【小升初真题分类汇编】06常见书面表达7篇 近两年（2021-2022）易错题（江苏无锡专版）.docx

1、常见书面表达7篇 近两年（2021-2022）小升初易错题真题汇编（江苏无锡专版）一、观察下面两个同学的信息，尝试介绍他们。NameTen years agoNowIn the futureLi LinLi Lei提示：1. 观察并描述Li Lin的外貌变化和Li Lei的能力变化。2. 观察并描述他们梦想的职业，并给出实现梦想的合理建议。3. 要求表述正确，合理想象，可作适当发挥。4. 词数不少于50个，段落开头已给出，不计入总词数。Ten years ago, Li Lin _Li Lei is her brother. _二、今天是除夕，苏海和家人度过了难忘的一天，她还拍了很多照片记录这

2、些美好的时刻。你能根据照片内容，帮她把今天的所见所闻用日记的形式记录下来吗？要求：1. 内容要点齐全，也可以展开想象写一些活动。2. 句子通顺，正确使用一般过去时，不少于6句话。Saturday, 5th January_三、寒假要到了，你打算怎样过一个开心又有意义的假期呢？请参看Mike去年的寒假 活动，联系实际，思考并写下自己今年的寒假计划吧！要求：1. 图片中 Mike 去年的寒假活动要描述完整；2. 自己的寒假计划不少于三项（含锻炼身体、交友、家庭活动等）；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范（注意语法、单词拼写及标点等）；4. 内容不少于 50 词。给出的句子不计入词数。 Mike s

3、tayed at home last winter holiday. _This winter holiday is coming soon. _ _四、同学们，寒假就要来临了。由于疫情我们可能不能出去旅行，但是如果有机会出去旅行的话，你有什么打算呢？请以 “My winter holiday plans” 为题， 并根据思维导图，写一写自己的寒假计划。要求：1. 短文内容需包括思维导图要点，也可以适当展开想象；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范（注意语法、单词拼写和标点等）；3. 短文内容不少于5句话（不包括第一句）My winter holiday plansWinter holiday

4、is coming. _五、地球是我们的家，我们要保护地球。我们应该做什么？不应该做什么？请以“Protect the Earth”为题，写一篇小作文。要求：1. 用到should, shouldnt2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范 3. 不少于10句_六、无锡正在创建全国文明城市，需要大家的共同努力，请你以Keep our city clean为题写一篇倡议书。(不少于5句话) Keep our city cleanDear friends,Wuxi is a beautiful city. To Keep our city clean, we should _Lets try

5、our best to make it more beautiful. _ (your name)七、地球是我们的家。保护地球，我们该做什么？不该做什么？为什么？请写出你的思考。要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2. 短文内容60字左右，不少于7句话。Protect the Earth_参考答案：一、范文：Ten years ago, Li Lin was a little girl. She was short. Her hair was short. Now she is tall. Her hair is long. In the future, she wants to be

6、a teacher.Li Lei is her brother. Ten years ago, Li Lei was a baby boy. He couldnt walk. But now he can run. In the future, he wants to be a football player.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格内的信息，按要求写短文。然后再阐述Li Lin十年前与现在的外貌变化及梦想的职业，Li Lei十年前与现在的能力变化及梦想的职业。注意文章为一般现在时和一般过去时两种时态，并要符合单词字数要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：short矮的/短的

7、，tall高的，long长的，teacher老师，walk走，run跑，football player足球运动员参考句型：Ten years ago, ； She was ；Her hair ；In the future, ；He couldnt .；But now he can .；二、范文：Saturday, 5th JanuaryToday is New Years Eve. My family and I have an unforgettable day. We buy some beautiful flowers. My mother and my aunt make dumpli

8、ngs for us. I have a big dinner with my grandparents, my parents, my aunt and uncle. In the evening, we watch fireworks. We also set off firecrackers. It is very interesting!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据照片内容，以日记形式把除夕这天的所所闻记录下来，注意文章为一般现在时态，内容要点齐全，句子数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：New Years Eve除夕；unforgettable难忘的；make du

9、mplings包饺子；watch fireworks看烟花；set off firecrackers放鞭炮；参考句型：Today is.；My family and I.；We buy.；I have a big dinner with.；In the evening, we.；It is.；【点睛】三、范文Mike stayed at home last winter holiday. He finished his homework every day and then helped his mother with the housework. Sometimes he played co

10、mputer games for a while.This winter holiday is coming soon. I will finish my homework and read for two hours every day. At the weekend, I will play football in the park. I will go to Shanghai with my parents to visit my grandparents.【详解】1.题干解析：参看Mike去年的寒假 活动，联系实际，思考并写下自己今年的寒假计划。除了按照四点要求以外，要注意使用一般过去

11、时和一般将来时。2.参考词汇和参考句型。参考词汇：finished完成，played computer games玩电脑游戏，homework 家庭作业，play football踢足球。参考句型：He finished；I will finish；I will go to四、范文：My winter holiday plansMy winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to Sichuan with my parents. We will go there by plane. I like the food in Sichuan. Its sp

12、icy and tasty. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的寒假计划。然后再阐述寒假自己要做的具体事情及感受。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：winter holiday寒假；spicy辛辣的

13、；tasty美味的；paint画参考句型：I am going to.；I will.；I like.；I will五、范文：Protect the EarthThe earth is our home to live so we should try our best to protect it. We can do many things in helping our earth.First we can plant more trees to fresh the air around us. Second we shouldnt cut down the trees for other

14、use. Third we should not pour the waste water into the rivers or the seas. Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves. Because the earth is the only place for us to live on.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出如何保护地球。然后再阐述在如何保护地球中我们应该和不应该做的具体的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：protect保护；cut down砍到；pour倾倒；w

15、aste浪费的；ourselves我们自己参考句型：The earth is；First we can；Second we shouldnt；Because the earth is六、参考范文：Dear friends,Wuxi is a beautiful city. To Keep our city clean, we should take the bus or the metro to school. We should plant more trees. They help keep the air clean. We should put rubbish in the bin.

16、We should use paper bags and glass bottles.Lets try our best to make it more beautiful.Nancy【详解】1. 题干解析：该题要求用第一人称以Keep our city clean为题写一篇倡议书，注意时态为一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：take the bus to school乘公交车去学校；plant more trees种更多的树；put rubbish in the bin把垃圾放进垃圾桶；paper bags纸袋子；glass bottles玻璃瓶参考句型：We

17、should.【点睛】七、范文：Protect the EarthWe have only an earth. The earth is our hometown. We must protect it. We should plant more trees and flowers around us. We shouldnt cut them down. We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air. Whenever we see rubbish on

18、the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Dont draw on public walls. Its our duty to protect the environment.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写如何保护地球。具体阐述我们该做什么？不该做什么？为什么？注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子和单词数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：hometown家乡，plant种植，cut down砍到，dustbin垃圾桶，rubbish垃圾，duty责任，environment环境参考句型：We have .； I like .；The earth is .；We should .； We shouldnt .；