广西钦州八年级上学期英语12月考试卷附答案.docx

1、广西钦州高新区2021-2021学年八年级上学期英语12月考试卷一、完形填空1.阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给四个选项A、B、C和D中，选出可以填入空白处的最正确选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 Last week our school held a sports meeting. Everyone in our class felt very 1 because we 2 many matches. In the boys relay race, Michael 3 very fast and our class won the first place. Alice did well 4 th

2、e long jump and she also won. Were sorry that we did 5 in the high jump than other classes, but were sure we could do better next time. I took part in the boys 6 race. I did my best and was the first 7 the finish line. This encouraged 8 a lot. Now I love sports better and I think nothing makes me 9

3、than taking exercise everyday and I believe some day I 10 able to be the best soccer player and take part in the Olympic Games.1. A. happilyB. worriedC. relaxingD. excited2. A. beatedB. beatC. wonD. lost3. A. runB. runsC. ranD. was running4. A. forB. inC. atD. to5. A. betterB. worstC. badderD. worse

4、6. A. 400-meterB. 400 metersC. 400 meterD. 400-meters7. A. passedB. to passC. passD. passing8. A. meB. himC. herD. us9. A. more strongerB. more comfortableC. more confidentD. more careful10. A. amB. beC. will beD. was二、阅读理解2.根据短文内容，选择最正确答案。1What time do western people usually have dinner? A.About mi

5、ddayB.At 5:00 in the afternoonC.Around 7 p.m. or even later.D.Before 7:00 in the afternoon2What will a host probably say to a guest at the start of a meal? A.“Can I help you?B.“Eat slowly!C.“Help yourself!D.“Could you serve me?3When might people want to say, “Im sorry, I cant eat this.? A.If theyve

6、been given something they dont like.B.If they are full.C.If the hosts keep offering a lot of food to them.D.If they are not hungry.3.根据短文内容，选择最正确答案。 My name is Lisa. Because of my job, I often went to the United States. I often felt worried during my trip because I didnt speak English well. So I dec

7、ided to learn English. I went to Mrs Browns English class. Before I came to the class, I always walked away when I met any Americans. But now I try to talk to Americans in English. And I like going to supermarkets, cafes and restaurants to talk with local people. I learn English in four ways. First

8、, I listen to the teacher carefully and keep speaking in class. Second, I do my homework after I get home. I learn at least five words every day. Third, I listen to American radio and watch American TV programs. Finally, I surf the Internet to talk with different people in English. To learn English

9、well, I think you must learn to open your mouth. For me that is the key to opening the door of learning English.1Where did Lisa often visit? 2Why did Lisa feel worried during the trip to the United States? A.Because she didnt like travelling by plane.B.Because she didnt speak English well.C.Because

10、she didnt like to meet different people.D.Because she couldnt sleep well.3Whats the key to opening the door of studying English for Lisa? A.Listening to American radio and watch American TV.B.Learning to talk to Americans in English.C.Listening carefully in class.D.Learning at least five words every

11、 day.4Which of the following is NOT TRUE? A.Lisa liked to talk to Americans in English better than before.B.Lisa tells us five ways of learning English.C.Mrs Browns class was a great help to Lisa.D.Lisa speaks a lot in Mrs Browns class.4.根据短文内容，选择最正确答案。 Taiwan island, the biggest island of China, is

12、 between the South and East China Seas. Almost two-thirds of the island is covered by mountains. Traveling in Taiwan, you can do lots of things. In Taipei, you can taste all kinds of delicious food . Standing at the top of Taipei 101, the worlds tallest building until now, you can get a view of the

13、whole city. Taiwan has nice natural landscape as well. Sun and Moon Lake is a beautiful lake. On one side of the island it looks like the sun, on the other side it looks like the moon. That is why people call the lake the Sun and Moon Lake. Ali Mountain is the nearest mountain around Sun and Moon La

14、ke. You can enjoy a nice experience with Gaoshan people. Its a wonderful place to see a very beautiful sunrise. If you enjoy swimming, fishing, boating and eating delicious fruit and fresh fish, Peng Lake must be a good place to visit. Everywehere in Taiwan, you can see mountains, valleys(山谷), and h

15、ot springs, together with fields of rice, oranges and tea.1What is “Taipei 101 in the passage? A.A large lake.B.A big city.C.A high mountain.D.A tall building.2What does the underlined word “landscape meaning? A.delicious food3Where can you enjoy a nice experience with Gaoshan people? A.In Taipei.B.

16、In Peng Lake.C.On Ali Mountain.D.In the East Rift Valley.4The passage tells us _. A.Taiwan has many beautiful valleys, hot springs and lakes.B.Taiwan has many big cities, old temples and tall buildings.C.Taiwan has much nice human , natural landscape and delicious food.D.Taiwan has many high mountai

17、ns fields and hot springs.5.根据短文内容，选择最正确答案。 The city Bank was broken into yesterday at 8 p.m. The police were asking two men, John Smith and his brother Joseph Smith.A policeman interviewed John SmithJohn Smith was asked, “What did you do last night? He answered, “ I was with my brother, Joseph, all

18、 the time. I arrived at my brothers house at about 6:45 and we watched TV until about 7:30. We watched the news and a baseball game. Then we walked into the town centre and had a meal at a restaurant. I cant remember the name of the restaurant. It was a big one, but it was almost empty. We both had

19、fish and chips. We left there at 8:40 and walked back to Josephs house.The statement is true.Signed: John SmithA Policeman Interviewed Joseph SmithJoseph Smith was asked, What did you do last night? He answered, “I was with John all the time. John came to my house at fifteen to seven, and then we wa

20、tched TV for about 45 minutes. We watched a movie about a basketball player, but I cant remember the name of the movie. Then we took a taxi to a restaurant. I forget what the restaurant is called. There were not many people there. I had steak and chips, and John had chicken. We left there at twenty

21、to nine and we went back to my house. The statement is true. Signed: Joseph Smith1The policeman wanted to find the person who _ A.told a lieB.knew the thiefC.went into the bankD.stole the baseball2John and Joseph are _ A.boss and workerC.policeman and thief3The two men told the police the same thing

22、 about _ A.How they got to the restaurantB.The time they left the restaurantC.What they ateD.The TV programmes4The two men didnt _ A.eat at a restaurant last nightB.watch a movie on TVC.know the name of the restaurantD.like to eat chips三、补全对话最正确选项完成对话，有两项多余。A: Hi, Zhang Li. what are you going to do

23、next week?B. Hi, Liu Lei! _A. Where does she live?A. Where is your hometown?B._.A. Whats the population of your hometown?A.Is your hometown newer than before?B. Yes, it is. And its more beautiful.A._ can you show me some photos of your hometown when you come back?B. No problem.A. She lives in my hom

24、etown.B. What is it famous for?C. Im going to see my grandma.D. Its in the south of GuangdongE. Whats the weather like in your hometown?F. Thats great.G. Its about 50 thousand.四、任务型阅读7.阅读短文，完成问题 There are many kinds of 1. transportation now. Which one do you like best, by train, by bus or by plane?

25、Now lets look at these three kinds of transportation. 2.The fastest way to travel is by plane. If you want to save time, 3.乘火车是最好的选择. A plane ticket can also be easier to book, and there are 4.(hundred) of planes leaving half an hour to everywhere. But it is much 5.(expensive) than traveling by trai

26、n or by car. Many people prefer to traveling together by train. Because the train is cheaper than the plane and you can see the beautiful scenery out of the windows. But sometimes people are very noisy on the train. And its very small and crowded inside the train. Taking a car is great. You can feel

27、 freer in your own car and you can move quickly from place to place at any time you like. 6.But sometimes you may be late because of the heavy traffic .You have to pay for a car park and petrol . Cars are less comfortable than trains. You cant sleep or relax when you drive. Cars pollute the air more

28、 than trains, too.11 处画线单词的汉语意思是：_ 22 处画线局部提问： _the fastest way _ _? 33处翻译成英语：_ 44,5 处所给词的适当形式填空：4_ 5_ 56处变为同义句：But sometimes you may be late _ the traffic _ heavy. 五、选词填空8.选词填空。interesting, with, please, fly, enjoy, quick, south, for, have, it Last year, I went England to study for three months. Th

29、e first station was Cambridge - a city _ is a university and famous _ the university. I visited some places of _ in the morning and took English lessons in the afternoon. To me, the _ thing to do in Cambridge is boating along the River Cam. It is really beautiful. I stayed with an English family as

30、a guest. After class, we could take part in their daily life or take trips by ourselves. My English was poor but the family kept communicating with me in English. With their help, My spoken English improved _. Day by day, I was more_ with my conversation with them. Then I got to London, the capital

31、city of England it is also the busiest city in England, _ a population of 7.5 million and a history of 2000 years. On the middle and _ area, there are plenty of farms. The weather is fine all the year round and I notice the countryside is green everywhere! Time _ while I was in England. Soon Christm

32、as came, we decorated the Christmas tree, wore new clothes tasted delicious food and said “Merry Christmas to friends or even strangers. It was really amazing! The next day, I _to return home, however, there was only one thing I didnt do: it was a pity that I didnt take the London Eye to see the who

33、le city on the clear days!六、翻译9.根据汉语意思完成句子。 1我住得离学校最远。I live _ _ school.2我想早起床，是为了不错过早班车。I want to get up early _ _ I wont miss the early bus.3她看起来不如玛丽年轻。She doesnt look _ _ _ Mary.4吉姆看起来很累，他怎么了？Jim looks tired. Whats _ _ _ him?5为何不去问问老师呢？_ _ you go and ask the teacher?七、书面表达10.假设你是Betty, 你的外国笔友Lind

34、a 准备来中国旅游，不知道去哪里好。请你给她回一封Email.要求： 推荐给Linda 适合旅游的地点，并说明理由，同时给出一些建议或者本卷须知。字数：70词左右。Dear Linda,I think youll have a good time in China!Yours,Betty答案解析局部一、完形填空1.【解析】【分析】这篇短文中作者给我们介绍了他们学校举行的运动会，作者的班赢了很多比赛，他们都非常的兴奋。作者也参加了400米比赛，获得了第一名，这让他更加热爱运动，对未来充满希望。1D考查形容词及语境的理解。句意：我们班每个人都感到非常兴奋，因为我们赢了很多比赛。happily 快乐

35、地；worried担忧地； relaxing 令人放松的；excited兴奋的。根据句意我们赢了很多比赛，因此感到兴奋。应选D。2C考查动词及语境的理解。句意：我们班每个人都感到非常兴奋，因为我们赢了很多比赛。beated形式错误，beat的过去式是beat；beat打败，后面跟人；won是win的过去式，赢；lost输。根据下句话won the first placealso won等可知，作者的班里赢了很多比赛，应选C。3C考查动词及语境的理解。句意：Michael跑得很快，我们班赢得了第一名。run 跑，动词原形；runs 是第三人称单数形式；ran 是过去式；was running过去

36、进行时。根据文意可知，这篇短文记叙的是过去的事情，全文使用的是一般过去时态，故应选C。4B考查介词及语境的理解。句意：Alice跳远很棒，她也赢了比赛。for 为了，因为；in 在里面；at 在具体地点或时刻；to到。这句话中使用的短语是do well in，在某方面表现好，故应选B。5D考查形容词及语境的理解。句意：我们很遗憾在跳高这个工程上我们不如其他班级。better更好；worst 是bad的最高级形式，最糟糕的；badder形式错误，bad的比较级是worse；worse是bad的比较级，更糟糕的。根据句中的Were sorry以及than可知，这里应使用比较级形式，而且意思是表现差

37、，应选D。6A考查复合形容词及语境的理解。句意：我参加了男子400米比赛。400-meter400米的；400 meters400米；400 meter形式错误，meter应该用复数形式；400-meters形式错误。空后面的race是一个名词，因此这里应该用合成词400-meter的，应选A。7B考查非谓语动词及语境的理解。句意：我尽了我的最大努力，是第一个过线的人。passed 是过去式；to pass 是动词不定式形式；pass 动词原形；passing是现在分词形式。这里使用的句型是the first to do sth.第一个去做某事的人。应选B。8A考查代词及语境的理解。句意：这大

38、大地鼓励了我。me 我，宾格；him 他，宾格；her 她，宾格；us我们，宾格。根据文意可知，作者在400米跑比赛中获得了第一名，因此这极大地鼓励了他，故应选A。9B考查形容词及语境的理解。句意：现在我更加喜欢运动了，我想没有什么事情能比每天锻炼更让我感到舒服的了。more stronger形式错误，stronger是比较级形式，前面不能再用more；more comfortable 更舒服；more convenient 更方便的；more careful更小心的。根据文意可知选B。10C考查动词及语境的理解。句意：我相信有一天我将会成为最好的足球运发动，而且会参加奥运会。am 是be动词

39、的形式，用于主语是I的时候，一般现在时态；be 是动词原形；must be 一定是；was是be动词的过去式，一般过去时态。someday指将来的某一天，因此这句话应使用一般将来时态，应选C。【点评】考查词汇在篇章中的运用能力，答题时首先要跳过空格通读文章掌握其大意，然后细读文章字斟句酌逐一作答，注意考虑句型、语法、搭配、语境等因素。最后通读一遍检查验证。二、阅读理解2.【解析】【分析】不同的文化在饮食上有不同的礼仪，当和西方人一起吃饭的时候，应该注意些什么呢？听说过When in Rome, do as the Romans do这句话吗？意思就是：入乡随俗。1C细节理解题。根据短文中Din

40、ner=7 p.m. or even later可知，在西方国家里，他们的晚饭时间是在晚上7点或者更晚的时候。应选C。2C细节理解题。根据短文中At the start of a meal: the guest will be invited to serve himself (help yourself) or his plate will be filled by the host(can I serve you)可知，在开始吃饭的时候，主人会对客人说：随便吃。应选C。3A细节理解题。根据短文中Refusing food中Given something you dont like? Im

41、sorry I cant eat this可知，如果主人给了你一些你不喜欢吃的东西，你就可以说：抱歉我不能吃这个。由此可知应选A。【点评】本文属于应用文阅读，此类文章重在考查对细节信息的查找和分析，答题时注意根据问题中的关键词在文章中定位，然后分析关键词所在句子的信息，与选项进行比对，答案就显而易见了。3.【解析】【分析】学习英语对于很多人来说都是一件很困难的事，作者也有这个担忧。因为工作的原因，他经常去美国，但是他英语说得不好。后来他去上了Brown夫人的课，慢慢改变了。他告诉我们，翻开学好英语这扇大门的钥匙就是要开口说英语。1D细节理解题。根据短文的开头 Because of my job

42、, I often went to the United States可知，作者因为工作的原因，经常去美国。由此可知应选D。2B 细节理解题。根据短文第一段中I often felt worried during my trip because I didnt speak English well.可知，作者在去美国的路途上经常会感到担忧，因为他英语说得不好。由此可知选B。3B 推理判断题。根据短文的最后一段中To learn English well, I think you must learn to open your mouth. For me that is the key to o

43、pening the door of learning English.可知，作者告诉我们，要想学好英语，你就必须张开你的嘴，这是翻开学习英语大门的钥匙。意思就是告诉我们要开口用英语去和美国人交流。由此可知B选项正确。4B推理判断题。根据短文第三段的内容可知，这一段中作者介绍了四种学习英语的方法，他用了FirstSecond.Third和Finally，故B选项错误，选B。根据短文第二段中Before I came to the class, I always walked away when I met any Americans. But now I try to talk to Amer

44、icans in English可知A说的是对的；根据I went to Mrs Browns English class可知，作者去了Brown夫人的英语课后，他就变了，因此Brown夫人的课对作者是有帮助的，故C说的对；根据文意可知，作者说翻开学习英语的大门的钥匙是开口说英语，因此作者肯定也是这么做的，故D对。【点评】本文属于故事类阅读，阅读时要紧扣故事的时间线索，弄清文章的主旨大意。答题时注意问题中的关键词在文章中的准确定位，根据关键词查找信息。4.【解析】【分析】这篇短文中作者给我们介绍了去台湾旅行，在台湾你可以做很多事情，可以在世界最高建筑上欣赏整个台北市的风景。在台湾还有很多美丽的

45、风景，如日月潭、阿里山、澎湖湾等。1D 细节理解题。根据短文第二段中Standing at the top of Taipei 101, the worlds tallest building until now, you can get a view of the whole city.可知，台北101是目前为止世界上最高的建筑，因此应选D。2B词义猜测题。根据短文第三段的内容可知，这一段中作者介绍了台北的一些美丽的风景，如Sun and Moon Lake日月潭、Ali Mountain 阿里山、Peng Lake 澎湖湾等。由此可推断landscape这个单词的意思是风景，和scener

46、y同义，应选B。3C细节理解题。根据短文第三段中 Ali Mountain is the nearest mountain around Sun and Moon Lake. You can enjoy a nice experience with Gaoshan people可知，阿里山是日月潭周围最近的山，在那里你可以享受和高山族的人们在一起。由此可知应选C。4C主旨大意题。这篇短文中作者给我们介绍了去台湾旅行，在台湾你可以做很多事情，可以在世界最高建筑上欣赏整个台北市的风景。在台湾还有很多美丽的风景，如日月潭、阿里山、澎湖湾等。结合选项可知应选C。【点评】本文属于说明文，阅读时首先确定文

47、章的中心句，然后快速浏览文章内容。阅读问题，找到问题中的关键词。在文章中定位问题中的关键词，答案就在关键词附近。5.【解析】【分析】城市的银行被抢了，警察对两个有嫌疑的人John 和Joseph进行了审讯，让他们表达昨天晚上做了什么。兄弟两人的说法有不一样的地方。1C推理判断题。根据短文的开头可知，市里的银行在昨晚8点的时候被抢了，警察想要找到作案的人。他们疑心John Smith和他的哥哥Joseph Smith。因此应选C。2D细节理解题。根据短文第一段中The police were asking two men, John Smith and his brother Joseph Sm

48、ith可知，John和Joseph是兄弟。由此可知应选D。3B细节理解题。根据短文中John和Joseph兄弟两人对警察说的话可知，他们在口供中都说到他们是在晚上8点40别离开了餐馆。因此应选B。4C推理判断题。通过比照John和Joseph两人的口供可知，他们都提到不知道餐馆的名字，因此应选C。【点评】本文属于故事类阅读，阅读时要紧扣故事的时间线索，弄清文章的主旨大意。答题时注意问题中的关键词在文章中的准确定位，根据关键词查找信息，切忌主观臆断，凭感觉做题三、补全对话6.【解析】【分析】1C句意：-你好，张丽，下周你打算去做什么？-你好，刘磊，我打算去看我的奶奶。根据张丽所问的What ar

49、e you going to do next week可知，这里我们应选择这个问题的答案。应选C。2A句意：-她住在哪儿？-她住在我的家乡。根据上句话张丽的问题可知，这里我们应该用表示地点的介词短语来答复这个问题，得有关键词live，故应选A。3D句意：-你的家乡在哪里？-就在广东的南部。根据上一个问题可知，这里我们应答复刘磊的家乡在什么地方，应该有表示地点的词，故应选D。4G句意：-你的家乡有多少人口？-大约5万人。根据上面的问题可知，这里张丽问的是人口的数量，因此答语中应该用数词，故应选G。5F句意：-太棒了，当你回来的时候你能不能让我看一看你家乡的照片？-没问题。根据对话的意思可知，张丽

50、非常喜欢刘磊的家乡，这个空是对家乡的评论语，因此应选F。【点评】补全对话考查日常交际用语的应用，要紧扣话题，根据上下文逻辑关系进行准确判断。四、任务型阅读7.【解析】【分析】现在有各种各样的交通工具，汽车、火车、飞机等。每种交通形式都有它的好处和缺点，如飞机旅行速度非常快，买票也很方便，但是太贵；火车票比飞机更廉价，但是有时候会太吵；开汽车会更加自由，但是不如坐火车更舒服，而且需要加油，还会污染空气。1根据下文中提到的Which one do you like best, by train, by bus or by plane?可知，这里的train, bus, plane等都是交通工具，由

51、此可知transportation是交通工具的意思。故答案为交通工具。2原句的意思是：旅行最快的方式是坐飞机。根据原句的意思可知，这里应问旅行最快的方式是什么，故疑问词应该是What，后面跟助动词is，原句中的to travel照抄。故答案为Whats ，to，travel。3根据原句的意思可知，这句话的主语是乘坐火车，travel是动词，做主语的时候，应该用动名词形式，谓语动词用单数；the best way最好的方式，最好的选择。故答案为Traveling by train is the best way.4句意：飞机票很容易预定，飞往各个地方的几百架飞机每隔半个小时都会起飞。hundre

52、ds of 是固定短语，成百的；句意：但是它比乘坐火车或者是汽车要更贵。根据句意和句中的than可知，这里应用比较级形式，故填more expensive。5句意：但是有时候你会迟到，因为交通拥挤。原句中是because of短语，后面跟名词形式；这里是用because 引导的原因状语从句。故答案为because, is。【点评】任务型阅读的关键在看懂文章，然后根据题目要求作答，注意尽量用文章的语言填写答案。在文章中找不到答案时，要完全理解句子，根据同义词，句型转换的方式找到可以替换文章中的单词，短语或者句子的词。五、选词填空8.【解析】【分析】去年作者去英国学习了三个月，这段时间他感到非常的

53、开心。他去了剑桥，在康河上泛舟，和寄宿家庭住在一起，提高了英语口语；还去了伦敦，在那里过圣诞节。1itself句意：第一站是剑桥，一个城市本身就是一所大学，它因为它的大学而知名。it 是人称代词，根据句意可知，这里代替的是剑桥这个城市本身，故用反身代词itself。2for句意：第一站是剑桥，一个城市本身就是一所大学，它因为它的大学而知名。这里be famous for 是固定短语，因为而知名，故填for。3interest句意：上午我参观了很多名胜古迹，下午上英语课。这里places of interest 是固定短语，名胜古迹，interest是不可数名词，不用复数形式。4enjoyabl

54、e句意：对我来说在剑桥最愉快的事情就是在康河上泛舟。enjoyable令人愉快的，根据下句话It is beautiful可知，作者觉得康河非常漂亮，因此这是愉快的事。enjoyable 是enjoy的形容词形式，做定语，修饰thing。5quickly 句意：在他们的帮助下，我的口语提高得很快。quickly 是quick 的副词形式，在这句话中修饰动词improved。6pleased句意：一天天过去了，我非常喜欢跟他们谈话。pleased是please的形容词形式，快乐的，这里是短语be pleased with，对喜欢或满意。7with句意：然后我去了伦敦，英国的首都，也是英国最繁忙的

55、城市，有750万人口和2000多年的历史。with a population of是固定短语，有人口。8southern句意：在中部和南部有很多的农场。southern是south的形容词形式，南部的，修饰后面的名词area。9flew句意：我在英国的时间过得很快。flew是fly的过去式，飞，飞逝。这篇短文使用的是一般过去时态，故应填过去式flew。10had句意：第二天我不得不回家了。had 是have 的过去式，这里have to 的意思是不得不，全文使用的是一般过去时态，故填had。【点评】考查根底知识的运用。对于此类题目, 首先要对句意充分的理解, 平时根本的语法点要掌握。对于平时的

56、学习要多积累, 答题时结合句意和语法进行分析, 答完后通读, 是否通顺, 符合逻辑。六、翻译9.【解析】【分析】1farthest from离最远，是固定短语，farthest是far的最高级形式，是副词，修饰动词live，前面可以不用the。2so that为的是，引导目的状语从句。3as young as和一样年轻，表示同级比较，两个as之间用形容词的原级。用于否认句时，第一个as可以用so，表示不如，比不上。4the matter with这里Whats the matter with?是固定的句型，怎么了？出什么问题了？matter是名词，问题，毛病。5Why dont是表示提建议的一

57、个句型，为什么不?【点评】考查根底知识的运用。对于此类题目, 首先要对句意充分的理解, 平时根本的语法点要掌握。对于平时的学习要多积累, 答题时结合句意和语法进行分析, 答完后通读, 是否通顺, 符合逻辑。七、书面表达10.【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求我们以Betty的身份给Linda写一封信，因为Linda要来中国旅游，她不知道去哪里，我们应在短文中给她一些建议，并说明理由，告诉她一些本卷须知。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目中只给了写作的话题，但是具体的内容还需要学生们自己补充完整，自己去完善，这对于学生们而言是一个难点。写作时，还应注意使用正确的时态和人称，注意英语的表达标准，不要逐句翻译，写

58、汉语式的英语。还应使用一些平时积累的好的词或短语，在句子之间使用一些连词，使文章的意思连贯，表达流畅。【点评】这是一篇较好的英语作文。短文里按照题目的要求，给Linda推荐了来中国旅游的目的地，并阐述了理由，提醒Linda一些本卷须知。短文的内容比较完整，符合题目的要求，使用了正确的时态和人称，语法标准，语言准确。短文里使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如There are many places of interest in China. But I want you to come to Beijing.、If you come to Beijing ,you can go to the Summer palace、Youd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam on the road.、Taking subway is more convenient等，这些句型的使用非常正确，也提高了文章的档次。