2021高考人教版英语二轮专题复习《统考版》35分写作规范抢分练（五） WORD版含解析.doc

1、35分写作规范抢分练(五)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020成都市高三第一次诊断性检测Last summer I decided to get my first job. This was possible one of the hardest tasks. For me, it was another step moved from a dependent child to a fairly independent adult. I had never hold a job before because of my parents want

2、ed me to focus on school. So I had never worked the day in my life. At first, it is extremely tough. I sent applications hoping to get my first couple of choice. Yet I got neither calls or emails. Luckily, halfway through the third week, I finally got a call. It was not my first choice, but we could

3、 not say no. And after the interview, I was more than ready start working the following Monday.第二节书面表达(满分25分)2020“四省八校”高三第二次质量检测假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Zack将要来中国旅游，回国前想给家人和朋友买一些有中国特色的礼物，他给你发邮件寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1表示欢迎；2推荐礼物；3表达祝愿。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：Chinese characteristic中国特色_35分写作规范抢分练(五)第一节答案与解

4、析：Last summer I decided to get my first job. This was one of the hardest tasks. For me, it was another step from a dependent child to a fairly independent adult. I had never a job before because my parents wanted me to focus on school. So I hard never worked day in my life. At first, it extremely to

5、ugh. I sent applications hoping to get my first couple of . Yet I got neither calls emails. Luckily, halfway through the third week, I finally got a call. It was not my first choice, but could not say no. And after the interview, I was more than ready start working the following Monday.possible改为pos

6、sibly。形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处在句子中作状语，故应用副词形式。moved改为moving。非谓语动词误用。在本句中，was为谓语动词，move与其逻辑主语构成主谓关系，作step的后置定语，故应用moving。hold改为held。动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，本句时态为过去完成时，基本结构为had done, hold的过去分词为held，故应用held。删除because后的of。介词多用。because是连词，其后接句子；because of是介词，其后接名词、代词等。此处后接的是一个句子，故应把of删除。the改为a。冠词误用。此处表示在这之前我连一天都没工作过

7、，此处表泛指，且day的发音以辅音音素开头，故应用a。is改为was。动词时态误用。根据首句中的时间状语Last summer和语境可知，该处描述的是发生在过去的事，应用一般过去时，故把is改为was。choice改为choices。名词的单复数误用。couple of表示“几个”，后接可数名词复数，故应把choice改为choices。or改为nor。固定搭配误用。此处表示我既没有接到电话，也没有收到邮件。neither.nor.“既不也不”为固定搭配，故把or改为nor。与其易混淆的搭配为：either.or.“或者或者”。we改为I。代词误用。此处表示它不是我的第一选择，但是我不能拒绝。

8、此处人称应为我，而非我们，故应把we改为I。ready后加to。不定式符号漏用。be ready to do sth.意为“准备好做某事”为固定用法，故在ready后加to。第二节参考范文：Dear Zack，I am more than happy to know that you are planning to travel to China. Welcome! And I am very willing to recommend some gifts with Chinese characteristics to you.Firstly, I suggest that you buy s

9、ome silk products. As is known, China is famous for silk. You may find a variety of silk products, which are light and easy to carry, such as scarfs and handkerchiefs. Secondly, paper cutting works are also good choices. They are a symbol of traditional Chinese folk culture and good decorations for rooms. Lastly, some local snacks are also worth buying.I hope my suggestions are of help to you. If you want to know any other objects, dont hesitate to ask me.Yours，Li Hua