2023届高考外研版英语一轮复习课件（适用于老高考新教材）写作专项提升 STEP 2　创亮点——力求语言优美生动.pptx

1、写作专项提升Step 2 创亮点力求语言优美生动英 语内 容 索 引第一讲 词汇优美4角度第二讲 句子优美7结构第三讲 文章优美2维度第一讲 词汇优美4角度词汇1 名词(短语)名词是表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称,属于实词,名词分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好,能显示出深厚的语言功底,更能出众脱俗。示范1(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)(一般词)On the other hand,there also exist some advantages.(高级词)On the other hand,there also exist some strong points.另一方面,也有一些优点。示范

2、2(2020新高考全国卷,写作)(一般词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.(高级词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.这项活动受到高度评价,因为它不仅为我

3、们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更有凝聚力。高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇:方法wayapproach/means困难difficultychallenge/barrier问题problemissue机会chanceopportunity选择choicealternative责任dutyresponsibility影响effectinfluence/impact后果resultconsequence缺点shortcomingdrawback职业careerprofession优势advantagestrength/strongpoint老人old peoplethe elderly/

4、the aged/the senior citizens青少年young peopleyoungsters/youths/adolescents一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper waya well-behaved child 各种各样的图书all kinds of booksvarieties of books/a wide range of books 对点过关训练用所给的词补全句子1.(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)网络课程打破了时间和空间的限制。_ break the limitation of time and space.(course)_

5、 break the limitation of time and space.The online coursesThe online curriculums2.(2020新高考全国卷,写作)这场比赛对参赛者的身体和精神都有很大的好处。所以我们都很重视,希望以后能有更多这样的活动。The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally._,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.(resu

6、lt)The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally._,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.3.传媒对于舆论有很大的影响。The media _public opinion.(effect)The media _public opinion.As a resultAs a consequencehas a powerful effect onhas a powerful imp

7、act/influence on4.最重要的是,老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人,因为他们在中国备受尊重。Most importantly,_ the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)Most importantly,_ the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.5.政府计划为年轻人创造更多的就业机会。The government plans to _.(young peopl

8、e)The government plans to _.old people are usually the first to tastethe old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens are usuallythe first to tastecreate more jobs for young peoplecreate more jobs for youngsters/youths/adolescents词汇2 动词(短语)动词分为及物动词和不及物动词两类,在句子中作谓语和非谓语。及物动词后面接宾语;不及物动词后面不能接宾语。动词或者动词短语恰当灵活

9、的运用,能生动形象地表达主语的动作或者状态,动词用的恰当高级,能为文章增色添彩。示范1(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)(一般词)Knowing you are interested in China,I believe you can help me solve these puzzles.(高级词)Knowing you take a great interest in China,Im firmly convincedthat/I firmly hold the belief that you can lend a helping hand to solve these puzzles.知道

10、你对中国很感兴趣,我相信你能帮我解决这些难题。示范2(2020全国卷,书面表达)(一般词)We want to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.(高级词)Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.我们想通过改编经典小说把你们的文化与我们的文化联系在一起。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇:知道knowbe aware of感谢thankappreciate拥有havepossess看见seeca

11、tch sight of记住rememberkeep in mind保持 keepmaintain提高improvepromote完成finishaccomplish应该shouldbe supposed to表达 expressconvey替代replacesubstitute激励encouragemotivate容忍bearputupwith未能cant dofail to do一定be sure tobe bound to照看look afterattend to表明showindicate/demonstrate站起来stand upget to ones feet发生happenoc

12、cur/come about道歉apologizemake an apology引起causecontributeto/account for/resultin决定decidedetermine/make up ones mind考虑considertake.into account/consideration理解understandmake sense of/figureout使用useemploy/make use of/take advantage of想起think ofoccurto/come up with告诉某人tell sb thatinform sb of/that疲倦be

13、tiredbe exhausted/be worn out闻名be famous forhave a reputation for感到舒服feel comfortablefeel atease帮助 helplend a helping hand to/do.a favor参加 take part inget involved in/participate in成功做某事succeed in doing sthmake it为做准备prepare formake preparations for/be prepared for含有大量的 have a lot ofbe abundant in/b

14、e rich in想做某事want to do sthseek/intend/desire to do sth尽力做某事try ones best to do sthspare no effort to do sth对感兴趣be interested inappeal to sb/take a great interest in擅长 be good athave a good command of/have a good knowledge of忙于be busy in(with)be occupied in(with)/be buried in/be engaged in对点过关训练.用高级

15、词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020全国卷,书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials._2.(2020全国卷,书面表达)We sincerely hope you can help us._3.I could have won the game but decided to let her win._came up withdo us a favormade up my mind4.This could cause serious damage to the countrys econom

16、y._5.We need more time to see how things develop before we take action._give rise topromote.用所给的词补全句子1.更糟的是,食用过多的糖可能会引起健康问题。Whats worse,eating too much sugar _.(cause)2.她和丈夫一起买了一小块地,开始自己种植食物。She _with her husband and began growing their own foods.(buy)3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。All the visitors _in the p

17、ark.(ask)can lead to/result in/give rise to health problemspurchased a small piece of landwere requested not to throw litter about4.我们应不遗余力地美化我们的环境,因为它是全人类共有的。_,because it is shared by all the human beings.(try ones best)5.更重要的是,我们可以提出自己的想法,通过讨论进一步学习。Whats more,we _and learn more through discussion.

18、(think of)We should spare no effort to beautify our environmentcan come up with our own ideas词汇3 形容词(短语)形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词或者形容词短语的恰当使用会渲染文章的色彩,为文章增加亮点。示范1(2020全国卷,书面表达)(一般词)This fruit-picking experience is helpful to us and teaches us the importance of working.(高级词)This fruit-picking

19、 experience is beneficial to us and teaches us the importance of working.这次采摘水果的经历对我们很有益,也教会了我们劳动的重要性。示范2(一般词)He is an excellent scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.他是一位杰出的科学家,对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。形容词

20、及形容词短语类写作高级词汇:有益的 goodbeneficial高兴的 gladdelighted激动的 excitedthrilled富裕的 richwealthy幸运的 luckyfortunate常见的 commonuniversal充足的 enoughadequate可用的 usableavailable困难的 difficultchallenging坚强的 strongtough丰富的richabundant古老的oldancient唯一的onlyunique巨大的largeenormous合适的properappropriate勤奋的hard-workingdiligent有空的f

21、reeavailable贫穷的poorneedy/poverty-stricken明显的obviousapparent/evident小心谨慎的carefulcautious有意义的meaningfulrewarding有益处的be usefulbe of benefit许多的 manya large quantity of有吸引力的 attractiveappealing不可能的 impossibleout of the question优秀的 excellentoutstanding/extraordinary令人担忧的 worryingof great concern令人惊奇的 surp

22、risingamazing/astonishing/shocking有趣的 interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing重要的 importantvital/significant/fundamental对点过关训练.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020天津卷,书面表达)I am very glad to hear from you.The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month._2.(2020新高考全国卷,写作)As the running race

23、 is very important,we have to make full preparations in advance._3.You can find different kinds of sweet food here._delightedof great importance/significancea variety of/various4.Young people today face a very difficult future at work._5.She seems an unusually clever girl._challengingintelligent.用所给

24、的词补全句子1.他的收入满足不了他的家庭需求。His income _.(enough)2.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Learning English well _.(important)3.清晨早起对这位病人的健康非常有益。Getting up early in the morning _to this patients health.(useful)is not adequate to his familys needsis significant/vital to your future employmentis of great benefit4.她是一位辛勤的老师,她工作非常勤奋

25、。She is _and she _.(hard-working)5.每天下了班,我都筋疲力尽。I always _when I am off work every day.(tired)a diligent teacheris diligent in her workfeel exhausted词汇4 副词及其他词副词或者副词短语在句子中主要修饰动词或者形容词,往往作状语,写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级用法的副词或者副词短语,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。示范1(2020浙江1月卷,写作)(一般词)In particular,you are qualified enoug

26、h and experienced in presenting your ideas,because of your abundant skills.(高级词)In particular,you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas,on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to your abundant skills.尤其是,你有足够的资格和经验来表达你的想法,因为你有丰富的技能。示范2(2020全国卷,书面表达)(一般词)In particular,he was very

27、 patient though sometimes I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems.(高级词)In particular,he was very patient though once in awhile/occasionally/from time to time I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems.尤其是,他很有耐心,尽管有时我无法解决一些数学难题。常见的副词及其他词类写作高级词汇:经常oftenfrequently很少seldomrarely只有on

28、lymerely然后thensubsequently/afterwards仔细地carefullyattentively适当地properlyappropriately大约aboutapproximately/roughly立刻immediatelyshortly/right now/right away当然certainlydefinitely/undoubtedly但是howevernevertheless突然suddenlyall of asudden立即immediatelyin a flash关于aboutconcerning/involving/regarding因此sothere

29、fore/consequently/as a result起先firstlyoriginally/initially非常veryextremely/highly最终finallyeventually/at last第一,首先firstto begin/start with第二,其次secondin addition/whats more和,也andas well as大多数mostthe majority否则orotherwise/or else事实上in factas a matter of fact完全地completelyabsolutely/entirely/fully有时someti

30、mesoccasionally/once in a while/at times/now and then即将到来coming soondrawing near/round the corner几天前a few days agothe other day故意on purposedeliberately/by design如果ifsuppose/supposing/on condition that因为because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks to总之in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary越来越多

31、more and moreincreasingly/an increasing number of提前ahead of timeahead of schedule/in advance例如for exampleto name only a few在某种程度上in a wayto some extent/to some degree/in a sense对点过关训练.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020江苏卷,书面表达)In fact,documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad._2.(20

32、19全国卷,书面表达)I am very delighted to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school._Actually/As a matter of factmore than3.(2019全国卷,书面表达)In addition,I can explain the Chinese paintings in detail and give help to anyone who is in need._4.Most of us use public transport to get to work._5.A fe

33、w days ago,my father called to ask me to study and living conditions!_as well asThe majorityThe other day.用所给的词补全句子1.人生在世总是有苦有甜。You will always have the bad _in the world.(and)2.第二,你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Secondly,you say that there is a discount _.(if)as well as the goodsuppose/supposing(that)I pay in

34、advance3.下雨了,足球赛因此而延期了。It rained and _.(so)4.抓住这个机会,否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance,_.(or)5.他不仅吸烟,而且还喝酒。He not only smokes but _.(too)therefore the football match was postponedotherwise/or else youll regret itdrinks as well.用高级词汇替换下面考生作文中的加黑部分假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack写电子邮件问你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要点,写一封电子邮件回复他。1.参加英语培训课程;2

35、.学开车;3.游览各地名胜。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。考生作文Dear Jack,How time flies!My College Entrance Examination is coming soon(1.).Therefore,I want(2.)to have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation.approaching/around the cornerintendFirst(3.),I will take some English courses to improv

36、e my spoken English.Second(4.),I will learn how to drive to get a driving license,because I like(5.)driving very much.After that,I will visit(6.)some tourist attractions throughout China.Surely,I will take some photos to send to you via the Internet.Finally(7.),I will have a good rest.This is the pl

37、an for my vacation.I am eagerly looking forward to it.Yours,Li HuaTo begin with/To start withIn addition/Whats moream fond ofpay a visit toAt last/Eventually第二讲 句子优美7结构句式1 省略结构英语中为了避免重复,句子中的某些部分可以省略,从而让文章显得紧凑自然。省略句在写作中的巧妙运用是书面表达得高分的助力,应当得到重视。写作中常见的省略情况:在以while,when,once引导的时间状语从句,以if,unless引导的条件状语从句以

38、及以although,though引导的让步状语从句中,如果从句中的主语与主句中的主语一致或从句的主语为it,且从句中含有be动词时,可以省略状语从句中的“主语+be动词”部分。(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)If possible(it is),you can reply to me as soon as possible.如果可能的话,你可以尽快回复我。(2020全国卷,书面表达)When(he is)faced with the difficulties,he always sticks to his post and works hard to overcome them.当面对困难时,

39、他总是在坚守岗位,努力工作来克服困难。When(they are)learning English,some students do not attach importance to spelling.一些学生在英语学习时,并不重视拼写。对点过关训练用省略结构补全句子1.(2020浙江1月卷,写作)如果有时间,请通过电子邮件注册。_,please sign up for it by email.2.虽然我愿意帮她,可我不知道她需要什么。_,I didnt know what she wanted.If availableWhile willing to help her3.那天放学回家时,我注

40、意到三个男孩在和丹尼说话。_,I noticed three boys talking with Danny.4.那真是一见难忘。_,it can never be forgotten.5.如果是这样的话,你可以来和我的家人一起庆祝。_,you can come to celebrate it with my family.While walking home from school that dayOnce seenIf so句式2 强调结构书面表达中,强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果,突出要强调的重点,更能彰显考生对英语表达的把握能力。1.强调句的基本结构:It is/was+被强

41、调部分+that/who+句子其他部分。这个句型可以强调除了谓语的其他任何部分。(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)It is because this activity will be presented on the English website that I want you to give me some advice.正是因为这次活动是在英文网站上进行的,所以我想让你给我提些建议。(2020全国卷,书面表达)It was Mr.Zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning English well.正是张先生让我意识到学好英语

42、的重要性。2.强调句的一般疑问句形式:Is/Was it+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分?Was it in the supermarket that Tom lost his wallet?汤姆是在超市里丢的钱包吗?3.强调句的特殊疑问句:疑问词+is/was it+that+句子其他部分?When was it that you first went to the Great Wall?你第一次去长城究竟是什么时候?4.It is/was not until.that.“直到才”It was not until 8 oclock that he realized he had

43、spent the whole day on the Internet.直到八点钟,他才意识到自己一整天都在上网。People say,“Guilins scenery is peerless in the world.”It was not until I visited the place that I found it really worthy of the reputation.人们都说:“桂林山水甲天下。”直到去了桂林,我才发现它果然名不虚传。5.强调谓语动词时,用助动词do/does/did,且只能对肯定句的一般现在时和一般过去时进行强调。(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)I do

44、believe you can help me solve these puzzles.我真的相信你能帮我解决这些难题。(2020全国卷,书面表达)We did hope there would be more meaningful activities in the coming future.我们确实希望今后会有更多有意义的活动。对点过关训练用强调结构补全句子1.(2020新高考全国卷,写作)正是凭着真诚和诚信,我们才创造了一种和谐的气氛。_ we created a harmonious atmosphere.2.是茶馆见证了我们所有人真正愉快的时光。_ witnessed a real

45、ly enjoyable time for all of us.3.(2020全国卷,书面表达)正是他的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。_ caused China to change gradually.It was with sincerity and faithfulness thatIt was the tea house thatIt was his continuous efforts that4.(2019浙江卷,写作)我真的希望你有一个光明的未来,我们的友谊将永远持续下去!_ and that our friendship will last forever!5.直到那时,我才注

46、意到那个男孩什么也看不见。_ I noticed the boy could see nothing.6.据我所知,赢得这次竞赛的人可能是你。As far as I am concerned,_.I do hope that you will have a bright futureIt was not until then thatit is you who/that are likely to win the contest7.这和去年在会议上演讲的是同一个人吗?_ spoke at the conference last year?8.正是由于这样,环境保护才变得越来越重要。_ the

47、environmental protection is becoming more and more significant.Is it the same person whoIt was because of this that句式3 倒装结构倒装结构分为部分倒装和全部倒装。在英语写作中,我们可以通过倒装强调我们要传达的信息,给文章增色。1.not,none,never,little,seldom,neither,nor,hardly等否定词,以及表示否定意义的介词短语(如at no time,by no means等)置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。no sooner.than.,hardly

48、.when.等句式中的no sooner,hardly位于句首时,主句用部分倒装。In my opinion,at no time should we ignore the importance of unity.在我看来,我们任何时候都不能忽视团结的重要性。Much to our disappointment,hardly had we got to the farm when it began to rain.让我们非常失望的是,我们一到农场,天就开始下起雨来。No sooner had I got off the bus than I realized my wallet was sto

49、len.我刚下公共汽车,就意识到我的钱包被偷了。2.“only+状语”置于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。Only when we think more for others,can we create a harmonious environment.只有当我们更多地为别人考虑时,我们才能创造一个和谐的环境。(2020天津卷,书面表达)Only when the two aspects are connected can a man show his talent to great advantage.只有把这两个方面联系起来,一个人才能最好地展示他的才能。3.not only.but also.

50、结构中的not only位于句首时,not only后面的句子用部分倒装。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)Not only will the online courses break the limitation of time and space but they will also provide us with great convenience to study.网络课程不仅打破了时间和空间的限制,还为我们的学习提供了极大的便利。4.not until位于句首时,主句用部分倒装,意为“直到才”。Not until he went through real hardship,did he

51、realize the love we have for our families is important.直到经历了真正的苦难后,他才意识到我们对家人的爱是重要的。5.as/though引导的让步状语从句可以用部分倒装结构,即将从句中的表语或状语置于句首。Tired out as/though I was,I never felt so happy.尽管我很累,但我从来没有这样开心过。(2019北京卷,书面表达)Busy as/though we are,we benefit a lot mentally and physically.尽管我们很忙,但我们在精神上和身体上都受益匪浅。6.在

52、so/such.that.结构中,当so/such连同它所修饰的成分共同位于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding my new bicycle.我是那样的兴奋,以至于我迫不及待地要试骑我的新自行车。So hard does he work that he has no time to spare for travelling.他那么努力工作,以至于抽不出时间去旅行。7.在含有had,should,were等的虚拟条件状语从句中,若省略连词if,则可将它们移到主语前构成部分倒装。Wer

53、e I you,I wouldnt do that.如果我是你,我就不会那样做。(2020全国卷,书面表达)Had it not been for his guidance andencouragement,I couldnt have won first prize in the English Contest.如果没有他的指导和鼓励,我不可能在英语竞赛中获得第一名。(2019全国卷,书面表达)Should you consider my application,I would be more than grateful.如果你能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。8.here,there,now,

54、then,out,in,up,down,around,on the wall,in the room,in front of,at the foot of等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首,且主语是名词而不是代词时,句子用全部倒装。Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.下一步,到了我要求他们亲自尝试的时候了。Here are my tips for you.这是我给你的建议。Then came the momentthe time to share the days new learning.

55、然后到了分享一天新知识的时刻。In that picture,around the table with three books on it sit three students.在那幅画中,三个学生坐在桌子周围,桌子上有三本书。At the foot of the mountain stands an old temple.一座古老的寺庙屹立在山脚下。对点过关训练用倒装结构补全句子1.(2020江苏卷,书面表达)一方面,过去几十年的总体发展如此惊人,以至于他们急于熟悉中国的情况。For one thing,_ over the past decades that they feel eage

56、r to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.2.她讲英语如此清晰,总能让别人听懂。_ she can always make herself understood.so striking has been the overall developmentSo clearly does she speak English that3.只有通过努力工作,我们才能在做任何事时都获得成功。_ succeed in doing anything.4.(2019全国卷,书面表达)如果我被选中,我会致力于成为一名合格的志愿者。_,I w

57、ould devote myself to being a qualified volunteer.5.无论如何,这种方法都不会令人满意的。_ be satisfactory.Only by working hard can weWere I chosenBy no means will this method6.虽然他是个孩子,但他能做到很多大部分成年人做不到的事。_,he can do many things most adults cant.7.在他们前面,山谷从路旁急剧倾斜而下。_ sharply away from the road.8.直到失去了健康,我们才明白它的价值。_ its

58、 value.Child as though he isIn front of them the valley droppedNot until we lose our health do we realize句式4with/without复合结构写作中,使用with/without复合结构会让句子结构紧凑,言简意赅。此结构由“介词with/without+宾语+宾语补足语”构成,复合结构作介词with或without的复合宾语,可在句中作定语和状语,表示原因、时间、条件、伴随、方式等。复合宾语中宾语是名词或代词,宾语补足语是形容词、副词、介词短语、动词不定式或分词,分词可以是现在分词,也可以

59、是过去分词。其结构如下:(1)with/without+名词/代词+形容词(2)with/without+名词/代词+副词(3)with/without+名词/代词+介词短语(4)with/without+名词/代词+动词不定式(5)with/without+名词/代词+分词She walked out in the rain,with her clothes all wet.(with+名词+形容词)她冒雨出去,衣服都湿透了。With the meal over,we all went home.(with+名词+副词)吃完饭后,我们都回家了。The girl raised her head

60、 with tears in her eyes.(with+名词+介词短语)那个女孩眼泪汪汪地抬起头。He could not finish the work without me to help him.(without+代词+动词不定式)没有我帮他,他不可能完成这项工作。(2021新高考全国卷,写作)With the 10th anniversary ceremonydrawing near,I am writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations.(with+名词+现在分词)随着十周年庆典的临近,我写信(向你)表示衷心的祝贺。The hous

61、e caught a fire last night,with nothing left in it.(with+名词+过去分词)那栋房子昨晚发生了火灾,里面什么东西都不剩了。对点过关训练用with/without复合结构补全句子1.(2020新高考全国卷,写作)所有跑步者都尽力完成任务,一路上的同学给了他们必要的帮助和鼓励。All runners tried their best to finish the task,_.2.父母不在,汤姆变得更淘气了。_,Tom became more naughty.with their classmates along theway giving th

62、em necessary help as well as encouragementWith his parents absent3.(2019全国卷,书面表达)因为我们的队伍每天放学后都在训练,所以我们一定能赢得比赛。_,we are sure to win the game.4.会议很快就结束了,没达成任何一项协议。The conference hurriedly finished _.5.随着夏天的临近,天气越来越热。_,it is becoming hotter and hotter.With our team training every day after schoolwithou

63、t a single agreement reachedWith summer drawing near句式5 非谓语动词写作中,如果适当地使用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不但可以丰富句式,而且会提升文章的档次。下面是非谓语动词的常见句型:1.(使役动词)let/make/have/get/keep/leave.sb/sth do/doing/done.使/让某人/某事做/正在做/被做If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.如果你还有问题,请尽管让我了解。You shouldnt have gone h

64、ome,leaving your deskmate cleaning theclassroom alone.你不该留下你的同桌独自打扫教室,而你却回家了。We cant leave such an important matter unfinished.我们不能让这样一件重要的事半途而废。2.(感官动词)see/notice/watch/hear.sb/sth do/doing/done.看到/注意到/观察到/听到某人/某物做/正在做/被做Hearing them singing the song,I couldnt help thinking of my pleasant childhood

65、.听到他们唱这首歌,我情不自禁地想起了我愉快的童年。Arriving home and seeing my mother preparing supper,I hurried to help her.回到家,看到妈妈正在准备晚饭,我赶紧去帮她。3.when/while/once/unless/although.doing/done.当/有一次/除非/虽然做/被做(2020全国卷,书面表达)We couldnt help eating grapes while pickingthem.我们在摘葡萄的时候忍不住吃了。When offered help,people often say“Thank

66、you”or“Its kind of you”.当被提供帮助的时候,人们常说“谢谢你”或“你真好”。4.having done.已经做了Having served as a volunteer in a summer camping,I feel Im fit for the position.我曾在一次夏令营中做过志愿者,所以我觉得自己适合这个职位。Having finished his English composition,he started to read China Daily of that day.在完成了他的英语作文以后,他开始阅读当天的中国日报。5.疑问词+to do(20

67、21浙江卷,写作)Im writing to tell you when and where to have ourexhibition of students traditional Chinese paintings.我写信是为了告诉你什么时间以及在哪里参观我们的学生国画展。In addition,we should learn how to get along well with others.另外,我们应该学会如何与他人和睦相处。6.only to do/to be done 结果却Last Friday afternoon,I hurried to the airport to se

68、e you off,only to find yourplane was taking off.上周五下午,我赶往机场给你送行,结果却发现你乘坐的飞机正在起飞。7.be easy/difficult.to do.做容易/困难With so many variables,it is difficult to calculate the cost.有这么多的可变因素,很难计算出成本。8.be said/reported/considered to do.据说/报道/认为(2020天津卷,书面表达)Their class is said to have been chosen to take par

69、t in the coming ceremony.据说,他们班已经被选中参加即将到来的典礼。9.judging by/from.根据判断(2020全国卷,书面表达)Judging from what he said,we could tell that he was a knowledgeable,humorous and responsible man.根据他说的话,我们可以判断他是一个博学、幽默且负责任的人。pared with/to.与比较Compared with modern communication,writing letters has more advantages.与现代通

70、信相比,写信有更多的优点。11.prefer to do.rather than do./would rather do.than do./would do.rather than do.宁愿做,而不愿做Many people prefer to telephone rather than write letters.许多人宁愿打电话,而不愿写信。12.remain to be done 有待于被(2020新高考全国卷,写作)It remains to be seen whether this plan will benefit the students or not.这个计划是否会对学生有好

71、处,还需要拭目以待。对点过关训练用非谓语动词补全句子1.(2020新高考全国卷,写作)真诚地希望你能代表我们队参加比赛。You are sincerely expected to take part in the game _.2.吃饭时,你需要避免在咀嚼食物时发出声响。_,you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.representing our teamWhen enjoying the meal3.(2019浙江卷,写作)得知你即将动身前往美国,我急切地写信对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。_,Im eagerly writing th

72、e letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help.4.经历了一次又一次的失败后,她终于成功了。_,she finally made it.5.如今,一些青少年宁愿在网上与陌生人闲谈,也不愿与父母面对面谈话。Nowadays some teenagers _talk with their parents face to face.Learning that youre leaving for the United States soonHaving experienced failures one after anotherpref

73、er to chat with strangers online rather than句式6 被动语态当强调动作的承受者、不必说出动作的执行者或执行者不明确时,就需要用被动语态。被动语态的合理运用能给文章增色添彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的被动语态:1.be+过去分词(2021浙江卷,写作)An exhibition of students traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school.我们学校正在举办学生国画展。(2019全国卷,书面表达)As scheduled,it will be held on the playg

74、round from 5 p.m.to 8 p.m.next Sunday.按计划,它将在下周日下午5点至晚上8点在操场上举行。2.get+过去分词The traffic was so thick that a whole row of cars got blocked in.交通十分拥挤,一大排汽车都被堵住了。Im feeling very sorry to tell you that I have to change our plan to visit Yunnan in July,because my left foot got injured.我很抱歉地告诉你,我不得不改变我们7月去云

75、南旅游的计划,因为我的左脚受伤了。3.情态动词+be+过去分词(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)Apart from that,the outcome of study cant beguaranteed.除此之外,学习的结果不能得到保证。对点过关训练.用被动语态补全句子1.据说,原定于这个月召开的会议将推迟到下个月召开。It is said that the meeting,which _this month,will be put off till next month.2.这项工程可以在一年之内完成。The project _within a year.is scheduled to be

76、heldcan be completed3.新桥提前两年竣工。The new bridge _two years ahead of schedule.4.这本书直到作者逝世后才出版。The book _the author died.5.那所学校每年都有几百名学生被重点大学录取。Hundreds of students in that school _the key universities every year.has been/was finishedwas not published untilare admitted into.利用被动语态,结合汉语提示补全短文A very terri

77、ble rainstorm hit our city last night and caused huge mudslide around West Village.In this disaster,1._(许多房屋被毁)and 2._(一幢办公楼被毁坏了).To make matters worse,it has already caused one death,leaving three persons missing.When the trouble occurred,help came from all quarters.Soldiers 3._(被派去帮忙).And a lot of

78、 villagers tried their best to help search for the missing persons.4._(据说)the direct economic loss caused by this heavy rainstorm adds up to more than ten million yuan.Through everyones efforts,everything went on smoothly.many houses were destroyedan office building was ruinedwere sent to help outIt

79、 is said that句式7 虚拟语气写作中,虚拟语气的使用会让读者感觉表达自然,能起到强调的作用,为文章增加感情和色彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的虚拟语气形式:1.if虚拟条件句(2019全国卷,书面表达)I would be much obliged if you could reply to meat your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便时尽早答复我,我将不胜感激。2.隐含条件虚拟句(2020全国卷,书面表达)Without his aid,I wouldnt have boosted my integrated skills in English.没有

80、他的帮助,我不可能提高我的英语综合技能。3.在wish宾语从句中使用虚拟语气(2021新高考全国卷,写作)I have thousands of blessings and wishYouth could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.我有千万个祝福,愿青年事业更上一层楼,人气更旺。(2020浙江卷,写作)We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.我们都非常想念你,祝你早日康复。4.在would rather后面的从句中使用虚拟语气

81、Arriving home,I would rather that I hadnt given up the opportunity.到了家,我宁可不曾放弃这次机会。5.在its time that后面的从句中常用过去式With your skills improving,its time that you had competitions with your teammates,which excites you most.随着你技能的提高,是时候与队友进行比赛了,这最让你兴奋。6.在有“建议、命令、要求、请求”等相关的词的名词性从句中用(should)do结构Learning your k

82、een interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University,one of the best universities in China.了解到你对中国文化的浓厚兴趣,我建议你申请中国最好的大学之一北京大学。对点过关训练用虚拟语气补全句子1.要不是我英语老师的鼓励,我那时就不可能取得那么大的进步。_,I couldnt have made such great progress then.2.如果我们相遇却不能在一起,那我宁愿我们从没有遇见。_,then I would rather that we neve

83、r met.Without/But for my English teachers encouragementIf we meet but cant be together3.(2019全国卷,书面表达)我衷心希望您能给我这个宝贵的机会。I sincerely _.4.她要求下次开会前不要向任何人透露她的决定。She _of her decision until the next meeting.5.我希望我母亲不再干预,让我自己拿主意。I _and let me make my own decisions.wish that you could offer me this precious

84、opportunityrequested that no one(should)be toldwish my mother would stop interfering第三讲 文章优美2维度一、引人入胜的开头应用文的字数要求是80词左右,因此要用最少的字数表达最丰富的内容。开头要开门见山,一句话让读者感兴趣,知道你要写什么。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法:1.书信的开头:问候,说明写信的目的(2020全国卷,书面表达)How is everything going?I am writing in sincerity to ask you to give us some guidance on a

85、play we adapted according to the textbook.一切都好吗?我写这封信是真诚地想请你就我们根据教科书改编的一个剧本给予一些指导。Im writing to apply for./invite./make an apology./offer some suggestions./express my thanks./inform you that.我写信想申请/邀请/道歉/提些建议/表达我的谢意/通知你2.新闻报道的开头:一句话表达时间、地点、人物、事件及影响(2020新高考全国卷,写作)Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinar

86、y cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.上星期天,我们学校举行了一场非同寻常的越野赛跑,这几乎引起了全校师生的注意。3.通知的开头:开门见山说明通知的内容Our American teacher Eric will give a lecture on America culture and history at the school hall next Sunday.我们的美籍教师Eric将于下周日在学校大厅举行一场关于美国文化

87、与历史的讲座。4.演讲稿的开头:一句话说明演讲的心情和具体内容Its a great honour for me to give a speech on traditional Chinese culture here.我非常荣幸能在这里发表关于中国传统文化的演讲。5.说明文的开头(1)开门见山点明所要介绍的事物The mouse is a quite effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.鼠标是人们用电脑交流时使用的一种非常有效的设备。(2)运用数据引出所要论证的主题A recent study show

88、s that more than 40%of the students dont have breakfast.最近的一项研究表明,有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。6.议论文的开头(1)提出一个观点作为文章要论述的主题(2019江苏卷,书面表达)Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.李江和苏

89、华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生时穿什么。李推荐中国传统服装,而苏更喜欢校服。(2)引用名人名言或习语谚语When it comes to how to succeed,many people may think of the proverb“Where there is a will,there is a way.”当谈及如何成功时,很多人或许会想起谚语“有志者,事竟成。”(3)通过一个实例或现象引出话题Three years ago,I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.

90、三年前,我在人生的一次重要考试中失利,成为一所普通学校的一名学生。二、回味无穷的结尾短文的结尾起着总结全文,升华主题的作用,主要有以下写法:1.书信的结尾:表达感谢和期盼Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.再次感谢,祝你回家旅途愉快。Looking forward to your early reply.期待你早日回复。2.新闻报道的结尾:收获和意义This activity provides an opportunity for us to get close to nature.这次活动给我们提供了一次亲近大自然的机会。The

91、 competition aroused students interest in Chinese ancient culture.这次比赛激发了学生们对中国古代文化的兴趣。3.通知的结尾:注意事项与期盼Have an active part in it,and wish you good luck!快来积极参加吧,祝你们好运!4.演讲稿的结尾:感谢倾听Thats all I want to say about this point.Thanks for your listening.关于这一点我就讲这么多。感谢您的倾听。5.说明文的结尾:再次强调重点,回扣主题In a word,change

92、s in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.总之,在过去的20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。6.议论文的结尾(1)提出建议或者应对措施I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.我认为,我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样,我们才能生活

93、在更加舒服和美丽的环境中。(2)用名言总结全文If you“do as the Romans do when in Rome”,you will enjoy more your stay here.如果你“入乡随俗”,你就会更好地享受这里的生活。(3)对开头进行照应Different ways of traveling can make people happy,but I like traveling by train most.不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快,但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。对点过关训练.根据要求,为下面的话题写作设计一个开头段和结尾段一、外教史密斯先生国庆节不打算回美国了。请你给他写

94、一封80词左右的邀请信,邀请他和你一起过节,并告诉他你的安排,要点如下:1.邀请他去你家做客,包饺子,品尝各种中国传统美食;2.带他到公园赏花,赏心悦目;3.陪他去博物馆看看,了解一下我们的历史。开头:开门见山结尾:表达期盼开头:As the National Day is around the corner,Im writing to invite you to stay with me for the holiday.结尾:I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your repl

95、y at your earliest convenience.二、(2021山东聊城二模)你校正在组织英语作文比赛,要求讲述你人生中的一次宝贵经历。请写一篇标题为“The experience I value”的短文参赛,内容包括:1.简述经历;2.经历的意义与启发。开头:引出话题结尾:阐明意义开头:There are many valuable experiences in our life.As for me,cooking for my mother on her birthday is an unforgettable incident.结尾:I guess love is indee

96、d a magical ingredient.Actually,we ended up laughing and ate them all.写作练习你受邀参加一场中外高中生的在线交流,讨论话题为各国高中生的毕业庆祝活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿,介绍你们学校的活动情况。内容包括:1.活动内容;2.活动意义;3.邀请对方访问你校网站。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear friends,I am delighted to exchange views about graduation celebration.In my school,the biggest even

97、t,no doubt,is the graduation ceremony,usually held after the National College Entrance Examination.The ceremony starts with an address by our principal.Then comes the presenting of the diploma.The highlight is to appreciate a short video recording the past school life,which often moves us students into tears.The event provides us with an outlet for our pressure from the exam,and it is a special occasion to express our appreciation to the teachers.For further information about the events,you are welcome to check out our school website.I do hope you will enjoy it.Thank you!本课结束