高考英语复习历年高考写作体裁.ppt

1、历年高考写作体裁年份919293949596 97 989900 0102体裁记叙文，写人物简介应用文，看图写日记记叙文，看图写短文应用文，广播通知应用文，看图写作应用文，求职履历情况介绍记叙文，看图描述故事情节应用文，看图写日记应用文，看图写说明性书信应用文，看图报告交通事故应用文，根据要求写回信应用文，写信，介绍某问题的讨论情况历年高考写作话题和时态年份9192 93 94 9596 97 98 99 000102题材个人简介过生日保护动物广播通知道路介绍人物简介交通参观学校变化交通事故学校生活公园是否收门票时态一般现在一般过去一般现在、一般将来一般现在、一般将来一般现在、一般将来一般现在

2、一般过去一般过去一般现在、一般过去一般过去一般现在、一般过去一般现在重要性 历年分值与要求时 间分 值词 数题 材 内容MET1991MET1992MET1993NMET1994NMET1995NMET1996NMET1997NMET1998NMET1999NMET2000NMET20011580-100 人物介绍；介绍体育明星孙淑伟15100左右 看图；六图说明探望祖母的经过，日记25/150100左右看图；六图讲述动物故事（阿福救人）25/150约100词广播通知；通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会25/15080-100看图；给Peter信，指明野餐（picnic）道路30/150100左右看表

3、格；介绍自己基本情况，书写申请30/150100左右 看图；六图违反交通法规，被惩罚值勤30/150100左右看图；六图参观农场，写日记30/150100左右看图；分析学校三年平面图，写信谈变化25/150100左右看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告25/150100左右看表格；给Dick回信，谈减负带来的变化英语句子的种类简单句 (simple sentence)并列句(compound sentence)复合句(complex sentence)简单句 (simple sentence)A.只包含一个主谓结构Mary opened the door.B.两个主语和一个谓语Steve and

4、his friend are coming to dinner.C.一个主语和两个谓语Mary opened the door and greeted the guests.简单句的五种基本句型(1)主语+连系动词+表语(S+V+P)The weather is very cold.(2)主语+不及物动词(S+Vi)He laughed.(3)主语+及物动词+宾语(S+V+O)I like Chinese food.(4)主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语(S+V+IO+DO)She taught them physics.(5)主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语(S+V+O+C)We must

5、 keep the room warm.请说出下列句子类型。1.Summer is coming.2.They wont let me go.3.He showed me a new TV set.4.She knows what to do.5.The weather is very cold.S+ViS+ViS+V+CS+V+CS+V+IO+DOS+V+IO+DOS+V+OS+V+OS+V+PS+V+P并列句(compound sentence):把两个或几个简单句用并列连词连接起来，则成为一个并列句。I turned on the TV.I watched it.I turned on

6、the TV and watched it.I bought my sister a present.She didnt like it.I bought my sister a present,but she didnt like it.并列句并列句常用并列连词coordinating conjunctions 平行并列连词:转折并列连词：因果并列连词:选择并列连词:and,bothand,not only but also,neithernorbut,however,while,yetfor,soor,eitheror请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。1.He was tire

7、d.He went to bed.2.The child hid behind his mothers skirt.He was afraid of the dog.He was tired,so he went to bed.The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.He made a promise,but He didnt keep it.Mary is opening the door.John is greeting he

8、r guests.Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.复合句:主句+从句主句是一个完整的句子(independent sentence),它可以独立存在。从句是一个不完整的句子,它必须和一个主句连用，不能独立存在.By the time he arrived,1we had already left.2请指出该复合句的主句和从句部分。从句主句在复合句中，主要包含以下类型从句：1.主语从句 2.宾语从句 3.表语从句 4.同位语从句 5.状语从句 6.定语从句中学生英文写作中经常使用的从句有：1.宾语从句2.状语从句3

9、.定语从句指出下列各从句的类型：vI hope that everything is all right.vShe was reading the newspaper when I came in.vShe is the girl who sings best of all.宾语从句状语从句定语从句He has found out.She was late.(why)请用括号中所给的词把每组句子连接为一个复合句。I still remember the day.I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)I still remember the day

10、when I first came to Beijing.He has found out why she was late.请把每组句子连接为一个含有状语从句复合句。vIll give the letter to him.I see him.(时间状语从句)vHe didnt come yesterday.He was ill.(原因状语从句)vIt is such a big box.Nobody can move it.(结果状语从句)vWell go to the great wall.Its fine tomorrow.(条件状语从句)vWe should not go there

11、all the time.The place is quite pleasant.(让步状语从句)vIll give the letter to him when I see him.vHe didnt come yesterday because he was ill.vIt is such a big box that nobody can move it.vWell go to the great wall if its fine tomorrow.vAlthough the place is quite pleasant,we should not go there all the t

12、ime.有下划线的词叫从属连词 (subordinating conjunction)请用所学知识改正下列病句v My roommate was sleeping,we didnt want to wake her up.v I went to bed.Because I was tired.My roommate was sleeping.We didnt want to wake her up.My roommate was sleeping,so we didnt want to wake her up.I went to bed because I was tired.How to d

13、eal with the writing？F i v es t e p s1、Analyse the topicInformation from wordsInformation from picturesStyle,person,tense,key points2、words and phrases：Use one or two words to express the key points.3、Make sentences：Use the words or phrases to make sentences.4、Form the passage：Attentions：Agreement(S

14、ubject and predicate,tense)Background situation（time,place,condition)Logical relationsBeginning&ending5、Check again and make a clear copyDiscourse markersA LetterNov 5,2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary,BodyYours,Jack 亲人、家属：Yours lovingly ;Yours affectionately

15、 朋友、平辈：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上级、长者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 单位、部门：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 结束语Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面聘请客座教授【内容提示】Jackson教授是美国人，现在浙江大学任教。他是国际上知名的心理学博士，专门从事青少年心理研究。你校准备用一个学期的时间给同学们讲讲心理学方面的常识，每周两学时。请你以教务主任吴建平的名义给Jackson写封聘请信，请他来给你们讲学。要点如下：聘期一学期，从2003年9

16、月1日起至2004年1月31日止。月薪人民币4000元，5个月共计20,000元。免费提供两居室公寓一套，供其休息和办公用。【词语解释】elementaryknowledge 基础知识 on the recommendationof 在的推荐下appointv.聘请furnished apartment一套备有家具的公寓房 at your earliest convenience 尽早（回信）Dear Prof.Jackson,We are planning to give our students some elementary knowledge of psychology.As you

17、area world well-known scholar and doctor in the psychological studies of teenagers.We,on the recommendation of Prof.Liu,head of your department,beg to take an opportunity to invite you to come to our school to give us some lectures.If you consider it convenient to do so,we shall appoint you as a vis

18、iting professor of psychology from September 1st,2003 to January the 31st,2004 for a period of one semester.We will pay you a monthly sum of￥4,000 and￥20,000 in all.We will also offer you,free of charge,a two-room furnished apartment on our campus for your rest and work.Hoping to get a favorable rep

19、ly from you at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Wu Jianping(Dean of Yuyao High School)【要求】假如你叫王平，你的一室友染上了烟瘾，请你给他写封信，劝说他戒烟。信中要说明吸烟的危害，要求有说服力，使他树立起戒烟的信心和决心。字数80100字。A Letter to RoommateMy dearest friend,Recently I have noticed a habit of yours that is becoming a serious problem.Its your smoki

20、ng.Whenever you are here,our bedroom is filled with a terrible smell.Smoking does harm to your health,especially it is often connected with cancer.Also smoking does harm to the health of others around you.Your roommates avoid being in the bedroom because it is being polluted.It is not difficult to g

21、ive up smoking if you really decide to do so.Where there is a will,there is a way.Ill be ready to help you if you need it.Yours sincerely,Wang Ping Wednesday May 5th Cloudy It is nearly a month since I began keeping diaries.I find it a very good exercise in English composition.I got back my essay on

22、 A Visit to the Park.It was marked with A.There were only three mistakes in it:one in grammar and two in idiom.Im happy to see that I can now express myself in English more usually than ever before.,日记 DiaryNot My Day Mon.,Sept.26 Cloudy Today was simply not my day.Everything just went wrong.How unl

23、ucky I was today.In the morning,I soiled(弄脏)my dress while eating my breakfast.The hot-dog I was eating slipped from my plate and landed on my dress.It was really clumsy(笨手笨脚的)of me,but that was because I was in a real hurry to go to school.Had to go and get changed,of course,so I was late for schoo

24、l.In school,in my history class,we had an examination.Did badly in that examination because I couldnt remember what I studied last night.To make matters worse,I had a silly fight with my best friend over a certain topic.I said some stupid words too.Now,I have to say sorry to Carol.Oh,just couldnt wa

25、it to get back home today.Once home,relaxed myself by taking a hot shower.Now,Im glad the day is over.Whew!What a day.June 5th,2000 Dear Mr.Zhao,I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet.The school expects me to play an important part in it.And

26、 I will be back to class in a week.I hope you will excuse my absence.(in fact,I take a French leave)Yours respectfullyCharles Encl:the PE Teachers certificate(证明）便 条（病/事假条）卢老师：因爷爷病重，我打算回家探望，要求请假一星期，从本月23日到29日止。附上姐姐发来的电报，请批准为盼。您的学生张三 2003322Dear Mr Li,Im very sorry to tell you that I cant attend scho

27、ol today because of a bad cold.I enclose the doctors certificate(证明)and ask you for three days sick leave.Your student,Li Ming Enclose(附)：the doctors certificate for sick leave（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT)口头通知：Ladies and Gentlemen,May I have you attention please?正文 书面通知：NOTICE In celebration of May Day,ther

28、e will be-正文School Office April 25th,2000 通知、通告假如你是学生会干部，为提高学生的口语水平和激发学生学习英语的兴趣，在英语老师的协助下，学生会决定成立英语角，1999年1月，请你为学生会拟定一则书面通知，其内容要点如下：1学生会决定成立英语角。2高二、高三年级凡英语爱好者均可参加；高一年级参加者须填写申请表（application form），方可成为会员。3成立大会于元月10日上午在校大礼堂进行。4届时英语教研组长将致贺词，并将邀请北京大学外语系Tom教授作怎样提高英语口语水平的报告，报告长达1小时左右。5请所有英语角成员准时参加，并带上笔记本，要

29、求：自拟标题。字数100200。只须把所有要点交代清楚，切忌逐条译成英语。Notice In order to develope the skill of the students in speaking and arouse the students interest learning English,the Student Union has decided to set up an English Corner with the help of the teachers of English.Those in senior two or three who like English wi

30、ll be accepted as members of the English Corner.Those in senior one will be admitted to join the English Corner after filling in an application form.The opening is to held in the school hall at 9 a.m.on January 10th,1999.The head of the English teaching research group will make a speech of congratul

31、ations,and professor Tom from the Foreign Language and Literature Department of Beijing university will give us a one-hour talk on“How to Develope the Skill in Speaking.”All the member are expected to be there on time with your note-books.Student union January lst,1999 并列 选择 原因 结果 时间 比较 转折 递进 举例 总结S

32、ome of the discourse markersand;as well as;also;or;eitheror;or else;otherwisebecause;owing to;due to;on account of;thanks toso;therefore;thus;as a resultwhen;soon after;before;later;first;and then;next;finally;afterwards.on the contrary;on the other hand;likebut;yet;however;although;in spite of;inst

33、ead;besides;moreover;even;in additionfor example/instance;such as;that is;namely ;after all ;in short;in general;generally speaking in all,in a word评分原则以及给分范围第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21-25）第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、2个次重点。（16-20）第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（11-15）第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10）第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出与所给要求内

34、容有关的一些单词。（1-5）0分：末能传达读者任何信息。Practice根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。审 题词句 文参考答案审题1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。词 句 文词：to ride a bike to hit his bike and fall off句：Tom was riding a bike along the street.The car hit his bik

35、e and he fell off it.文：The other day,Tom was riding along the street.Suddenly,a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike,then he fell off it.参 考 答 案The other day,Tom was riding along the street.Suddenly,a car was running towards him fast.He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the le

36、ft side.But it was too late.The car hit his bike and he fell off it.When the driver realized that he had caused an accident,he got such a fright that he took flight with his car.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and re

37、membered the number of the car.He reported this to the police.Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the o

38、ld man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua 审 题短文改错小 结NMET2000书面表达（满25分）2000年高考书面表达审题1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故的经过，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通事故。3、人称：为“I”，第一人称。2000年高考书面表达要点（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故（2）我走在公园路（3）一位老人从街的另一边公园里出来（4）一辆黄车开过来在公园路转弯（5）黄车撞倒了老人并向西开跑（6）我记住了车牌号是AC864，并送老人去医院2000书面表达答案It was 7:15 in the

39、 morning of February 8,2000.1_I was walking along Park Road towards the east while 2_an old man came out of the Park on the other side of the 3_street.Then I saw a yellow car drove up Third Street and 4_make a right turn into Park Road.The next moment the car hitted 5_the man while he was crossing t

40、he road.He fell with a cry.A car didnt stop and drove off at great speed heading west.6_I noticed the driver was a young woman but 7_ the plate number was AC864.After 8_two minutes later I stopped a passed car 9_and brought the old man to the nearest hospital.10_Lihuaonwhendrivehittheandaboutpassing

41、took小结注意选词多用短句慎用长句巧用转折词，总括词注意使用“变通表达法”熟练运用书写技巧 Write a composition within 100 words according to the instructions:Homework书面表达假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00减轻学习负担

42、reduce learning loadT h a n k s a l o t!Any comment is welcome!Write a concise passageuse few words express clear meaning Tom is four years old and he is energetic.One day a bike was given to him.The bike is new and it is a light blue in color.Tom received the bike for his birthday.He struggled to r

43、ide his bike.He struggled for two hours.However,he was unsuccessful in riding the bike.Compare the two passages Four-year-old Tom is energetic.One day,he got a light blue bike for his birthday.He struggled for two hours to ride it,but he was unsuccessful.Tom is four years old and he is energetic.One

44、 day a bike was given to him.The bike is new and it is a light blue in color.Tom received the bike for his birthday.He struggled to ride his bike.He struggled for two hours.However,he was unsuccessful in riding the bike.Outstanding Concise(best)wordybetterImprove the wordy sentence(I)1.There are man

45、y People hunting animals for living in the mountain2.A girl likes Chinese food better.3.The employee with angerquarreled with his boss.4.In the not too far future,our dreams will come true.5.He gave up school on condition of the reason that it was necessary for him to support his family.(angry)(pref

46、er)(hunters)(near)(because)Summary one:change phrasesinto single wordsimprove the wordy sentence(II)1.His family live in a village which is near a river2.The house,which was newly built is very large.3.People who are interested in the job must send your resume to our company before Friday.4.We will

47、have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building.5.While he is waiting for the bus,he always recites texts.(The newly-built house is very large)(People interested in the job must send your resume to our company before Friday.)(We will have the party in the garden on the top of t

48、he main building.)(While waiting for the bus or Waiting for)(His family live in a village near a river)Summary two:Change unnecessary clauses into phrasesimprove the wordy part(III)1.A letter was sent by Mrs.Smith.2.Your luggage will be checked by a custom official and then a pass card will be given

49、 to you.3.The gifts should be wrapped up and written a few words of best wishes on by you.(Mrs.Smith sent a letter)(A custom official will check your luggage and give you a pass card)(You should wrap up the gifts and write a few words of best wishes on them.)Summary Three:Change useless passive into

50、 active1.change phrases into single words 2.Change unnecessary clauses into phrases3.Change useless passive into active4.5.Summaries:Improve the following sentence(1)1.Although Chinese is regularly used by students,a close and complete study of the subject is seldom taken by them.(Although students

51、regularly use Chinese,they seldom take a close and complete study of the subject.)2.I am familiar with the farmers who are planning to attend the meeting which is fixed for next Friday.Improve the sentence(2)(I am familiar with the farmers planning to attend the meeting fixed for next Friday)3.The d

52、ecision that was reached by the committee was to put off the vote.(The committee reached the decision to put off the vote.)(The committee decided to put off the vote)Improve the sentence(3)Make the passage short and clearWere so glad you will join in our picnic which will be held in the Peoples Park

53、.Here is how we can be found:After you go into the park,walk on till you see a river.Cross it and make a turn towards the right.Then a hill will be seen by you.Walk around to the other side of the hill,and a lake will be found by you.We will have our picnic in the small wood which is by the lake.I a

54、m sure you will have no trouble in finding us.Were so glad you will join in our picnic which will be held in the Peoples Park.Here is how we can be found:After you go into the park,walk on till you see a river.Cross it and make a turn towards the right,then a hill will be seen by you.Walk around to

55、the other side of the hill,and a lake will be found by you.We will have our picnic in the small wood which isby the lake.I am sure you will find us withoutany difficulty.Have you found it?Build up a concise passageRequirements:1.Write a story about dog.2.Use the first person:e.g.my parents,my sister3.Write concisely and clearly.4.100 words or so.Homework1.study and concise the passages on your sheet.