Module 12 Western music-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作(外研版）.docx

1、2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Module 12：Western music单元话题：音乐范文11假如你叫李雷，是一名中学生，经常收听由主持人Philip主持的音乐节目，请根据要点提示，用英语给主持人写一封信。要点：1. 你很喜欢这个节目，特别是节目播放的英文歌曲很棒，歌词很优美。2. 在你感到疲劳时，你会打开收音机收听这个节目。3. 你从节目中学到了很多单词。4. 告诉主持人你最喜欢的音乐类型，请他给你推荐一些相关的歌手和CD。_【答案】例文Dear Philip,My name is Li Lei. I am a middle school student. I

2、often listen to your program at night. I like it very much, especially the English songs. I like the English songs that have great lyrics because good lyrics can be important for people to understand the meaning of the songs. Every night, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program when I fe

3、el tired. It helps me relax myself. By the way, I have learnt many English words from these songs. I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs. Could you please recommend some singers and their CDs to me? You can e-mail me at Lilei. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank y

4、ou very much!Yours,Li Lei【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求用英语给主持人写一封回信，结合提示要点进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可以分为三段，第一段进行自我介绍，表明自己的态度；第二段根据要点说说自己的想法及感受；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文22根据表格提示内容，写一篇短文，介绍朋友和父母喜欢的音乐。词数60左右，开头已给出不计入总词数。What kind of music?Why do they listen to it?How does it make them feel?Fri

5、end 1Friend 2ParentsMy friend Li Hua likes pop music. Because it is popular. It makes him feel relaxed. My friend Wang Jian likes_【答案】例文：My friend Li Hua likes pop music. Because it is popular. It makes him feel relaxed. My friend Wang Jian likes classical music because he thinks that classical musi

6、c is richer than pop music. Classical concerts make him feel very relaxed. But my friend Zhang Qi likes rock music, because it is more powerful. When she is very tired, she always listens to rock music, and she will become more energetic. My parents like listening to light music. They think light mu

7、sic is more relaxing. Whenever they come home from work, they always listen to light music to relax.【解析】1. 题干解读：题目要求表格内容，描写不同的人喜欢的不同的音乐类型以及理由，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。范文33请根据以下提示以“Mozart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。莫扎特是一位很重要

8、的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的。1.词数80左右；2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。提示词：作曲家composer；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Johann StraussMozart_【答案】参考范文：MozartMozart was a very important composer. He was born in Austria in

9、1756. Before he was six he played not only the piano, but also the violin. His family took him around Europe and he gave concerts in many cities. He wrote hundreds of beautiful pieces of music. But he became very poor and died in 1791 when he was only 35. Like Johann Strauss, father and son, he was

10、a great European musician, and many people still think his music is perfect.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍莫扎特的相关信息。2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。从他的出生地，学习和演奏钢琴的经历，以及人们对他的评价等方面来进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。范文44假如你是张磊，你的几位朋友喜欢不同的音乐。请写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下。60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone!_【答案】例文Hello, everyone! Im Zhang Lei. I

11、have three friends. They like different music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Liu Huan because the words are good. Linda likes Chinese classical music. Her favourite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano best. Tim likes rock music best. His favourite musician is Cui Jian, a famous C

12、hinese rock singer. He thinks his music can make people excited and happy.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的几位朋友喜欢的音乐。2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。介绍朋友喜欢的音乐及其原因，写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，叙述完整。范文55根据以下信息写一篇作文。冼星海，1904年生于澳门(Macao)一个贫苦的家庭，7岁时跟随母亲去了新加坡(Singapore)，开始学习音乐。他先后去过上海、北京学习钢琴和小提琴，1928年他去法国继续学习音乐。1939年创作了著名的歌曲黄河

13、大合唱(The Yellow River)。1945年去世。冼星海是一位伟大的音乐家，在今天他的许多音乐作品仍然非常流行。要求：(1)包括所给内容，可适当发挥；(2)条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；(3)70词左右。(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)Xian Xinghai is a great Chinese musician. _【答案】范文：Xian Xinghai is a great Chinese musician. He was born in Macao in 1904. At seven his mother took him to Singapore and he b

14、egan to learn music. To learn to play the piano and the violin he went to Shanghai and Beijing as well. In 1928 he studied in France. He wrote the song The Yellow River in 1939. The song made him very famous all over the world. He died in 1945 when he was only forty. But many people still think his

15、music is perfect.【解析】1.题干解读：该题属于记叙文写作，要求考生介绍冼星海，在写作时应承接短文开头；利用所给信息叙述冼星海的家庭背景、学习经历、代表作品、去世年份以及对他的评价。2.写作指导：写作时主要用第三人称以及一般过去时进行书写。人物描述已给出，考生应注意用准确的语言将要点表达出来，并适当发挥。书写时注意条理清晰，层次分明，语言规范。范文66英语课上，老师和同学们正在讨论自己最喜欢的事物。请你加入他们的讨论，介绍一下你最喜欢的人或物，并写一篇题为 My Favorite的作文。要求：1.介绍自己最喜欢的人或物，并给出至少两个喜欢的原因，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实

16、的姓名；3. 字数不少于80词。 _【答案】例文：My Favorite MusicIlikeenjoyingmusicverymuch.Ilistentomusic wheneverIamfree.MyfavoritemusicisChinesefolkmusic. IpreferChinesefolkmusicforthefollowingreasons.First, asyouknow,Chinesefolkmusichasalonghistory anditissungwidely, fromnorthtosouthandeast towest. Second, Chinesefolk

17、musicisclosetopeopleandnature. Infact, ChinesefolkmusiciscreatedbyChineseworking peoplethemselves.Finally,Chinesefolkmusicsounds beautifulanditisfulloflifeatmosphere. IhopeChinesefolkmusiccanspreadtotheworldand belovedbymoreandmorepeople.【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己最喜欢的事物，首先要把题目补充完整，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。