2020年中考英语考点专项突破题专题39书面表达一含解析202004072121.doc

1、专题39 书面表达一、 江苏淮安. 书面表达76.为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；2你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；3你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。注意:1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 2. 词数在80100, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖国），_【答案】To celebrate the 70th birthday of our mo

2、therlandIn order to welcome the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen.We saw many weapons tha

3、t used by the the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. there are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and mak

4、e contributions to my motherland in the future.【解析】为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。二、江苏连云港76.书面表达76. 减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To

5、 Make Our Spare Time MoreMeaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。注意： (1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacyHow To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time m

6、ore meaningful?_【答案】Nowadays we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First its good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world

7、 by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. Whats more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, lets make full use of our

8、spare time and promote our literacy.【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, whats more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级an

9、d比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。三、江苏苏州第七部分书面表达56.假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历用英语回信开导他。To：subuaFrom：Subjects： Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hue, Im unhappy that Ive made some mistakes recently. Theyre troubling me a lot these days. I really need you

10、r help. Would you please share your experience with me?u Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?u Can you tell me one of your mistakes?u How did you deal with your problem?u What have you learned from the mistake? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best,Nathan注意：l.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经

11、写好，不计入总词量；2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Nathan,Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _ I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishesSu Hua【答案】Dear Nathan, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone mak

12、es mistakes. Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesnt matter whether or not you ma

13、ke mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better. I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishes.Su Hua【解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，

14、say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和Its true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的

15、运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。四、江苏泰州81.书面表达为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。活动内容：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。你的感想：1师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；2倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；3. （考生自己发挥）要求：1词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。2所写内容必须包括内容提示中所

16、提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。参考词汇：市民广场Civic SquareIn order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it._【答案】In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our

17、school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the Peoples Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for t

18、heir help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizens Square. In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.

19、【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文

20、联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。【高分句型二】In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来

21、的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来郎朗上口。五、江苏宿迁七、书面表达81.某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。名称Happy English Learning内容英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。好处1. 便于和同学一起学学习；2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量；3. 有利于提高英语听力；4. （自主发挥，至少一点）其他方面（自主发挥，至少一点）注意事项：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数;2.内容要包括表中要点，不要逐词翻译，可适

22、当发挥，使短文连贯通畅;3.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名、地名等;Here is my design for the new app. _【答案】例文Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true tha

23、t vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning

24、 English by using this app.I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.【解析】这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如and so on，make it easy，in English study，watch films，in a word，have fun，be suitable for等。而固定句型It can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary

25、is very important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。六、 江苏镇江七、书面表达66.假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情

26、况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。Required courseElective CourseSubjectTravel of sciencel introducing scientistsand inventionsSubjectPhotographyl taking photosGardeningl growing flowersTeachera professorTeachera young reporter4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. Schools gardenTime & Placel 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.l school

27、hallTime & Placel 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.l City ParkAn old gardenerTiptake notebooks and pensTipTake camerastools offered by school要求：1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。【答案】Every Friday afternoon, our school offers

28、 required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustnt miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in

29、the school hall. Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course

30、is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、

31、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯

32、、表达自然。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、Youd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may ha

33、ve similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。七、 江苏南通八、书面表达81.假如你是李明，请参考南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。注意：1. 图表中的内容不需要面面俱到，不要逐条翻译。2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Self-a

34、ssessment Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term._【答案】Self-assessment Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this te

35、rm.I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. I have a good study habit. I can listen to the teacher and review carefully after class. I am a helpful person. I like to interact with my classmates. I have a good citizenship. I try to innovate knowledge. I als

36、o have a good sense of aesthetics. I think I am a good student.【解析】假如你是李明，请参考南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增

37、色不少.如: I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running.八、 江苏扬州B. 写作81.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为”My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下流程图提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。Conditions Neighbourhood What is your neighbourhood like? Neighbours What are your neighbours like? How do they

38、help others?(give two examples)What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example)Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood? 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My neighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. _【答

39、案】My neighbourhoodMy name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green trees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighbourhood, there is a supermarket, a bank

40、a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbours are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Lis daughter was ill, and her husband was not at home. So her neighbours helped her send her daughter to hospital. Grandma Liu is old and her childre

41、n are not around. She lives alone. So our neighbours often helps her wash dishes and clean up her house. I think I should do something for my neighbourhood. So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them. This is my neibourhood. Though it is not big, I feel

42、 lucky and happy to live here.【解析】这篇作文要求我们以My neighbourhood为题，写一篇文章，介绍自己居住的社区。题目中利用流程图的形式列出了文章中应包括的内容，学生们应以此为依据，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍自己居住的社区环境；接下来介绍自己的邻居是什么样的，并举例说明邻居们之间是如何互相帮助的，以及你自己为社区所做的事情；最后表达自己对社区的感受。短文应以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，根据表达需要使用正确的时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内

43、，不能遗漏要点。可以适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实，但注意要切合主题，不能写不沾边的话。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，选择恰当的句型、短语和词汇。句子结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他高级句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意衔接自然，表达流畅。短文里使用的较好的句型有：There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it.、When someone has problems, they must help him、I think I

44、 should do something for my neighbourhood.、So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.、Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.等等。九、 江苏常州八、书面表达60.随着电脑的普及，许多中国学生逐渐忽视书写。针对该现象，请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。你的观点电脑普及时代书写依然重要你的理由1书写是中国传统文化

45、的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；2每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写书信更能表达情感； 3（再自拟至少一个理由并加以阐述）注意：1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；4. 词数不少于90字（文章开头已经给出, 不计入总词数）。参考词汇：handwriting 书法；字迹；书写（不可数名词）inherit 传承（及物动词）Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They be

46、lieve their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important._ 【答案】Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important. Writing is an important pa

47、rt of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. Everyones handwriting has personal meaning, for example, handwritten letters can express emotions better. I also think handwriting can improve students handwriting skill and interests; for another, it can teach studen

48、ts to love Chinese characters. In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. For middle school students, it is quite beneficial to write beautiful and generous words. So it is necessary to hold handwriting contests among students.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一

49、下书写的重要性。所提供的材料中列举了你的观点和理由。主要从电脑普及时代书写依然重要（观点）、理由：1书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；2每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写书信更能表达情感；3. 提高学生的书写技能和兴趣。4. 可以教学生热爱汉字。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I think that

50、 handwriting is still important. 我认为书写仍然很重要。句子that handwriting is still important.是由that引导的宾语从句。【高分句型二】Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. 书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化。（提出了书写的重要性，照应了作者的观点电脑普及时代书写依然重要）【高分句型三】In my view, prac

51、ticing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. 在我看来，练习书法能使学生提高身心素质。practicing handwriting是动名词做主语。十、江苏南京六、书面表达（满分15分）33（15分）假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their

52、English writing The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down Your ideas are needed！Here s what to do： Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！Please let us know： Whats the name of the app？ What problem does the app solve？ What does the app do？ Contact us a

53、t appdesign Britech com注意1内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥2词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）3文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等Dear Sir or Madam， Thanks for designing an app for English writing Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，Thanks for doing an APP for English writing Id like to share my ideas here Could its name be right made eas

54、y？ Many of us have difficulty in writing We dont know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on I hope it can solve these problems Here is my advice on what the APP does First， it should provide some reading materials The more we read， the better we write Second The APP should have an online

55、course so that we can develop our writing skills Third， there should be an e teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions I hope my advice is worth taking 【解析】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题【分析】高分句型一： Many of us have difficulty in writin

56、g我们中的许多人写作困难have difficulty doing干某事有困难高分句型二： I hope my advice is worth taking 我希望我的建议值得采纳be worth doing 值得干某事十一、江苏无锡63.书面表达假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。注意事项：1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中包括部分非限定性内

57、容，仅供参考；3. 词数在 90 个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数。4.发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。4. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。【答案】Ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Wen. Im a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge sta

58、ndards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cl

59、oth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection. 【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green World。因为今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要

60、正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。Many factories have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。We have made use of many new energy sources. 我们利用了许多新能源。这三句话，简短而有力量，体现了作者的语言功底深厚。【高分句型二】Thir

61、d, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三，我们去购物时，应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。十二、江苏盐城六、书面表达（共1题，20分）34（20分）你校将组织英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，以Live a Colourful Life为题，写一篇短文参赛注意事项：1词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥Live a Colour

62、ful LifeLife is a gift We should do what is interesting and meaningful to_【答案】Live a Colourful LifeLife is a gift We should do what is interesting and meaningful to live a colourful life（要点一，点明题意）We should read a lot every dayWe should read good booksBecause reading books can help us learn a lot of

63、knowledgeReading can make a man progress Books make us be able to learn about the past and forward to the future（高分句型一）They are the most valuable things in the worldWe should learn how to take photosWe should learn its new skillsWe should take beautiful pictures to make our life beautifulWe should k

64、now about artWe should enjoy different art forces.Describe our great rivers and mountains and make our lives more colorful and meaningful（高分句型二）（要点二，要想生活得多姿多彩更有趣，我们应该做到的事，）We should try my best to make it possible to have a better life!（要点三，美好祝愿）十三、江苏徐州七、书面表达（满分20分） 假设你是阳光中学九年级学生李平。你的英国笔友Henry向你请教成语

65、“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括： (1) 描述故事； (2) 概括寓意。 注意： (1) 词数90左右。 (2) 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 右图供参考。参考词汇：野兔hare树桩 tree stump_【答案】In ancient China, there was a farmer. Though he worked on his farm, his harvest could only support his own life. The farmer wanted to change his life, but he was too lazy to work har

66、d every day.One day, something amazing happened. The farmer was working on the farm. Suddenly, he heard a strange noise. He looked around and saw a little hare under a tree stump. It ran too fast so it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy, and he took the rabbit home and co

67、oked a big meal. From then on, he didnt work any more. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he died. Obviously, he was not so lucky. Moreover, because nobody took care of the crops in the field, they all died.This story tell us we should not always follow the past experience,

68、we should fix new problems with new ways. Also, it warned us never to expect to gain without working.【解析】该题属于记叙文，但写作时要按邮件格式写。承接短文开头；第二段叙述守株待兔这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。注意：1. 根据作文要求，使用第三人称来叙述故事内容。时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景。2.描述故事时，要用场景描写，故事发生的背景、起因和过程要交代清楚。3.根据写在内容，可以采用work hard, bump into, from then on, day afte

69、r day, depend on, come from等短语；使用there be, until和while引导的时间状语从句，tooto, sothat, notany more等句型和结构。十四、达州76. 书面表达 随着我们不断成长，生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光，同时伴随不少烦恼仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信，结合自己的实际，运用所学知识，请你以编辑的名义，就他的频恼在回信中给出好的建议Dear sir，Im Xiaohua，15，a middle school student I have some problems to tell you， my parents always s

70、ay to me， Study， study， do homework， do your homework when I come back However，they don t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 pm every dayAnd last Sunday， my 3yearold brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam I really wanted to get better grades， s

71、o I couldnt stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried loudly Then my mother came in， she blamed me without askingwhyMy eyes were full of tears at that time It was not my fault Why did she treat me like that？Didnt mother love me？ After all Im also her birth child， My dear editor， w

72、hat can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？Sincerely，Xiaohua要求：（1）卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）（2）全文字数不少于90词书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确（4）内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议，并适当发挥：文中不能出现真实的人名、地名Dear Xiaohua， Im glad to receive your letter I have ever had the same experience I even had a fight with my paren

73、tsBut now， I fully understand them _I hope these help!Tony【答案】Dear Xiaohua，Im glad to receive your letterI have ever had the same experienceI even had a fight with my parentsBut now，I fully understand themFirst，as parents，their dream is that one day you can get good gradesSo they put emphasis on hom

74、ework every dayWhy not talk with your parents？You can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did itOr you can help them do some housework after schoolSecond，for your little brother，he is just a babyHe is glad to see you after your coming back from schoolSo he wants to play with youW

75、hy dont you play with him for a few minutes? And you also can tell him that you have something important to doMaybe he will get your pointAt last，believe your parentsThey all love you forever. All you need to do is communication. Then you will get on well with your parents and brother.I hope these c

76、an help you!Tony【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，have a fight with，get good grades，put emphasis on，help sb. do，do some housework，come back，play with sb.，something important，at last，get on well with等。而固定句型Why not talk with your parents?/ Why dont you play with him for a few minutes?和As p

77、arents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades / you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it/ All you need to do is communication等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。十五、广元84.书面表达假如你叫李军，你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象。在政府两年时间的

78、帮扶下，你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，参加本次活动。内容要点：过去1. 家庭贫困，房屋破旧。2. 母亲生病，为母担忧，成绩下滑。现在3. 住进新房，母亲康复，学习进步。4. 生活日趋改善。要求: 1. 词数：70词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last t

79、wo years. _【答案】My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house. Whats more, my mother wasnt in good health and she often fell ill. I was worried about her all the time, so my grades

80、 dropped. However, with the help of the government, we have moved into a new house. To our joy, my mother has become better. As for me, I have made great progress at school because of my hard work. All in all, our life has gradually improved.【解析】【分析】本题要求把过去的家乡和现在进行比较，得出现在变得更好的结论。描述过去的状况，要用一般过去时；描述现在

81、的变化，要用现在完成时态。介绍自己家乡的变化，用第一人称。【详解】短文第一句“My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house.”运用固定搭配“used to do”描述过去的家乡条件不好。下一句用短语“whats more”（而且）表示语气递进；短语“fall ill”（生病），介绍过去健康状况不好。当比较现在时，用副词“however”（然而）。短语“to our joy”（令我高兴的是）和“as for me”（对我来说），作者结合亲身感受，介绍了身边的变化。最后用“all in all”（总而言

82、之）进行总结，得出结论，即家乡的变化很大。十六、凉山第四节：书面表达81.每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。安全对每个人都很重要交通：外出时遵守交通规则食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需谨慎远离危险之人遇到危险保持冷静然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助尽可能避免受伤害 保证自己的安全参考词汇：要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，

83、不计人总词数。Dear friends,Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?Here are some suggestions. _In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.Thats all. Thank you !【答案】例文Dear friends， Everyone has only one life， we should treasu

84、re our lives But how can we protect ourselves？ Here are some suggestions On the one hand， we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustnt run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along

85、the right side and shouldnt carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat lessWhen food smells bad， dont eat itThird，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselvesFourth，we mustnt swim in rivers without

86、our parents or other adults aroundOn the other hand， we should learn to protect ourselves， which is one of the most important living skills We must be careful when making friends especially onlineSome persons online are not honestThey are dangerous， so we must keep away from them If we happen to hav

87、e trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives Thats all Thank you !【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，要表达安全很重要以及如何自救。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文

88、意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如the importance of, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，keep away from, keep calm, ask sb for help, so that, on the one hand, on the other hand以及first, second, third, fourth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。十七、眉山66.书面表达假如你是李华，打算邀请你们

89、的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。要点：1. 端午节的时间（农历五月五日）、来由（纪念屈原）；2. 活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛（时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况）。参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar注意：1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；2. 词数：80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。Dear Jack,The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. _Looking forward to your

90、reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. Its a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. Its on May fifth in Chinese lun

91、ar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.If you are interested in it, please dont hesitate to contact me. Loo

92、king forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】本文属于应用文体，介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导

93、的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。十八、成都五、书面表达81.假如你叫Ann，你的中国朋友小华发来email请教如何利用词典学习英语。请参考截图及注释，根据提示回一封email。要点如下：1. 根据示例，概括介绍词条构成；2. 如何用词典解决词汇学习中的问题（至少两点）；3. 介绍词典对英语学习的好处（至少两点）。( taken from an English- Chinese dictionary )注意：l. 截图内容仅供参考，可以引用，不能照抄；2. 文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；3. 词数：100左右。 【答案】Dear Xiaohua,Glad

94、 to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of course, sometimes the same word has differe

95、nt parts of speech and definitions.Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit to English learning. First of all, it can h

96、elp us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.I hope its helpful to you.YoursAnn【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to use a dictionary, such as, to learn English, part of spee

97、ch, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not onlybut also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do等。而You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciati

98、on, but also know its meaning./ I hope its helpful to you等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。十九、乐山第四节 书面表达(满分 20 分)91.为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从 4 月 1 日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。1. 学生吃得健康、安全；2. 及时发现就餐问题；3. 食堂提供食品多样；4. 父母更加放心。注意:1.词数

99、80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇:规定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；营养的 nutritious (adj.)A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias._【答案】A new food safet

100、y regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is a

101、ny problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents neednt worry about our diet any more.We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, s

102、o I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other w

103、ords, worry about, not.at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。二十、遂宁67.书面表达在成长过程中，青少年面临越来越多的烦恼，主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示：1 导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：（1）学业 （2）与他人相处2减少压力的措施：（1）积极参加课外活动（2）多与他人交流沟通3简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。（至少一点）注意：1文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。2文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。3 不可逐词翻译，应有

104、独自的见解并适当发挥。4文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up_【答案】We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others. Students have been competing with each other since they were very young, w

105、hich brings them too much pressure. 【高分句型一】Some students dont know how to get along well with others. They feel lonely. This can also bring them pressure and worries.（导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因）Ill give you some ways to relieve pressure. First of all, you need to take part in all kinds of class activities, suc

106、h as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions.【高分句型二】In addition, you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.（减少压力的措施）In my opinion，pressure is not a bad thing. Proper pressure is

107、 beneficial to our growth and development. If a person doesnt have pressure, he will become lazy easily. We should learn to face pressure in our life.（对压力利弊的看法）【解析】【详解】这篇短文要求我们对“压力”这个话题发表自己的一些看法。审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分的内容：首先介绍导致青少年精神压力大的原因，主要从两个方面进行介绍：学业以及与其他人的相处；接下来介绍一些减少压力的措施，如积极参加课外活动、多与他人沟通交流等；最后谈谈自己对压

108、力利弊的看法。写作时可以这三个内容划分文章的结构和层次，分三段写，每一段一个主题。短文应以一般现在时为主，根据表达需要，使用正确的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；可以对细节进行拓展，但应注意不能远离主题。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当的句型、短语和单词。句子结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达自然、流畅。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己对青少年压力的一些看法。短文

109、有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。对每一项内容进行了发挥和拓展，更加详细地进行叙述，使文章内容充实、丰富。且每一段主题明确，结构清晰，层次清楚。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句式结构完整，有简单句、并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句以及非谓语动词等复杂句式，长短句结合，文章富有节奏感，高级句型的使用体现了作者深厚的语言功底。短文中使用的一些较好的句型有：Students have been competing with each other since they were very young, which brin

110、gs them too much pressure.、First of all, you need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions.、In addition, you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas.、Proper pressure is beneficial to our

111、growth and development.、 If a person doesnt have pressure, he will become lazy easily.等等。二十一、内江第三节书面表达61.假设你叫李华,你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据如下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。 1.你最喜欢的是星期五；2.原因：(1)这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课(从小就喜欢音乐，音乐老师和音乐课很有趣)；(2)要求:(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;(3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展;(4)100词左右；题目已经

112、写好，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Day_【答案】My Favorite DayEveryone has their favorite day My name is Li HuaNow let me introduce my favorite dayMy favorite day is FridayBecause it has my favorite music classI have loved music since childhoodI also like my music teacher Her music class is very interestingTheres a

113、 PE class on FridaysI like playing football in PE classI think its good for my healthWe can also develop friendship through sportsThis is also a time which I can spend together with my parentsSo I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，根据所给出的内容提示写一

114、篇英语短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。二十二、广安76.书面表达当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机(smart phones)。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。活动内容1.花大量时间玩游戏，上课睡觉，不按时完成作业。2.伤害眼睛，不

115、利健康。建议1.远离智能手机，认真学习。2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流。3.积极参加各种活动，如打篮球、唱歌要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。参考词汇: eyesight(视力) disadvantage(不利条件) keep away from(远离) take an active part in(积极参加)Girls and boys,With the develop of the Internet,many students have sma

116、rt phones._Thats all Thank you!【答案】Girls and boys,With the development of the Internet,many students have smart phones.The students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired.Someone doesnt finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class.Besides,smart p

117、hones do harm to our health,some students eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.To avoid these disadvantages,I think we should make some changes.First,we should keep away from smart phones and work hard.Second,stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life,fe

118、elings and so on.Third,take an active part in all kinds of activities,such as playing basketball,singing songs.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的

119、结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。二十三、绵阳51.书面表达To: someoneFrom: Mike Hi, I dont know who will read this letter. But I do hope I can get help from you! I am a little nervous these days because I found my roommate might want to go to t

120、he same school as me. Although he isnt as good as me in schoolwork, Im still worried.I know I have no right to and should not stop his choice, but I do not know what I should do. Would you please give me some advice?Look forward to your reply.All the best,Mike To: MikeFrom: Li Hua Hi, Mike _Li Hua 【

121、答案】Hi Mike,Im glad to receive your letterIts normal that you have this kind of feeling in your age.Your roommate isnt as good as you in schoolwork，but I think he also has his advantage. Is he friendly, outgoing, kind or hard-working? You may can be good friends since you have known each other in mid

122、dle school. Why not call him to talk about his choice?（高分句型二）Dont be worried! Take it easy. Everyone has right to choose school. If you will be in the same school, you should be happy.I hope you would deal with it soon.Yours,Li Hua.【解析】【详解】本题是写一篇给定材料的建议信，是给Mike,的建议。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表

123、达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，为了使说明更具逻辑性，适当使用序数词。这是一篇很好的作文，文中用到了一些好的句型：You may can be good friends since you have known each other in middle school. Why not call him to talk about his choice?这些给文章增色不少。二十四、南充66.书面表达近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永

124、久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。How to Keep SafeTraffictraffic lights, electric bikes（电动车）Swimmingrivers, swimming poolInternetID number, code(密码）, unhealthy websites要求：1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数：8

125、0-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。How to Keep SafeDo you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important._After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.【答案】How t

126、o Keep SafeDo you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldnt cross the road.And we shouldnt ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldnt sw

127、im in the river because its dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldnt tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldnt surf unhealthy websites. Whats more, we shouldnt go out with friends without our parents permission. If

128、 we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.【解析】【详解】近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英

129、语征文比赛，给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldnt cross the road.；Third, we shouldnt tell strangers our ID number or code when we are

130、surfing the Internet.这些给文章增色不少。二十五、自贡第四节 书面表达（共1题；满分20分）45（20分）初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行感恩为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿要点提示：1感谢父母，教我如何生活，2感谢老师，教我许多知识，3感谢同学，给我美好回忆，写作要求：1词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；2可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；3文中不能透露个人真实信息Good morning， everyone Im glad to be here to speak in front of you Here Id lik

131、e to thank everyone of you_That s all Thank you【分析】高分句型一：I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying我还记得当我考试不及格时，你们鼓励我继续努力I still remember 后跟了宾语从句，宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事高分句型二：Dear classmates， youve helped me a lot in my studies since I came

132、 to this school亲爱的同学们，自从我来这里以来，你们在我的学习中帮了我很多忙 since自从，引导时间状语从句，主句用了现在完成进行时，从句用了一般过去时【解答】Good morning，everyoneIm glad to be here to speak in front of you Here Id like to thank everyone of youHow time flies! We ll graduate soon I have so many words from my heart to sayAt this moment，I want to say than

133、ks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates（开篇点题） Dear dad and mom， youve taken good care of me in the past three yearsWhen I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me upYou taught me how to get on well with my classmates（感谢父母亲的关心，鼓励） Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so wellI wo

134、nt forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you areI still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave Because of your help，I have made much progress（感谢老师在学习上和生活上的帮助） Dear classmates， youve helped me a

135、 lot in my studies since I came to this school【高分句型二】When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some adviceI never forget the days when we studied together （感谢同学的帮助，鼓励，留下的美好回忆）Words cant show my thanks to you!Ill remember all of you That s all Thank you二十六、四川德阳第三节 书面表达（满分 15 分）假如你是李华

136、，你的高中生活即将开始，你的英国笔友 Sam 询问你高中的计划，请你用英语根据以下内容和要求写一封电子邮件回复他。内容：1.与新老师和新同学友好相处；2.参加各种活动，如：体育活动，强健身体；3.多读书，开阔视野，提高阅读能力；4.努力学习，提高成绩，尽力做到最好；5.使高中生活丰富多彩有意义。要求：1.必须包括以上所有内容，并可适当发挥；2.词数 80 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3.不能出现真实的人名、校名及地名；4.将邮件写在答题线指定的位置上。Dear Sum,I am glad to tell you my senior high school plan. YoursLi

137、 Hua【审题指导】本篇书面表达是一封电子邮件，主要给英国笔友 Sam 写信，介绍你的高中计划。写作时，人称使用第一人称；时态使用一般将来时。注意要保证内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、行文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。One possible version Dear Sam,I am glad to tell you my senior high school plan. First, I am going to get on well with my new teachers and classmates. Second, I will take an active part in d

138、ifferent kinds of activities. For example, I can do more sports to make my, body stronger and keep healthy. Third, I will study hard to get better grades and try to be the best in my class. Fourth, I plan to do more reading to open my eyes and improve my reading skills. Though everything is new to m

139、e, I will try to make my school life colorful and meaningful.Yours, Li Hua二十七、百色61. 书面表达假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题为 My Classmate的短文提示：1他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；2他乐于助人（举一个例子）；3对他的评价要求：1文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；2词数80左右My Classmate_【答案】My ClassmateLi Hua is my classmate and my good friend. He is tall and handsome

140、. His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams. He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. He is ready to help others. He often helps me with my English. Last year he helped a tenyearold boy who lost his way find his mother. I think Li Hua is a kind personEver

141、ybody in my class likes him very much. I hope we will be good friends forever.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍你的同班同学。主要从1他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；2他乐于助人（举一个例子）；3对他的评价。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关

142、系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. 他也擅长运动，因为他认为健康很重要。句子because he thinks health is very important.是由because引导的原因状语从句。【高分句型二】Last year he helped a tenyearold boy who lost his way find his mother. 去年，他帮助一个迷路的十岁男孩找到了他的母亲。句子who lost his way find his mo

143、ther.是由who引导的定语从句。二十八、贵港61.书面表达假如你是林涛，你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾现在他来信，请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议请根据下面表格提示，用英文给他写一封回信学会相处学会倾听；互相帮助；不在网上交友；自我保护学会和同学沟通；及时求助老师和父母对学习、生活的影响（不少于2点）写作要求：1短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥2语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范3文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；4：词数80左右开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数爹考词汇： respect尊重Dear Sam，Hows it going？ Im happy to

144、tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselvesBest wishes!Yours，Lin Tao【答案】Dear Sam，Hows it going？ Im happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves（开篇点明题意）First，We should study how to listen to othersWe could be quiet when others are talking with youJust liste

145、n carefully，then you can describe your opinionsSecond，We also should be ready to help each other（高分句型一）Helping others will improve the relationships with your friendsThird，Please dont make friends via the InternetIts not truthful and you cant judge the truth by yourselfTherefore，we can protect ourse

146、lves via communicating with classmatesMeanwhile，We can ask teachers and parents for help（从如何与人相处和保护自己方面提出建议）sometimes in your daily lifePlease take above advice，Hope you will deal with it soon（高分句型二）（对学习，生活的影响以及给出期待）Best wishes!Yours，Lin Tao【解析】【详解】短文第一句 Im happy to tell you how to get on well with

147、others and protect ourselves开篇点明题意，然后分步骤介绍如何跟别人相处：First，We should study how to listen to othersWe could be quiet when others are talking with youJust listen carefully，then you can describe your opinions高分句型之一Second，We also should be ready to help each other一般将来时句子Helping others will improve the rela

148、tionships with your friends得出结论：Therefore，we can protect ourselves via communicating with classmatesMeanwhile，We can ask teachers and parents for help（从如何与人相处和保护自己方面提出建议）sometimes in your daily lifePlease take above advice，Hope you will deal with it soon（高分句型二之二）（对学习，生活的影响以及给出期待）二十九、玉林七、书面表达61.每周星期一

149、的升旗仪式(Flay-rising cefemony)是你们学校的常规活动，你的英国笔友Bob对你校的升旗仪式很感兴趣。假定你是张华，请你给Bob写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你校升旗仪式的情况。内容要点：1、升旗的时间和地点；2、参加升旗的人员；3、升旗活动额意义；4、你的感想。参考词汇：(仅供参考)要求：1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。2. 80词左右，语法正确。（开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数）3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。Dear Bob,Hearing that you are interested in the Flag-rising cerem

150、ony of our school. I am glad to tell you something about it._【答案】Dear Bob,Hearing that you are interested in Flag-raising ceremony of our school，I am glad to tell you something about itEvery Monday morning at eight oclock，we hold a flag-raising ceremony on the school playgroundAll teachers and stude

151、nts must attend the ceremonyWhen the national flag is rising，we must sing the national anthem and salute it Raising the national flag is an important means of patriotism education and collectivism education（升旗活动的意义）The national flag is the symbol of a country At this moment， a sense of mission and r

152、esponsibility appears in my mindIm proud of my motherland I must work hard to make our country more and more beautiful Hope you can experience the Flag-raising ceremony of our schoolYours,Zhang Hua【解析】【详解】首先根据提示可知，每天早晨进行的升国旗活动，用一般过去时态。第二段All teachers and students must attend the ceremonyWhen the nat

153、ional flag is rising，we must sing the national anthem and salute it介绍了参加升旗仪式的成员和必须做的事情；第三段前两句Raising the national flag is an important means of patriotism education and collectivism educationThe national flag is the symbol of a country介绍升国旗活动的重要意义；接下来谈论感想；最后表达希望。通篇运用特色短语有in my mind在我心中；be proud of以为

154、自豪；more and more beautiful越来越美丽。文章长短句搭配合理。三十、河池.语篇表达66.“人生没有彩排，生命没有重来”，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!” 为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛。请跟进以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。写作提示：写作要求：1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2.所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚：4.词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出

155、，不计入总词数。)Keep away from the danger!Hello! Everyone, Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission. In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!Thats all. Thank you for

156、listening!【答案】Keep away from the danger!Hello! Everyone, Im Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic

157、rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustnt look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustnt believe whatever they say. Besides, dont meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Dont eat food that goes

158、 bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we cant run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and dont fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once

159、.In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!Thats all. Thank you for listening!【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Keep away from the danger为题，写一篇演讲稿。审题可知，题目中利用思维导图的形式，列举了这篇文章中应该包括的几个要点。观察这个思维导图可知，短文应该从游泳、交通、交友、饮食、学校安全以及毒品等六个方面进行叙述，每个方面都给出了一些提示词，学生们可以利用这些提示词来组织语言，用完整的句子表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注

160、意：首先题目中给出的所有提示词以及要点都应包括在内，不要有所遗漏。可以根据表达需要进行拓展，使文章内容更加充实。但应注意拓展内容应与文章主题紧密相连，不要写没有用的东西。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句式的正确结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语和句型。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句之间应使用一些衔接成分，注意叙述的层次性，条理清楚，行为连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给我们介绍了生活中应如何远离危险，保证我们的安全。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中

161、要求的所有内容，提示词都使用上了。文章中从六个方面进行了具体的介绍，每个方面前都有表示顺序的词First, Second Last but not least等，使文章的结构非常清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、祈使句等结构，句式多变，表达准确、清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustnt look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on lin

162、e, but we mustnt believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and dont fight with them.、 If someone threatens you, call for help. 、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.

163、等等。三十一、桂林61.书面表达假如你是小玲，上周日，你和你的美国朋友Betty在西山公园玩得很开心。现在请你根据下列表格的信息，议“A Happy Day”为题写一篇英语短文。TimeThingsIn the morningclimb the mountainsee beautiful flowers and monkeysAt noonhave a picnic on the grasslandlisten to musicIn the afternoongo boating on the lakefeed fish【写作要求】1. 文中应包括以上信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范。2.

164、 文章字数在70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。A Happy DayLast Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park._【答案】A Happy DayLast Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park. In the morning, we got up early to catch the bus to Xishan Park. We climbed the mountain, laughi

165、ng and singing. On the way up to the top, we saw lots of beautiful flowers and lovely monkeys. When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. So we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we listened to music, feeling relaxed. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lak

166、e and fed fishes. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have a good time、in the morning、catch the bus、climb the mountain、on the way up to the top、the foot of the mountain、have lunch、had a picnic、after that、listen to music、go boating on the lake、both of

167、us等。而非谓语动词结构“We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing./ it was time to have lunch.”和“When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch./ When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.”等时间状语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。三十二

168、、柳州八、书面表达61.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：年龄与外表16岁；高大健壮兴趣与爱好喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐；最喜欢的科目是英语性格与人风趣幽默；乐于助人、容易相处注意：1. 词数70左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music 最喜欢的科目favourite subject风趣幽默funny and humorous

169、乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on withDear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. _Im sure youd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishesYours, Li Hua【答案】Dear JackHow is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classma

170、te Chen Dong to youHe is a 16-year-old boy He has round face，black hair and bright eyesHe is tall and strong He likes smiling very much He likes doing sportsreading and listening to musicHis favourite subject is Englishbecause he thinks it is very interestingHe is humorous and funnyHe is ready to he

171、lp others and easy to get on with othersHe likes doing sportsreading and listening to musicHis favourite subject is Englishbecause he thinks it is very interestingHe also spends much time taking part in after-school activitiesHe likes winter very much，because he thinks winter is a season to do many

172、fun things，such as skating, making snowman and so onHis dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good gradesIm sure youd like to have such a person as your friendWith my best wishes!YoursLiHua【解析】【分析】分析：高分句型一He likes smiling very much此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用短语like doing sth 喜

173、欢做某事，短语very much非常，很，此句可翻译为“他很喜欢笑。”注意like后加doing高分句型二He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用短语spend some time（in）doing sth 花时间做某事，短语take part in 参加，此句可翻译为“他还花大量时间参加课外活动。”【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。要求根据表格中的内容提示，用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主

174、要用第三人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。三十三、北部湾七、书面表达（10分）43（15分）暑假将至，你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动，题目为My Plan for Summer Holiday请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文写作要点：1学习计划2运动计划3娱乐计划 4你的愿望写作要求：1内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2语篇完整

175、，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名，否则不予评分；4开头已给出，不计入总词数My Plan for Summer HolidaySummer holiday is coming _【解答】My Plan for Summer HolidaySummer holiday is comingI will be very busy in the summer holidayHere is my plan for the summer holiday（开篇点题） I will read some English books in the library be

176、cause my English is poor Maybe Ill go to a summer school I will do my homework carefully （学习计划）Im going to play sports at least two hours every day Ill play basketball with my friends Ill swim with my parents （运动计划）Summer holiday is a good time to relax myself 【高分句型一】Im going to watch some movies at the cinamaIll spend some time playing games with my cousins（娱乐计划）My wish is to visit the Great Wall 【高分句型二】I have never been there before I want to go there by train I believe my wish will come true during this summer holiday（愿望）