《冲刺2015》2015届高三英语总复习（高考模拟专版）汇编：F单元 书面表达.doc

1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家F单元书面表达目录F单元书面表达1F1书面表达记叙文1F2 书面表达议论文4F3 书面表达说明文2F4 书面表达应用文4F5书面表达夹叙夹议文2F1书面表达记叙文【英语卷2014届黑龙江省大庆铁人中学高三考前模拟冲刺（201405） 解析】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）F1 假定你是李明，是一名中学生，你们当地的一个旧旅馆即将拆除。关于将在此处再建什么，有关部门 (收信人：王鹏)面向社会征求意见。请按下列要点写一封信，提出自己的建议: 1. 本人简介； 2. 你的建议； 3. 原因（至少两条）注意 1. 词数：100词左右。 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使

2、行文连贯。Dear Wang Peng,_ Yours, Li Ming 【范文】【英语卷2014届陕西省西工大附中高三第八次适应性训练（201405）解析】第三节 书面表达（满分30分）F1 进入高三以后，很多同学觉得时间紧，学习压力大，认为锻炼身体很浪费时间，有的同学甚至连一周两节的体育课都用来学习。缺乏休息再加上缺乏锻炼导致很多同学体质下降。假如你是班上的体育委员李华，请你写一篇发言稿，在班会上给同学们讲一讲体育锻炼的益处和缺乏锻炼可能出现的问题。注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, my dear classmate!Today, I

3、 would like to speak to you about the importance of taking exercise._【范文】写作：Good morning, my dear classmate!Today, I would like to speak to you about the importance of taking exercise.Burdened with study, many students are sparing no effort to study, leaving no time to take exercise. Whats worse, so

4、me students take advantage of PE classes to do homework.It is true that study is important. But from my point of view, what really counts is health. Only by taking enough exercise can your health be improved. Not only can taking exercise contribute to health but it also refreshes your mind, making y

5、ou study more efficiently. As everyone may have experienced, after one or two hours exercise, one can study better. Only if you are in good healthy can you keep on studying without feeling tired.As Chairman Mao put it, “Health is the capital of revolution.” Never should taking exercise be ignored.Th

6、ats all, thank you!【考点点拨】这篇作文的题材是发言稿，要点明确，讲一讲体育锻炼的益处和缺乏锻炼可能出现的问题。内容贴近学生的生活实际，易于动笔。这篇范文观点鲜明，结构合理，采用三段，第一段给出高三学生不重视体育锻炼的现象；第二段作者表明自己的观点，论述了体育锻炼的重要性和益处；最后一段用名人名言，再次强调体育锻炼的重要性。范文句式多变，恰当使用了短语、非谓语结构、倒装句等；简单句复合句交叉使用，增加了文章的可读性。高级句型1. Burdened with study, many students are sparing no effort to study, leaving

7、 no time to take exercise.非谓语动词，固定短语spare no effort to do 不遗余力做某事。2. Whats worse, some students take advantage of PE classes to do homework.过渡词 whats more; 短语take advantage of 3.倒装句Only by taking enough exercise can your health be improved.Not only can taking exercise contribute to health but it als

8、o refreshes your mind, making you study more efficiently.Only if you are in good healthy can you keep on studying without feeling tired.Never should taking exercise be ignored.【英语卷2014届江西省重点中学协作体高三第二次联考解析（201405）】书面表达（满分25分） F1 很多学生在考试中失败并不是因为他们的能力不够，而是因为压力太大。请根据你的亲身经历，谈谈你对压力的看法以及你应对压力的措施，词数120左右。【英

9、语卷2014届江苏省徐州市第一中学（徐州市）高三考前模拟（201405）】第五部分 书面表达（满分25分）（说明：本部分提供了两篇书面表达，各校根据复习情况可任选一篇练习）书面表达 F1 （1）阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文:I realize I am holding an apple tree in my hand-a little seed with the potential to become a beautiful big treea tree that can grow thousands of apples in its lifetime. Thousa

10、nds of apples, each containing several seeds, each capable of growing a new tree which again can produce thousands of apples. Why then the world isnt filled with apple trees? It is a rule of nature that only a few of these seeds grow. And it comes to my mind its quite often so with peoples dreams al

11、so. Wonderful ideas come to our minds but they die too soon. The dreams are too far away from our life. And then one day we wonder what has happened to our dreamswhy do they never come true? I wonder when someone is seriously growing apples, how much work does it require? Maybe it is like with our d

12、reams: the seeds of your dreams do not automatically grow. Planting an apple tree, it might take many tries. You might meet dozens of people until you meet the true friend. But if you keep on sowing the seeds of your dream, one day you will succeed. And after that others will comment you are lucky t

13、o be successfulwhen in fact you probably have failed more often than you would like to count. But you are good at failingyou learn, you adapt, and then with your new knowledge you try again. And again. And again. And one day success is yours. I pick up the apple seed againbut instead of throwing it

14、away I take an empty flower pot, pour some earth into it and plant the seed. Maybe one day it will grow into a proud tree. 写作内容1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词谈谈你对实现梦想的看法, 内容包括: (1) 说明现实生活中许多人虽有梦想但没有实现的原因。 (2) 谈谈你如何面对现实, 实现自己的人生梦想。写作要求1. 作文中可以参考阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 解析：本文第一个任务是概括文章的大意。

15、【试题分析】考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语turn sth into 把，变成；the reason for .的原因； keep on doing继续做某事

16、；First of all, its a rule of nature that not all seeds can become big apple trees.这具句子中it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句；Actually, to realize your dreams is like planting an apple tree.这个句子中提到不定式做主语。文中提到一些连词如in other words换句话说；first of all首先，使句子看起来流畅，有逻辑性。F2 书面表达议论文【英语卷2014届湖南省十三校高三第二次联考】Section C （25 marks）F

17、2 Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese （2014湖南十三校联考） 近日，一长沙市民李先生在上班途中刮擦了路边一停靠私家车后主动留下联系方式，这一新闻引起了社会对诚信问题的热议。请简述这幅画的内容以及其所涉及的社会现象，并谈谈你的看法。注意：1词数不少于120个。 2作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息， 如校名、人名等。参考词汇：刮擦scratch。【范文】 【英语卷2014届安徽省合肥市高三第二次教学质量检测】第二节（2014合肥第二次

18、质检）书面表达 (满分25分)F2 高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为他们难得的放松时间，可目前你校体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文, 给校报投稿, 谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 文中需要包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. _Yours SincerelyLi Hua 【范

19、文】One possible version Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull a

20、nd sometimes even replaced by other subjects.Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by

21、 other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.I hope PE class can not only enric

22、h our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.【试题点拨】这是一篇半开放型作文，给出了话题，并有部分提示。要求谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。这篇范文句式多变。是典型的3段论，第一段提出体育课被占用的现象和存在的问题；第二段谈论了分析了体育课的优点并给出作者的建议；最后一段再次总结强调作者的建议。倒装句Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality.同位语从句Therefo

23、re, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons.非限定性定语从句Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. Af

24、ter all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.等等。建议措施可使用以下句型结构:Considering all these reasons/this situation/Confronted with such a problem, I think we need to take some positive measures. On the one hand, _ （方法/建议一）. On the other hand, it is necessary for us to _（方法/建议二）. Th

25、us/Only in this way, can _（总结自己的观点/建议/态度）【英语卷（解析）2014届湖北省襄阳五中、钟祥一中、夷陵中学三校高三五月联考（201405）】F2 第二节：短文写作 (共1题，满分30分) 请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass. It is about learning to dance in the rain. 注意：无须写标题； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 不能透露个人信息和学校名称； 字数120左右。_【范文】书面表达In our daily life, we

26、 are often confronted with difficulties, even great troubles. Some people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer them. Personally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome them.My memory drew me back to four years ago when I w

27、as a junior middle school student. At that time, I had great trouble studying English. First of all, I felt it hard to memorize English words. Besides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answers. What annoyed me most was that I failed exams cons

28、tantly. I was about to give up when my English teacher found problem. He encouraged me and gave me some good advice. Inspired by him, I was determined to defeat it. Following his advice, I made progress gradually.From my experience, I can draw a conclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave

29、 enough. So keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have any. Never wait for the storm to pass;instead, learn to dance in the rain.【思路点拨】命题作文：人生不是坐等暴风雨过去，而是学会在雨中起舞。范文一开始作者先阐述了自己对Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass. It is about learning to dance in the rain.的理解并提出自己的观点：要积极地去面对困难并努力克服困难。

30、然后结合自身事例说起，讲述了自己在英语学习中遇到很多困难，并在英语老师的帮助下成功克服困难并取得进步的事实。最后总结出，无论我们遇到什么困难，要勇敢面对。不要坐等暴风雨过去，而是学会在雨中起舞。范文中长句短句交错使用，使文章看起来紧张有序，并不乏味。注意描述过去的事情要用过去时。【英语卷2014届江苏省徐州市第一中学（徐州市）高三考前模拟（201405）】书面表达 F2 (2)随着科技的发展, 电子书和网上读物不断普及,这种阅读方式与传统的纸质阅读有很大的不同,请你就这两种阅读方式的利弊进行比较并谈谈你的看法及对未来阅读方式的预测。阅读方式电子阅读纸质阅读利很多网上读物免费；查询方便；不浪费自

31、然资源阅读轻松；不伤眼睛；可以在书上做随读笔记弊伤眼睛；必须购置设备；无法做随读笔记需要花钱买书；浪费自然资源.你的看法和预测(至少三点.)注意: 1. 对所给要点要逐一陈述,适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。 2. 字数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。With the development of science and technology, e-books and online readings are becoming more and more popular. People nowadays can not only read onli

32、ne but also read on mobile phones and other electronic equipment like i-pad. 【试题分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起

33、到事半功倍的效果。【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语free of charge免费； For example比如；Whats more而且；What makes matters worse更糟糕的是；In my opinion在我看来。Make notes做笔记；Secondly, it is easy to find what you want to read just by typing out key words.这个句子中运用it be adj/n. to do 这个句型结构。Besides that, you can keep your books as long as fore

34、ver.这个句子中运用到besides表示除了之外还有；And making paper for books wastes natural resources这个句子中运用到了动名词做主语，谓语动词用做第三人称单数形式。F3 书面表达说明文【英语卷（解析）2014届宁夏银川一中高三下学期第三次模拟考试（201405）】F3书面表达（满分25分）你们班在本周三早晨8点在学校门口集合乘坐校车去参观一所示范学校，要求全班同学都准时参加，请按照图中规定的顺序参观（从主楼出发），根据图示请你用英语写一篇口头通知。要点包含：1.参观的事宜2.学校的建筑和功能3.参观该校的顺序注意：1. 词数100左右；

35、2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。生词：喷泉fountainDear my classmates, May I have your attention, please? _Thats all. Thank you.【范文】 【范文】Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作：Dear my classmates,May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. Our class is going to pay a visit to a model high school t

36、his Wednesday morning. We will go there by school bus at 8 a.m. All the students are required to gather at the school gate on time.F4 书面表达应用文【解析 英语卷2014届湖南省长沙市高考模拟试卷（二模）试题（201404）】Section C （25 marks） F4 Directions: Write an English composition according to the pictures and instructions given below

37、in Chinese.假如你是一名高三学生，最近你看了一则央视公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语根据下面的图给你校英语报写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章,描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受。注意: 不少于120词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I. When I was young, father was the most important person in my fami

38、ly. _【范文】study hard and make progress in our studies. Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.【英语卷（解析）2014届江西省师大附中高三三模考试（201405）】F4 写作（满分25分）最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下：1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；2.你谈到了自己的梦想；3.如何实

39、现自己的梦想。注意：1. 总词数120左右。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】May 8 Wednesday SunnyRecently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xs Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in

40、the flature. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save peoples lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.To realize my dream, I must try to work hard fro

41、m now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，特别是使用了inspired过去分词短语作状语，和to realize不定式短语作目的状语；only + 状语 + 倒装句句型以及where引导灯额非

42、限制性定语从句，还有enthusiastically，professional knowledge，adequately等高级词汇的应用恰如其分；自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，如：not onlybut also，so等的使用，使全文流畅结构紧凑。【英语卷（解析）2014届山西省山大附中高三5月月考（201405）】F4 第二节 书面表达(满分25分）假如你是李华，于11月12日到达纽约，然后去找你的美国朋友Tom, 但他不在家。请按以下内容给Tom 留张便条。1. 火车晚点15分钟，与接你的Tom 错过。2. 在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor 把你带到Tom家，Tom不在；3.

43、目前在Taylor 夫妇家；4. 务必今晚打电话给你；电话号码是64611128.注意 1. 词数100左右；2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Im in New York!_ Yours, Li Hua【试题分析】本文是一篇应用作文。题目要求写一篇关于有事留便条的短文。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，尤其注意要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语com

44、e across偶遇；offer to do 主动提供做某事；happen to do 碰巧做某事；be friendly to sb 对某人友好；worry about担心；look forward to 盼望；Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.这个句子中seeing由于，鉴于是个连词，非常高级的表达方式。As you happen to be out, Ive decided to accept the Taylors offer to

45、 stay at their house for the night.两个句子之间是因果关系。It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.这个句子中not 与better即否定词与比较级连用表示最高级的意思，即再好不过了。【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省成都市2高三摸底（零诊）考试（201407）word版】第三节 书面表达（满分35分）F4 假设你是王平，最近，你班就学校组织学生郊游问题展开了讨论。现在，请根据以下提示给某英语报社写信，谈谈讨论情况。1外出郊游的好处（两点）；2

46、外出郊游应注意之处（两点）；3你本人的看法。注意：1词数：120左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，并不计人总词数；2可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3参考词汇：郊游 outing (cn.)Dear Editor,Im a senior high school student named Wang Ping . Yours sincerely, Wang Ping【英语卷（解析）2014届山东省日照一中（日照市）高三5月校际联合检测（二模）（201405）】第二节写作(满分30分)F4 你校的外教Thomas想了解刚刚结束的英语口语培训班效果，以便制订下一步的培训计划。假如你是李明，是该培训班学

47、员，想再参加写作培训，请按照所给提示用英语给Thomas写一封电子邮件。1说明收获 2表达谢意 3提出建议或要求注意： 1词数：120150： 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Thomas，_ Yours sincerely， Li MingOne possible version:Dear Thomas,Im so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course. My spoken English has greatly i

48、mproved owing to the effective training program, during which I made many new friends.I used to be shy and un-talkative. When staying with my classmates, I tried to communicate with them in English, but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers, I had a strong willing to practise En

49、glish, but I wasnt brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough, your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it. Now, Im glad to learn you are to organize more training courses, and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my

50、 writing. In short, Im looking forward to more new things in our future courses. Yours sincerely,Li Ming【思路点拨】本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文语言结构富于变化，错落有致，尤其是定语从句和非谓语动词的使用，为文章增色不少。高级词汇和句型：My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program, during which I m

51、ade many new friends.Whenever I met with native speakers, I had a strong willing to practise English, but I wasnt brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time.英语写作评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为30分，按7个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否到及格线,然后确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.评分时应注意的主要内容：内容要点、上下文的流畅与

52、连贯性以及词汇和语法结构应用的数量和准确性。大错：搭配错误、词语用错（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误。小错：单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号等错误。 4.词数少于120或多于150扣2分。二、内容要点1.表达感激之情； 2.说明在培训班上的收获；3.说明自己计划参加写作培训。三、各档次的给分范围和要求分档：标准极优档30书写规范；覆盖所有要点；内容充实；词汇丰富，有修辞意识。优秀26-29紧扣要点；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出较强的语言运用能力。语言小错不超过6个。良好22-25紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有

53、少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般18-21紧扣主题。基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已经影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。较差13-17内容不完整，要点不全，行文不连贯；语言错误（尤其是大错）较多，多数句子基本正确。差6-12内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题，能够写出少量与内容相关的可读句。极差0-5只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。【吉林省吉林市2014届高三下学期第二次模拟考试 英语（2014吉林二模）】F4 第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假如你是荣光中学的学生李华，你偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐

54、一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.说明写信原因； 2.描述书的情况； 3.约定见面时间和地点。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School. Yours, Li HuaDear Tom, Im Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School. I learned quite by chance that you needed a

55、 book to improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese cultu

56、re and customs. Edited by three language experts, it is widely used by many foreign learners. If it is convenient to you, lets meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p.m. this Sunday. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. Yours, Li Hua】【思路点拨】这篇要求100字左右的作文，用了8句（包括开头给出的

57、一句）3段覆盖了题目提出的所有内容要点和要求，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，内容比较丰富。本篇使用了定语从句，非谓语动词以及not only but also的倒装。结尾干净利落，既不拉杂，也草率，要显得自然，恰当得体。全【品教学网， 用后离不了！【来.源：全,品中&高*考*网】【全品原创解析纯word版】吉林省九校联合体2014届高三第二次摸底考试英语试题解析】第二节 书面表达（满分25分） F4 假设你是李明。上周末你的美国网友Jack在给你的电子邮件中问你打算在大学里学什么专业。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封100词左右的邮件。1. 礼节性的开头语并引出问题。2. 首先打算学农学。理由是：

58、（1） 农业是人类生存的基础。（2） 还有很多人在挨饿。（3） 你的雄心壮志。3. 学医也行；希望Jack提供建议 【范文】Dear Jack, How is everything going? In your last letter, you asked me what major Id like to choose at university. I have two majors in mind. First, I intend to choose agriculture science. Why? Because food is fundamental to our existence.

59、 However, food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death. It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming.Secondly, medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is

60、 another worthy way to save lives. Can you give me some advice? Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming【考点点拨】本文是书信类作文，文章的要点基本上都给出来了，而且比较具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。列举理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, Whats more、=First of all,. Furthermore,./Whats more,. Last but not least,.等，让文章看起来

61、很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。所给范文使用了强调句、定语从句等高级句型。宾语从句：In your last letter, you asked me what major Id like to choose at university.强调句：It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming。定语从句：medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy

62、 way to save lives.写作评分标准第五档1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。2. 覆盖所有内容要点。3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。（21-25分）第四档1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文

63、结构紧凑。6. 达到了预期的写作目的。（16-20分）第三档1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。（11-15分）第二档1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6. 信息未能清楚地传达给

64、读者。（6-10分）第一档1. 未完成试题规定的任务。2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6. 信息未能传达给读者。（1-5分）0未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法判断；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。 【英语卷2014届江西省师大附中、鹰潭一中高三5月联考（201405） 解析】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）F4 南昌市即将举办全球财经论坛。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求：(1)乐意为国际友人服务;(2)掌握

65、丰富的文化知识，既能服务于外国朋友，又能传递中国文化;(3)具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。假如你叫李华，是江西师范大学英语专业的一名学生，请根据以上要求，用英语写一封想做博览会志愿者的申请。要求：字迹工整，120词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。生词：全球财经论坛 the Fortune Global Forum Dear Sir or Madam：Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. _ _Yours,【范文】Li HuaDear Sir or Madam:Thank you for taking your time t

66、o read my letter. with the coming of the Fortune Global Forum, Id like very much to be a volunteer as a citizen of Nan Chang.All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all , I promise I should be devoted to serving our foreign guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich know

67、ledge about Chinese history, so I will not only serve but also be a carrier for our wonderful culture. Whats more, English as an international language will play an important role in communication during the forum, and I major in English and am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly i

68、n English.To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one. 【英语卷2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三下学期第三次模拟考试（201405） 解析】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）F4 假如你是李华，暑假在泰国旅游期间入住The Bangkok Hotel宾馆504房间，7月1日入住，8日退房。你回家后发现一个中等大小的红色背包遗失在那里，内有几本旅游书籍，一个白色iPod，一张信用卡和少量现金。请用英文给

69、该宾馆经理写一封信，请求他帮忙寻找并寄回。信件要点包括：1. 陈述写信原因； 2. 简要描述该背包；3. 说明其重要性； 4. 期待回复并感谢。注意：1. 词数：100字左右； 2. 信件格式已给出。Dear Sir,_ Yours sincerely, Li Hua【范文】Dear Sir, Im so grateful for your good service during my stay in Thailand for a tour, but Im writing to ask a favor to find and send back my pack which I left in

70、your hotel.I checked in on July 1 and out on July 8. Setting off in a rush for the airport, I left the pack in Room 504. Its a medium-sized, red leather backpack which contains some traveling books, a white iPod of special edition, a credit card and some cash. All in the pack matter to me, especiall

71、y the iPod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feet upset for its loss.If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.Ill appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything y

72、ou can do for me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【考点点拨】本文为应用文写作，要求学生描写落在旅馆的包裹的特征，并写出其对遗失者的意义。内容贴近考生实际生活，文章要求语言准确地道，发出请求的语气合理，同时也给予英语语言运用能力强的考生较大的自由写作空间。信件的开头合理客气，but 话锋一转，写出写信的原因。Im so grateful for your good service during my stay in Thailand for a tour, but Im writing to ask a favor to find and send back

73、my pack which I left in your hotel.范文用一个定语从句对背包进行了完整描述Its a medium-sized, red leather backpack which contains some traveling books, a white iPod of special edition, a credit card and some cash.F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【解析英语卷2014届福建省漳州市八校高三第四次联考（201405）】书面表达（满分25分）F5 前不久，中央电视台“焦点访谈”栏目曾就“中国式过马路”现象进行了不少采访和评论。请用英语写一篇

74、100-120 词的短文，结合自己的所见所闻或亲身经历描述“行人闯红灯”(pedestrians run the red light)引发的若干问题，并就此提出一些解决措施。 注意;短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena-“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”._【范文】 第一节 书面表达（满分25分）One possible version Not l

75、ong ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena-“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.There is a very common phenomenon around us that people just run the light totally ignoring the running vehicles, which can lead to serious consequences. Last

76、 week a traffic accident happened near our school, a rushing car knocked down a student who was running the red light. And because of the cars sudden stop, several cars behind crashed into each other. Of course this caused a terrible traffic jamIn my opinion, effective measures should be taken to so

77、lve the problem. First, we can make good use of the media, such as TV, newspaper, magazine, to raise peoples awareness of obeying the traffic rules and road safety. Second, government must make severe laws to punish people who dare to break the law and run the red light.【写作点拨】范文根据写作要求，在第二段中提出了中国式过马路的现象，并且结合自己的亲身经历描述“行人闯红灯” 引发的问题。第二段第一句使用了高级句式，包含了一个that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限定性定语从句。第三段作者给出了解决中国式过马路的措施。作者针对中国式过马路现象提出了两个措施，用连接词first和second，使行文更加连贯。- 26 - 版权所有高考资源网