江苏省南京市2015-2020届高考三模英语试题精选汇编：书面表达专题.doc

1、 书面表达专题江苏省南京市2020届高三英语第三次模拟考试试题第五部分 书面表达（满分25分）61.请阅读下面材料，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。D-daughter M-mommyD:Mommy,are you leaving home again?M:Yes,honey.Mommy is going to fight a monster!D:A monster?Is it scarier than a big roaring tiger?Oh my!”M:Wellyes!A lot scarier!Its called Virus.Many people are working

2、 hard to defeat the monster.D:Who are they?”M:Theyre the scientists who are working on new medicines to cure the ill and the construction workers who are building new hospitals for patients as fast as possible.They are the delivery people who are delivering masks to everyone in need,risking being ca

3、ught by the virus monsters,tooThey are all ordinary people,including volunteers,but now they are also powerful soldiers;they are the bravest fighters and they are heroes!D:They are so brave!But mommy,are you scared?M: Yes,everyone is scared.Mommys too.But if no one goes to fight the monster,there wi

4、ll be more monsters,and the monsters will be even more aggressive,and they may defeat us all.”D:But mommyI dont want you to leave me.”M:Baby,mommy doesnt want to leave you either.Sweetie,do you know whatto be brave means?To be brave is to do the right thing even if you are really scared.?D:Mommy,Ill

5、 be brave,too.I want to be a doctor when I grow up,and I will fight the monsters together with you.”【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述对话内容；2.谈谈你对“勇士”的理解；3.写出谁是你心目中的“勇士”，并简要陈述理由（至少两点）。【写作要求】1.表明个人观点，同时提供理由或论据；2.阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文中的句子；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【答案】A mother explains to he

6、r daughter why she leaves home to fight against the virus monsters like ordinary heroes, sparking her ambition to fight like a soldier. (27 words)Personally, heroes refer to people from all walks of life who perform their duties faithfully whatever the situations. They play an irreplaceable role in

7、any critical moment. Dangerous and urgent scenes can bring out their best, such as courage, responsibility and commitment.Heroes in my heart are my teachers. After the outbreak of the virus, they rise to the challenge of live streaming lectures and grading assignments online. Not only do they have t

8、o adapt themselves to the new teaching model but they make enormous sacrifices as well. Besides, serving as the essential role of imparting knowledge to their students, they offer immediate assistance in terms of mental relief and comfort.To conclude, those who do their own parts whole-heartedly des

9、erve our credit and admiration.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读写任务，要求概述对话内容，并发表自己的看法。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求概述对话内容并发表自己的看法：1.用约30个单词概述上述对话内容；2.谈谈你对“勇士”的理解；3.写出谁是你心目中的“勇士”，并简要陈述理由（至少两点）。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； faithfully（忠诚地），hero（勇士、英雄），critical（关键的），urgent（紧急的）， outbreak（爆发），sacrifice（牺牲），admiration （钦佩），dese

10、rve （值得），assistance（援助），irreplaceable（不可替代的）及enormous（巨大的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against（与作斗争），from all walks of life（来自各行各业），perform ones duty (尽职)，serve as（充当、起的作用），refer to（涉及），adapt

11、 oneself to（使自己适应），as well（还）以及in terms of（在方面），而且还使用了定语从句“To conclude, those who do their own parts whole-heartedly deserve our credit and admiration.”，宾语从句“A mother explains to her daughter why she leaves home to fight against the virus monsters like ordinary heroes, sparking her ambition to fight

12、 like a soldier.”，倒装句“Not only do they have to adapt themselves to the new teaching model but they make enormous sacrifices as well.”，非谓语动词“Besides, serving as the essential role of imparting knowledge to their students, they offer immediate assistance in terms of mental relief and comfort.”，全文没有语法错

13、误，上下句转换自然流畅。江苏省南京市2019届高三英语三模考试试题第五部分：书面表达（满分 25 分）61.请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。The Palace Museum, as known as the Forbidden City, began selling souvenirs and other peripheral ( 周边的 ) products on Alibabas Taobao in October 2010. The latest statistics show sales reached 1.5 billion yuan in 201

14、7, said Shan Jixiang, the Former museum curator (馆长).Meanwhile, the number of cultural and creative products available for sale at the Palace Museum increased from 195 in 2013 to 9,170 in 2016.“The income from the cultural and creative industries made it possible for the Palace Museum to hold 62,000

15、 educational activities in 2018, bringing more visitors to our museum,” Shan added.The Number of Visitors (million per year)【写作内容】1. 用约 30 个单词概括图表及文字的内容；2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：（1）故宫推出文化创作产品的意义（不少于两点（2）你想为故宫文化创作推出一款什么样的产品（上图仅供参考）并作简要说明。【写作要求】1.表明个人观点，同时提供理由或论据；2.阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文中的句子；3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学

16、校名称；4.不必写标题。【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适合_【答案】The Palace Museum has witnessed a sharp rise in the sales of its cultural and creative products.Meanwhile, the number of visitors has increased dramatically in the past few years as well. (32W) The benefits we enjoy from promoting cultural products far exce

17、ed our imagination. Firstly, these inventive art works function as ambassadors to spread our splendid culture, extending Chinese cultural influence and building up our cultural confidence. In addition, profits gained from the sales of artistic souvenirs can be spent on the restoration of cultural re

18、lics and the organization of educational activities which in turn will attract more visitors.To jump on the bandwagon of promoting Chinese culture, I will design a set of bookmarks with images of palaces or emperors on them. It not only is of practical use but also serves as a reminder of sweet memo

19、ries at the Palace Museum. I hope my design will be a useful addition to those cultural and creative art works.( 127w)【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封说明文；1. 用约 30 个单词概括图表及文字的内容；2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：（1）故宫推出文化创作产品的意义（不少于两点）；（2）你想为故宫文化创作推出一款什么样的产品（上图仅供参考）并作简要说明。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：The Palace

20、Museum（故宫），the number of（总数），exceed our imagination（超出想象），inventive art works（别出心裁的艺术作品）；splendid（灿烂的；辉煌的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The benefits we enjoy from promoting cultural products f

21、ar exceed our imagination.运用了主语从句；In addition, profits gained from the sales of artistic souvenirs can be spent on the restoration of cultural relics and the organization of educational activities which in turn will attract more visitors.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章

22、增色添彩。江苏省南京市2018届高三第三次（5月）模拟考试英语试题第五部分书面表达(满分25分)81.请认真阅读下面这幅图片及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述图片和文字的主要内容;2.用约120个单词阐述你的观点，内容包括：(1)对“设立家规”这一做法的认识（至少两点）;(2)请列举一条你家的家规以及你对它的理解。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。第五部分书面表达（满分25分） 81. One possible ver

23、sionDue to their childs lying aboutthe exam, a couple have a thorough discussion and decide to list some familyrules, which they think will help regulate his behavior. (29 words)Familyrules are an effective tool for motivating and disciplining children. First ofall, under the guidance of family rule

24、s, every child in the family will become clear about parentsexpectations. In addition, family rules help children understand what behaviorsare acceptable, which can help children learn to observe rules in other places.My family also has a list of familyrules, which apply to not only me but also my p

25、arents. For instance, one ofthem is “Pick up after yourself”. We are expected to put away our stuff afterwe are done with it. It enhances household safety and cleanliness, helping medevelop a good habit of keeping clean. So lets work together to obey the family rules, which can result in a harmoniou

26、s familyrelationship. (128 words)江苏省南京市2017届高三英语第三次模拟考试试题第五部分 书面表达(满分25分）81.请阅读下面材料，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability, widespread bike vandalism (破坏and theft, and growing government regulation. A Hong Kong man who was arreste

27、d for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because “the GPS devices in the bikes give away users personal information , such as their locations.Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market. The market has become flooded with new c

28、ompanies in recent months. The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way. They use apps that allow users, after paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with their smartphones. After the journey, users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use. The service is very pop

29、ular as it provides an effective solution to “the last kilometer” problem.【写作内容】 1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括:(1)支持或反对共享单车的推广；(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：3.不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。江苏省南京市2015届高三第三次模拟考试英语试题第五部分：书面表达(满分25分)This is a picture of

30、a ballet dancer whose left foot looks shockingly different from the right one. Some even jokes that the left foot represents how elegant ballet dancers look. On the contrary, the right one reveals the nature of those dancers life. One can hardly imagine how much time and effort have been devoted to

31、endless practice.【写作内容】请根据你对所示图片及文字的理解，写一篇150词左右的文章，要点如下：1. 以约30个词简要描述图片的内容；2. 以约120个词谈谈你的看法，内容包括：（1） 图片给你的启示，并举例说明；（2） 你最想对图片的芭蕾舞者说什么？为什么？【写作要求】1. 可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称3. 不必写标题【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当第五部分 书面表达The dancers left foot is elegantly wrapped in her ballet shoe, t

32、ied to the ankle with a silk ribbon. The shoeless right foot, however, looks horribly different. Bruises and scars occupy every inch of her toes. （36 words）I can only imagine the untold hardship the dancer must have endured for the endless hours of practice to look so glamorous on the stage. Likewis

33、e, behind every seemingly stunning success, there can be failures, disappointments, and embarrassments. When the whole world is crazy for JK Rowlings Harry Potter stories, rarely do people know it was after the books had been turned down 12 times by the publisher that they finally came out. Nothing

34、is difficult to a willing heart. However, when we admire others success, we should remember it is not from nowhere.I have imagined the dancer to be my friend. I will, instead of telling her how awesome her dancing is, ask her to take good care of herself, for health is the real elegance of life. （130 words）