2021高考人教版英语二轮专题复习《统考版》35分写作规范抢分练（一） WORD版含解析.doc

1、35分写作规范抢分练(一)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020昆明市“三诊一模”高考模拟考试Lucy, the 5th grader, has a love of writing letters. She wrote to her mailman to express her thanks in last week. “Doug, you may know me as a person who wrote lots of letters and decorates the envelopes too. I want thank you for

2、taking my letters and delivering it. I make people happily with my letters, but you do too，” Lucy wrote.The next day, Lucy got a letter from Doug thanking her for recognizing which he had done and the importances of his job. Feeling moved and inspiring, Doug shared Lucys letter online. It received m

3、ore than 200, 000 likes.第二节书面表达(满分25分)2020沈阳市教学质量监测三假定你是李华，为让学生更好地了解儒家文化，你校将邀请李教授到学校做“儒学”讲座。请你给在你校就读的外国学生写份英文通知，内容包括：1时间和地点；2内容安排；3注意事项。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔子Confucius；儒学ConfucianismNotice_Student UnionJune 17th, 202035分写作规范抢分练(一)第一节答案与解析：Lucy, 5th grader, has a love of writing letters

4、. She wrote to her mailman to express her thanks last week. “Doug, you may know me as a person who lots of letters and decorates the envelopes too. I want thank you for taking my letters and delivering . I make people with my letters, you do too，” Lucy wrote.The next day, Lucy got a letter from Doug

5、 thanking her for recognizing he had done and the of his job. Feeling moved and ， Doug shared Lucys letter online. It received more than 200, 000 likes.the改为a。冠词误用。grader是可数名词，又是第一次在文中出现，所以应用不定冠词修饰。删除in。介词多用。表时间的名词前带有last，next，this，these，that等指示性限定修饰语且其前没有冠词时，其前要省略介词。wrote改为writes。动词时态误用。根据and提示可知，此

6、处与decorates呼应，故用一般现在时形式。want后加to。不定式符号to漏用。want to do sth.想要做某事，是固定搭配，故用不定式作宾语。it改为them。代词误用。此处them与前面的复数名词letters呼应。happily改为happy。形容词和副词混用。make sb.形容词，是固定搭配，形容词作宾语补足语。but改为and。连词误用。根据语境中的you do too可知，上下句表示并列关系，而非转折关系。which改为what。名词性从句中引导词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个宾语从句，what在从句中作had done的宾语，表示事物的概念。importanc

7、es改为importance。名词形式误用。importance是不可数名词，没有复数形式。inspiring改为inspired。非谓语动词误用。根据Feeling可知，此处与moved并列作表语，且表示人的感受，故用过去分词。第二节参考范文：NoticeIn order to help students learn more about Confucian culture, our school will invite a distinguished expert, Professor Li, to give a lecture entitled “Confucianism” in our

8、 school hall on June 25th.The lecture will last about two hours from 2 pm. to 4 pm. covering three aspects: First comes the general introduction to Confucianism, including its origin, core ideas and influence. During the lecture, Confucius and his anecdotes will also be included, which is good news for his admirers. The final part is the question and answer session, in which Professor Li will help the audience apply Confucianism to solve practical problems.All are welcome and please be punctual and disciplined.Student UnionJune 17th, 2020