2023年新教材高考英语一轮复习 写作专项提升 Step 3 变魔句——提升描写逼真情境能力课件 北师大版.pptx

1、写作专项提升Step 3 变魔句提升描写逼真情境能力英 语2023高 考 总 复 习 优 化 设 计GAO KAO ZONG FU XI YOU HUA SHE JI情境1 感受与心情【魔句1】听到他竞赛获得一等奖的消息,我们又高兴又激动。On hearing the news that he finished in first place in the competition,we allfelt delighted and excited.The news that he won first prize in the competition made us delighted andexc

2、ited.语境听说你要来参加我们为期一周的交流项目,并要发表关于西方艺术的演讲,我很高兴和你分享我的观点。(1)On hearing that you are coming to join our one-week exchange program and deliver a speech about Western Art,Im very glad to share my opinions with you.(2)The news that you are coming to join our one-week exchange program and deliver a speech ab

3、out Western Art makes me very glad to share my opinions with you.【魔句2】能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。It is a great honour to give a speech here,as a representative of all the students of our school.I feel honoured to deliver a speech here on behalf of all the students of our school.As a representative of all

4、the students of our school,it is my honour to give aspeech here.语境与你一起在那儿,享受着多彩的日子,我们将十分荣幸。(1)We would be honoured to have you there with us,enjoying the colourful days.(2)It is a great honour to have you there with us,enjoying the colourful days.【魔句3】不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些困惑。She felt somehow at a loss,

5、wondering how to get on with her classmates.Because she didnt know how to get along with her classmates,she felt sort ofat a loss.She didnt know how to get on with her classmates,feeling kind of confused.语境对于如何能讲一口流利的普通话,你感到困惑。(1)You feel somehow at a loss,wondering how to speak Mandarin fluently.(2

6、)Because you dont know how to speak Mandarin fluently,you feel sort of ata loss.(3)You dont know how to speak Mandarin fluently,feeling kind of confused.【魔句4】这个小男孩懂得很多,我们对此感到惊讶。The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised.It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprises us

7、.The little boy who knows so many things surprises us.What surprises us is that the little boy knows so many things.That the little boy knows so many things surprises us.We are surprised that the little boy knows so many things.Much to our surprise,the little boy knows so many things.语境令我感到非常高兴的是,我们

8、修建了一座著名的新体育场,它已成为我们学校的地标建筑。(1)To my great joy,a famous new stadium has been put up,which has become the landmark in our school.(2)What makes me joyful is that a famous new stadium has been put up,which has become the landmark in our school.(3)It is that a famous new stadium which has become the land

9、mark in our school has been put up that makes me joyful.【魔句5】老师的一席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。Deeply moved by my teachers words,I have made up my mind to study English harder.Deeply touched by what the teacher said,Im determined to learn English even harder.What the teacher said left me affected,so I was

10、determined to make moreefforts to study English.It was the teachers moving words that made me determined to concentratemore on my English study.语境他们娴熟的技艺令我惊讶,我决心像他们一样出色。(1)Amazed at how skillful they were,I made up my mind to be just as good as them.(2)Greatly amazed at their skills,I was determined

11、 to be just as good as them.(3)It was their amazing skills that made me determined to be just as good as them.情境2 时间与地点【魔句6】会议大约持续了三个小时。The meeting took approximately/roughly three hours.The meeting lasted three hours more or less.The meeting ended/came to an end about three hours later.It took thre

12、e hours or so to cover the meeting.语境美术展计划于5月9日810点举行,我们学校所有学生和老师都有望参与。(1)The art exhibition is intended to take place in the gallery hall lasting from8:00 am to 10:00 am on May 9.All the students as well as the teachers of our school are expected to attend it.(2)All the students and the teachers of

13、 our school are expected to attend the art exhibition which will take two hours from 8:00 am to 10:00 am on May 9.【魔句7】公园是公众娱乐休闲的地方。A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves.A park is a place where people rest and relax.A park is a place where people can have a rest and have fun.

14、A park is a public place for relaxation/amusement.语境广场是公众消遣、玩得开心的地方。(1)The square is a place for the public to relax and enjoy themselves.(2)The square is a public place for relaxation/amusement.【魔句8】他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,往前再走不到20英里就是一个村庄。Glancing at the map,he informed us that the next village was merely

15、twentymiles away.He glanced at the map and told us that there would be a village less thantwenty miles away.He took a glance at the map and told us that no more than twenty milesahead was a village.Having glanced at the map,he informed us that the next village was withintwenty miles.He cast a look a

16、t the map,telling us that there would be less than twentymiles ahead of us before we got to a village.语境往前走不到100米就是我们的图书馆。(1)There is our library less than 100 metres away.(2)Our library is no more than 100 metres ahead.(3)Our library is within 100 metres.【魔句9】夜晚,学生们到达了这个小村庄。In the evening,the stude

17、nts got to/reached/arrived at the small village.It was in the evening that the students reached the small village.It was evening when the students arrived at the small village.The students did not get to the small village until(it was)evening.Evening had already fallen when the students found their

18、way to the small village.语境(2019北京卷,书面表达)我们下午到了家,累并快乐着。(1)We arrived home in the afternoon,tired but pleased.(2)It was in the afternoon that we arrived home,tired but pleased.(3)It was the afternoon when we arrived home,tired but pleased.(4)We didnt arrive home until the afternoon,tired but pleased.

19、【魔句10】我们盼望的春节马上就要到了。The Spring Festival that we look forward to is approaching.The Spring Festival that we look forward to is drawing near.Around the corner is the Spring Festival that we are longing for/are dyingfor.语境我们盼望的中国汉字听写大会马上就要开始了。(1)Chinese Characters Dictation Contest that we look forward

20、 to isapproaching.(2)Chinese Characters Dictation Contest that we look forward to is drawingnear.(3)Around the corner is Chinese Characters Dictation Contest that we arelonging for/are dying for.【魔句11】农历正月初一是春节。The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month in our Chinese lunar calend

21、ar.The Spring Festival occurs on the first day of the first month in our Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate the Spring Festival on the first day of the first month in our Chinese lunar calendar.语境农历正月十五是元宵节。(1)The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month in the lunar calen

22、dar.(2)The Lantern Festival occurs on the fifteenth day of the first month in the lunar calendar.(3)People celebrate the Lantern Festival on the fifteenth day of the first month in the lunar calendar.情境3 困难与帮助【魔句12】我的车坏了。My car is out of order.My car doesnt/wont work.There is something wrong with my

23、 car.Something is wrong with my car.Something has gone wrong with my car.My car has broken down.语境爸爸的摩托车出故障了,他不得不乘公交车去上班。(1)Dads motorbike broke down,so he had to go to work by bus.(2)Because his motorbike didnt work,Dad had to take a bus to work.(3)Something was wrong with his motorbike,so Dad coul

24、d do nothing but go to work by bus.【魔句13】我们如何能用更多的方法处理这个问题呢?What can we do with the problem by using more methods?How can we deal with/cope with the problem with more methods?How can we handle the problem in more ways?How can we solve/resolve/settle the problem by more means?语境我以前当志愿者的经历可以帮助我解决这一过程中

25、潜在的问题。(1)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me settle the potential problems in the process.(2)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me handle/solve/resolvethe potential problems in the process.(3)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me deal with/dowith/cope with the p

26、otential problems in the process.【魔句14】我们最好利用这次机会来提高我们的英语口语水平。We had better take(full)advantage of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.We might as well make(full/good)use of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.We may as well make the most/best of the opportunity to improve our sp

27、oken English.语境 我希望你最好利用这个机会进一步学习中国的传统文化。(1)I wish you might as well take advantage of this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.(2)I wish you had better make full use of the opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.【魔句15】他现在正处于困境,我们必须帮他渡过难关。He is in trouble now,a

28、nd we must help him out.He is in difficulty now,and we must help him out.We must help him out of the trouble he is suffering.He is faced with many difficulties.It is necessary/essential/a must that we(should)help him pull through.语境它们现在处境危险,我们必须帮助它们。(1)They are now in danger,and we must help them ou

29、t.(2)They are faced with danger.It is necessary/essential/a must that we(should)help them out.【魔句16】对很多人来说,掌握一门外语不是一件容易的事。For many people,to master a foreign language is not an easy thing.It is a difficult task for many people to master a foreign language well.Many people find it a hard job to be fl

30、uent in a foreign language.Many people need to take great efforts to be a master of a foreign language.It takes many people great efforts to have a good command of a foreign language.语境对很多人来说,养成一个好习惯不容易。(1)For many people,to form a good habit is not an easy thing.(2)Many people find it a hard job to

31、 develop a good habit.(3)It takes many people great efforts to form a good habit.【魔句17】幸运的是,在当地群众的帮助下,他在这次交通事故中幸存了下来。He was so lucky that he got the help of the local people and survived thetraffic accident.Luckily/Fortunately,the local people came to his aid and saved his life from the traffic acci

32、dent.With the help of the local people,he luckily survived the traffic accident.Thanks to/Owing to the local peoples help,he became a survivor of the traffic accident.Thanks to the assistance of the local people,he survived the traffic accident.语境在母亲的帮助下,我成功地做出了生日蛋糕。(1)With the help of my mother,I m

33、anaged to make a birthday cake.(2)Thanks to my mothers help,I succeeded in making a birthday cake.情境4 原因与结果【魔句18】由于天气恶劣,所有航班都已被取消。All the flights have been called off owing to/due to/because of the bad weather.Weather being bad,all the flights have been cancelled.The weather is really bad,for which

34、all the flights have been called off.语境由于雾霾严重,很多人生病了。(1)Many people fall ill owing to/due to/because of the heavy smog.(2)Smog being heavy,many people fall ill.(3)The smog is really heavy,for which many people fall ill.【魔句19】由于没有公共汽车,我们只好步行回家。There was no bus,so we had to walk home.As there was no b

35、us,we had no choice but to walk home.There being no bus,we had to walk home.There being no bus,what we had to do was to walk home.语境由于父亲出差,我把母亲送往了医院。(1)Father being away on business,I sent my mother to the hospital.(2)My father was away on business,so I sent my mother to the hospital.【魔句20】什么导致了火灾对警

36、察来说是个谜。What caused the fire is a puzzle to the police.What resulted in the fire puzzles the police.What puzzles the police is what contributed to the fire.The police are puzzled about what led to the fire.语境什么时候会发生地震对我们来说还是一个谜。(1)When an earthquake will happen is a puzzle to us.(2)When an earthquake

37、 will happen puzzles us.(3)We are puzzled about when an earthquake will occur.【魔句21】他学习刻苦。因此,他轻松地通过了考试。He worked hard at his study.As a result,he passed the exam easily.He had been hard-working at his study.As a consequence,he passed the exam easily.As a result of his hard work at his study,he passe

38、d the exam easily.As a consequence of his hard work at his study,he passed the exam without any difficulty.His passing the exam with ease resulted from his hard work at his study.His hard work at his study resulted in/led to his passing the exam effortlessly.His passing the exam easily was due to hi

39、s hard work at his study.语境我从小生活在北京,因此普通话讲得流利。(1)I have been living in Beijing since I was born.As a consequence,I can speak Mandarin fluently.(2)As a result of living in Beijing since I was born,I can speak Mandarin fluently.【魔句22】由于多种原因,很多野生动物都已经灭绝了。For many different reasons,many species of wildl

40、ife have already died out.For various reasons,a variety/diversity of wild species has become extinct.Many of the wild species have disappeared on the earth for reasons of allkinds.语境由于多种原因,我支持网络投票。(1)For many different reasons,I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.(2)For various reasons,I

41、 hold a positive attitude towards online voting.(3)I hold a positive attitude towards online voting for reasons of all kinds.【魔句23】再给她一点时间,她会处理好这个问题的。If she had been given more time,she would have settled the problem.If given more time,she would have solved the problem.Had she been given more time,s

42、he would have overcome the difficulty.Given more time,she would have found the way out of difficulty.More time,and she would have found the way out of difficulty.语境再给她一点时间,她会赶上公交车的。(1)Had she been given more time,she would have caught the bus.(2)Given more time,she would have caught the bus.(3)More

43、time,and she would have caught the bus.【魔句24】只有不断尝试你还没有掌握的东西,你才会进步。You can make progress only if you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered.Only if you try to do something that is beyond what you have commandedcan you make progress.Only by trying to do what you have not mastered c

44、an you advance/makeadvancement.Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you wont make progress.语境只有通过大量的练习,你才能掌握它。(1)Only if you practice a lot can you master it.(2)Only by a lot of practice can you master it.(3)You wont master it unless you practice a lot.【魔句25】为了取得更大的进步

45、,戴维采纳了我的建议。David adopted my advice with the purpose of making greater progress.David took my suggestion into account so as to make greater progress.David accepted my advice,intending to make greater progress.In order to make greater progress,David seized on my suggestion.语境为了取得更大的进步,我经常向老师请教。(1)I often turned to my teacher for help with the purpose of making greater progress.(2)I often consult my teacher,intending to make greater progress.(3)In order to make greater progress,I often asked my teacher for help.