Module 9 Life history-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期模块话题满分写作（外研版）.docx

1、2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Module 9: Life history单元话题：名人介绍范文11某英语杂志社正在开展“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动，谷爱凌在本届北京冬奥会勇夺两金，为国人树立了良好的榜样。请结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。Gu Ailings Personal information Birth2003.9Jobfreestyle skier, model and studentPersonalityhard-working, positiveAchievement(成就)learned skiing in 2006won two gol

2、d medals for China at theBeijing 2022 Winter Olympics内容包括: 1.谷爱凌个人信息；2.你的个人感悟。注意：1.词数: 80-100词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校姓名。Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? _1参考范文：Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter O

3、lympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? Now let me introduce her to you.Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier, is a model as well as an excellent student. Gu Ailing was born in September, 2003, and she started to learn skiing at the age of only three because she loves the feeling of sn

4、ow. The 18-year-old girl won two gold medals for China at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and made history.Gus positive attitude and hard work help her achieve great success. We should learn from her and never give up when we are in trouble. She sets a good example for us, and I want to learn from

5、her and make full use of my time and make contributions to our country.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容，写一篇征文稿，介绍谷爱凌个人情况及她在北京冬奥会勇夺两金的成就，并表达自己的感悟。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。本文分为三段式，第一段引出话题要介绍谷爱凌，第二段介绍她的个人情况及取得的成就，第三段写自己的感悟。写作要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。范文2近日，作为中国第一个飞向太空的女航天员，王亚平于2021年10月16日顺利进入太空。你作

6、为校园广播台的一名英语播报员，准备向全校介绍这名女航天员。请你根据以下信息，写一篇广播稿。简介1980年1月出生于山东，毕业于北京大学。主要事迹1. 从小就对天空感兴趣；在一年的学习后，1998年首次驾驶飞机驶上蓝天；2. 曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援，并与2010年成为航天员；3. 2018年与其他航天员被授予“时代楷模”的称号。评价1. 有毅力，不怕困难。2. (至少一点)要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；3. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。 提示：时代楷模 Model of

7、 The Times；有毅力的 perseverantOn 16 October 2021, a female astronaut, Wang Yaping successfully entered space. _2参考范文：On 16 October 2021, a female astronaut, Wang Yaping successfully entered space. As the first female astronaut, Wang was born in January, 1980 in Shandong and graduated from Peking Univer

8、sity. The following are some important events in her life.First of all, Wang has showed great interest in space since she was little. After a years learning of flying, she flew into the blue sky in a plane in 1998 for the first time. Whats more, she used to fly to Wenchuan to rescue people. After th

9、at, she was chosen to be an astronaut. So excellent was she that she was awarded the Model of The Times with other astronauts.As far as Im concerned, she is terribly perseverant and not afraid of difficulties.Therefore, as students, we should learn from her and make contributions to our country.【解析】

10、题干解读：题目要求写一篇广播稿向全校介绍女航天员王亚平；要求包含表格中所有信息，并适当发挥。写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第三人称口吻。此作文可采用4段落格式，第一段：介绍女航天员王亚平的个人信息；第二段：介绍女航天员王亚平的主要伟大事迹；第三段：谈谈对女航天员王亚平的看法；第四段：呼吁学生们向女航天员王亚平学习以及报效祖国。范文33舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”板块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人叶天。短文内容包含以下要点：1. 叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比

11、赛一等奖）；2. 他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，）；3. 你对叶天和舞狮的看法。要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。提示词：传承 keep.aliveYe Tian is a master of Lion Dance. _3例文：Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. He is 45 years old and he is from Foshan, Guangdong. When he was 4, he started to

12、learn Lion Dance. He is very interested in it and practices hard. At the age of 22, he won the first prize in the National Lion Dance Competition.To help keep the Lion Dance alive, he and the dancers go abroad and perform Lion Dance every year. Besides, he teaches the young in Foshan how to perform

13、it. He also shoots the videos of Lion Dance and uploads them to the website so that more people can know about it.Lion Dance is one of the traditional Chinese folk arts that brings people happiness during festivals. I really admire Ye Tian. In my view, we should learn more about Lion Dance from Ye T

14、ian and pass it down.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”板块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人叶天。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。范文44（2021全国七年级单元测试）孔子（Confucius）是我国古代伟大的思想家和教育家，儒家学派创始人，世界著名的文化名人之一。请根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的小短文介绍他的生平。内容提示：1. 孔子出生于公元前55

15、1年的鲁国。（the state of Lu）2. 当他小的时候，他的父母双亡，但他受到良好的教育。（receive good education）3. 在他三十多岁时，他开始教学，一直到他去世。（spend the rest of ones lif doing sth.）4. 55岁时，周游列国寻求正确的行为准则（search for good rules of behaviour），68岁时返回鲁国。5. 73岁时因病去世。_4例文：Confucius was born in the state of Lu in 51BC. When he was young, his parents d

16、ied. But Confucius received good education. In his thirties, Confucius began to teach. He spent the rest of his life teaching.At the age of 55, Confucius began to travel around to search for good rules of behaviour.When Confucius was 68 years old, he returned to the state of Lu. He died of illness a

17、t the age of 73. Confucius is famous around the world.【解析】1. 题干解读：该题属于材料作文。要求利用所给信息介绍孔子的生平，要点要齐全，可适当增加细节描写。2. 写作指导：写作时要用第三人称来叙述，时态使用一般过去时。注意用准确的的语言将要点表达出来，并适当发挥。书写时注意条理清晰，层次分明，语言规范。范文55 请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一下J.K.罗琳。笔名J. K. Rowling出生1965年7月，英国作品全世界70多种语言版本的Harry Potter家庭情况两个女儿，一个儿子经历5岁上学爱好小时候喜欢

18、讲故事 5J. K. Rowling is my favourite writer. But its not her real name. She was born in England in July, 1965. She has three children, two daughters and a son. At the age of 5, she went to school. When she was young, she liked telling stories. Harry Potter is one of her most famous works. Today you ca

19、n read it in over 70 languages. I think J.K. Rowling is one of the most successful writers in the world.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格内所提供的材料写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一下J.K.罗琳。本文主要是第三人称，时态主要为一般现在时或一般过去时，注意时态的转换。认为阅读材料，根据所给材料列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚， 80词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：罗琳是我最喜

20、欢的作家。但这不是她的真名。她1965年7月出生在英国。她有三个孩子，两个女儿和一个儿子。她5岁时上学。她年轻时喜欢讲故事。哈利波特是她最著名的作品之一。今天你可以用70多种语言阅读它。我认为J.K.罗琳是世界上最成功的作家之一。【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适

21、当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。范文66请根据下面所给的提示内容，写一篇60词左右的人物简介。贝多芬德国伟大的作曲家1770-1827自幼爱好音乐，钢琴弹得很好，28岁得了耳病，18年后完全聋了。在此期间他仍继续工作，他的大部分作品都出自这个时间。第九交响曲是他一生中最著名的作品之一。参考词汇：贝多芬Beethoven德国的German作曲家composer聋的deaf继续工作go on working作品works第九交响曲The

22、Ninth Symphony_6Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears, and 18 years later, he was deaf. During the time, he still went on working. He wrot

23、e most of his works. The Ninth Symphony was one of his most famous works in his life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍贝多芬。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He was，When he was ,there was something wrong with，he still went on等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了贝多芬是德国伟大的作曲家，接下来介绍他生平经历，最后指出第九交响曲是他一生中最著名的作品之一。此处play the piano, at the age of,go on doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。