专题15 八下Unit 1-Unit 4写作梳理（解析版）.docx

1、专题15 八下Unit1-Unit4写作梳理Unit1对比说明文：对比过去语现在的差异Three parts: 1.Introduction(介绍):topic 2.Main body(主体): Environment, Life,Transport 3.Conclusion(结论):opinion典例：假设你是林涛，上个月回到了家乡，发现家乡变化很大。请根据以下提示写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文，词数100左右，提示如下：1我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或走路出行；2现在已变成了现代化城镇，建起座座高楼，有很多宽阔的马路。我们住的小

2、区门口有许多公交车经过，很多人都已买了私家车，出行很方便；3但是，这些变化也给我们带来了许多问题，例如：4我的想法是Changes in My Hometown_【答案】Im Lin Tao.Last month I went back to my hometown.Great changes have taken place in my hometown. My hometown used to be a quiet small town There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around

3、 by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars,so its easy to travel around. However,the changes of my hometown have also brought

4、us a lot of trouble. For example,the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。假设你是林涛，上个月回到了家乡，发现家乡变化很大。要求以Changes in My Hometown为题，根据提示材料写一篇短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符

5、合逻辑关系；要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。Unit2How to write an article about one of your trips?Have a clear structure.Introduction: When, Where, WhoMain body: What ( main points & details)Conclusion: Ho

6、wUse the proper order.Think of some useful words and expressions. 典例：假如你是王丹，你准备和你的父母本周六去附近的一个村庄游玩。请你根据以下提示，用英语给来你校交流学习的美国同学吉尔（Jill）发一封电子邮件，邀请他一同前往。提示：1. 开车前往，车程一小时；2. 上午：采摘水果、蔬菜并做饭；下午：观摩村民制茶。要求：不少于100词，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入要求词数。Dear Jill,How are you? _Please reply soon. Yours,Wang Da

7、n【答案】Dear Jill,How are you?My parents and I are going to visit a village this Saturday. The weather will be fine that day. Can you go with us? My father will drive us there. And it will take an hour to get there. Well do the following activities. In the morning, we can pick all kinds of fruits and v

8、egetables in the fields together. Then, we can make a meal with the vegetables by ourselves. In the afternoon, well watch the villagers make tea. If youre also interested in it, you can learn to make tea with us. Im sure well have a fantastic time there.Please reply soon.Yours,Wang Dan【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作

9、文要求学生们以王丹的身份给同学Jill写一封邀请信，邀请他和你一起去附近的一个村庄游玩。写作时，应首先点明写信的目的，向Jill说明情况并发出邀请；然后对这次游玩的一些细节进行介绍，这个在题目中有提示，将题目中的这些内容用正确的英语表达出来，可根据表达需要适当拓展细节。2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般将来时为主来叙述。写作前先整体确定具体的写作内容，分清层次；写作时应注意英语句式结构的特点，以简单句结构为基础，穿插使用并列句、复合句，同时注意上下文语句的衔接。Unit3本单元的主题是“在线旅行”。通过本单元的学习，学生可以尝试写一本旅游指南，介绍一个景点和城市甚至国家等。导游一般包括以

10、下几个方面：（1）一个地方的现状、历史和文化；（2）主要景点、交通和天空（3）个人感情或愿望。典例：三亚位于海南岛的最南端，是著名的国际旅游城市，被誉为“东方夏威夷”。请根据下表的要点提示，以“Welcome to Sanya”为题用英语写一篇短文，介绍三亚之旅。locationin the south of Hainan Islandsizeabout 1, 919 square kilometersweatherwarm, sunny all year roundthings youcan enjoybeaches, coconut(椰子) trees, water games, beau

11、tiful shells(贝壳), all kinds of fruit .feelingenjoyable要求: 1. 短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数70左右，短文的开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 Welcome to SanyaMany people have said that if you come to Sanya, you will never want to leave. Its totally true. _【答案】Welcome to SanyaMany people have said that if yo

12、u come to Sanya, you will never want to leave. Its totally true. Sanya is in the south of Hainan Island. Its about 1, 919 square kilometres. The weather here is warm and sunny all year round. So you can come here any time you like.Sanya is famous for its beautiful beaches and fresh, delicious fruit.

13、 You can see coconut trees everywhere and enjoy all kinds of fruit. There are also plenty of activities you can take part in. You can play interesting water games with other travellers and pick up beautiful shells on the beach.Welcome to Sanya. I think that you will have an enjoyable trip!【详解】1.题干解读

14、：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示介绍海南三亚这一座美丽的旅游城市，并介绍游客到此之后可以进行的娱乐活动。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一、二人称，时态应用一般现在时或一般将来时。题目所给要点必须全部包含，可适当进行拓展。短文主要分三部分进行叙述，第一部分主要介绍三亚的一些基本情况，例如方位、面积、气候等；第二部分则介绍游客可以在三亚进行的娱乐活动；第三部分则是对游客发出邀请。写作时应避免出现单词拼写和语法使用错误。Unit4介绍自己喜欢的书。事物类说明文典例：同学们都读过童话故事丑小鸭，请根据提示用英语表达出来。70词左右。1. 一只丑小鸭被自己的“兄妹”嘲笑，“妈妈”也不喜欢它。2

15、. 历尽磨难。鸭儿们啄(peck)他。小鸡打他，喂鸡鸭的主人用脚踢他。无家可归，他差点死于饥饿和寒冷。3. 最后变成美丽的天鹅。 提示：鸭子 (duck) ；天鹅 (swan)_【答案】Long long ago, there was an ugly duck. He was different from his sisters and brothers. His mother didnt like him. Other ducks often laughed at him and pecked him. Chickens often hit him. Even the host kicked

16、 him with her foot. One day, he was lost and became homeless. He nearly died of hunger and cold. But he never gave up and tried his best to do with all kinds difficulties. At last, he became a beautiful swan and flew to the sky.【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求是根据提示内容请你用英语把童话故事丑小鸭表达出来，内容要包含所有提示要点，可适当增加细节。2

17、. 写作指导：本文叙述的是丑小鸭的故事，所以时态采用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称；首先，我们要根据提示要点（不能遗漏要点），用正确的英语把要点表达出来，可适当添加内容，但要保证词汇正确，语句通顺，符合英文表达习惯；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意时态、主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心审核检查，确保正确无误。1世界在发展，生活在变化，社会的进步让我们的生活越来越好。请通过以下4组图片，从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、交流方式等方面，以“How life changes”为题写一篇短文。In the pastNownewspaperradiotelevisionmobil

18、e phonecomputer shoponline shopold and dirly house new and clean houseletterpostcardemailWeChatQQ要求：1. 词数80100；2. 请先简要介绍表格中的4组图片，再根据生活实际列举12个方面，作适当发挥。How life changes_【答案】One possible version :How life changesGreat changes have taken place in our life for years. In the past, people read newspapers,

19、listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or market. Big families has to share small houses which were old and dirty. Children used to go to school by

20、 bicycle.But now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. Whats more, people can contact others by email, WeChat or QQ, with which they can send and receive messages whenever they like. More and more people

21、live in new and clean houses with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. In a word, people live better than before.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍过去人们的生活方式；第二步，介绍现在人们的生活方式。亮点词汇take pl

22、ace发生keep in touch with保持联系whats more并且in a word总之高分句型Big families has to share small houses which were old and dirty（which引导定语从句）people live better than before（比较级的结构）2假如你是李雷，你想在即将到来的月末假去野外郊游，想去海棠山，请根据你所计划的行程。写一些你所游览的事情。可能用到的词汇： tour, Haitang Mountain, go sightseeing, old pines, picnic要求：1.语句通顺，意思连

23、贯，书写工整。2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Tour to Haitang Mountain_【答案】例文Tour to Haitang MountDuring this weekend, we will have a tour to Haitang Mount. We will go there by bus and after getting off the bus, then we can walk there. We will climb the mountain together. During the climbing, we can see many old

24、pine trees and watch the beautiful scenery. At the top of the mountain, we can also have a picnic. So please take food and water with you. Well, while walking, please take care. Dont run quickly. Keep safe first. While climbing, please collect the litter on the way, then put it in the dustbins. Afte

25、r visiting, we will return with the original route.Hope we do have a great time.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中去海棠山旅游的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤 第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍去海棠山旅游”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“交通方式、到海棠山的集体活动、准备工作等”几个方面重点介绍去海棠山旅游的具体情况；第三步，书写结语表达“希望我们能玩得开心”的愿望。亮点词汇 get o

26、ff下车climb the mountain爬山have a picnic野餐高分句型 We will go there by bus and after getting off the bus, then we can walk there.（after后加动名词作状语）3请根据提示，写一篇有关中国的旅游指南，可以适当发挥。要求语言通顺，条理清晰，词数不少于80词。要点：1、地处亚洲，由34个省份（province）和地区（district）组成。首都北京是现代化的大城市；2、和英国一样，有悠久的历史；3、有很多名胜。可以参观长城。苏州、杭州因为园林而出名。有很多自然风光，如黄山；4、不同地

27、区的天气情况不同。去之前做好准备；5、使用人民币。_【答案】例文：China is located in Asia and consists of 34 provinces and districts. Beijing, its capital city, is modern and big. China has a long history as well as Britain. There are many places to visit. You can see the Great Wall in Beijing. Suzhou and Hangzhou are famous for t

28、heir gardens. China also has a lot of natural beauty, such as Huangshan.The weather in China is very different around the country. Its very cold in winter in the north while its very warm in the south. Be prepared before you visit a place. Moreover, remember that people use RMB there, not dollars or

29、 pounds.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点了，写一篇关于中国的旅游指南，介绍中国的概况、名胜及自然风光、气候及所使用的货币等。保证要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。可采用两段式，第一段介绍中国的地理信息、有悠久的历史、名胜及自然风光；第二段介绍其天气情况及中国的通用货币。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。4假如你是李梅，你的美国笔友Tom在昨天的 e-mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封e-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法。p

30、lay hide and seek (捉迷藏), full of waterfall into, be frightened (惊恐的), cry, run for helpthink over, pick up, throw atbreak, be saved作文要求：1. 文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；2. 词数70个左右；3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, Im very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you

31、 a famous one with the name Sima Guang Hit the Tank. _Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Mei【答案】例文：Dear Tom,Im very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name Sima Guang Hit the Tank. Once Sima Guang was playing hide an

32、d seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child suddenly fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they cried and ran for help. However, Sima Guang thought it over. Then he picked up

33、a big stone and threw it at the tank. The tank broke and the water ran out. He saved the kid. What do you think of Sima Guang?Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Mei【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：图片内容已给出，考生应注意根据图片及所给提示词描述故事，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。借用导语部分来引出本邮件话题：给好朋友推荐

34、中国经典故事；第二步，具体描述图片内容。依次根据四幅图片内容进行故事的描述，图片中的提示词要写全；第三步，书写结语。表达期待得到对方的回信。亮点词汇 be full of 充满 fall into 掉入 run for help 跑去寻求帮助 think over 仔细考虑 pick up 捡起高分句型 When the kids were playing, one child suddenly fell into the tank. （when引导的时间状语从句） Other children were so frightened that they cried and ran for help. （sothat引导的结果状语从句）