2021届高考英语二轮复习好题 专题07 书面表达—应用文写作（第03期）（含解析）.doc

1、书面表达-应用文写作【2021届湖北省六校第一次联考英语试题】假定你是学生会主席李华。你校新来一批美国交流生，学校要组织迎新晚会请你用英文给他们的领队Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括：时间：本周六晚上6点到8点；地点：学校礼堂；活动：表演节目，中美学生互动。注意：词数 100 左右，可合理添加细节；开头已写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Welcome to our school!_Students UnionLi Hua【答案】Dear Tom,Welcome to our school! In celebration of your arrival, a grand party is t

2、o be held in the school hall. I would like to invite you to participate in it.As scheduled, the party falls on this Saturday, lasting from 6 pm to 8 pm, during which time a wide variety of wonderful performances will be put on. Students, blessed with a talent for music, cross-talk, or dance will sho

3、w themselves confidently. More importantly, we can have face-to-face talks in the activities so that we will have a better understanding of each other.Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please dont hesitate to let me know. May you have a good time in our school.S

4、tudents UnionLi Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是学生会主席李华。你校新来一批美国交流生，学校要组织迎新晚会请你用英文给他们的领队Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括：时间：本周六晚上6点到8点；地点：学校礼堂；活动：表演节目，中美学生互动。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in celebration of (为庆祝)；would like to (想要)；performances (表演)；spare time (抽时间)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。第4步：连句

5、成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As scheduled, the party falls on this Saturday, lasting from 6 pm to 8 pm, during which time a wide variety of wonderful performances will be put on.运用了非限制性定语从句；More importantly, we can have face-to-face

6、talks in the activities so that we will have a better understanding of each other.运用目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【四川省成都市2021届高三高中毕业班摸底】假定你是李华。你原定下个月去英国参加笔友Kevin的高中毕业典礼，现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.深表歉意；2.解释原因；3.衷心祝福。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Kevin，_Yours,Li

7、 Hua【答案】Dear Kevin，Iamawfullysorrytotellyouthat I cant go to your graduation ceremony. Hearing that you would graduate from high school, I had intended to attend your graduation ceremony. However, my little brother suddenly fell ill and needed to stay in hospital for a week. Whats worse, my parents

8、are so busy that they dont have time to look after him, so I have to take care of him there. Therefore, I cant meet you in Britain. I hope you wont be angry with me. As soon as Im free, I will pay a visit to you. I hope you have a good time at the graduation ceremony and wish you all the best.Yours,

9、Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件给即将高中毕业的英国笔友Kevin，告知他你不能参加他的高中毕业典礼，表达歉意。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 深表歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 衷心祝福。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）graduation ceremony；had intended to do sth.；stay in hospital；look after；take care of；be angry with sb.；pay a

10、 visit to sb.第三步：连词成句1. Hearing that you would graduate from high school, I had intended to attend your graduation ceremony.2. my little brother suddenly fell ill and needed to stay in hospital for a week.3. my parents are so busy that they dont have time to look after him, so I have to take care of

11、 him there.4. I hope you wont be angry with me.5. As soon as Im free, I will pay a visit to you.(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Fur

12、thermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达：In other wo

13、rds, that is to say,6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking8.表选择：eitheror，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Hearing that you would graduate from high school这句话中用了that引导的宾语

14、从句；Whats worse, my parents are so busy that they dont have time to look after him, so I have to take care of him there. so.that引导的结果状语从句。使用了非常好的短语，如had intended to do sth.，stay in hospital，take care of，pay a visit to sb.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 However，Whats worse，Therefore。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

15、另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届湖南省教育联合体高三7月联考】假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；3.建议他去听这个讲座。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。_【答案】Dear Mike,Good news for you. There will be a lecture for foreign students at 9 on Saturday morning in t

16、he city training center. The lecture is about places of interest in China. So why dont you attend it? Its really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China. Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chi

17、nese culture and history.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；3.建议他去听这个讲座。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：places of interest (名胜古迹)；attend (出席，参加)；opportunity (机会)；get a better understanding

18、 of (更好地理解)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Its really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China.运用原因状语从句；Not only will you learn more about famous

19、 places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.运用倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届江苏省徐州市第一中学新高考全国卷第一次适应性考试】假定你是李华，你们学校要举办传统中医讲座，你的留学生朋友Chris对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣，因此，你想邀请他参加该讲座。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1讲座的时间和地点；2讲座的内容。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节

20、，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：传统中医讲座 a lecture on traditional Chinese medicineDear Chris,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】One Possible Version：Dear Chris,Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I cant wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.The lecture

21、 will begin at 3 p.m. this Sunday in the school hall. An expert is going to narrate the development history of traditional Chinese medicine and share some significant worldwide achievements with us. As far as I can see, it can enrich your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine and make you re

22、alize how much difference traditional Chinese culture has made in the present world.Looking forward to your arrival!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文属于提纲类作文根据文章所给的信息提示写一封邀请信。写作要点包括向Chris发出邀请，介绍讲座的相关信息：时间、地点、内容以及活动安排等写作时态为一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态

23、，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。重要短语如：a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine（一场关于中医的讲座）；have a keen interest in（对感兴趣）；share with（分享）；look forward to（期待，盼望）；As far as I can see（依我来看）等等。高级句型结构

24、如：Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I cant wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.本句用现在分词短语Knowing作状语，还有宾语从句you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture和一个以which引导的定语从句which will be host in my school，另

25、外该定语从句中使用了被动语态。【2021届广西钦州市第一中学高三开学摸底】假定你是李华，你的好友Taylor今天上午来你家找你陪她练习汉语口语。你因临时有急事外出，让她扑了个空。请根据以上情景，给Taylor写一封信。内容如下：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释具体原因，并希望他能谅解；3. 告诉他下次练习活动的时间、地点和话题。Dear Taylor,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Taylor,I am terribly sorry that I couldnt practice spoken Chinese with you this time. I should have told

26、 you in advance, but something happened beyond my expectation. My teacher called me to send his computer to his office. Unfortunately, my mobile phone got a flat battery after I received the call. Worst of all, I was caught in a traffic jam on my way back.Next Saturday afternoon, Id like to meet you

27、 at three oclock at the gate in the park near our college. We will talk about Chinese table manners. If possible, would you please be familiar with the topic before our practice?Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope to see you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。假定你是李华，你的好友Taylor今天上

28、午来你家找你陪她练习汉语口语。你因临时有急事外出，让她扑了个空。请根据以上情景，给Taylor写一封信。第一步：审题。体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释具体原因，并希望他能谅解；3. 告诉他下次练习活动的时间、地点和话题第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）。如in advance；beyond my expectation；get a flat battery；worst of all；be caught in；on my wayback；if possible等第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意

29、拼写和时态问题）第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, Finally, In the end, At last;2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also);3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。第五步：润色修改。

30、【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句，如Unfortunately, my mobile phone got a flat battery after I received the call.使用了状语从句；Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.使用了过去分词。主从复合句的使用，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。【2021届江西省景德镇一中高三8月月考】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1

31、.剧情简介; 2.指导内容; 3.商定时间地点。注意：1.词数100左右；2.结束语已为你写好。Dear Miss Evans,I am Li Hua._Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going? Im writing in sincerity to ask you a favor.Wed like to adapt the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after

32、 midnight, we saved a scared boy. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you

33、 offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介; 2.指导内容; 3.商定时间地点。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sincerity (诚挚)；ask you a favor (请求你的帮助)；adapt (改编)；spare some t

34、ime (抽时间)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没

35、有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【湖南省汨罗2021届高三入学考试】某英文杂志正在以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.采访的对象；2.采访的原因；3.想提的问题。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。A Famous Chinese I Wou

36、ld Like to Interview_【答案】A Famous Chinese I Would Like to InterviewThe person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in spac

37、e exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few qu

38、estions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生参加“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动，以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.采访的对象 2.采访的原因 3.想提的问题 1）成为宇航员的原因。

39、（the reasons of being an astronaut） 2）如何接受训练。（how he was be trained） 3)在太空的感受。（the feeling in space） 4) 个人生活。（personal life）第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）would like to; one of the; in the world; have long been interested in; in space第三步：连词成句1. The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.2. I would really lik

40、e to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.3. I have long been interested in space exploration4. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.根据提示及关键词（组）进行

41、遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In sp

42、ite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些固定词组和高级句式。如would like to; one of the; in the world等。 宾语从句I wou

43、ld also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. 原因状语从句I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转

44、换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2021届四川省成都附属实验中学高三上学期入学考试】前段时间，受新冠肺炎疫情影响，大家都自我隔离在家。你校英国外教Simon从英国购买5万只口罩捐赠给市人民医院，自愿在社区做志愿者，为社区居民服务。校学生会得知情况后，请你以校学生会的名义给Simon写一封感谢信，要点如下：1. 表达对他的谢意；2. 阐明其行为的意义和影响；3. 提醒他注意自身防护。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：COVID-19新冠肺炎Dear Simon,_Students Union【答案】Dear Simon,Hearing of your gener

45、ous donation of masks and selfless voluntary service, were quite touched. On behalf of the Students Union I am writing to express our deepest gratitude.Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier. Without the 50,000 mask

46、s you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma. In addition, we especially appreciate your giving up the whole Spring Festival holiday and volunteering to serve people in the community. It really reduces the volunteers workload and makes residents life easier.Please accept our sincere th

47、anks for your timely and selfless help and do take great care of your own safety during this special period. Best wishes!Students Union【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信。第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给外教老师Simon写一封感谢信，表达对Simon老师在疫情期间捐赠口罩、做志愿者的感谢。根据题目中的三条要点：1.表达对他的谢意；2.阐明其行为的意义和影响；3.提醒他注意自身防护，写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信来意，表达感谢。第二段：

48、阐明其行为的意义和影响。第三段：提醒他注意自身防护。第二步：列关键词。如：selfless，express gratitude，in urgent need of，donate，be in a dilemma，workload，take great care of等。第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In addition等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】此范文表达流畅，内容全面，符合要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非谓语动词作状语Affected by the ne

49、w coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier.虚拟语气Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma.【2021届（全国I卷）高三入学调研试】假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为The True Meaning of Happiness的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：1.快

50、乐的真正意义；2.获得快乐的途径。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯_【答案】Dear Jack，Recently, 1 read a passage- The True Meaning of Happiness. Im glad to share my views with you. Undoubtedly, all of us look for happiness, but what is the true meaning of happiness? Personally,working hard and being committed to whatever w

51、e are doing can make us feel happy. In reality, nothing can replace the sense of achievement one feels after much devotion.My best way to gain happiness is as follows. Firstly, Im buried in my studies. Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness. Secondly, Im willing to share my happines

52、s with others. Sharing can release my sorrow and double my pleasure.Whats your opinion? Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你最近读了一篇主题为The True Meaning of Happiness的文章。请给你的英国朋友Jack发一封邮件，与他分享你对快乐的理解，内容包括：1.快乐的真正意义；2.获得快乐的途径。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组

53、），如：share my views with you（和你分享我的观点）；look for happiness（寻找幸福）；being committed to（决心从事）；gain a sense of happiness（获得一种幸福感）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。working hard and be

54、ing committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy.句中使用动名词做主语和whatever引导的宾语从句；Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness.部分倒装句用在句中。【2021届四川成都经开区实验中学高三上学期入学考试】假定你是李华。你的英国朋友George来信，询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 正在认真备考；2.学医学专业；3.报考理由。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear

55、 George,I hope youre doing well. Receiving your letter is such a refresh since Im fully engaged in preparing for the exam.As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldnt be taken lightly. But being able to cure people or even save people

56、s lives is so rewarding. Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health. Besides, doctors are highly respected in China and in great demand too, especially highly qualified pro

57、fessionals.Sincerely hope my dream will come true soon. Best wishes. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给英国朋友George，回复他关于你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。第一步：审题体裁：应用文人称：第一人称时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总-分-总法要点：1.正在认真备考；2.学医学专业；3.报考理由。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）Refresh；be engaged in；prepare for；as for；major；commitment；cure peop

58、le；rewarding；be faced with；passion；in great demand；qualified；come true第三步：连词成句1. Receiving your letter is such a refresh since Im fully engaged in preparing for the exam.2. As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldnt be taken lightly

59、.3. But being able to cure people or even save peoples lives is so rewarding.4. Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health.5. Doctors are highly respected in China and in g

60、reat demand too, especially highly qualified professionals.6. Sincerely hope my dream will come true soon.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表转折对比关系：as for；but；or；2.表并列补充关系：Besides, and；3.表因果关系：since；4.表让步关系：Though连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，

61、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Receiving your letter is such a refresh since Im fully engaged in preparing for the exam.使用了动名词做主语和由since引导的状语从句；As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldnt be taken lightly.使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句和由that引导的限制性定语从句；Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health.使用了由though引导的状语从句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。