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1、2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第五期专题05 书面表达热点话题10篇一、电子邮件1（2023广东深圳深圳市宝安中学（集团）校考二模）假如你是李华，在端午节来临之际，你们学校将举行“传统节日进校园（Welcome Chinese Traditional Festivals into Our Campus）”之端午节庆祝活动。请根据以下提示，用英文给你的外国朋友Alex写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加这次活动。要点：活动时间与地点6月2日下午2:00-5:00；学校大堂活动内容1. 观看关于端午节历史文化的短片2. 学做香囊，学包粽子3. 品尝各种美味的粽子4. （请你自己补充，至少一个

2、活动）活动意义（请你自己补充，至少两点）要求：必须包括以上全部要点，可适当增加细节。1.标点准确，书面整洁；2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词汇内；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇： sachet香囊，ricerice dumpling粽子Dear Alex,_【答案】例文Dear Alex,I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. During the Dragon Boat Festival, our school will hold an activity called “Welcome Chinese

3、 Traditional Festivals into Our Campus” at 2:00-5:00 p.m. on June 2nd in the school hall.First, we will watch a short film about the history and culture of the Dragon Boat Festival. And then we will learn how to make sachets and rice dumplings. At last, we will taste all kinds of delicious zongzi. W

4、e will watch the dragon boat races, too.We all love the festival because its a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”；提示：写作要

5、点已给出，必须包括以上全部要点，可适当增加细节。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明活动主题，并交代时间和地点；第二步，具体阐述活动内容。按照时间先后“first；then；at last”详述活动计划；第三步，书写结语。希望Alex能接受这次邀请参加这次活动。亮点词汇be interested in对感兴趣look back on回顾all kinds of各种各样的look forward to盼望高分句型And then we will learn how to make sachets and rice dumplings.（疑问词+不定式）We all love the festi

6、val because its a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.（原因状语从句）2（2023广东深圳统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将在暑假来深圳研学旅行。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件，帮助他适应在深圳的生活。内容提示：（1）欢迎他来深研学旅行；（2）你的建议：学习一些中国习俗，如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付；（3）你对他的祝福。 要求：（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、

7、行文连贯；（4）标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip移动支付 mobile paymentDear Tony, I am so glad that _Yours, Li Hua【答案】(One possible version)Dear Tony,I am so glad that you are going to have a study trip in Shenzhen this summer holiday. To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.First,

8、 you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on. Second, when you shop, you can pay with mobile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different from those in the UK. The drivers drive on the right side of the road, so when you cross the road, you s

9、hould look left.I hope that you can have a good time in Shenzhen. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。写作步骤第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来深圳进行研学旅行；第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；第三步，表达对他的祝福。亮点词汇 and so on 等等 be different from 与不同 have a good time 玩得

10、开心 look forward to 期盼高分句型 To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.（不定式作目的状语） First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on.（疑问词+不定式）3（2023广东深圳模拟预测）2023年春节期间，深圳宝安区举办了首届“民族美食嘉年华”活动，将民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李华，你在春节期间参加了这次美

11、食嘉年华。请根据以下提示，给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1. 时间地点：2023年1月15日，宝安万达广场2. 内容：品尝不同民族的美食；欣赏少数民族舞蹈表演；（请自行补充两点内容）3. 你的感受：（请自行补充两点感受）要求：1. 80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：美食嘉年华Food Carnival少数民族ethnic minority万达广场Wanda PlazaDear Mr. Smith,During the Spring Fe

12、stival, we held a Food Carnival in Shenzhen._Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Mr. Smith,During the Spring Festival, we held a Food Carnival in Shenzhen. It was wonderful and I would like to tell you some details about it.The Food Carnival was held at Wanda Plaza in Baoan, on January 15, 2023. People celebrat

13、ed the Spring Festival by enjoying delicious food. Firstly, we tasted different ethnic food from all over the country, such as Tibetan food and drinks and Miao food. Then, we enjoyed a dance show from Ethnic minorities. The dancers wore beautiful clothes. The performance was so fantastic that it att

14、racts many audiences. Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join in and make handicrafts by ourselves. Whats more, there were many lanterns and people could try to solve the puzzles on the lanterns.The carnival was really interesting and unforgettable. We can experience colorful Chinese cult

15、ure in a different way. I hope you can attend the Food Carnival next year.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；第二步，根据要点提示介绍活动的时间、地点，以及活动的具体内容，需要自行补充至少两个活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发此活动带来的感受并书写结语。亮点词汇from all over the country来

16、自全国各地solve the puzzles on the lanterns猜灯谜高分句型The performance was so fantastic that it attracts many audiences.（sothat引导结果状语从句）Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join in and make handicrafts by ourselves.（which引导限制性定语从句）4（2023广东深圳统考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John下个月将作为交换生来你的学校。他想了解你校社团并计划加入其中一个，请根据提示

17、给他写一封邮件，向他简要介绍并推荐其中一个。要点：1. 名称：武术社；京剧社；（至少补充1个）2. 内容： 练习中国武术；学唱京剧；3. 推荐理由： 丰富课余生活；要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：武术社Wushu Club京剧社Peking Opera Club丰富enrichDear John, I am excited to have you with us next month and I know you are very interested

18、 in the clubs in our school._Look forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Li Hua【答案】例文Dear John,I am excited to have you with us next month and I know you are very interested in the clubs in our school. There are many clubs in our school. For example, you can join Wushu Club to practice Chinese martial

19、arts. You can also join the Beijing Opera Club to learn how to sing Beijing Opera correctly. Of course, you can also join the Paper Cutting club to learn Chinese Paper Cutting. I would like to recommend the Paper Cutting club to you. Paper Cutting is one of the traditional cultural forms in China. Y

20、ou can cut out various flowers, birds, fish, and beasts from a simple piece of paper.If you come, you will definitely like it. By participating in these clubs, not only can we enrich our leisure life, but also we can learn some skills. Look forward to meeting you soon!Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用

21、文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。写作步骤第一步，向对方介绍你学校里的社团；第二步，推荐对方加入一个社团并介绍推荐理由；第三步，最后表达对方加入后可以收获的东西。亮点词汇for example比如would like to do想要做participate in参加高分句型If you come, you will definitely like it.（if引导的条件状语从句）二、材料作文5（2023广东深圳南山实验教育麒麟中学校考三模）在科技发达的时代，人们的阅读方式越来越多样化，比如阅读纸质书，报纸和杂志，在线阅读，使用

22、 APP 听书等。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上交流活动，其公众号计划推送关于阅读方式的内容，请你用英语写一篇文章，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式，并阐述理由。要点：1. Whats your favorite way of reading?2. Why do you choose this way?要求：1. 词数 80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实姓名和学校；4. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：p-book (纸质书), e-book, audiobook, immerse (沉浸), inspire, pastim

23、e (休闲活动) Nowadays, there are many ways of reading._,【答案】例文Nowadays, there are many ways of reading. I like reading e-books best. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can easily download new books from the Internet. It is much easier and quicker to search for the passage we want to read. And we can also w

24、rite notes or mark some important information in an e-book. Moreover, a number of books can be stored in a small machine, which is easy to take. Last but not least, e-books save a lot of paper and are good for the environment. But e-books are still more expensive than paper books, so not all people

25、can afford them. However, with the rapid development of electronic technology, e-book readers will become cheaper and cheaper. A lot of people think there will be more e-books than paper books in the near future. In short, no matter which way you choose, I hope you can feel the joy of reading.【详解】总体

26、分析 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意进行适当的发挥，突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式是什么；第二步，具体阐述你选择这种阅读方式的原因。亮点词汇 a number of 一些，许多 be good for 对有好处 in short 简言之高分句型It is much easier and quicker to search for the passages we want to read.（省略that的定语从句）a number of books can be stored in a

27、small machine, which is easy to take.（含情态动词的被动语态，which引导的非限制性定语从句） no matter which way you choose, I hope you can feel the joy of reading.（no matter引导的让步状语从句）6（2023广东深圳红岭中学校考三模）初中生活即将过去，回顾初中三年的学校生活，你一定有很多美好的回忆和对自己的回顾展望，请你给朋友写一封信：1、挑选一件学校举行的令你印象深刻的活动进行描述；2、对自己三年的学习生活进行反思：对自己满意的地方（1.形成了良好的学习习惯；2.乐于帮助同

28、学；3.）；对自己不满意的地方，需要改进的一点。3、对母校和未来的期待。Dear friends: How time flies and Ill graduate from school soon.Looking back on these three years, _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear friends:How time flies and Ill graduate from school soon.Looking back on these three years, I have so many things that I want to share with y

29、ou.When the sport meet was coming this term, I decided to take part in the 1000-meter race. I wanted to do something different and enrich my school life. The day came and I got so nervous, because everyone ran so quickly and I fell behind soon. Being hot and tired, I almost wanted to give up. Howeve

30、r, with the encouragement of my classmates, I kept running and I got a good result in the end. From then on, I know that I should never give up anything easily.During the past three years, I am now good at English because I read some English articles every morning. And I am always willing to help my

31、 classmates. Moreover, I am now much healthier than before. But I still need to learn to manage my time better.I hope my school will be better and better and I will have a bright future.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文，格式为书信；时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑

32、。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，以“回顾这三年，我有很多事情想和你分享”引出下文；第二步，按照要点提示，介绍一件印象深刻的活动进行描述，应是学校举行的，注意时态应为过去时，描述时候要突出让自己印象深刻的一面；第三步，介绍自己对三年学习生活的反思，并适当进行补充；第四步，结尾总结，并表达对学校和自己未来的期待。亮点词汇decide to do sth决定做某事fall behind落后in the end最后give up放弃高分句型When the sport meet was coming this term, I decided to take part in the 1000-meter

33、 race.（when引导的时间状语从句）I hope my school will be better and better and I will have a bright future.（宾语从句）7（2023广东深圳校联考三模）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。FromBobKateLilyYouToparentsgood friendforeign teacher(请补充) What(请补充) Whythanks and lovefriendshipculture(请补充) 注意：l. 词

34、数：100词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。In todays English class, we had a discussion on A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in our group. _【答案】范文In todays English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in our group.A valuable gift give

35、n by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition

36、, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We dont live together and my parents are so busy that we cant meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone.【详解】总体分析 题材：本

37、文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。写作步骤第一步，根据提示介绍Bob、Kate和Lily送的礼物以及所表达的含义；第二步，介绍你自己给谁送了什么以及表达的含义。亮点词汇consider.as.把看作in addition此外a piece of一张高分句型Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him（because引导的原因状语从句）

38、Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.（which引导的定语从句）my parents are so busy that we cant meet each other often.（so.that引导的结果状语从句）8（2023广东深圳模拟预测）传统的长途旅行常常让人疲惫不堪，越来越多的人选择在自家周边方便轻松地度过周末。假如你是深圳市南山区的一名九年级学生李华，请在班上给同学们介绍一些南山区的好去处以及可开展的活动，并呼吁大家多出门走走

39、。要点：1. 大沙河公园（Dashahe Park）：野餐、放风筝，2. 华侨城湿地公园（OCT Wetland Park）：观鸟、骑自行车，3. 其他地点：，（自行补充至少2项活动）要求：1. 词数80100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Nowadays more and more people choose to do “staycation”. Let me introduce some of the attractions in Nanshan District to yo

40、u._【答案】例文Nowadays more and more people choose to do “staycation”. Let me introduce some of the attractions in Nanshan District to you.First, you can go to the Dashahe Park. It is beautiful for its natural scenery. You can have picnics with your family or friends there. When the weather is fine, you

41、can fly kites and play games with your children. There are lots of other activities that you are interested in.Second, OCT Wetland Park is also a good place to relax. There are all kinds of birds. You can go bird-watching with your classmates. When you go cycling along the river, you can see fascina

42、ting clouds in the sky and enjoy the sunset. It is great.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos in Nanshan District. It will help you relax yourselves as well as have fun.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；时态：本文为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，并自行补充至

43、少2项活动，注意保证选词准确，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。以“介绍深圳市南山区的景点来度过轻松的周末，”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，和其他一些活动；第三步，书写结语。南山区还有更多其他景点可供放松和玩乐。亮点词汇staycation居家度假attraction有吸引力的（事物）scenery风景fascinating极有吸引力的；迷人的高分句型There are lots of other activities that you are interested i

44、n.(that 引导定语从句)It will help you relax yourselves as well as have fun.(as well as和一样；除以外还）9（2023广东深圳统考二模）“劳动使我快乐，劳动促我成长”。随着劳动教育被纳入国家课程，越来越多的中学生主动分担家务劳动。假如你是某校中学生李华， 你校英语周正在开展主题为“Sharing Housework”的征文比赛， 请写一篇短文， 分享你平时参与家务劳动的情况。内容包括：1.分担家务的目的：帮助父母；。2.所分担的家务：平时：洗碗、浇花；周末：打扫卫生、整理房间；假期：。3.感受与收获。注意：1.词数80左右

45、（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。Sharing housework is an important part of family life._【答案】参考范文Sharing housework is an important part of family life. As teenagers, pitching in around the house not only makes things easier for our parents, but also has a big impact on

46、our development.Take me as an example, Ive got into the habit of doing household chores. On weekdays, I water flowers and wash dishes. On weekends, I do the dusting and vacuuming as well as tidy up my room. During holidays, I help prepare and serve meals, do the laundry and babysit, which can be mor

47、e time-consuming and require more effort.For me, sharing the load leads to better communication and stronger bonds between family members. Additionally, Ive learned practical life skills and become more responsible and independent.【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称

48、为主。写作步骤第一步，整体说明分担家务的目的；第二步，具体阐述你所分担的家务：第三步，最后表达自己的感受与收获。亮点词汇not only.but also.不但而且as well as也lead to导致高分句型During holidays, I help prepare and serve meals, do the laundry and babysit, which can be more time-consuming and require more effort.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）三、书信作文10（2023广东深圳统考三模）假定你是李华，端午将至，你想邀请你校外教

49、Mark周六观看龙舟比赛，但Mark不在办公室，请你给他写张留言条。内容包括：1. 你到Mark办公室的目的；2. 介绍端午节（纪念屈原、吃粽子）及赛龙舟；3. 确定出发时间和见面地点。写作要求：1. 80词以上，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：龙舟比赛dragon boat raceDear Mark,_Best wishesLihua【答案】参考范文：Dear Mark,I stopped by your office this afternoon, but you werent there.

50、I was going to ask you if you want to enjoy a dragon boat race with me since the Dragon Boat Festival is coming.As a traditional Chinese festival, the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated in memory of the death of a Chinese poet, Qu Yuan. During this festival people are fond of eating zongzi, a dumpli

51、ng made of rice covered with bamboo leaves. In addition, Chinese people often organize dragon boat races, which is said to protect Qu Yuans body. The races are undoubtedly fantastic to watch. You cant miss it.I want to make sure whether you want to check it out with me this year. We can meet at the school gate at 2 p.m. on Saturday. I look forward to your reply.Best wishesLihua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据内容提示，写一篇英文短文。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。注意按照内容提示的三个方面进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。