2020版山东高考英语二轮新攻略 习题 专题五　写作 WORD版含答案.docx

1、专题五 写作题组一.应用文假如你是高中生李华,你的美国笔友Jack热爱中国传统文化,最近打算来中国工作和生活一段时间,但是不确定应该去往哪个城市,写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.你推荐的城市;2.推荐的理由(不少于两条);3.美好祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.内容要点:答复咨询信。目的在于向别人推荐旅游城市,并备注理由。注意书写的顺序和各段的侧重点。2.参考词汇及句型:推荐recommend;文化中心cultural center;探索explore。3.文章提纲:介绍写信的原因和背景推荐的城市及理由祝愿。One possib

2、le version:Dear Jack,I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China.I recommend you to stay in Beijing, the capital and the cultural center of China. The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. And

3、 there are also plenty of museums where precious historical relics are waiting for you to explore. Besides, the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you cant miss.I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!Yours sincerely,Li Hua.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之完成一个完整的故事。Tom ap

4、peared on the sidewalk with a bucket of whitewash and a long-handled brush. He stopped by the fence in front of the house where he lived with Aunt Polly. He looked at it, and all joy left him. The fence was long and high. He put the brush into the whitewash and moved it along the top of the fence. H

5、e repeated the operation. He felt he could not continue and sat down. He knew that his friends would walk past him and laugh. They would make jokes about his having to work on a beautiful summer Saturday. No one would remain to help. He felt discouraged at this thought. At this dark and hopeless mom

6、ent, a wonderful idea came to himto make a man or a boy want a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to get. Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash the fence.While Tom was working, Ben appeared, eating an apple as he walked along the street. When he came close

7、 to Tom, he stopped.Ben said,“Say Im going swimming. Dont you wish you could? But of course youd rather work, wouldnt you? Of course you would.”No answer. Tom moved his brush carefully along the fence and looked at the result with the eye of an artist. Tom moved his brush back and forth, stepped bac

8、k to look at the result, added a touch here and there, and stepped back again. Ben watched every move and got more and more interested. Soon he stopped eating his apple and said,“Say, Tom, let me whitewash the fence a little.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,

9、请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Tom thought for a moment and was about to agree, but he changed his mind. Paragraph 2:While Ben worked at the fence in the hot sun, Tom sat under a tree, eating the apple, and planning how to get more help. 答案写作提示原文是一篇具有幽默色彩的故事。大热天,汤姆不得不帮Polly阿姨做事情。他感觉很无聊,不想做。突然他有了一个想法,想

10、让别人去帮助他做。要特别注意文章中的信息“to make a man or a boy want a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to get”。这是文章的核心信息,续写的时候要以此为线索设计故事。One possible version:Paragraph 1:Tom thought for a moment and was about to agree, but he changed his mind.“I cant, Ben. You know Aunt Polly wants the fence to

11、be perfect. It has to be done very carefully. I dont think you can do it well enough,” he said to Ben, who looked a little discouraged.“Oh, Tom, Ill be careful. Now let me try. I would like to give you my apple if you agree,” requested Ben. In the end, Tom gave up the brush with unwillingness on his

12、 face, but joy in his heart. Paragraph 2:While Ben worked at the fence in the hot sun, Tom sat under a tree, eating the apple, and planning how to get more help. Many of his other friends walked past him. Each one came to laugh, but remained to whitewash the fence as they all got interested in it. O

13、ne by one they whitewashed the fence, each giving Tom a reward, big or small. Tom had a wonderful Saturday, sitting in the shade and enjoying the rewards his friends gave him.题组二.应用文假定你是李华。下周四你因故不能上外教Chris的美国文学课,只能向他请假。请给外教Chris写一张请假条,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明缺席的原因;3.弥补措施。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1

14、.本文是一张请假条,要注意语言的礼貌性。2.注意要点有三条,不可遗漏。3.不要逐字翻译题目的要点。注意三个要点之间的顺畅连接。One possible version:Dear Chris,Im awfully sorry that I have to ask for leave of absence from your American Literature course next Thursday for my personal reason. A long-time-no-see friend from South China is coming to see me next week,

15、 so Im supposed to meet him at the railway station for it is the first time for him to travel to our city. Words cant convey my apology and pity that Ill have to miss your interesting class. To make up for the missing class, I wonder if its acceptable for you if I ask one classmate to have your clas

16、s recorded for me.Id appreciate it if you could approve my request for leave.Yours,Li Hua.概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Workaholics live for their work, often spending many extra hours at work, and often taking work home to complete it. Its fine to live in a work-hard culture, but when work becomes

17、the only reason for a persons existence above more important things (such as families and friends), the issue becomes critical. Thats the problem more and more Americans are faced with.Americans are working more hours per week than in years past, and with many companies reducing employees, more and

18、more workers are worried about their own jobs. Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers dont even bother to take vacations, partly because of fears that they may not have a job to come back to if they do. Besides, it is obvious that part of the matter is financial. More and m

19、ore people begin to define success in terms of financial measure. The higher ones income is, the more respect one gets. Finally, people nowadays live and work in a connected environmente-mails, instant messaging, fax machines, and cell phonesmaking it hard for them to truly get time away from their

20、work, even when they are on holiday.When work becomes the only thing people think about and the only thing that truly makes people happy, many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids. The divorce rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up. Undoubtedly, it is tim

21、e to do something.To reduce workaholism, you must stay away from work once in a while. There are many ways to do that: spend time with families and friends; call home often to stay connected; learn to say no to new assignments; consider exercise to get your body back to healthy shape; fight the urge

22、 that everything you do must be perfect. It will take some effort, but for yourself and those you love, you really should make the effort. Have a try and you wont regret it.答案写作提示1.本文是说明文,文章的核心词是“workaholics(工作狂)”,概要时要以此为中心。2.各段基本自成要点,概要以自然段为基础。3.注意各要点之间的有效连接。One possible version:An increasing numbe

23、r of Americans are becoming workaholics.(要点1) They work extra hours to maintain their jobs and become financially successful. Even on holidays, modern communication technologies always connect them to work.(要点2)Consequently, it damages their families as well as their health. Luckily, there is a lot

24、one can do to prevent it from getting worse, which may take some effort, but its worthwhile to have a try.(要点3)题组三.应用文假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom来信说他和好朋友Jack因为一次误会影响了他们之间的友谊,希望你能帮助他。请你给他写一封回信,提出你的建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是一封建议信,注意语言的清楚性和诚恳性。2.表述时可以多用条件句。3.注意建议的合理和实用。One possible version:Dear T

25、om,Im glad to receive your letter asking my advice on how to make up your friendship with Jack.Here are my suggestions. First, it is important to know even best friends may have a conflict, so dont feel upset about it. Then, it will help you much if you can talk with Jack and find out what the probl

26、em really is. If he wouldnt like to talk to you, you can consider writing a letter to him. As to the way you express yourself, I suggest you do so in a friendly way, or it will make things worse. Hope my suggestions will be of help to you.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进

27、行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。I woke up earlier than my brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying goodbye to my mother, I got in the car no later than 7:05.I got to school on time, even though my brother came out of the house late as

28、he used to. It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry room when my phone in my left pocket vibrated(震动). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my fathers name on that screen I realized something was not right.He would not call me in the middle of a school day just to

29、 talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the phone, and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible, walk with him to the school picking-up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver would take us back home where my father was. When

30、 I was in the car with my brother my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going to meet him and my mum there. As soon as my brother and I found about the change in plans, we looked at each other in the eyes. I immediately noticed the fear in my brothers eyes. To be

31、honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I did not say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my dad waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried. I had never seen him smoke before. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the wh

32、ite car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother;he was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car stopped right in front

33、of my dad.Paragraph 2:We walked down the hall with our eyes closed.答案写作提示1.本文原文情节紧张,动人心弦。父亲非常规地派人来学校接我们到医院,一般情况下是很紧急的事情。2.根据文章所给的第一段首句,本段应该描写父子见面后的情景。3.第二段首句有with our eyes closed的情节,那么,第一段结束的地方就要设计符合此语境的情景。One possible version:Paragraph 1:The car stopped right in front of my dad. He could hardly wai

34、t to open the door and I leaped out of the car like lightning and hugged him. He noticed that I was worried and right away with a smile on his face he told us he had a surprise for us.“What good things happened in hospital?” When we approached the ward, my dad told my brother and me to close our eye

35、s and hold his hands. So did we. His warm hands made me feel more secure. Paragraph 2:We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. Suddenly we stopped. When we walked into the room, as soon as my father told us to open our eyes I saw my mother lying on the bed. A tear fell off my eye, but I was not

36、 in pain. Right next to my mother I saw the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a girl. She was sleeping. She was my sister. I still remember that day for it is one of the happiest days of my life.题组四.应用文假定你是李华,你计划假期去杭州旅行,请写一封电子邮件向你的朋友Jack询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括:1.旅行信息(如景点等);2.当地特色(如食品等);3.注意事项。 注意

37、:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Sincerely yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.本文是一封咨询信,因此注意语言的礼貌和简洁。2.列举咨询信息时要注意条理清楚。3.本文的时态用现在时和将来时为宜。One possible version:Dear Jack,Planning to travel to Hangzhou for the vacation, Im writing to ask for information about it.As we know, Hangzhou is famous fo

38、r its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about those. Is it possible for you to come up with traveling routes?Besides, Im also interested in the local food. How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length, are there other things I should be aware of?Id be gr

39、ateful to receive your reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours, Li Hua.概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and,

40、 though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students confidence and understanding of materials.But in the past few years, students have started calling for an end

41、to in-class presentations as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. This week, a tweet posted by a 15-year-old high school student declaring “Stop forcing students to present in front of the class and give them a choice not to” received more than 130,000 retweets and nearly half a mill

42、ion likes. In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression (抑郁) as the leading mental-he

43、alth issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.These students want more options. They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in ways that are different to those strengths. This

44、might mean presenting alone in front of the teacher, or choosing between several alternatives like producing a piece of art or an essay for private judgment instead of presenting their work orally.Educators have begun to take it seriously. They agree teachers should listen to students, hear their vo

45、ices and respond. If students feelings are ignored, they might just walk away. However, not everyone is convinced. Some hold the view that pushing students out of comfort zones is a big part of what they should do as some students are deadly afraid to do it.答案写作提示本文为议论文。文章讨论了课堂展示是否有益的问题。概要应以自然段为基础,注

46、意摄取重点信息。One possible version:Giving an in-class presentation is generally considered an approach beneficial to students development.(要点1)However, in the past few years, students have started calling for an end to it due to the possible discrimination against those with anxiety, which puts great pres

47、sure on the students.(要点2)They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in their ways.(要点3)Their idea has drawn educators serious attention.(要点4)题组五.应用文你的英国朋友Tom将来你家共度除夕,你打算当天下午去地铁站接他。请你用英文写一封电子邮件,告知他相关信息:1.你们全家都欢迎他;2.接他的地点和时间:地铁五号线西兴站B出口,1月27

48、日下午4点;3.晚上的主要安排:看春晚、包饺子、放鞭炮。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.内容要点:表示欢迎;接他的时间和地点;晚上的安排。2.人称:以第一和第二人称为主;时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3.参考词汇:除夕the Spring Festival Eve;春晚the CCTV New Years Gala;放鞭炮set off firecrackers。One possible version:Dear Tom,How is it going?My famil

49、y and I are really looking forward to welcoming you to our home for the Spring Festival Eve. I think it best to meet you at the B Exit of the Xixing subway station, which is on Line 5,at 4 pm on 27th, January. In the evening we will watch the CCTV New Years Gala, make dumplings together and also set

50、 off some firecrackers!Cannot wait to enjoy the New Years Eve together!Yours,Li Hua.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。For many years, I had a recurring (重复出现的) dream. I was a little girl again, rushing about and trying to get ready for school.“Hurry!Youll be late for school,” my mother called to me.

51、“I am hurrying, Mom! What did I do with my books?”Deep inside I knew where the dream came from. It was about some unfinished business in my life. As a kid, I loved everything about school. I loved books, teachers, tests and homework. Most of all I longed to someday march down the aisle (通道) to recei

52、ve my diploma. That seemed more appealing even than getting married.But at 15, I had to drop out because my parents couldnt afford tuition (学费). My hope of getting a diploma was dead, or so I thought. Pretty soon, I married and had three children, and I thought,“There goes my diploma.”Even so, I wan

53、ted my children to be educated. But Linda, our youngest child, had juvenile arthritis (幼年型关节炎) in her hands and knees, which made it impossible for her to function in a normal classroom. I felt really sorry for her and I didnt want her to live her life with regret. I didnt give up hope of her being

54、back to school in some ways.One day, I saw an ad in the newspaper for evening courses.“Thats the answer,” I said to myself. “Linda always feels better in the evening, so Ill just sign her up for night school.”Linda was busy filling out enrollment (入学) forms when the secretary said,“Mrs. Schantz, why

55、 dont you come back to school?”I laughed,“Theres no way! Im 55!” But he persisted, and before I knew what I had done, I was enrolled in classes in English and crafts.“This is only an experiment,” I warned him, but he just smiled. So, I told myself to try for just a semester and to see if it would wo

56、rk. Anyway, my dream was still there in my heart.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:It was exciting to go to school again butParagraph 2:Linda and I saw each other through the time.答案写作提示根据原文可知,作者一直有上学的期望,在给自己女儿报名夜校的时候,夜校工作人员鼓励她也进入夜

57、校学习。在原文的故事最后,作者答应了。根据续写第一段的首句可知,本段应该描述作者进入夜校后的学习情况。特别注意段首句的转折连词but。本段要有“挑战”的描述,同时也应该有克服困难,取得成绩的描述。而根据第二段的首句可知,本段应该描述作者和自己的孩子相互鼓励和支持的情景。One possible version:Paragraph 1:It was exciting to go to school again but it was no game. Sitting in a classroom full of kids was awkward, even if most of them were

58、 respectful and encouraging. During the day, I was still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do. In the evening, I was a hard-working student working on my courses. To my surprise, both Linda and I did very well in night school. I went back again the next semester, and my grades steadi

59、ly improved.Paragraph 2: Linda and I saw each other through the time. When I was down, Linda encouraged me,“Mom, you cant quit now!” And when she was down, I encouraged her. I have to say it was a time which was really hard for both of us. But neither of us gave up. At last, I got my diploma. To my

60、surprise, almost all of my classmates voted for me to be the class speaker, and I got a $3,000 college scholarship. The unfinished business in my dream was eventually finished.题组六.应用文假定你是Tom,请你为校报的“读者专栏”写一封回信。来信内容如下:Dear Editor,I cant stop myself from using my mobile phone. I enjoy staying up late w

61、atching movies to relieve my pressure. In fact, this problem is affecting my studies. What can I do?Dale注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.内容要点:本文是一篇书信类作文,要求写一封回信,帮助Dale解决他对手机上瘾的烦恼。内容包括:对Dale的烦恼表示理解;提出合理的建议;适当地表达祝愿。2.根据本文主题,文章时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。3.文章提纲:表示理解提出两三条建议希望所提的建议能够帮助到他。One possible versi

62、on:Dear Dale,Our smartphones are great tools, but its easy to become addicted to them. Luckily, you are seeking for advice to help beat your phone obsession.The first and foremost step is to separate yourself from it by going out for a whole day without a smartphone. Additionally, you can read a boo

63、k which interests you most, and then share it with your family. Whenever you have the impulse to use the smartphone, remind yourself that it will affect your studies.I hope the advice will be helpful to you.Tom.概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Punishing children is a controversial(有争议的) topic. Everybod

64、y has different opinions about how to act to correct a childs behavior. People have disagreements about whether it is good for a childs education to punish him.The word “punish” means different things to different people. Punishment can be physical or emotional. Physical punishment is when the paren

65、t hits the child. On the other hand, emotional punishment is when the parent, in order to educate the child, doesnt let him watch TV, go to play with his friends, or do things like those.Although many surveys and studies have showed what the correct way is to raise a child, nobody has the answer or

66、the truth. There is no such thing as agreed standards about raising a child, so I think it will be very difficult to get everyone to agree.I think parents should love their child and give him the best education, but at the same time, they should punish the child properly if he deserves it. The paren

67、ts goal is to have a good man or woman in society in the future, so sometimes they should do what is necessary to get their child to behave well.答案写作提示文章为议论文,讨论了体罚孩子的优缺点。概要时应以自然段为基础。注意第一段有中心句,但是需要进行改写。One possible version:People have mixed opinions towards punishment.(要点1) There are mainly physical

68、and emotional punishments.(要点2) As a matter of fact, it is difficult to find agreed standards to raise a child.(要点3) Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary for children while love and education are the most important for parents to make their kids behave well.(要点4)题组七.应用文假设你是李华。你校英文报正在征集

69、怎样做才能保持身体健康的短文。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:1.健康的饮食;2.适当的运动;3.良好的生活习惯。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是一篇建议文。写作时,要明确建议,同时指出你提出该建议的原因。2.注意提出并列建议时要尽量使用多种句式,并使用合适的连接词。One possible version:Good health is of great importance in our growth and development of the body. Here are some suggestions on how to k

70、eep fit.For one thing, have a balanced diet, which is beneficial to your health. Try to eat both plant foods and animal foods. For another, taking plenty of exercise is necessary. Exercise can prevent you from feeling tired. Moreover, form a good habit by going to bed and getting up early.In a word,

71、 a healthy diet, moderate exercise and a good life habit do good to your health.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was somewhere between spring and summer, and my mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then, I was 13 years old, and always felt unhappy with Mom. But little did I know

72、that this trip was going to be a special one.A pot of flowers sat in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled the car.Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing?” I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and wed be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasnt

73、 the case. My mom hopped out of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. “Itll just be a minute,” she called back through the open windows.My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back at the building, som

74、ewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared, empty-handed.Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there?” She shook her head.“Then what did you do with the flowers?” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to the receptionist.” “What?” She laughed at my confusion. “I told the r

75、eceptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially who hasnt gotten any quite a while.”I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name?” To this she answered instantly,“No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreci

76、ate them makes me feel good,which is enough of a thank you for me.”Suddenly, still thinking about Moms deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didnt know where the garage was. It a

77、lso seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had seen so few along the way.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:We were worrying about what could be done.Paragraph 2:As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the

78、road.答案写作提示本文讲述的是作者和母亲的一次普通但又特殊的驾车旅行。当时,13岁的作者处于青春叛逆期,跟母亲关系紧张,但这一次驾车旅行改变了作者对母亲的态度,母亲不求回报的送花行为让作者明白了“好人有好报”的道理,并且对母亲有了更深的理解。根据第一段的首句,此段应该是为了修车他们是如何寻求帮助的。但是为了和文章更好地呼应,应该从母亲的送花行为为他们带来了帮助入手。根据第二段的首句,本段应着重叙述从修完车之后,作者他们重新上路的事情。根据看到花店的信息,本段应该重新回到买花的情节。One possible version:Paragraph 1:We were worrying about

79、 what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had rec

80、eived the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed me what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired.Paragraph 2:As we drove along, a flower shop came into s

81、ight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glit

82、tering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger at her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life.题组八.应用文假如你是李华,上周你接待了来自英国友好学校的Peter。为了使他了解传统文化,你安排了一些活动。请根据图片的先后顺序,给校园英文报写一篇80词左右的报道。注意:短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)参考词汇:书法calligraphy;太极Taiji;越剧 Shaoxing

83、OperaAn impressive reception of an English guestLast week, I received an English student named Peter from our twining school.答案写作指导需注意以下几点:1.结构要合理:第一段需结合中文材料和图片,介绍你为 Peter安排的一系列活动;第二段简单描述感想或发表自己的评论。2.时态以过去时为主。3.使用恰当的连接词。One possible version:An impressive reception of an English guestLast week, I rec

84、eived an English student named Peter from our twinning school. To make him familiar with Chinese culture, I arranged a series of activities. For example, I took him to learn calligraphy and play Taiji, which was amazing to him. Plus, we went to watch Shaoxing Opera, the colorful costumes and unique

85、performing of which impressed him deeply. Also, he tried making dumplings. Despite the imperfect shape, he was satisfied with them and enjoyed them a lot.What an impressive experience! From it, I felt it my honor and duty to introduce Chinese culture to the world.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A

86、wealthy man and his son liked to collect rare works of art. They had everything in their collection, from Picasso to Raphael. They would often sit together and admire these great works of art.When the Vietnam War broke out, the son was involved in the war. Unfortunately he died in battle while rescu

87、ing another soldier. The father was in deep sorrow for his only son. About a month later, just before Christmas, there was a knock at the door. A young man stood at the door with a large package in his hands. He said,“Sir, you dont know me. I am the soldier for whom your son gave his life.”“He saved

88、 many lives that day, and he was carrying me to safety when a bullet struck him in the heart and killed him instantly.”“He often talked about you and your love of art.” The young man held out that package.“I know this isnt much. Im not a great artist, but I think your son would have wanted you to ha

89、ve this.”The father opened the package. It was a picture of his son painted by the young man. He stared in surprise at the way the soldier captured the personality of his son in the painting. The father was so drawn to the eyes that tears welled up in his own eyes. He thanked the young man and offer

90、ed to pay for the painting.“Oh, no, sir, I could never repay what your son did for me. Its a gift.”The father hung the picture on the wall. Every time visitors came to his home he took them to see the portrait of his son before he showed them any of the other great works he had collected.The man die

91、d a few years later. There was to be a great auction(拍卖) of his art collection. Many influential people gathered, excited at seeing the great paintings and having the opportunity to purchase one for their collection.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使

92、用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:On the platform sat the painting of the son.Paragraph 2:Finally a voice came from the back of the room.答案写作提示本文是一篇令人感动的故事。收藏家的儿子在战争中牺牲,他的战友为了纪念他,画了一张他的画送给了收藏家。当然这幅画并不出名,也并不值钱。故事的结尾是收藏家去世后进行收藏拍卖。根据第一段的首句,本段是收藏拍卖。特别注意在拍卖台上的是那幅画有他儿子的画作。因此,故事的发展应该有一定的曲折和特别。One possible version:Paragra

93、ph 1:On the platform sat the painting of the son. The auctioneer banged his hammer.“We will start the bidding with the picture of his son. Who will bid for this painting?” There was silence. Then a voice in the back of the room angrily shouted,“We didnt come to see this picture. We want to see his g

94、reat works of art.” But the auctioneer continued,“Will anybody bid for this painting? Who will take the picture of his beloved son?”Paragraph 2:Finally a voice came from the back of the room.“Ill give $10 for the painting.” It was the gardener of the father and his son. He was a poor man and it was

95、all he could afford.“We have $10. Who will bid $20?” No response.“Going once, twice, SOLD for $10!”“Now the auction is over!” The auctioneer laid down his hammer and explained,“When I was called to conduct this auction, I was told that only the painting of the son would be auctioned. And whoever pur

96、chased the picture of the son would receive all the fathers possessions, including the paintings.”题组九.应用文假定你是高三(3)班的学生李华,就学校食堂的卫生情况想给校长 Mr. Smith 写一封信,反映以下问题:1.食物不加盖;2.品种单一;3.服务态度差。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,Im Li Hua, a student from Class 3 Grade 12.Thank you f

97、or taking the time to consider my requests.Yours, Li Hua答案写作提示1.本文是一封投诉信。陈述投诉理由时要有理有据。逻辑安排要合理。2.组织材料时,要先陈述投诉的事实,然后提出自己的建议。3.注意语言要文明礼貌。One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith,Im Li Hua, a student from Class 3 Grade 12. Im writing to complain about the poor quality food and the service in the canteen.The

98、food is not covered with flies hovering over it, which can lead to diseases. My friends who ate in the canteen had diarrhea yesterday. Besides, we would appreciate a letter more variety in the menu choices. We understand its hard but its not very appetizing to have hot dogs three days in a row. What

99、s worse, the staff are rude to us when we make selections.I believe these complaints can be fixed if you take action.Thank you for taking the time to consider my requests.Yours,Li Hua.概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Does writing come hard to you? Are you discouraged to find yourself poor at writing? N

100、obody is born knowing how to write. Good writing habits, which help make you write on a regular basis, are necessary for you to improve your writing.Firstly, you are supposed to read a wide range of books. When a writer is not well-read lack of reading will be obvious in every sentence one writes. R

101、eading prepares you with necessary knowledge to be a good writer. Whats more, it provides you with basic skills for writing. The importance of reading cannot be stressed too much: read as much and as often as you can.Secondly, its important to make a writing schedule and write daily if it is possibl

102、e. Whether you write for two hours a day or fifteen minutes a day, daily writing is the key to developing good writing habits. Its better to write for fifteen or twenty minutes every day than to sit for five or six hours to write over the weekend. However, if you can make a daily writing schedule wi

103、th longer hours on your writing on weekends, then its much better.One of the worst habits is never to get help from others to improve your writing. It is advised that you share your work with others. For example, you can send your writing to a few friends, round up some readers and let them comment

104、on your writing. That way, youll find your writing gradually improved.答案写作提示文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰,以自然段为基础概括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体的做法。One possible version:Good writing habits contribute a lot to improving your writing.(要点1)First,you should read as much as possible to get the knowledge and

105、 skills for writing.(要点2)You should also make a writing plan and keep up your daily writing.(要点3)Besides,youd better turn to others for help to improve your writing.(要点4)题组十.应用文假定你是李华,在网上看到英国Kings School有关远程教育课程(Distance Learning Courses)的信息,你对其中某一门课程很感兴趣,决定给该校负责人写一封信,询问这门课程的具体情况,内容包括:1.课程开设时间、内容等;2

106、.课程报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.要点有三个:课程开设的时间、内容和报名方式。2.题目说明部分的背景信息也要包括在写作中。3.句式多样化。4.要点之间的连接要合理顺畅。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,The other day, I came across your Distance Learning Courses when surfing the Internet. Interested in the English Writing Course, Im writing to ask for

107、more details.My first concern is when the course starts and how long it lasts. I also wonder what the course is actually about and how it is arranged. Besides, could you tell me what I should do if I decide to sign up?Looking forward to your earliest reply.Yours,Li Hua.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整

108、的故事。Simple ThanksI have been in the teaching profession for more than thirty years, and one of the best teachers I have ever known is Mr. Rowe. I was lucky enough to co-teach fourth grade with him.Mr. Rowe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him. He could perf

109、orm miracles, like the one he performed with Steven, one of the unhappiest kids I ever saw. Steven couldnt stand school. He didnt like being picked last for kickball. He didnt like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers, and most importantly, he didnt like himself.The first day he

110、walked into Mr. Rowes classroom, he ignored the other students, looking angry and annoyed, and slid into his chair, knocking a couple of textbooks onto the floor.Mr. Rowe walked over to him and touched Stevens shoulder, but Steven pulled away. Nevertheless, Mr. Rowe welcomed him, “Hi, Steven. Im hap

111、py you are in my class. We are gonna have a great year.” Steven looked around the room as if Mr. Rowe must be mistaken. No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his class.So, while Mr. Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school, it seemed like Steven was angry and confus

112、ed.That day, Mr. Rowe chose Steven to pitch the kickball at recess. “Hey, Steven,” Mr. Rowe commented. “you are good at pitching. Let me show you my secret trick.” Mr. Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform. Steven learned fast and did quite well! Everyone cheered f

113、or him!After the kickball, Steven sat as close to Mr. Rowe in classes as he could. When a question was asked, Stevens eyes lit up; he knew the answer! He raised his hands. When he was answering the question, his voice shook. However, he got the answer right! He said, with Mr. Rowe, his days of the f

114、ourth grade promised wonderful.That was not to say that every day went smoothly, but it was evident that Steven grew to love Mr. Rowe more and more with each passing day.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Time passed quickly that ye

115、ar, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.Paragraph 2:Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps(海军)uniform.答案写作提示根据文章的发展以及续写第一段的提示句可知本段应该描写毕业那一天的事情。此处要重点描述Steven在离别前的心情和行动。而第二段要描写Steven从军后来学校的情况

116、。两段的描写都要表现出老师的伟大和学生的进步,这样的发展情节才符合原文的主题。One possible version:Paragraph 1:Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school. Our school had a very special tradition on the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pull

117、ed out with their horns honking. But on that particular day, Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes. He boarded the bus reluctantly, and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe. “I dont want to leave you,” he sobbed. With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will

118、miss you, too.”Paragraph 2:Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps(海军)uniform. The young man stood tall and proud. It was Steven! Mr. Rowe and I couldnt believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! “I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!” It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back simply to say THANKS. 39 / 39