2012届高中英语新课标2轮总复习（广东专版）课件：专题6 第5课时夹叙夹议文的写作要领.ppt

1、(珠海市2011年5月高三综合测试二)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cupof water to take medicine when the plane just took off.She told him that she would bring him the water in tenminutes.Thirty minutes later,when the passengers ring forservice sounded,the air hostess r

2、ealized it at once.Shewas kept so busy that she forgot to deliver him the water.As a result,the passenger was held up to take hismedicine.She hurried over to him with a cup of water,but he refused it.In the following hours on the flight,each timethe air hostess passed the passenger,she would askhim

3、with a smile whether he needed help or not.But the passenger never paid attention to her words.When he was going to get off the plane,thepassenger asked the air hostess to hand him thepassengers booklet(意见簿).She was very sad.Sheknew that he would write down sharp words,whichmight result in the loss

4、of her job.But with a smileshe handed it to him.Off the plane,she opened the booklet,andcracked a smile,for the passenger put it,“On theflight,you asked me whether I need help or not fortwelve times in all.How can I refuse your twelvesincere smiles？”Thats right!It was the twelve smiles of the airhos

5、tess that touched the passenger deeply and ofcourse she wouldnt lose her job!【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；2.以约120个词谈谈微笑对人们的情感或行为的影响，内容包括：(1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的；(2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑；(3)你对微笑的感悟。【写作要求】1.作文中可使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。One possible version：An air hostess for

6、got a passengers requirement,which made him angry.Though during the wholeflight the passenger paid no attention to her,she stillserved him politely.Finally he was touched by hersincere smiles.Once I failed in a math exam,I had beencrying for a whole afternoon.Knowing what hadhappened,Mom came by my

7、side,stroked my hairand comforted me gently.Instead of finding theslightest disappointment on her face,I saw Momssincere smile.She told me not to give up andencouraged me to go on fighting.Believe it or not,Moms smile had such magic power that I regainedmy confidence and I did a much better job in t

8、hefollowing exam.From where I stand,I am fully convinced thatsmiles play a significant role in our lives.A smile isa cure to ones anxiety.Besides,a smiling facenever fails to cheer up those around us and makespeople feel at ease and comfortable.For me,thesmile from my mother is the most beautiful on

9、e thatI will always treasure in my life.【思路点拨】这是一篇叙议结合的文章，第一个问题是“微笑的作用”，是议论文体；第二个问题是“你最感动或最难忘的亲身经历”，是记叙文体；第三个问题“你对微笑的感悟”，是议论文体。从文章的标题以及内容的三点要求，我们可以列出这篇文章写作要点的总体框架：项目文体 比例 时态写作要点(1)微 笑的作用议论 25%do1)微笑能消除人们的焦虑情绪；2)微笑能鼓舞人心。(2)你 最感 动 或最 难 忘的 亲 身经历记叙 50%did具体事例：要点可以包括“是谁的微笑”、“什么情况下的微笑”、“他/她的微笑为什么让你最感动或最难忘

10、”。(3)你 对微 笑 的感悟议论 25%do1)微笑使人变得年轻；2)微笑无价。一、议论文的基本知识1.时态较为统一，多用现在时；2.强调语言表达的客观性；3.要有合情合理的阐述和论证，即论据和论点。二、叙议的结合值得注意的几个方面1.夹叙夹议作文的叙事部分与记叙文的叙事部分有不同之处。注意：人物、地点和发生的主要情节简单叙述清楚。语言简练，学会忍痛割爱，心理活动、人物描述等细节要略去。2.议论部分是有感而发，可以是一件事情，可以对自己是正面的影响也可以是负面的影响，由负面影响从而学到某种道理或者经验教训。3.议论是结合叙事部分展开，和所叙述的故事紧密结合，可以升华也可以只谈对自己的影响和感

11、受，但是必须是“紧密结合”并且是有感而发。One possible version:This passage tells us that Monty Roberts,who hadsuch strong belief that he didnt give up his dream all thetime,eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.For a person,belief always plays an important rolein his/her life.As a saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”Anyone who has strong belief can enjoya colorful life.Otherwise,he will lose himself in his wayof life.From my personal point of view,it can be seenthat one with firmlyheld belief is likely to achievesuccess and master his own life.