专题10 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺（三年真题热门考点提炼 名校最新模拟速递）专训（上海专用）.docx

1、2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺（三年真题热门考点提炼+名校最新模拟速递）专训（上海专用）专题10 书面表达三年真题热门考点提炼A（2020上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想请以Everyone can be special （天生我才）为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻（注意： 1短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信

2、息，否则不予评分2照抄阅读语篇不得分）_B（2022上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：读者之家（Reading corner）劳技工坊（Mini workshop）艺体天地（Arts and sports centre）义卖集市（Charity market）科创小屋（High-tech lab）心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart r

3、oom）学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。（注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）_C（2021上海统考中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)：球类(Ball Games)演讲(Speech)器乐(Instrumental Music)戏剧(Drama)手

4、工(Handicrafts)摄影(Photography)假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。_名校最新模拟速递A（2022上海杨浦统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写不少于60个词的论坛帖子及回复等，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇的论坛帖子中谈到了生活中发生的一些尴尬事件。假设你是Sandy，请在论坛中发帖，讲一个发生在自己身上的尴尬事件，并设想你的朋友Jill会如何与你互

5、动，写下你们之间的一问一答。注意：1文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2照抄阅读语篇不得分。Sandy25 October 9.00 p.m._Jill25 October 9.05 p.m._Sandy25 October 9.08 p.m._B（2022上海普陀统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned a lot from.”（以“我从学到了很多”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：每个人都能通过不同的方式学到有益于成长的东西，请结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感悟。(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名

6、、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)_C（2022上海嘉定统考模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according on the topic of “ _ made me a difference”. 生活、学习中的经历，我们亲人、朋友或是陌生人等，都可能对我们产生影响，让我们发生一些变化。这些变化往往会有助于我们的成长。请结合一次自身经历，以“ _ 改变了我”为题，写一篇短文，标点符号不占格。（注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）_D（2022上海青浦统考二模）Write a passage of

7、at least 60 words about the topic “A decision I made”（请以“决定”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在学习和生活中，我们会做出许多决定，有时会庆幸自己的决定是正确的，有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔。这些决定都会让我们有所感悟。请结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。注意： 1) 抄袭试卷中内容不得分；2) 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。_E（2022上海徐汇统考模拟预测）The school newspaper is going to use the given photo in the culture s

8、ection. Its a photo of two exchange students from America. Please write a short news article entitled “Exploring Chinese Culture” based on the given photo for the newspaper.校报准备在报纸文化栏里用到所给照片做报道。这张照片主人公是两位来自美国的交换生。请仔细看所给照片，并为报纸撰写一篇题为“探索中国文化”的简单报道。不少于60词。(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)剪纸pap

9、er cutting书法 calligraphy Exploring Chinese Culture_F（2022上海奉贤统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Id like to pass_on”补全题目，以“我愿传递_”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。传递一种精神、一种品质、一种态度、一种情感、一种能量。请结合自身经历， 谈谈你在家庭、学校或社会中所愿传递的东西。_G（2022上海闵行统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “_ makes no dif

10、ference”. （以“是无济于事的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇怀特家的故事告诉我们：一旦事情已经发生，责备任何人都无济于事，相反会让被责备的人背负罪恶感。在我们的生活中，总会遇到困难或者发生一些不愉快的事情，这时候谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧等等都不会起到任何作用。我们应该改变自身，寻求智慧的解决办法。请结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。写作前请你先把题目补充完整。注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。_H（2022上海静安统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic

11、“The moving moment in my life”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）_I（2022上海虹口统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness” (以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)3月

12、20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。(注意: 1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)_J（2022上海金山统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The most important rule in my family”. (以“我家最重要的一条家规”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 国有国法，家有家规 (famil

13、y rule)。不同家庭有不同家规。如：做人诚实、尊敬长辈、天天阅读、人人做家务或吃饭时不能刷手机等等。在你家里，可能也有很多家规，那么你认为你家最看重的家规是哪一条呢？为什么？请举例说明。注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。_K（2022上海崇明统考模拟预测）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Grow up in labour ”（以“在劳动中成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在日常生活中，每个同学都会参与一些社会公益劳动、学校组织的劳动活动或居家

14、时的家务劳动等，相信你们在过程中都有所感悟和收获。请你结合自身经历，谈谈你曾参与的劳动并分享一下你的所感所悟。注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。_L（2022上海松江统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的倡议书，标点符号不占格)在疫情防控的特殊时期，人们自觉落实各项防疫举措，居家工作、学习和生活成为阻隔病毒传染的有效方法之一。请你以学校学生会的名义，给全体学生写一封倡议书，使大家明白疫情期间在线学习和规律生活的重

15、要性，并给出合理可行的建议，号召全校学生遵守执行，为防疫工作贡献自己的力量。Some phrases for reference:call on (号召);during COVID;study online / have online lessons注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息2. 不得照搬阅读语篇内容。Dear schoolmates_FromThe Students UnionM（2022上海黄浦统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短

16、文，标点符号不占格。）疫情期间，为了帮助同学们保护视力，避免过多使用电子产品，学校鼓励大家阅读纸质书籍。老师决定招募志愿者，管理在线读书俱乐部“Online reading club”。如果你有意愿承担管理读书俱乐部的工作，请给老师写一封电子邮件，谈谈你计划如何做。邮件内容可以包含以下几个问题： 1. How often do you meet online? 2. How will you choose books to read?3. What activities will you organize for your club?_N（2022上海模拟预测）国家实行双减政策以来，强调“五育

17、并举”，提倡在中小学培养德智体美劳全面发展的好少年。劳动（labor）是日常生活不可或缺的部分。今天班会课上，班级进行了题为“我爱劳动”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们组四人的分享内容，需包括以下要点。FromLucyMikeAliceYouLaborActivityclean the floortake care of pet dogdo voluntary work(请补充)Whenweekendevery daysummer vacation(请补充)Whereat homeat homecommunity(请补充)Advantagesexerciseresponsibility

18、love(请补充)写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次分明，可适当发挥。2.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。We often hear the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing”.At our class meeting, we shared our labor experience with our group members._O（2022上海普陀校考模拟预测）科技的发展正不断地改变我们的学习方式，有人喜欢传统的教学方式(traditional learning in the

19、classroom)，有人喜欢现代化的在线教学(modern learning on the Internet)。请将题目“I prefer _”。补充完整，谈谈你喜欢这种学习方式的理由。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考 ）Traditional learning in a classroom: well planned teaching arrangement face-to-face communication colourful classroom activitiesModern learning on the Inte

20、rnet: flexible timetable a plan made by oneself rich online learning resources(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)_P（2022上海杨浦统考三模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。Im doing a school project about how teenag

21、ers use computers each day. For example, how much time did you spend on a computer yesterday? What kind of things did you do? What do you think are the problems of spending lots of time on computers?注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。_Q（2022上海嘉定统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the pictures abo

22、ut “A spring outing”（根据所给图片，写一篇关于“春游”的短文，题目可以另拟，字数不少于60词，标点符号不占格。）climb a mountainpick up paper and bottlesthrowinto dustbins _R（2022上海浦东新统考模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (假定你是Tony，根据以下情境续写这一封信，不少于60 词，标点符号不占格)注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。Note: entire adj.

23、全部的，整个的Dear Editor,I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I j

24、ust wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?_S（2022上海宝山统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压力很大。请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助

25、他放松身心、提高学习效率。注意：1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考) under stress take an active part in try to relax and enjoyDear Xiao Qiang,_Best wishes!Yours, Li HuaT（2022上海长宁统考二模）为了提高学生英语学习能力，李老师想要调查了解一下学生课外在记忆单词、朗读/背诵课文、做书面作业、读英语书刊和故事，或者其他等等方面的学习情况。请你

26、写一封信给他，谈谈以上几个方面你觉得哪个最重要，哪个方面你花时间最多，哪个做得最少；哪个方面你最感到困难或最有成功经验；你将如何改进学习方法才能取得更大的进步。（注意：1、信的格式与开头已给，这些文字不计入你所写的总数。2、信中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Dear Mr. Li,In response to your survey, Id like to tell you something about how I learn English after school._Yours,XXX三年真题热门考点答案解析A篇参考范文Everyone can be speci

27、alNo one is perfect，but everyone is unique in their own wayI saw a film yesterdayThe main character of the film is an unusual boyWhen he was born，he grew four times as fast as a normal person，which means that when he is 10，he looks 40The other children always laughs at him，so he is very sad and feel

28、s lonelyOne day，his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect，but everyone was unique in their own wayFrom then on，he and his classmates became good friends Everyone can be special as long as you dont give up yourself【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享经历或见闻。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段人无完人，但是又是特别的；第二大段

29、陈述自己的经历；第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。3.高分亮点：短语：laugh at, as long as, be born, give up.句型：when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，定语从句。【点睛】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务B篇参考范文Dear Mr Zhang,I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student acti

30、vity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one. Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these prob

31、lems arent solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time. Thank you for reading my e-mail.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。写作步骤第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想；第二步，介绍喜欢的理由；第三步，表示感谢。亮点词汇prefer to do

32、更喜欢做某事turn to求助于suffer from遭受高分句型 they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句）They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句）C篇参考范文Dear Mr. Zhang,I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistan

33、t for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is that I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find

34、 its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assistant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity. Sincerely,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给情境，给教导处张老师写封信，结合自己的兴趣和特长，说明自己想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时。结合自己的

35、兴趣和特长，选择一门活动课，表明选择担任这一门课的小助手的理由；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。名校最新模拟速递答案解析A篇参考范文Sandy25 October 9.00 p.m.On my first day of school, I found everything was strange. After school, I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to find one

36、 for girls in the teaching buildings. So I hurried out of my school and suddenly find an empty toilet. No one was in the toilet. It was so strange. When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason. It was a toilet for boys! My face turned red at once.Jill25 October 9.05 p.m.Did someone see you run o

37、ut of the wrong toilet?Sandy25 October 9.08 p.m.No. I was lucky. I fast ran away and no one knew what happened to me.【详解】总体分析题材：本文为三段论坛帖子及对话，主要记叙生活中的尴尬事件；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏后两段对话，且内容要与帖子相互呼应，符合逻辑，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，描写帖子内容。首先表明尴尬事件发生的时间、地点，阐述起因；然后具体描述事件的发生过程，同时通过动作、心理活动等方面进行细节描写。第二

38、步，根据帖子中描写的事件结果“我走错厕所”，进行合理推测，提出疑问“有没有人看到走错厕所”。第三步，回答提出的问题，表示“自己很幸运”。亮点词汇 on my first day of school 我第一天在学校 hurried out of my school 匆忙赶出学校 at once 立刻，马上 happened to me 发生在我身上高分句型I found everything was strange.（find后接宾语从句）I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to f

39、ind one for girls in the teaching buildings.（but连接两个并列句，so.that.引导结果状语从句） When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason. （when引导时间状语从句）B篇参考范文I learned a lot from my teacher Recently, Ive learned something helpful from my English teacher Mr. Li for my future life. Ive had a change in my life. It m

40、akes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.I was poor at English and my English score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some English problems, I told m

41、yself “You should be confident and you can do it.” And out of my expectation, I got an “A” in my English exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for English.There is nothing that I cant do if I am confident enough.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。以“我从学到了很多”为题进行写作，在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西，

42、需要结合具体实例叙述自己的感悟，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，结合具体事例讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西和自己的感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。C篇参考范文Persistence made me a differenceIn our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what weve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference. What made me a difference

43、is the persistence my mother once taught me.I can well remember the day when I first learnt the English word “valley”. I was five years old then and my mother was trying to taught me English words. When my mother pronounced the word “valley”, I tried over and over again, but it was too difficult for

44、 me to pronounce the v sound correctly, so I failed. I began to get angry and was unwilling to utter any sound any more. At that time, my mother just tried her best to encourage me to pronounce again. She told me that if I could keep trying pronouncing the word, I would succeed in the end. Nobody el

45、se could help me. Only I, myself could. So I did as my mother told me. I tried hard even if I was making mistakes all the time. But suddenly, I heard my mother cheer, “You did it, my boy!”. It was persistence that helped me succeed. I was greatly moved indeed.From then on, persistence is always with

46、 me, especially whenever I come across difficulties. And I never give up easily. Persistence made me a difference.【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文写作，以“改变了我”为题，按照记叙文的格式，讲述自己的一次亲身经历，说明是“什么改变了我”，可以是某些人，也可以是某个物件或某个抽象概念。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写；在记叙亲身经历时，时态以一般过去时为主；在陈述观点时，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时按记叙文的格式来写，第一段开门见山，直接说明“改变了我”的东西是什么；

47、第二段记叙自己的亲身经历为主；第三段回应主题并结尾。叙述亲身经历是这篇文章的主体部分，讲述时要说清楚事件的来龙去脉，适时抒发自己的感悟。D篇参考范文A decision I madeOur lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work. However, I wa

48、s keen on playing the drum a lot and didnt like study at all. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think th

49、e decision Ive made must be wise one.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“A decision I made”为题，叙述自己所做过的决定，以及自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且把故事发生的背景、起因和过程叙述完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。E篇参考范文Exploring Chinese CultureIn order to arouse students interest in exploring Chinese culture and enrich our

50、school life, our school held a Culture Day last week. Hundreds of us took part in it.As scheduled, students gathered at the assembly hall at 2 p.m. Tuesday. 15 students delivered their speeches introducing different Chinese culture in turn, which were well received by the audience. Later, some stude

51、nts showed some traditional skills, such as knitting, making kites and performing Beijing opera. Some American students were interested in the paper cutting and calligraphy. They learned Chinese characters and tried to write some of them with writing brushes.The activity benefited us a lot. Not only

52、 did it improve our understanding of Chinese culture, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. What a wonderful time!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述学校的文化节的具体过程。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述文化节的活动和中国文化的体验，要叙述完整，条理清晰。F篇参考范文Id like to pass the helpful spirit onWe face many d

53、ifficulties at school. For example, when I played football, I fell down and hurt my leg. My classmates helped me to go to the school hospital. When I met some difficult math questions, my classmates helped me to work them out. These things made me happy and comfortable. I want to pass the helpful sp

54、irit on. I think helping others is to help ourselves.【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，写作时应先补全题目，然后介绍传递乐于助人的精神，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时，介绍传递乐于助人的精神时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。G篇参考范文 Blaming others makes no differenceIn our life, there will always be difficulties or unpleasant things. Bla

55、ming, complaining, getting angry, worrying and so on will not do any good. We should change ourselves and seek intelligent solutions.I used to climb mountains with my friend who insisted on going to remote places. Finally we got lost, and I knew it was useless to blame my friend. So I called for hel

56、p right away. At last we were saved.I think when something unexpected happens, we should try to solve it instead of blaming the other person.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，首先把题目补全完整。其次根据题目要求结合自己的经历和见闻写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文在叙述过去的经历时用一般过去时，叙述感受时使用一般现在时。人称以第一人为主。写作时可以从“谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧”等词中选取一个把题目补充完整，然后围绕主题展开叙述。确保语句通顺，无单

57、词语法错误。H篇参考范文The moving moment in my lifeHere is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse, I didnt bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they were laughin

58、g at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam cant stand for everything. I believe you can get good grades next time

59、.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。I篇参考范文The feeling of happi

60、ness is very important. We are no longer satisfied with only enough food and clothes. Instead, we need happiness. Now I will share some tips to increase our sense of happiness. The first is friendship. Friends can share our feelings and help to make us happy when we are sad. They can provide us with

61、 help when we are in need. They can also keep us company when we are lonely. The second is being thankful. Sometimes we cant get what we want and we will be unhappy. But if we focus on what we already have, and be thankful to everything around us, I believe our life will be a lot happier. Try to mak

62、e some friends and be thankful to everything. I am sure we will be much happier. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Small tricks to improve happiness”为题参照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理由。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。J篇参考范文The most important rule in my

63、 familyThere are national laws and family rules. Different families have different rules, such as being honest, respecting elders, reading every day, not playing on the phone when doing housework or eating, and so on.In my family, the most important rule is to be honest. Because my father thinks: lo

64、se honesty, also lose everything. Honesty involves many aspects, such as keeping promises, strictly carrying out plans, not telling lies and so on.Honesty is very important for everyone. I hope every one of us can be an honest person.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The most important rule in my family”为题，写

65、一篇英文短文，介绍家中最重要的一条家规。2.写作指导：本文运用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。K篇参考范文Grow up in labourIn our daily lives, we usually take part in some labour activities, such as volunteer work, housework and so on. I want to share my experience with you.Last weekend, our school held a

66、n activity. It was to help elder people in Old Peoples Home. We got there at about 9 a.m. Then we cleaned their rooms, told funny jokes and sang some songs. From their smiling faces, I found that this activity was so meaningful. From this experience, I realize that doing labour not only makes others

67、 get pleasure, but also develops our basic skills.If you want to have a try, please take action from now on.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Grow up in labour”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你参与的劳动经历以及所感所悟。2.写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主来叙述。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二i段介绍自己在老人院做义工的经历，并描述自己的感受；第三段呼吁读者从现在开始做起。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。L篇参考范文Dea

68、r schoolmates,During COVID, in order to effectively prevent the spread of the virus, our school decided to delay the opening time and adopt online teaching. Students should study online. At the same time, make sure you live a regular life. For everyones study and life, we call on you to do the follo

69、wing:1. Attend class on time and finish online homework.2. Take your temperature every day, and then report it to your teacher.3. Wash your hands frequently and drink plenty of water.4. Take more exercise.5. Wear a mask when you go out and dont gather.FromThe Students Union【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一封倡议书，告诫学生

70、和老师疫情期间在线学习和规律生活的重要性，并给出合理的建议。注意要点齐全，并适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时来行文，提建议时应详细具体，可以采用祈使句等句型；内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。M篇参考范文Dear teacher,I am so delighted to hear that you are looking for a volunteer to manage the online reading club. Responsible and organized as I am, I think I am the rig

71、ht person for this club. If I am chosen, I will spare no effort to help my classmates use electronic products less and read paper books more. First, I will hold a meeting online for everyone to share the books they like best and choose some of them as a must for everyone to finish in a certain perio

72、d of time. Then, we will meet online once a week to report our reading achievements and share our thoughts. Besides, I will sometimes ask our Chinese teachers to give us some tips on reading books. Last but not least, I will invite my cousin, a very famous writer, to share some of her works as well

73、as some tips on how to write a good article. In a word, if I am in charge of this club, I will do everything possible for my classmates.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：本题目属于应用文写作，同时写作时要按邮件格式写，要求按照三个问题的提示展开写作，给老师写一封自荐信。2. 写作指导：本文是向对方阐述自己的计划，因此应使用第一人称为主；时态采用一般将来时为主；根据三个问题，计划至少涉及三个方面；结尾不忘进行总结，表达自己对这份志愿者工作的向往。N

74、篇参考范文We often hear the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing”. At our class meeting, we shared our labor experience with our group members. For middle school students, its not enough to just get good grades at school. In fact, doing some housework or other labor practice is really important for

75、us. In Lucys spare time, she cleans the floors at home every weekend. Cleaning the floor is like doing exercise. She thinks it can help her build a stronger body and make her healthier. Mike likes his pet dog very much. So he is responsible for taking care of his pet dog at home. He not only feeds t

76、he dog every day but also walks it after dinner. In this way, he builds up his responsibility. In Alices opinion, she would like to do voluntary work during summer vacation in her community. She always helps those people in need in her neighborhood. She regards it as a good way to show love to other

77、s. As for me, I cook meals for my parents when I am free because I am interested in cooking. When my parents come home from work, they always feel tired. At this moment, it is a good time for them to enjoy a delicious meal. When I see them eating happily, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction and a

78、chievement. I learned real life skills too. In addition, I helped my parents with housework. I also have the ability to take care of them. Whats more, I will also be independent through labor practice. I can benefit a lot from it. Labor is a good way for teenagers to develop independence. During the

79、 day when parents are not around, we must take care of ourselves. Lets take action to take part in labor.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“我爱劳动”为主题，根据表格内容，写一篇英文短文，介绍你们组四人的劳动活动。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。按照表格内容提示的五个方面进行写作，内容要写全，注意保证语言通顺，行文连贯；语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。O篇参考范文I prefer traditional learning in a clas

80、sroomWith the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. But I still prefer traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed time table. A study plan is often made by my school, so I dont need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second,

81、 we can have face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colourful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. Whats more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others

82、. That is why I prefer to choose the traditional way of learning in the classroom.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所示的参考信息以“I prefer _”为题谈谈自己更喜欢传统的教学方式还是现代化的在线教学，并给出相应的理由。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。正文第一部分先表述自己更喜欢哪种教学方式；第二部分给出相应的理由，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；第三部分总结全文。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语

83、法、单词拼写和标点错误。P篇参考范文Dear Jack,Ive read your E-mail. Now let me tell you a little bit about how I use computers myself.First, I spent about two hours on the computer yesterday. I mainly looked up some information on the Internet and watched some videos. And I dont think its right to spend too much time

84、 online every day. Because it hurts our eyes and affects our study. So we should use computers properly.Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的电子邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍昨天的事情应用一般过去时，表达自己的观点时应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时要根据邮件中的问题来回复。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。Q篇参考范文A spring outingSpring in March,

85、accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday.We went to Renmin Park and hold some activities. All of my classmates were so excited that we looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage. We climbed a mountain and went boating. We picked up

86、paper and bottles then threw them into dustbins. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relationship of us were getting closer.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片提示，写一篇关于“春游”的短文。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文时态是一般过

87、去时，主要用第一人称来书写。在写作时应该注意符合题意，做到无语法和单词拼写错误，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。R篇参考范文Dear Editor,I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I thi

88、nk it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall? Now people are under more and more pressure from work and study. We need a place to relax. I think this park is the best place to relax. We can see

89、many people in the park every day. Some old people exercise in the park, and children fly kites in the park. There are also many people talking happily with their friends. If the park becomes a shopping center, there will be no suitable place for us to relax.So I insist on my view that the park cann

90、ot be given up. Now the transportation is very convenient. People can take the subway or car to go to a far place when shopping. I think this is a better solution.Thats all. Thank you!Tony.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人

91、称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。S篇参考范文Dear Xiao Qiang,I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty concentrating on his study recently, the learning effect is poor, and you feel stressed. In fact, dont worry, everyone will be under pressure. Proper pressure is helpful to

92、do our study well. However, too much pressure is harmful to our health and study. I was in the same situation as you. You can take an active part in sports. When you feel upset, you should try to relax and enjoy your favorite music. I believe that if you do this, you will get better and you will mak

93、e a big progress in your study.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，给小强写一封信，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给出一些缓解学习压力的方法。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在写作时要确保内容完整，要点全面，行文连贯，流畅、通顺，适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，和复合句。语言结构要符合语法习惯，保证单词拼写和标点使用正确。T篇参考范文Dear Mr. Li,In response to your survey, Id like to tell

94、 you something about how I learn English after school. Personally, I find memorizing new words most important, for vocabulary is the basis of any language learning, not just English. Besides, reading out loud is what I spend most of my time doing while I seldom recite any texts, which is too boring

95、for me. As for written homework, it is truly my biggest headache because it seems endless. To progress more in English learning, I think it necessary to do some pleasure reading and that is exactly what I am about to do. Yours,Helen【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，谈谈自己英语学习的情况，具体包括单词、课文、作业以及课外阅读等方面。2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；写作时承接开头，具体叙述自己认为英语学习哪个部分最重要、哪个部分还有所欠缺，以及将如何改进学习方法来取得更大进步。注意信件的写作格式，要正确运用语言句式和语法，注意标点符号使用恰当。