2020高考英语新素养大二轮专题突破江苏版讲义：专题5 书面表达 第二节 一 WORD版含解析.docx

1、第二节分类突破训练一、读写任务类记叙文典例请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didnt offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou.Later he was proved to be a disabled person.In a series of cases nationwide，we see people being beaten for refusing

2、 to give up their seats on public transport，which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.People with moral deficiency (who dont give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned，but they dont deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values

3、but not laws.In comparison，the attackers behave worse.The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats.It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice，but can they still think of their personal intention when they call

4、 violence justice？This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same，especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.If cruel and rude acts are rooted in childrens hearts，society will never step into civilization.The practice violates common values，neither solving

5、problems nor safeguarding civilized society.写作内容1.用约30个词概括短文的要点；2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法，内容包括：(1)读完这则新闻，你有什么感受？(2)假如你是车上的一名乘客，你会怎样做？(3)就如何创建文明、和谐社会提出你的建议。写作要求1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。满分作文The news is about a young disabled man attacked on

6、a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby，which leads a debate about who is right and who is wrong.I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite.It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence，which will really do great harm to our society.Today in o

7、ur society，many other people like her would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus，as the morality requires.However，if I were a passenger on the crowded bus，I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.So there

8、is still a long way to go for us to build up a harmonious society.In my opinion，we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized and harmonious society.阅卷老师点评1.层次分明，结构清晰本篇习作按照三段式：概括文章大意谈谈自己对这则新闻的看法及

9、感受对于创建和谐社会自己的一些建议。按照这一顺序展开叙述，不但做到了要点齐全，而且富有层次感。2.高级词汇的使用习作中用到了：do great harm to；take.for granted; stand out; in need of; build up; fight against; civilized and harmonious society等，显示了作者扎实的综合语言运用能力，让文章更具有可读性。3.多样化句型的使用习作中运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；who 引导的名词性从句；if虚拟条件句；there be句型等。读写任务型写作中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料

10、有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1.写作步骤概括原文衔接过渡描述事件发表看法概括原文记叙文常用模版：(1)The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher.(2)The author tells us a story about.(3)The passage is a story about.(4)According to the passage，the hero in the story.(5)From the story we know that

11、.记叙文常用的过渡语句：(1)This reminds me of the similar experience.(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago.(3)I had a similar experience.2.注意事项(1)注意时态的运用。记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。(2)注意人称的一致性。要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。(3)篇章结构。通常以时间

12、或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。(4)根据关键词和主题句进行概括。根据圈定的关键词和主题句进行改写，用相应的同义词进行替换或句型转换，千万不能原封不动地抄写原文。应变换表达原文的句子。原文变换表达You will not succeed.You will fail.You cant be too careful when driving.You should be careful when driving.I cant agree with you more.I quite agree with you.(2019盐城中学高三4月质检)A Chines

13、e boy is reported to have spent about 2 million yuan in studying in New Zealand but failed to get any diploma.He even could not take care of himself and his grandmother had to feed him.The man in the case is a so-called adult baby，because his deeds make him almost the same as a baby.He cannot take c

14、are of himself.He is unable to go to school，let alone finish studies.He even relies on his grandmother to feed him.However，he burns money faster than any normal student.He spent about 2 million yuan in two years overseas，but could not finish even the preparatory courses.We do not mean to judge his c

15、hoice，but someone who lacks the basic ability to survive has little chance of success in any modern society.In a later interview，the mother of the boy was in tears and said she regretted not having taught her son well.She also told the story about how she “educated” her son：meeting all his demands，e

16、ven the unreasonable ones.When he did not perform well in school，she simply spent money in sending him overseas；she would buy whatever he wanted.That was bad for her and bad for him.写作内容1.用约30个词概括文章大意；2.谈谈你如何看待“巨婴”现象，然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇

17、连贯，词数适当。参考范文A Chinese boy consumed a large sum of money in two years overseas.Whats worse，he couldnt live on himself and didnt get a diploma eventually.The phenomenon sets me thinking.The boy depicted in the passage is not the single case，resulting from several factors.First and foremost，there exist

18、 some parents spoiling the young and giving whatever their children want，even though their demands are irrational occasionally.In the second place，some parents focus more on childrens academic performances，ignoring the education of survival skills.Last but not least，some young people are self-center

19、ed and take it for granted that others should serve them.From where I stand，its high time that we took some measures to cope with this problem.To begin with，parents should strike a balance between discipline and love，letting their children try something themselves.Additionally，the young should establish proper values and communicate more with others.