardener?A. Because it was used to keep a balance

8、.B. Because it stayed in its best condition. C. Because it had its own function. D. Because it was taken as a treasure. 【答案】1.D2.C3.B4.C【长难句解析】All along the path, they noticed, on the side where the new bucket wascarried, there was just bare（光秃秃的）earth; on the other side where the old bucket was car

9、ried, there was a joyous row of wild flowers, leading all the way to the garden.一路上，他们注意到，在新的桶一边只是光秃秃的泥土，而在旧桶的另一边，有一排欣欣向荣的野花，一路通向花园。分析：这句话中All along the path是地点状语，they noticed是主句，后面使用了两个定语从句和现在分词做状语。考点：考查文化教育类阅读理解 BSunnyside School Bookshop Sunnyside Secondary SchoolA Warm Welcome To All Secondary P

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14、n gives information on grammar and spelling. Clear pronunciation guide.5. The purpose of the notice is to_ .A. educate the pupils B. welcome new pupils C. advertise the bookshop D. make sales6. Fosters Advanced Learners Dictionary is better than Active Learners English Dictionary in that it has_ .A.

15、 more word entries B. grammar tipsC. spelling tips D. pronunciation tips7. Both dictionaries have_.A. tips on spelling and grammar B. tips on pronunciationC. tips on writing D. colour illustrations8. Fosters Advanced Learners Dictionary is for .A. very young learners B. foreign studentsC. relatively

16、 fluent speakers of English D. non-native speakers of English【答案】5.D6.A7.A8.C知C项符合题意。【名师点拨】推理判断题要求在理解原文表面文字信息的基础上，做出一定的推理判断，从而得到文章的隐含意义和深层意义。推理判断题所涉及的内容可能是文中的某一句话，也可能是某几句话，所以，推理题的答案只能是根据原文表面文字信息一步推出的答案：即对原文某一句话或某几句话所作的同义改写或综合。推理判断题的题干中通常含infer,suggest,imply,conclude indicate等标志性词语。 这种题型主要包括细节判断题、态度观

17、点推断题、写作意图推断题、文章出处判断题和猜测想象推断题。比如第8小题，C推理判断题。根据Fosters Advanced Learners Dictionary中The most authoritative and up-to-date dictionary for intermediate (中级的) learners of English.为英语中级学者准备的最有权威的和更新的词典。可知C项符合题意。考点：考查广告类阅读 CWould it surprise you to learn that, like animals, trees communicate with each othe

18、r and pass on their wealth to the next generation?UBC Professor Simard explains how trees are much more complex than most of us ever imagined. Although Charles Darwin thought that trees are competing for survival of the fittest, Simard shows just how wrong he was. In fact, the opposite is true: tree

19、s survive through their co-operation and support, passing around necessary nutrition “depending on who needs it”.Nitrogen（氮） and carbon are shared through miles of underground fungi（真菌）networks, making sure that all trees in the forest ecological system give and receive just the right amount to keep

20、 them all healthy. This hidden system works in a very similar way to the networks of neurons（神经元）in our brains, and when one tree is destroyed, it affects all.Simard talks about “mother trees”, usually the largest and oldest plants on which all other trees depend. She explains how dying trees pass o

21、n the wealth to the next generation, transporting important minerals to young trees so they may continue to grow. When humans cut down “mother trees” with no awareness of these highly complex “tree societies” or the networks on which they feed, we are reducing the chances of survival for the entire

22、forest.“We didnt take any notice of it.” Simard says sadly . “Dying trees move nutrition into the young trees before dying, but we never give them a chance.” If we could put across the message to the forestry industry, we could make a huge difference towards our environmental protection efforts for

23、the future.9. What would be the best title for the passage? A. Old Trees Communicate Like HumansB. Young Trees Are In Need Of ProtectionC. Trees Are More Complex Than You ThinkD. Trees Contribute To Our Society 10. In Simards opinion, trees _ . A. depend on each other B. protect their own wealthC. c

24、ompete for survival D. provide support for dying trees11. We can learn from the passage that A. “mother trees” are usually of no use to other trees.B. Charles Darwin had the same thought as Simard.C. people know much about the complex “tree societies”.D. if “mother trees” are cut down, the survival

25、for the entire forest will be affected.12. The underlined word “it” in the last paragraph refers to . A. how trees grow old B. how “tree societies” workC. how forestry industry develops D. how young trees survive【答案】9.C10.A11.D12.B【名师点睛】猜测词义题解题技巧 事实上，阅读材料中的每个词与它前后的词语或句子甚至段落都有联系。我们可以利用语境（各种已知信息）推测、判断

26、某些生词的词义。做这种类型的题，要根据词、词组、句子所在的语境来判断其意义。因此熟练掌握一些猜词技巧是做好这类题的关键。命题者在出这类题时惯用常规词义来麻痹考生，我们要特别注意熟词生义，切不可脱离语境想当然。在句子或段落中，我们可以利用熟悉的词语，根据语言环境所表示的关系推断生词词义。比如本文第12小题，B猜词题：it出现在文章最后一段：实际上it指代的是第四段提到的内容，人们砍倒快死的mother trees是不知道树的社会的依存关系，可知it指的是“树的社会”是怎么运作的，所以选B。考点：考查说明文阅读 DThe fourth round of heavy smog to hit Beij

27、ing in four weeks has sent more people to the hospital with respiratory（呼吸的） illnesses and led to calls for laws to control the pollution.Pan Shiyi, a celebrity real estate（房地产）developer said he is planning to propose a Clean Air Act to the local government. As a representative to the Beijing Munici

28、pal Peoples Congress, he started an online survey at 9:20 a.m. Within three hours, more than 25,000 web users, or 99 percent of total respondents, welcomed his proposal on Sina Weibo, Chinas Twitter.They have good reasons to stand alongside Pan. The latest round of haze（雾霾）reduced visibility to unde

29、r 500 meters in many parts of the city. The smog has also led to a great increase in respiratory illnesses, particularly among children and the elderly. Anxious parents and doctors almost all blame the smoggy air for the illnesses. Though most schoolchildren are home for the winter holidays, the bad

30、 air can easily move indoors. Besides, ordinary medical masks fail to provide adequate protection, so some people have turned to gas masks and respirators（呼吸器）.The causes of the scary smog are rather mysterious, though experts blame excessive emissions（过多排放）and the mountains around Beijing that trap

31、 pollution in winter, unless there is adequate wind to clear it away. Some critics have pointed fingers at Chinas top two oil firms, China National Petroleum Corp and China Petrochemical Corporation, saying the companies outdated production technologies produce large quantities of substandard, high-

32、polluting gas fuel.Meanwhile, concerned Beijingers have moved their brainstorming sessions（会议） to cyberspace. If Pans proposal for a Clean Air Act is adopted, netizens say the new law should include items providing for “car-free days” in times of smog, higher standards for vehicle fuel, stricter res

33、trictions on industrial and exhaust gas emissions, and more effective protection for the public.Beijing is not the only city that has ever lost the blue sky. Five days of thick fog caused thousands of deaths in Britain in December 1952, urging the government to pass the first Clean Air Act in 1956,

34、which introduced smokeless zones and cleaner fuels to reduce pollution. That may provide some experience for Beijing to refer to. 13. Why did Pan Shiyi started an online survey?A. To investigate the publics opinions on pollution.B. To tell people the danger of the smoggy weather.C. To call on more p

35、eople to support his proposal.D. To collect supporting evidences for his proposal.14. Britain is mentioned in the last paragraph to _.A. suggest Beijing should learn from other countriesB. let people know many places have this problemC. tell people the situation in Britain is worseD. call on the gov

36、ernment to pass Britains Clean Air Act15. Whats the best title for this passage？ A. The Use of Gas masks and Respirators B. Beijingers Call for Clean Air Act C. Effective Protection for Blue SkyD. The Mysterious Causes of the Scary Smog【答案】13.D14.A15.B【名师点评】标题是文章中心思想的精炼表达，多为词组或短语，涵盖性强。做这类题目时，要在阅读全文的

37、基础上，以文章话题为核心，通过比较选项的概括性或覆盖面，得出正确的标题。正确标题的归纳范围要恰如其分，避免过于具体或断章取义。错误的干扰往往是局部信息，以事实，细节替代，概括大意。【名师点拨】抓住文章主线和关键词语，归纳文章中心要注意不是所有的段落都有主题句，有时主题句暗含在句中。阅读这样的文章，就需要自己根据文章的细节来分析，概括出段落的主题，从而推导出文章的主旨。分析的方法是：先弄清该段落主要讲了哪几方面的内容，这些内容在逻辑上有什么联系，然后加以归纳形成主题。考点：考查健康类阅读 第二节（共5小题，每小题2分，共10分） 根据短文内容，从短文后的七个选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项

38、中有两项为多余选项。 A research has discovered that your gift for happiness is determined by your genes to a large degree. 16 . We can do this by overcoming negative emotions and developing positive emotions. Strategy 1: 17 The first step is to make a choice to be happy. In Seeking Happiness, Bertrand Russell

39、 said, “Happiness must be an achievement rather than a gift of the gods, and in this achievement, effort must play a great part.”Once youve decided to be happier, you can choose strategies for achieving happiness. Strategy 2: Develop gratitude. In Authentic Happiness, psychologist Martin Seligman en

40、courages readers to perform a daily “gratitude exercise”. 18 Strategy 3: Remember, money cant buy happiness. Research shows: 19 . Yes, “we always think that some things are wrong because they cannot bring us happiness,” writes Daniel Gilbert in Stumbling on Happiness. Strategy 4: Take part in meanin

41、gful activities. “People are seldom happier,” says Jackson, “than when theyre doing meaningful activities”. Yet, he has found that the most common leisure（休闲）activity watching TV produces some of the lowest levels of happiness. 20 Active leisure that helps a person grow does not come easily, he writ

42、es in Finding Flow. A. Choose to be happy. B. Achieve happiness. C. To get more out of life, we need to put more into it.D. Yet, psychologists believe we can pursue happiness. E. Happiness is decided by a good many aspects. F. More money doesnt necessarily bring extra happiness.G. This shifts people

43、 away from bitterness, and promotes happiness.【答案】16.D17.A18.G19.F20.C【学法指导】七选五阅读题，有部分题出现在每一段的开始位置，若问题在段首 1.通常是段落主题句。认真阅读该段落，根据段落一致性原则，查找相关词或者同义词，从而推测出主题句，找到答案。比如第17小题，A此空是一个小标题。根据下文第一句“第一步要有成为幸福的选择”，和最后一句“一旦你决定要更幸福，你要选择实现幸福的策略。”可知A项符合题意。A. Choose to be happy.选择幸福。2.与后文是并列、转折、因果关系等。着重阅读后文第一两句，锁定线索信号

44、词，然后在选项中查找 相关特征词。一般来说正确答案与它后面的一句话的在意思上是衔接的，所以通常情况下，这两句话中会 有某种的衔接手段。第18小题，G根据上句：心理学家鼓励读者们每天进行“感恩运动”。紧接上句，可知此空意思是：这让人们远离痛苦，并促进幸福。3.段落间的过渡句。这时要前瞻后望找到启示，即阅读上一段结尾部分，通常正确答案与上一段结尾有机地衔接起来，并结合下一段内容，看所选的答案是否将两段内容连贯起来。20小题，C根据上句：最常见的休闲活动-看电视，会带来最低标准的幸福。根据空格下句：帮助一个人成长的积极休闲不会轻易到来。可知此空的意思是：有多少投入,就会从生活中得到多少回报。故选C。

45、考点：考查信息匹配 第二部分 英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)第一节 完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、D）中选可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。I had just started my second year studying at Cambridge University when I was faced with the news I had never expected. A lump in my neck 21 out to be cancer. I would 22 six mont

46、hs of chemotherapy（化疗）. After the shock, I was struck by this thought: my 23 didnt have any room for cancer. I had so much I wanted to 24 and so many goals I wanted to chase. I was faced with the 25 job of telling my friends and family. Then, I had to decide whether to 26 in Cambridge and take five

47、exams at the end of the year. My doctor 27 against it, and so did my parents and teachers. My doctors and teachers convinced me that taking some time off to 28 and relax would be the best thing for me. I could not think of anything 29 . I did not want to 30 a year of my life, receiving pity from tho

48、se around me.Together with my parents, I tried to persuade the university to 31 me to stay at Cambridge and study only halt the course. At the end of the year I would take two exams. It was really a 32 to persuade them to agree.Treatment began and I was up and down from Cambridge to London every oth

49、er week. It made me feel 33 , but to a much lesser degree than I had expected. I was 34 to read, eat and socialize exactly as I used to. I slept a lot and rested a lot, but I also worked hard at my studies. It gave me focus, and it also gave me purpose. Completing my 35 at the end of term felt like

50、a great personal victory.I took a 36 to continue studying while undergoing treatment, and it 37 I was successful in my examsand more 38 , I made a full recovery. Every person facing a disease like cancer must make the 39 that are right for them. I am 40 that I made the decision that was right for me

51、.21. A. stuck B. cameC. turnedD. worked22. A. requireB. expectC. senseD. arrange23. A. body B. memoriesC. familyD. dreams24. A. faceB. achieveC. showD. understand25. A. necessary B. temporaryC. difficultD. disappointing26. A. joinB. treatC. settleD. continue27. A. foughtB. advisedC. actedD. decided2

52、8. A. recoverB. exerciseC. studyD. play29. A. betterB. worseC. moreD. less30. A. saveB. spendC. takeD. miss31. A. helpB. remindC. allowD. invite32. A. struggleB. failureC. burdenD. trouble33. A. tiredB. relaxedC. confidentD. nervous34. A. afraidB. readyC. ableD. eager35. A. purposeB. projectsC. trea

53、tmentD. exams36. A. restB. riskC. privilegeD. job37. A. ended upB. passed onC. paid offD. broke out38. A. clearlyB. interestinglyC. specificallyD. importantly39. A. choicesB. changesC. effortsD. chances40. A. surprisedB. excitedC. determinedD. proud【答案】21. C22. A23. D24. B25. C26. D27.B28. A29. B30.

54、 D31. C32. A33. A34. C35. B36. B37. C38. B39.A40. D31. C考查动词。A. help帮助；B. remind提醒；C. allow允许；D. invite邀请。我尽力劝说学校允许我留在剑桥。故选C。32. A考查名词。A. struggle奋斗，斗争； B. failure失败；C. burden负担；D. trouble麻烦。劝说他们同意真的是一次斗争。故选A。【名师点拨】1.在做完形填空时一定要注意and/but/so/besides/however/furthermore/moreover/in addition/whats more等

55、词汇、固定结构的运用。它们连接了上下文，起着承上起下的作用。像but（但是）、however（然而），表示转折，这说明前后的内容相反或相对。把握住这一点，做起题来就会得心应手。比如It made me feel 33 , but to a much lesser degree than I had expected. I was 34 to read, eat and socialize exactly as I used to. 比如第33小题，A考查形容词。A. tired疲倦的；B. relaxed放松的；C. confident自信的；D. nervous紧张不安的。根据上句“每隔一周

56、要从剑桥去伦敦治疗”，可知：我感到疲倦。故选A。34小题，C考查形容词。A. afraid害怕的；B. ready有准备的；C. able有能力的；D. eager渴望的。但是，我能读书，吃饭，能像过去一样交际。故选C。注意33空后的but.2.上下文对照，抓关键词。解完型填空题时，单独看一句话是找不到正确答案的，需要阅读下句或者若干句才能明白。所谓上下对照，即在上文和下文中找到与正确答案相同的关键词。因此，在做题时要边读边在大脑中储存上下文信息的能力，捕捉关键词。比如第35小题，B考查名词。A. purpose目的；B. projects项目；C. treatment治疗；D. exams考

57、试。在学期末完成我的规划就像我个人的一次伟大胜利。故选B。此处最容易错选成D项，根据上下文的联系就会发现B项更符合题意，意义更丰富。考点：考查故事类阅读 第II卷注意：将答案写在答题卡上。写在本试卷上无效。第二部分 英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)第二节：（共10小题；每题1.5分，共15分）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。From Monday to Friday, most people are busy working or studying, but in the evenings and on weekends they are free t

58、o relax and enjoy 41 (they). Some watch TV 42 go to the cinema. Others take part in sports. There are many different ways 43 (spend) their spare time.Almost everyone has some kind of hobbies. It may be anything from collecting stamps to 44 (make) model airplanes. Some hobbies are expensive, 45 other

59、s dont cost anything at all. Some 46 (collect) are worth a lot of money. Others are valuable only to the owners.I know 47 man who has a coin collection worth $250. He was very happy about his purchase and 48 (think) the price was reasonable. On the other hand, my youngest brother collects matchboxes

60、. He has almost 600 of them but I doubt if they are worth any money. However, to my brother they are 49 (extreme) valuable. Nothing makes him 50 (happy) than to find a new matchbox for his collection.This is what a hobby means, I guess. It is something we like to do in our spare time simply for fun.

61、 The value in dollars is not important. We do it for the pleasure it gives.41. 42. 43. 44. 45. 46. 47. 48. 49. 50. 【答案】41.themselves42.or43.to spend44.making45.but/while46.collections47.a 48.thought 49.extremely50.happier【知识归纳】1.以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.possible-possibly； simple-simply; gen

62、tle-gently; terrible-terribly; true-truly; flexible-flexiblyimmediate- immediately; brave-bravely; wise-wisely；active-actively ；extreme- extremely。2.否定词和比较级在同句中出现表达最高级的意思。I couldnt agree more.我完全支持。I couldnt find a better answer.我找到了一个最好的答案。考点：考查语法填空 第三部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语

63、课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She is one of the best student in h

64、er class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the class-room she looks just like all her classmates but after class her life is obvious different. She was born with the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to

65、get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dress and going to school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her provinces science fair.【答案】1. a前加is 2.studentstudents 3.was 去掉 4.seatingseated或sittin

66、g5.obviousobviously6.withwithout7.hadhas8.long longer9.dress dressed10.whichthem【名师点评】答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句 型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。【知识拓展】“get+过去分词”结构的用法1.基本用法在口语中，过去分词之前常用get代替be，构成被动语态。如：

67、I tried to find my way round London without a map and got lost. 我试图不带地图在伦敦寻路，结果迷路了。I never drank in order to get drunk. 我喝酒从来不是为了要买醉。2.用法归纳能够用于get后构成被语态的过去分词不多，常见的有arrested, broken, caught, cheated, confused, delayed, divorced, dressed, drowned, drunk, elected, engaged, hit, killed, lost, married, s

68、tuck等。这类结构的主要用法如下：Igot dressed as quickly as I could. 我尽快穿好衣服。I got caught in the deluge on the way home. 我在回家的路上遇到倾盆大雨。I got drunk for the first time in my life last night. 昨晚我有生以来第一次喝醉了。She nearly got hit by a car. 她差点被汽车撞上了。考点：考查学生对词汇语法的掌握情况 第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假定你是一名高三学生，名叫李华。在母亲节来临之际, 请你用英文给你的妈妈写一封信

69、表示感恩,并借此机会和妈妈说说知心话，具体内容应包括：1.表示感恩;2.你的现状（生活、学习情况）。1)你的高考奋斗目标；2)你对自己的信心。参考词汇：高考the College Entrance Examination注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可根据内容适当增加细节，使行文连贯;3.开头已给出，不记入总词数。Dear Mum, Mothers Day is coming. 【答案】Dear Mum, Mothers Day is coming. Im writing to you to thank you for bringing me up and showing me unself

70、ish help, care and love. Meanwhile, Ill tell you something about my present life.As you know, it will be about two months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes my life a little busy and tiring. Luckily, my hard work is paying off. I have been making great progress in my studies

71、, especially in English. Perhaps there is still a lot for me to do before I realize my dream-going to Beijing University. I firmly believe I can make it. Please dont worry about me. Ill never let you down. Mum, happy Mothers Day! I love you.【亮点说明】Mothers Day is coming.进行时态表示将来；Im writing to you to t

72、hank you for bringing me up and showing me unselfish help, care and love.句中运用非谓语动词；As you know, it will be about two months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes my life a little busy and tiring. As引导的非限制性定语从句，before 引导的时间状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句在同一句中巧妙结合，堪称完美；I have been making great progress in my studies, especially in English.现在完成进行时态运用恰如其分；Perhaps there is still a lot for me to do before I realize my dream-going to Beijing University.时间状语从句和there be句型自然结合；另外，Meanwhile, Luckily, especially，make it为文章增色。考点：考查话题类作文