2021届高考英语一轮复习 仿真模拟试卷能力检测（二）（含解析）新人教版.doc

1、2021高考仿真模拟试卷(二)(时间：120分钟满分：120分得分：_)第一部分阅读理解(共两节，满分40分)第一节(共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分)阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。A(2020届天一大联考“皖豫联盟体”高中毕业班第一次考试)With all the recent concern about the environment, people want to see their money used to better the planet.Here are four wellknown environmental organizations.

2、World Wildlife Fund (WWF)The World Wildlife Fund is perhaps one of the bestknown organizations for the protection of endangered species and their habitats around the world.Theyve been around for over 45 years.You can donate through their website worldwildlife.org, join their organization as a member

3、, or adopt an animal through their online adoption center.National Geographic Society (NGS)National Geographic Society is wellknown for their magazine and their specials on TV.The organization itself is one of the longestrunning in the worldtheyve been around since 1888.They focus on exploration and

4、 conservation of forests, oceans, habitats, species and societies.You can choose to donate through the website , buy something at their online store, or order a magazine subscription.National Wildlife Federation (NWF)Founded officially in 1937, the National Wildlife Federation tries to protect wildl

5、ife at all costs.In fact, they believe that having the public educated is the best way to help the environmentthe more you know, the more you can protect the world we live in.Donations to the NWF can be made through their website nwf.org or through other options, like matching gifts, workplace givin

6、g, or memorial donations.EcologyFSet up in 1976, EcologyF is run on user clicks.Advertisers buy ad space on the site every time someone clicks.The money goes to buy endangered wilderness land to protect it from companies that would destroy it.So far, EcologyF has bought land in many areas.The best t

7、hing about this site is that you neednt donate any moneyall you have to do is click.1Which environmental organization has the longest history?AEcology F.BWorld Wildlife Fund.CNational Geographic Society.DNational Wildlife Federation.2What does NWF think is the most important in environmental protect

8、ion?AKnowledge. BManagement.CMoney. DPatience.3In what way does EcologyF differ from the other three organizations?AThe size of networks.BThe way of operation.CThe strength of influence.DThe degree of popularity.B(2020届河南省非凡吉创联盟高三调研考试)Its “Baby Day” at the Riverpark seniors home in Ottawaa twicemont

9、hly event Eulah Johnson，90，never misses.“I really enjoy it.Its a shift from the regular routine，” says the retired nurse.Today, Johnson sits on a sofa and looks at a laughing child perched on the seat of her walker (助行架).After a few moments，the girl skips off to play with the dozen or so other small

10、 children and babies mixed with 20 of Johnsons allow residents.The energy in the room is remarkably calm.Some, like 12monthold Owen, are regular visitors to Ottawa seniors homes.“Weve been doing this since he was three months old，”says his mother, Allison Rodgers, 33.She loves the social calls, too：

11、“I didnt have grandparents growing up.Its nice to spend time with older people, and it feels good to know theyre betting so much out of it.”Babies Who Volunteer, the initiative bringing these generations together, is the inspired idea of Jessica Turner a former educational assistant.The idea came ab

12、out during a March 2018 visit with her 22monthold daughter Amelia to a friends mother, who was living in a longtermcare unit.She was most surprised by the response of her friends mother; she hadnt spoken in two years, but with Amelia in her lap, she began singing.Turner went home and immediately put

13、 out a call on a moms Facebook group: would anyone be interested in dropping by seniors residences with their babies?A year later, there are now 1，500 volunteers, and the organization visits 39 homes in Ottawa.Everyone benefits from intergenerational programs, she says.“This playgroup is good for th

14、e mothers, too.Theyre giving something to the community, which provides a sense of purpose and belonging.It can really help someone who is feeling isolated.”4Whats the event Eulah never misses at the seniors home?AA visit with his children.BBaby Day performances.CChildrens regular visit.DHis shift f

15、rom routine work.5What did Jessica ask mothers to do after her March visit?AVisit seniors homes with their babies.BDonate to help senior people in the city.CGet inspiration for kids from the senior.DGet seniors into social life internationally.6What does Jessica think is the benefit of the project?A

16、Children can grow up with their grandparents.BEveryone can meet their need for communication.COnline attention can be drawn to the life of seniors.DMothers can have a life goal by reaching out to the old.7What is the text mainly about?ARegular visits to the old.BThe baby effect on seniors.CConnectio

17、n with the seniors.DMothers sense of belonging.C(2020届广东省实验中学高三上学期第一次段考)Bad news sells.If it bleeds, it leads.No news is good news, and good news is no news.Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers.But now that information is being spread and monitored in differe

18、nt ways, researchers are discovering new rules.By tracking peoples emails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.“The if it bleeds rule works for mass media，” says Jonah Berger, a scholar at the University of Pennsylvania.“

19、They want your eyeballs and dont care how youre feeling.But when you share a story with your friends, you care a lot more how they react.You dont want them to think of you as a Debbie Downer.”Researchers analyzing wordofmouth communicationemails, Web posts and reviews, facetoface conversationsfound

20、that it tended to be more positive than negative, but that didnt necessarily mean people preferred positive news.Was positive news shared more often simply because people experienced more good things than bad things? To test for that possibility, Dr.Berger looked at how people spread a particular se

21、t of news stories: thousands of articles on The New York Times website.He and a Penn colleague analyzed the “most emailed” list for six months.One of his first findings was that articles in the science section were much more likely to make the list than nonscience articles.He found that science amaz

22、ed times readers and made them want to share this positive feeling with others.Readers also tended to share articles that were exciting or funny, or that inspired negative feelings like anger or anxiety, but not articles that left them merely sad.They needed to be aroused one way or the other, and t

23、hey preferred good news to bad.The more positive an article, the more likely it was to be shared, as Dr.Berger explains in his new book, “Contagious: Why Things Catch on.”8What do the classic rules mentioned in the text apply to?ANews reports.BPrivate emails.CResearch papers.DDaily conversations.9Wh

24、at can we infer about people like Debbie Downer?ATheyre socially inactive.BTheyre good at telling stories.CTheyre careful with their words.DTheyre inconsiderate of others.10Which tended to be the most emailed according to Dr.Bergers research?AFinancial reviews.BScience articles.CPersonal accounts.DS

25、ports news.11What can be a suitable title for the text?AOnline News Attracts More PeopleBSad Stories Travel Far and WideCGood News Beats Bad on Social NetworksDReading Habits Change with the TimesD(2020届河南省八市重点中学高三9月“领军考试”)The evolution of fashion has changed our shopping habits.Fast fashion arrived

26、, making stylish clothes more affordable.Then trend cycles sped up and shopping became a form of entertainment.However, fast fashion now faces a bottleneck.With decreased sales volumes and competition from H&M, Zara and The Gap in the Chinese market, US clothing brand Forever 21 announced it will fu

27、lly withdraw (撤退) from China.Fast fashion may not be as popular as it once was.Discounts, clearance sales and closures clearly show that demand for fast fashion is getting worse.Research from USbased fashion resale website ThredUp points out that one in four women aged 1825 plans to quit fast fashio

28、n in 2019.A major reason is to be more ecofriendly.On the one hand the constant demand for clothing puts enormous stress on land and water resources.Farming cotton for clothing ruins the soil, and pesticides are overused.So are harmful dyes.It makes the fashion industry the second largest polluter o

29、f clean water.On the other hand, fast production also means that more clothes are disposed (处置) quickly, which creates a huge amount of waste.Old clothes go to landfills (填埋场), which will further increase the pollution of soil and water.Fast fashion also puts incredible stress on workers.More than 1

30、，100 people died in a clothes factory collapse (倒塌) in Bangladesh six years ago.The collapse uncovered the bad situation of the workers.They worked overtime against their will.Some averaged up to 14 hours a day, making only $2(about 14 yuan).Furthermore, most of them were women with children to feed

31、.British designer Vivienne Westwood once said, “Buy less, choose well, make it last.” Buying is what makes the fashion world go round.Its time to start questioning fast fashion and see the true cost of those cheap Tshirts.12which one of the following is NOT the reason why US clothing brand Forever 2

32、1 will fully withdraw from China?AFast fashion now faces a bottleneck.BShopping became a form of entertainment.CSales volumes are decreased.D.There are many competitors in the Chinese market.13Why does one in four women aged 1825 plan to quit fast fashion?ABecause fast fashion may not be as popular

33、as it once was.BBecause demand for fast fashion is getting worse.C.Because fast fashion is not so ecofriendly.DBecause stylish clothes are not affordable.14How do fast fashion clothes pollute water?APesticides are overused on the farm.BDyes are harmful and old clothes go to landfills.CPeople have to

34、 farm more cotton.DFast fashion puts incredible stress on workers.15From the last paragraph, we know that _.Awe should buy cheap TshirtsBwe should buy expensive clothesCwe should buy clothes that last longDwe cant throw away the cheap clothes第二节(共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分)根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多

35、余选项。(2020届陕西省百校联盟高三TOP20九月联考)There are many barriers on the way to success.Fortunately, most of them can be overcome._16_ Id like to show the four most important strategies I know to overcome success barriers.Decide what success means to you.Everybody wants success.For some, success means making a l

36、ot of money；for others it means having great relationships with great people.If youre not clear on what success means to you, youre going to chase an unclear version of success, which constitutes a major barrier in achieving it._17_ Youre never going to catch it.Look at the barrier as an outsider.Im

37、agine that the goal you want to reach is not yoursits someone elses.And the obstacle that prevents reaching it is theirs as well.And as an outsider, you have a taste for problem solving._18_ Its like seeing your situation with new eyes, and often youll be amazed at the resolutions youll see with the

38、se new eyes.Inform yourself._19_ They have a good comprehension of the situation and the obstacle, so its easy for them to see appropriate ways to overcome it.How to do these? By constantly learning, especially in the areas where you want to achieve performance, and keeping yourself very well inform

39、ed.Keep trying.I find that many people dont overcome obstacles because they only try one or two ways to overcome it, and if these dont work, they give up.In order to overcome the obstacle, youll need to try several solutions, and move from one to another based on the results you get._20_ AIts like c

40、hasing a ghost.BEventually youll find the best solution.CIts not always easy, but its almost always possible.DGive this strategy a try in dealing with obstacles you face.EIf a solution doesnt solve your problem, look at the problem again.FThe people who are best at overcoming success obstacles are v

41、ery wellinformed.GWellinformed persons must get information from many different news resources.第二部分语言知识运用(共两节，满分45分)第一节(共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分)阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。(2020届广西柳州市高三上学期英语摸底考试)Clara Daly was seated on an Alaska Airlines flight from Boston to Los Angeles when a flight a

42、ttendant (服务员) asked an urgent question over the loudspeaker: “Does anyone on board know American Sign Language？” Clara, 15, _21_ the call button.The flight attendant _22_ and explained the situation.“We have a passenger on the plane whos _23_ and deaf，” she said.The passenger seemed to want somethi

43、ng, but he was travelling alone and the flight attendants couldnt _24_ what he needed.Clara had been studying ASL for the past year and was able to finger spell on the mans _25_.So she _26_ her seat belt, walked toward the front of the plane, and _27_ by the seat of the passenger, Tim Cook gently ta

44、king his hand, she _28_： “How are you? Are you OK？”Tim asked for some water.When it _29_， Clara returned to her seat.She came again a bit later because Tim wanted to know the _30_.Clara got him to know that it was nearly 10 a.m.On her third _31_， she stopped and stayed for a while.“Wow, this is cool

45、，” Clara said to the flight attendant.“In fact, he didnt need anything.He was just _32_ and wanted to talk.”So for the next hour, they were both _33_， chatting with each other.She talked about her family and her _34_ for the future(she wants to be a politician).Tim told Clara how he had _35_ become

46、blind over time and _36_ stories of his days as a travelling salesman.“Clara was _37_，” the flight attendant told New York Times during an online _38_.“You could see Tim was very excited to have someone he could _39_ with, and Clara was like a(n) _40_， appearing in need, unexpectedly.”Cooks reaction

47、: “Best trip Ive ever had.”21A.put BpressedCmade Dcovered22A.came by Bsat downClooked up Dwalked away23A.cold BmadCblind Dsick24A.believe BnoticeCaccept Dunderstand25A.hand BarmCbook Ddesk26A.left BtiedCunfastened Dbroke27A.stood up Bbent overClay down Dturned over28A.shook BwroteCshouted Dwhispered

48、29A.arrived BappearedCdropped Dstopped30A.job BflightCseat Dtime31A.trip BchatCletter Dvisit32A.terrified BthirstyClonely Ddelighted33A.displeased BregretfulCrelaxed Dlucky34A.courses BplansCdoubts Dproblems35A.generally BimmediatelyCincreasingly Dgradually36A.shared BforgotCrepeated Dcomplained37A.

49、nervous BshyCselfish Dcaring38A.interview BjobClesson Dopportunity39A.live BworkCcommunicate Dstart40A.attendant BangelCstudent Ddancer第二节(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(2020届广东省实验中学高三上学期第一次段考)Bank of China and Alibaba are the dream employers for Chinese students, according to

50、a new survey.The survey of more than 55，000 students, 41._ (conduct) by a research firm Universum, found that 42._ (rough) a quarter want to work for an international company, while only 9% want to work for a startup.Five percent want to start 43._ own business.When it comes to desirable companies,

51、business students 44._ (recognize) Bank of China as the top choice for seven years, and it shows no signs of 45._ (give) up its lead.William Wu, manager of Universum, said that banking remains 46._ attractive industry for young Chinese.“Chinas government is now emphasizing the revolution of the fina

52、nce industry, 47._ leaves the younger generation with the impression that though banking is a 48._ (tradition) industry, there are still a lot of development 49._ (opportunity)，” Wu said.Alibaba improved six places from 2014, 50._ (rank) second among business students.It held a recordbreaking $25 bi

53、llion IPO in September.第三部分写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2020届河南省南阳市第一中学高三上学期第三次月考)Smoking is wide

54、spread habit even among teenage students.The number of young smokers are increasing.It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students have tried smoking once or more and some of them even steal money from their parent to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.As it is known to all, smoking

55、is harmful for health.And its even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also to their mind.Teenage students are future builders of the country.They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well.So its high time tha

56、t teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking.第二节书面表达(满分25分)(2020届湖北省洪湖市第二中学高三9月月考)假定你是李华，给你开网店的英国朋友Peter寄去了一包自家产的有机(organic)绿茶，并附有一份该茶的说明。请你给Peter发封电子邮件。内容包括：1请他品茶；2说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等)；3请他帮忙代卖该茶。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_高考仿真模拟试卷(二)第一部分阅读理解第一节A本文是一篇应用文，主要简介了四个著名的环保组织。1C细节理解题。根据文章内容可知，WWF

57、有45年以上的历史；NGS从1888年就开始存在，迄今已有超过100年的历史；NWF成立于1937年； EcologyF成立于1976年，因此NGS时间最长。故选C。2A推理判断题。根据文章对NWF介绍中的“In fact, they believe that having the public educated is the best way to help the environmentthe more you know, the more you can protect the world we live in.”可知，NWF认为，让公众受教育是帮助环境的最佳方式。由此可以推断，NWF认

58、为知识在环保中是最重要的。故选A。3B推理判断题。根据文章对四个环保组织的介绍可知， EcologyF是靠用户的点击率获得广告收入的方式运营的，用户不用捐钱，他们只需要点击即可；而其他三个环保组织都接受包括捐款在内的多种方式的支持。由此可以推断， EcologyF与其他三个环保组织的运营方式不同。故选B。B本文是一篇记叙文。介绍加拿大渥太华的一项活动。每个月两次，养老院举办“宝贝日”，妈妈们带着自己的婴儿去那里看望老人，这些婴儿给老人们的生活带来快乐。4C细节理解题。第一段说90岁的尤拉对于孩子们一个月两次到养老院来玩耍，每次都不会错过。故选C。5A推理判断题。第五段提到“宝贝日”这个活动的来

59、历，说杰西卡带着自己22个月大的女儿去看望住在养老院的朋友的妈妈，回来后就在脸书网的妈妈群里发出倡议，让妈妈们带着自己的婴儿去看望养老院的老人。故选A。6D推理判断题。最后一段杰西卡谈到这项活动的意义和好处，说妈妈们能通过这个活动为社区作贡献，帮助那些孤独的老人，这能让她们的生活有目标，有归属感。故选D。7B主旨大意题。本文介绍加拿大渥太华的一个活动。每个月两次，妈妈们带上自己的婴儿去看望养老院的老人，给老人们带来欢乐时光。故选B。C本文是一篇说明文。社交媒体传播，好消息胜于坏消息，坏新闻才有销路，好消息，不算新闻。然而在网络普及的时代，“没有消息就是最好的消息”的传统说法是对的，好消息在网络

60、上的传播速度比坏消息要快得多。8A细节理解题。根据第二段中的“The if it bleeds rule works for mass media”可知，这条经典的规则使用于大众媒体。故选A。9D推理判断题。根据第二段中的“you care a lot more how they react”可知，你非常在乎朋友听完你讲的故事的反应；再根据“You dont want them to think of you as a Debbie Downer.”可知，你不想被当作一个“Debbie Downer”，说明Debbie Downer指的是“一个不为他人考虑的人”。故选D。10B推理判断题。根据

61、第三段中的“One of his first findings was that articles in the science section were much more likely to make the list than nonscience articles.”可知，科技类的文章比非科技的文章更有可能被人们讨论。故选B。11C标题归纳题。根据第一段中的“By tracking peoples emails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther tha

62、n disasters and sob stories.”可知，本文讲述了好消息在网络上传播得更快，影响更深远；下面的内容对这个话题进行解释说明。因此推断C项“好消息在社交媒体上打败坏消息”为最佳标题。故选C。D本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了引领潮流的时尚品牌遇到瓶颈，销售量下滑，人们已经开始理性购物，注意环保。12B细节理解题。根据第二段中的“however”可知，第一段和第二段的意思正好相反，第一段讲述快时尚购物是潮流，甚至成为了一种娱乐方式。第二段讲述快时尚购物遇到瓶颈，Forever 21销售量下滑，且多家竞争者的存在。故选B。13C细节理解题。根据第三段“A major reason

63、is to be more ecofriendly”可知正确答案为 C。14B细节理解题。根据第四段“So are harmful dyes.It makes the fashion industry the second largest polluter of clean water.”和第五段“Old clothes go to landfills (填埋场), which will further increase the pollution of soil and water.”可知正确答案为 B。15C主旨大意题。根据“Buy less, choose well, make it l

64、ast.”可知 C 为最佳答案。第二节本文主要讲述了如何克服障碍取得成功的方法。16C上文讲“幸运的是这些障碍可以被克服”，C项“这并不容易，但这是可能的”，符合语境，故选C。17A上文提到了“chase”，此空后一句讲“你将永不会追上它”。A项“这就像追赶鬼魂一样”符合语境，故选A。18D本段的标题是“作为旁观者来看待障碍”，此空后一句讲“这就像用全新的眼光看待你面临的境况”，D项“在处理你面临的障碍时尝试这种方法”符合语境。故选D。19F此文整篇讲克服障碍，本节标题是“Inform yourself”，F项“最擅长克服障碍的是那些消息灵通人士”，符合语境。故选F。20B上文讲“为了克服障碍

65、，你需要尝试几种解决办法”。B项“最终你会找到最好的解决办法”符合语境。故选B。第二部分语言知识运用第一节本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了15岁的小女孩帮助航班乘务员与一位聋哑人用手语交流的故事。她认为每个人都应该彼此帮助，善良是人们的本性。21B句意：Clara，15岁，按下了呼叫按钮。put放；pressed压，按；made制造，使；covered 覆盖。故选B。22A句意：空服员走过来解释了当时的情况。came by过来；sat down坐下；looked up查阅，抬头看；walked away 走开。故选A。23C句意：飞机上有一名又盲又聋的乘客。cold寒冷的；mad疯狂的；blind瞎的

66、，盲目的；sick 生病的。故选C。24D句意：乘客似乎想要点什么，但他是一个人。空服员不明白他需要什么。believe相信；notice注意到；accept接受；understand 理解，明白。故选D。25A句意：Clara在过去的一年里一直在学习ASL，能用手指在那人的手上拼写。hand手；arm胳膊；book书；desk书桌。故选A。26C句意：所以她解开安全带，朝飞机前部走去，在乘客Tim Cook 的座位旁弯下腰，轻轻地抓着他的手，写：“你好吗？你还好吗？”left离开；tied系，捆；unfastened解开；broke 打破。故选C。27Bstood up站起来；bent ov

67、er弯腰；lay down躺下来；turned over移交。根据句意可知选B。28Bshook摇动；wrote写；shouted喊；whispered低声说。根据句意可知选B。29A句意：当水到的时候，Clara回到了她的座位。arrived到达； appeared 出现；dropped落下，掉落； stopped停止。故选A。30D句意：因为Tim想知道时间，过了一会儿她又来了。job工作；flight航班；seat座位；time 时间。故选D。31D句意：在她第三次拜访时，她停了下来，待了一会儿。trip旅行；chat聊天；letter字母，信件；visit 参观，拜访。故选D。32C句

68、意：他很孤独，想和别人聊天。terrified害怕的；thirsty口渴的；lonely孤独的；delighted 高兴的。故选C。33C句意：所以接下来的一个小时，他们都很放松，相互交谈。displeased不快的，不满意的；regretful惋惜的，遗憾的；relaxed放松的；lucky 幸运的。故选C。34B句意：她谈起了家庭和她对未来的计划(她想成为一名政治家)。courses课程；plans计划；doubts怀疑；problems问题。故选B。35D句意：Tim告诉Clara他是如何逐渐失明的，并分享他作为旅行推销员的故事。generally一般地；immediately立即；in

69、creasingly越来越多地；gradually逐渐地。故选D。36Ashared分享，共用；forgot忘记；repeated重复；complained抱怨。根据句意可知选A。37D句意：Clara是很贴心的。nervous紧张的；shy害羞的；selfish自私的；caring关怀的。故选D。38A句意：这位空服员在接受纽约时报线上采访时说。interview采访；job工作；lesson课，教训；opportunity机会。故选A。39C句意：你能看得出Tim很高兴有个能和他交流的人，Clara就像一个天使，突然出现在需要她的地方。live生活，居住；work工作；communicat

70、e交流；start 开始，出发。故选C。40Battendant服务员，侍从；angel天使；student学生；dancer 舞蹈家。根据句意可知选B。第二节本文是一篇说明文。一项新调查表明，中国银行和阿里巴巴是中国学生的梦想雇主。41conductedsurvey和conduct之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词做后置定语，故填conducted。42roughly此空修饰整个句子，应用副词修饰，做状语，故填roughly。43their根据句意“5%的人想要创办他们自己的生意”所以用形容词性物主代词，故填their。44have recognized根据时间状语“for seven year

71、s”，可知谓语动词用现在完成时，故填have recognized。45giving介词后跟动名词做宾语，故填giving。46an此处泛指一种行业，attractive是以元音音素开头，应用an修饰，故填an。47which此处是一个非限制性定语从句，指代前面整个句子内容应用which，故填which。48traditional此处用形容词修饰名词，做定语，故填traditional。49opportunitiesopportunity为可数名词，做主语，谓语是are，所以用复数，填opportunities。 50rankingrank和Alibaba是主动关系所以用现在分词做伴随状语，故

72、填ranking。第三部分写作第一节短文改错第一处：widespread前加a。后面的名词habit是单数可数名词，应用a修饰，表泛指。第二处： areis。the number of.后谓语动词应该用单数形式。第三处：parentparents。根据their可知应用复数形式。第四处： thatwhich。不能用that引导非限定性定语从句，应该用which。 第五处：去掉As后的it。本句是一个由as引导的非限定性定语从句，as指代后面的主句，it多余。第六处：forto。be harmful to对有害。第七处： greatlygreat。用形容词great修饰名词harm。第八处： l

73、earnlearning。spend some time doing sth.花时间做某事，这为固定结构。第九处：butand。此处用and连接两个并列成分。第十处：makemade或在make前加should。该句应该使用虚拟语气，其结构为：It is (high) time that sb.did/should do sth.。第二节书面表达参考范文：Dear Peter，How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside whic

74、h is a description for it.Our family plant tea and we make the tea product by ourselves.Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins.You can taste it and will find how nice it is.Meanwhile, Id 1ike to ask you a favor.I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop.Thank you for your help!Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua