2023年高考英语题型训练写作八含解析20230301175.docx

1、题型训练 写作（八）第一节短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。 修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 It was my sisters 6th birthday. Moreover, the whole family went to a cafe for the b

2、irthday treat. She walked in, rocked her birthday crown with her name on it, that she made at school. A group of teenagers saw her and begin singing Happy Birthday”. Her face just was lit up with excitement. Then other tables joined. Soon almost everyone there was singing “Happy Birthday” to my girl

3、. She screamed joyful and gave high fives. It was an amazing experience for her and I was blew away by the Leenagers who saw a little girl and decided to make my day!第二节书面表达 假定你是李华。参观名校如今成为了旅游的新热点。现在某英文报社就“Should university campu ses be open to the public?”为主题向你征稿。请你写一篇100词左右的文章，简要描述其现状并谈谈你的看法.注意:1.

4、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.标题已经给出，不计入总数。Should university campuses be open to the public?参考答案第一节：It was my sisters 6th birthday. Moreover, the whole family went to a cafe for the birthday treat. She Thus/Therefore awalked in, rocked her birthday crown with her name on it, that she made at school. A group of

5、teenagers saw her rocking whichand begin singing “Happy Birthday”. Her face just was lit up with excitement. Then other tables joined . Soon began 删除inalmost everyone there was singing “Happy Birthday” to my girl. She screamed joyful and gave high fives. It was joyfullyan amazing experience for her

6、and I was blew away by the teenagers who saw a little girl and decided to make my blown herday!第二节：Possible versionShould university campuses be open to the public?On holidays, more and more visitors, including middle school students, swarm into some well-known universities like Tsinghua University

7、and Peking University. This trend has sparked a nationwide debate on whether university campuses should be accessible to non-students. Is it a good or bad thing? Different people have different opinions. Some people argue that it can enable the students to get more information about the university a

8、nd they can later prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. However, others hold a negative view. In their opinion, the public tourism will have a negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere. As for me, universities are mainly for academic research. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.