2022版新高考英语外研版一轮学案：写作专项突破 2、 题型2　读后续写 WORD版含解析.doc

1、题型二读后续写一、题型分析(一)读后续写试题特点题型特点1. 原文材料 350 词以内，所续写文章 150 词左右；2. 原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有议论文；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出；4. 续写部分有两大类别：半开放性质，必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写；完全开放性质，可以依据文章的思路自己发挥。评分基本要求阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的应用情况；应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；上下文的连贯性。(二)读后续写考查能力读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。与应用文不同，故事续写

2、除了要求考生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重考生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四个方面：1. 把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。考生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。2. 语言运用的准确性和丰富性。期望考生在词汇和语言结构的使用方面准确、恰当，能够根据内容需要使用较高级的词汇和语言结构。3. 对语篇结构的把控能力。考查考生对上下文逻辑关系的掌握情况，希望考生续写的短文语句连贯、有序。4. 创造性思维能力。这是对考生续写短文内容的要求，期望考生续写的短文具有较丰富的内容。该试题具有一定的开放性，要求考生详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情

3、，符合课程标准的要求。(三)读后续写考查要点读后续写考查要点：与给定材料有逻辑衔接；情节和结构完整。逻辑衔接：逻辑衔接的主要作用是保持文章的中心思想、意义上的连贯以及文句的流畅。一篇具有较强的逻辑性且衔接自然的文章层次清晰、语言流畅、过渡自然，词、句、段、篇能做到上下衔接合理、前后相照应。情节完整：情节由一系列能够显示人物与人物之间关系的具体事件构成，完整的情节通常包括开端、发展、高潮、结局四部分。结构完整：结构是谋篇布局的手段。完整的结构需要作者把一系列人物和事件以不同的轻重主次合理地进行组织安排，搭建好文章架构。二、解题指导(一)续写步骤1. 精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的

4、写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。2. 仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生能做到心中有数。3. 回顾原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，确定续写段落的内容。4. 拟写草稿，修改错词、病句。在确定思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用使上下文连贯。(二)学会审题1. 审要求：阅读下

5、面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。明确作文是读后续写。2. 审体裁：确定是记叙文，说明文还是议论文。3. 审时态：确定是一般过去时、一般现在时，还是一般将来时，或是各种时态混合出现。4. 审前文大意：读懂前文。5. 审前文要点：读后续写一般是记叙文，所以要找到记叙文的六要素：who, when, where, what, how, why。6. 审续写所给首句：仔细研读续写题目给出的第一句话，有助于我们续写后续故事时与前文叙述的高度融合。(三)学会如何归纳故事大意，进行发散性思维1. 看懂原文意思是续写的前提。续写基本上提供的是记叙文，一个情节饱满的故事。在读

6、原文时，要寻求故事的发展顺序，准确抓住故事发生的时间、地点、主人公、做的事情，以及为什么要做、怎么做的。只有这样，才能为后来的续写做充分的准备。2. 在续写时，学生要想把故事继续编写下去，就必须先找出文中留下的未解之谜，即文中的悬念点。最后，根据给出的段落开头语，选择性地将这些悬念点运用到续写中去，这样可以帮助学生克服想象不出故事情节、无话可说的窘境，打消对续写的畏惧感。(四)训练时态意识，明确人物以及事件线索在阅读前文时，有意识地关注时态问题，以及相关的人物、事件等。(五)合理发挥想象，续写的内容应该充满正能量读后续写两步走口诀读透(审题)细读文章，线索清；续写首句，要研读；语言风格，须沿用

7、；写好(续写)确定基调，思路形；先列提纲，初稿成；检查要点，写工整。注：1. 文章基调是指文章的立意，即真善美的具体体现，如关爱、分享、付出与收获等。2. 语言风格是指记叙文纯粹旁白的写人叙事，还是对话与旁白的交替使用等。Passage 1(2020山东齐鲁名校高三阶段复习达标检测)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Alex Dzyuba, 31, who runs his own IT firm, recently moved to New York with his family due to work. For nearly three weeks

8、, Alex and his wife, Kelly, were busy cleaning and decorating the new home to make it cozy for the kids. They have three cute children：twoyearold Anne, sixyearold Vicky, and Isabelle, 11. Anne often sits on the windowsill (窗台) of her sixth floor bedroom, where she likes to play with her toys. There

9、is a variety of toys and dolls for the little girl. The window, overlooking Mosholu Ave. in Riverdale, was never open and her mum Kelly thought that Anne was too small to work the latch(插销). However, Alex insisted that when things settled down, they should notify the homeowner that they needed windo

10、w guards and safety bars to protect Anne and Vicky.One rainy evening, Anne, accompanied by Isabelle, was playing with her toys in her bedroom as usual, while their mother busied herself with doing the housework, Anne and Isabelle shared the small bedroom, where Annes name is painted in rainbow colou

11、rs on the wall. After a while, Isabelle wanted to listen to the rain so she opened the window. Minutes later, Isabelle felt a bit hungry and left the room for a moment to get a slice of pizza from the dining table, leaving Anne alone. Instantly, she heard a thundering sound and the cries of her youn

12、ger sister coming from five floors below.Isabelle turned pale and realised something went wrong. She rushed into the bedroom, looked out of the window and saw Anne was on the awning (雨篷) over the entrance to the building. Her heart sank and she felt so scared that she screamed. Hearing her daughters

13、 screams from a room away, Kelly ran into Annes room and was too shocked to speak. “Its all my fault, Mum. I shouldnt have opened that window.” Isabelle cried hard. It felt like a nightmare but Kelly managed to keep calm. “We need to go downstairs to get Anne down from the awning, the sooner the bet

14、ter！”注意：续写词数应为150左右。Kelly rushed down to the sidewalk but couldnt reach her crying daughter. _“Shes the luckiest kid in the world，” said the neighbour.” _【参考范文】Kelly rushed down to the sidewalk but couldnt reach her crying daughter. Then an idea struck her. She hurried upstairs and knocked on the do

15、or of the neighbour on the second floor, with Isabelle following closely behind. Hearing what had happened, the neighbour let them in and joined the rescue. From the window opened next to the awning they were able to reach out and carefully pull the crying girl inside. Kelly held Anne in her arms ti

16、ghtly and examined if she was hurt. She was pretty shocked to find that Anne only had a bruise (擦伤) on her right arm.“Shes the luckiest kid in the world，” said the neighbour. “She had miraculously (奇迹般地) survived a fivestory fall and landed on an awning outside the building. No broken bones, no othe

17、r serious injuries.” Kelly and Isabelle were both glad that the little girl was alive and alright. They extended sincere gratitude to the neighbour and hurriedly sent Anne to hospital for a further examination. After that, Kelly called the landlord for safety bars to prevent the accident from occurr

18、ing again.Passage 2(2020浙江杭州二中模拟改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thirteenyearold Amy lost her mother in a car accident. She had no choice but to move from New Zealand to Canada to live with her father Thomas.Thomas was an inventor, living on a farm. He brought Amy back to his messy house, whi

19、ch had not been cleaned up for years. Most of the rooms in the house were used for storing his gliders (滑翔机) and their parts.One day, Amy happened to see Thomas testing his glider but he soon crashed in the surrounding field. Scared and unsure if her father was all right, Amy heard her fathers shout

20、 of triumph (巨大成功). She couldnt understand her fathers strange behaviour, so she barely talked with him. “My new life is absolutely miserable！”Amy thought with tears in her eyes.It was not until Amy found the eggs that her life changed. While exploring the area around the farm, Amy discovered an aba

21、ndoned nest of 16 Canada goose eggs under a fallen tree. She gathered all of the eggs and brought them back to the farm where she took a heating lamp to provide light and warmth for them.One afternoon after school, Amy was thrilled to discover all of the eggs had hatched. The baby geese and Amy look

22、ed at each other and a bond immediately formed. The geese assumed Amy, the first thing that they saw, was their mother. Amy asked her father, “Can I keep the baby geese, please？”“Yes，” Thomas agreed. Although he knew there would be a lot of challenges waiting for them, it might be a chance to improv

23、e their relationship.Looking after the baby geese very carefully, Amy even named all of them like a real mother. Soon winter arrived, it was time for migrant birds like Canada goose to go south for the cold days. Thomas made a great many attempts to teach the geese to fly but none of them followed h

24、im. They just stuck close with Amy all the time.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Frustrated, Thomas decided to teach Amy, their mother, how to fly. _Finally that day came. Thomas and Amy each flew a glider, leading the geese towards the south. _【参考范文】Frustrated, Thomas decided to teach Amy, their mother, how to fly.

25、Thomas and Amy went back to the room where Thomas was working. He told Amy, “Amy, to be a good mother， you should set a good example for them, so you had better learn how to fly a glider by yourself. Of course, I will be your teacher.” After hearing the news, Amy felt excited. With her fathers help,

26、 Amy gradually learned how to fly a glider.Finally that day came. Thomas and Amy each flew a glider, leading the geese towards the south. This was a great incident, which made Amy consider her father one of the greatest inventors. After that day, Amy often followed Thomas to test their new gliders.

27、Staring at the sky, they felt close and pleasant. The relationship between them was greatly improved. Their life was changed by these geese as well as the gliders.Passage 3(2020山东济南市高三4月模拟考试)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Arthur was messy. He didnt try to make messes, but he didnt try to clean

28、 up much, either. There were always small pieces of food on the table when he was done with eating. His socks never made it into the hamper (洗衣篮). And he only picked up his toys when Mum threatened to throw them away. Most days, Mum followed Arthur around the house and cleaned up after him. She brus

29、hed the crumbs (碎屑) into her hand and threw them away after meals. She picked up his socks and made sure they got washed, dried and folded neatly before going back in the drawer. She often picked up his toys when he left them to do something else.One day, Mum asked Arthur to pick up his toy train. “

30、Not right now，” Arthur said. He was reading a comic book. The train had been on the living room floor since the morning.“You know what, Arthur？Im not going to ask you again. Im done with cleaning today.” And with that, Mum put her feet up on the sofa and picked up a book to read.At dinner time, Arth

31、ur noticed that there was a big pile of crumbs at his place at the table. Mums spot was nice and clean. Arthur didnt like the crumbs very much. After dinner, Arthurs feet felt cold. He went to his room and opened his drawer, but the drawer was empty. “Mum, where are my socks？” Arthur called.“There w

32、erent any socks in your hamper, so I didnt wash them，” Mum said. Arthur felt unhappy. Now his feet would be cold, unless he wanted to wear dirty socks from the floor. He decided to stay barefoot.When it was time for bed, Arthur said good night to Mum and turned to go upstairs. Arthur stepped right o

33、n his toy train in his bare feet. “Ouch！” cried Arthur. “That really hurts！”注意：续写词数应为150左右。However, Mum was still reading and said nothing. _“Mum？” said Arthur. “Tomorrow can you show me how to do the washing so I can wash my socks？” _【参考范文】However, Mum was still reading and said nothing. Arthur was

34、nt sure whether she had heard him or not, so he called for help again, but still Mum didnt come. Then Arthur realised maybe it was only he that could solve his problem at that very moment. He quietly picked up the toy train and put it in the box. It only took a minute for him to put the toy away, an

35、d now he wouldnt have to worry about hurting his feet again.“Mum？” said Arthur. “Tomorrow can you show me how to do the washing so I can wash my socks？” “Of course，” said Mum. “Its nice to see you begin to learn to take care of yourself. I am always here to do whatever I can to help you become a mor

36、e independent boy.” Arthur felt better. He didnt want to wait until the next laundry day to have clean socks again. Maybe being neat wasnt so hard after all.Passage 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ra

37、n out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She st

38、ood beside a stand for a while, watching the middleaged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles？”“Oh, yes. but I dont have money on me.” she repl

39、ied.“Thats nothing. Ill treat you today，” said the man, “Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is it？” asked the man kindly.“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness！” said Jenny as she wiped her t

40、ears. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother, drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger！”Hearing the words, the seller smiled. “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thank

41、ed me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her？”Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mothers familiar face and weathered hands. “Why didnt I think of tha

42、t? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep b

43、reath. _ A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. _【参考范文】Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. “Where could my mother be？” she wondered, “Was

44、she still angry with me？” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realising that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheek

45、s. A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. “Here you come! Ive been looking for you，” she said, tired but relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms. “Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done f

46、or me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently. Passage 5阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was doing a big cleanup recently and my kids were helping when my son, Freddo, came across a knotted handkerchief with an old dark

47、brown coin inside. “Mum, can I have this? Can I play with this coin？” he asked. I took one look and was immediately transported to another time.In 1991, there was a time when my friend and I worked in a backward African country, Niger, hit by sandstorms and burning heat. There were many things I fou

48、nd difficult about this place the climate and beggars were my biggest headaches. So after finishing five months of nursing work there, we moved on to work at a health clinic in the neighbouring country, Burkina Faso. “Its much greener in Burkina. Even the Coke tastes better，” the locals assured us.Y

49、et the fact was quite the opposite. Arriving by taxi at our destination in Burkina, we began to unload. I was reaching for my larger piece of luggage when, out of the darkness, a motorbike with two men approached slowly. Without warning, one of the men grabbed my daypack as the motorbike swept close

50、 by. Within seconds, the pair were out of sight, swallowed up by the night.With my passport, money, travellers cheques all in the bag, I was in deep trouble. How frustrating! All I wanted was to leave this hellhole! Then, walking through Burkinas streets one day, I was stopped by an old woman who th

51、rust her hand in my face. “Cadeau (giftin French)! Cadeau！” she cried. Id had enough! I was extremely tired of the country: its poverty, its thieves, the heat, the dust and. everything! I told her angrily and firmly in French, “I have no cadeau. I have no money. A thief stole all my money two weeks

52、ago and now I cant get out of your country. I cannot give you anything. NOTHING！”The beggar woman listened attentively. To my great surprise, after hearing my words, she gave me a broad smile.注意：续写词数应为150左右。 She reached into the pockets of her dress. _ There was a slight touch on my hand; looking do

53、wn, I saw my son looking at me, curious. _【参考范文】She reached into the pockets of her dress. “Then I will give you a cadeau，” she announced. Kindly, she placed an old dark brown coin in my hand. In surprise, I looked at the coin, then at the woman. At that moment, I felt rather ashamed, ashamed of my

54、terrible attitude towards the old woman. In spite of her poverty, she was able to give me something priceless. I had taken it for granted that beggars would only receive something from others, yet the coin from the beggar woman in Burkina truly changed my view towards them, and her smile hit the dee

55、pest of my heart.There was a slight touch on my hand; looking down, I saw my son looking at me, curious. “Mum, can I have this? Can I play with this coin？” he repeated. “You cant play with it, honey.” I touched my son on the head and said slowly, “This ones special. It is an unforgettable precious m

56、emory to me. Come and let me tell you a story.”Passage 6阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The eightyearold Carol lived with her father David, mother May and elder brother Rob. The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The village was located on the t

57、op of the mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. Carols house was built nicely and they grew a lot of plants. The family survived on growing seasonal plants. Their life was totally surrounded by nature and beauty.While they lived a very happy life, Carol did not love the beautiful atm

58、osphere of the village. She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, walk around the city, watch movies, eat in fantasy restaurants and cafs, etc.However, there was hardly any chance that Carols family moved to the city as they have everything in the village.O

59、ne day, Carol felt asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish. Carol requested her that she should enjoy the city life as she always desired.Grandmother un

60、derstood the desire of Carol, but still wanted to convince her that peaceful village life was better than city life.She told Carol, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You can h

61、ardly find any trees. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city？”Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Her grandmother granted her wish but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city

62、. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. _ Carols brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. _【参考范文】Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. Carol and her friends went to see a movie. Afte

63、r that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall. Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city. Yet at the same time, she understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city. There was no peace, no silence; city life was fast

64、 and rushing. The air quality was not satisfying. She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.Carols brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realised that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than city life. Carol understood that she was now having a more joyful and abundant life. She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together. Carol also developed love for plants, animals and beautiful nature.