2023届新教材高考英语全程一轮复习 写作规范练（五）.docx

1、40分写作规范练(五)写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)2022石家庄市高三教学质量检测(二)你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“我最喜欢的季节”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1喜欢的季节；2喜欢的原因。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。My Favorite Season_第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。2022武汉部分学校高三起点质量检测The easy way out isnt always the easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to tr

2、eat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled e

3、verything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough (生面团) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldnt have to face Dads blame.I went on preparing the

4、rest of the meal, and when Dad got home we sat down to eat the meal. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the window to see what he was doing.Looking out, I saw Dad standing about thre

5、e feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt scared. But I s

6、tepped closer and looked harder.Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast (酵母) made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the “living thing” was and why it was there. I didnt know who was more embar

7、rassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式作答。My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside._ _At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread._ _40分写作规范练(五)第一节参考范文：My Favorite SeasonHi, everybody. Among the four seasons, I like autumn most. Not only is

8、 it beautiful, but also its an enjoyable time when people enjoy their fruits of labor.When autumn approaches, the beauty of nature is breathtaking with leaves turning into diverse colors of red, orange and purple. Im always fascinated by its scenery. Besides, autumn provides us with an opportunity t

9、o feel the sweetness of laboring together with farmers. The very thought of tasty fruits and fresh vegetables makes my mouth water.So autumn is my favorite season. What is yours?一句多译Of the four seasons, autumn is my favourite season.With autumn approaching, the beauty of nature is breathtaking with

10、leaves turning into diverse colors of red, orange and purple.写作思路：语篇类型：应用文。题目要求写一篇演讲比赛的发言稿，介绍自己最喜欢的季节。时态：一般现在时为主，其他时态为辅。写作布局：第一段开门见山，说明自己最喜欢的季节；第二段为主题段，具体说明喜欢某个季节的原因；第三段为结尾段，询问其他人的情况。第二节参考范文：My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside. Sitting back to our meal (非谓语动词短语), Dad, smiling

11、ly, updated me on recent events in his work without a mere mention of the crazy dough wildly dancing outside(现在分词短语作后置定语)，which served wonderfully as a gentle embarrassment reliever (非限制性定语从句). However, while doing the dishes after dinner, Dad said to me with firmness in his voice, “You dont have to

12、 be an expert on making bread, but you do have to do your research before taking action. There is no such thing as an easy way out.” And that was the starting point of my journey of making the perfect bread.At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread. The rest of the night slipped

13、 away, filled with inquiries about my secret recipe (非谓语动词短语). Yet, hardly was there a different answer other than (倒装结构)“Beauty comes from balance and patience.” To be frank, that was exactly what Id learnt during my numerous experiments (表语从句). An amazing loaf of bread required suitable balance of

14、 ingredients as well as enormous patience of waiting for the dough to rise. Countless as my failures to make tasty bread were (倒装结构), every single moment of them was cherished. Along the journey, Ive developed from the man whose dough sighed in a dustbin (定语从句) to the man whose bread made your taste buds dance (定语从句).