Unit 8 When is your birthday-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年七年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）(1).docx

1、Unit 8 When is your birthday?单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度谈论自己及家人的生日The.is on the. .在.上面。某活动的日程安排本单元写作主要是围绕日期来进行讨论的，比如表达自己以及周围人的生日，重要的节日等等。同学们需要掌握1到31的序数词以及12个月份的单词，这样的话就可以准确地表达出某一天的日期以及行程安排。在具体写作当中，通常会见到介绍自己以及周围同学的生日，或者是介绍自己学校的活动日期安排。在具体写作中可以做到以下几点:1.确定时态一般将来时；2.确定人称：第一人称以及第三人称单数的使用；3.详细介绍自己以及家人的生日；4.注意名词

2、单复数使用；5.写作言简意赅，表达明确。（以思维导图的形式呈现）【词汇积累】1.born 出生2.party 聚会3.how old 几岁 4.birthday 生日5.basketball game 篮球赛6.school day 教学日7.trip 旅行8.festival节日9.fun 有趣的10.term 学期11.busy 忙碌12.things 事情13.dear 亲爱的14.student 学生15.when 什么时候16.second 第二17.year 年18.December 十二月19.March 三月20.fifth 第五【词汇积累】1.this afternoon 今

3、天下午2.have an English day举行英语日活动3.school trip学校旅行4.art festival艺术节5.this term这学期6.in the morning在早上7.Teachers day教师节8.have a book sale举行图书促销活动9.your mothers birthday你妈妈的生日 10.in your school在你们学校 11.School day教学日活动12.volleyball game排球比赛 13.have a good time过得愉快14.speech contest演讲比赛【句式积累】 开头句1.This is m

4、y friend . 这是我的朋友.2.When is your birthday？你的生日是什么时候？3.My birthday is on February 1st. 我的生日在2月1号。4.His birthday is on. 他的生日.5.Today is July 1st. 今天是7月1日。6.We have A really fun to this year.今年我们有一个非常有趣的学期。7.There are many festivals in this term at our school. 我们学校这学期有非常多的节日。8.There are twelve month in

5、 a year.一年有12个月。9.Do you want to go to my birthday party? 你想来参加我的生日聚会吗？ 中间句1.We have a school trip in the afternoon.我们下午有一个学校旅行。2.Do you like.?你喜欢.吗？3.On., we have an English speak contest.在.我们有一个英语演讲比赛。4.They are very interesting. 它们非常有趣。5.School day is on July 28th. Your parents can come to our sc

6、hool . 教学日在7月28日，你的父母可以来学校。 结尾句1.Please come to. next week.下周请到.2.We have some interesting and fun things for you this time . 这学期我们为你们准备了一些有趣愉快的事情。3.This is a really busy term.这的确是一个繁忙的学期。4.We have a/an.我们举办了一个.【谚语积累】1.A Christmas wish for my best friend! 给我最好的朋友一个圣诞祝福!2.A Christmas greeting to chee

7、r you, my good friend. 献上令你开心的圣诞祝福,我的好友。3.Why dont we enjoy our holidays together? 何不与我一起共度佳节呢?4. Good Mid-Autumn Festival, good stable rice.好中秋,好稳稻。5.People are especially happy at happy events, especially in the Mid-Autumn Festival.人逢喜事尤其乐,月到中秋分外明。 【万能写作模板】模板生日即将到来邀请朋友参加Dear friend，介绍本次活动内容时间和地点Th

8、is Sunday is my thirteenth birthday. I want to have A birthday party at two oclock on Sunday afternoon at my home. I want you to come to my birthday party at the party. We can eat the birthday cake and play games. 发出邀请I think we can have a good time. See you in my home this Sunday. Yours，Mike模板介绍自己的

9、个人信息Hello my name is Tom. Im A student im thirteen years old my birthday is on may fifth.there are many festival in this time at our school. 总结：一个繁忙的学期介绍学校的活动日具体活动事项、日期地点等We have the volleyball game and the basketball game during the festival on October fifth, We have an English party. And we have A

10、 football game on October twenty 25. On November first We have an art festival And music festival. On that day we can enjoy beautiful music and many pictures.There is a really busy month. Have a good time. 模板介绍个人信息This year Im very busy .介绍自己某阶段的行程日期结束语On., I have .On., I have .My birthday party is

11、on .How about you?假如你叫安迪，今年十一岁，家里有爸爸妈妈和姐姐。你的生日是3月16，爸爸的生日是5月8日，妈妈的生日是6月6日，姐姐的生日是10月20。爸爸和妈妈都是教师，姐姐是一名大学生。请根据以上内容写一篇60词左右的短文。要求：1. 词数60左右。2. 语句通顺,句意连贯。3. 内容可适当发挥。_【审题思路】1.介绍自己以及家庭情况的基本信息2.分别介绍家人的生日以及职业、爱好等。3.正确使用连词使上下文连贯。;4.文章的词数60左右。【佳作欣赏1】My name is Andy Im eleven years old. My birthday is on March

12、 16th . My mother and my father are teachers. They work in same school. My fathers birthday is on May 8th. My mothers birthday is on June 6th .I have a sister. She is seventeen years old . Now she is a high school student. His birthday is on October 20th. How about you?【佳作欣赏2】Hello Im Andy. Im eleve

13、n years old. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother , my sister and me. We are a happy family.Today Im very happy because I can get some many gifts that I like. My birthday is on March 16th . My fathers birthday is on May 8th . My mothers birthday is June 6th. My sisters birthday i

14、s on October 20th . My father and my mother both teachers. My sister is a high school student. I have a good time on my birthday party.I hope every day is my birthday and every day is very happy .1.填写一下自己家人的生日，职业以及喜欢的事物。NameBirthdayJobLike【答案】略2.根据学校情况，写出学校八月份的活动日期。Activity（活动）Date(日期)Art festivalMu

15、sic festivalSchool DaySchool trip【答案】 略； 三、写出下列物品的英文表达。 1.学校旅行_2.再见_3.生日聚会_4.英语演讲比赛_5.忙碌的学期_6.英语测验_7.这个学期_8.篮球比赛_9.过得愉快_10.教师节_11.生日蛋糕_12.生日贺卡_13.教学日_14.有趣的事情_【答案】1.School trip 2.see you 3.birthday party4.English speak contest 5.busy term 6.English test 7.this term8.basketball game9.have a good time

16、 10.Teachers day 11.birthday cake 12.birthday card 13.School day 14.interesting things四、连一连1. When is your birthday? A. Yes, I do.2.Is your birthday on May 21st ? B.Thank you.3.How old are you? C.On November 24th.4.Happy birthday! D.No, it isnt.5.Do you want to go to my birthday party? E.Im fifteen

17、years old.【答案】1.C 2.D 3.E 4.B 5.A五、连词成句，注意标点和大写字母。1.have, you, soccer, do, when, game, a (?)_2.birthday, home, in, this, I, party, at, afternoon, my, a, have, (.)_3. is, 9th, October, on fathers, birthday, my(.)_4. have, we, festival, month, next, art, an(.)_5. trip, a, school, this, you, do, have,

18、month(?)_6.he, old, how, is (?)_7.your, know, birthday, you, mothers, do(?)_8. birthday, on, December, 15th, is, my(.)_【答案】1.When do you have a soccer game?2.I have a birthday party In this afternoon at my home.3.My fathers birthday is on October 9th.4.We have an art festival next month.5.Do you hav

19、e a School trip this month?6.How old is he?7.Do you know your mothers birthday.8.My birthday is on December 15th.六、按要求完成下列句子。1.My birthday is on November 15th.(对划线部分进行提问)_2. Do you want to go to my home?(写出否定回答)No, _ _.3. Whats your age?(写出同义句)_ _ _ _?4. We have a school trip on July 3ed.(改为一般疑问句)_5

20、. My mothers birthday is on May 23ed.(改为一般疑问句)_6. I have an English speak contest on June 21st.(改为否定句)I _ _ an English speak contest on June 21st.7. My sister is sixteen years old .(对划线部分进行提问)_8.My date(日期) of birth is on March 15th.(改为同义句)_【答案】1.When is your birthday?2. I dont.3.How old are you?4.D

21、o you have a school trip on July 3rd.5.Is your mothers birthday on May 23rd?6.dont have7.How old is your sister ?8.My birthday is on March 15th.七、根据短文内容，从方框中选择恰当的单词填空，每词限用一次。busy She an old is basketball have my on at Im Joy. Im thirteen years 1 . Ill be busy next week.I have 2 English speak contest

22、 3 May 8th. I like English very much. School 4 game is on May 9th. My favorite sport is playing basketball . I 5 five basketballs at my home. School Day 6 on May 10th. Lily is 7 best friend. 8 will have a birthday party on May 11th.On May12th，I will stay 9 home.How 10 I am!【答案】1. old 2.an 3.on 4.bas

23、ketball 5.have 6.is 7.my 8.She 9.at 10.busy假如你是李明，请写出你们学校本学期每个月的重要活动事项的时间安排，请根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的作文。9.5School trip10.12School day11.13English speech contest12.19Art festival要求：1. 不少于60词，关键信息已给出；2. 必须包括所有内容提示，可适当发挥；3. 书写工整、规范。不得出现真实姓名、校名等。_【思路解读】题材：介绍学校某学期的活动时间安排；时态：时态为“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，按照所提供信息写出日程安排。【写作

24、步骤】第一步，表明身份；第二步，介绍学校活动事项的具体日期；第三步，结束语。【满分作文】 Hello everybody my name is Li Ming. Im A middle school student. Im eleven years old. In my school, we have many fun things. Lets look together.On September 5th. We have a school trip. You can join it with your best friend. We have a school day on October

25、12ed. Your parents will come to visit the school. Next month of November 13rd, We have an English Speech contest. I want to improve my English speaking. So I took part in this Contest. We have A big festival on December 19th. You will see many works here. Come and enjoy.What a full and happy term!【亮

26、点词汇】fun things有趣的事情improve 提升visit 参观invite 邀请【高分句型】Your parents will come to visit the school. 你父母回来学校参观。You can join it with your best friend. 你可以和你的朋友一起加入。So I took part in this Contest. 所以我参加了演讲比赛。What a full and happy term! 多么充实而又快乐的学期！（2021湖南）假如你叫李华，今年13岁，9月12是你的生日，请跟据下列表格内的提示信息，用英文写一篇短文，详细介绍接

27、下来一周你的行程安排。DateBirthday9.10Soccer game9.11Music festival9.12Birthday party9.13School trip9.14English speech contest注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，60词作右；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 _【思路解读】题材：以我一周的行程安排主题展开写作；时态：时态为“一般将来时”；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主；注意：正确使用结束语。【写作步骤】第一步，写出自己的基本信息；第二步，对自己一

28、周的安排进行详细介绍；第三步，总结一周的安排。【满分作文】My weekMy name is Li Hua. Im thirteen years old, and my birthday is on September 12th. My favorite sport is soccer. On Monday, I will go to the soccer game. On September 11st. I will go to the music exhibition center to see an Music festival. I like music very much. I li

29、sten to the music every day. My birthday is on September 12th. In this day, I will have a birthday party at evening. I hope you can enjoy. On September , My school will have A school trip. On September 14,I will Go to the English speech contest. For me is a busy week. How about you?【亮点词汇】center 中心listen to music听音乐busy week 繁忙的一周【高分句型】 I will go to the soccer game. 我将会参加足球比赛。 I listen to the music every day. 我会每天听音乐。 How about you? 你呢？