专题06 应用文写作（6）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（六）1（2017北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im happy receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yan

2、gtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with ma

3、ny well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】首先，学生要仔细阅读提示：你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有

4、哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句

5、子。表语从句的使用：Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接副词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。2（2017浙江卷）假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,How are you doing? I am writing t

6、o invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team.

7、I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you dont have spare time for this trip, it is fine. Its just up to you.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。【详解】本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定

8、的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。【点睛】【高分句型1】Im very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。Im ve

9、ry honored to.非常荣幸做某事【高分句型2】I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，takeinto consideration顾及；考虑到3（2017全国II卷）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Henry，Im very delighted to write a letter to t

10、ell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a weekAs is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and Im sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visitThe ex

11、hibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in ChinaDuring the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional cultureWould you please have a look at the exhibition with me？Id a

12、ppreciate it if you could accept my invitationIm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possibleYours，Li Hua【导语】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不

13、要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibitio

14、n，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and Im sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit4.（2017全国III卷）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀

15、请他加入，内容包括：球队活动；报名方式及截止日期。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Eric，I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong. As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape y

16、our character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you wan

17、t me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【详解】由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文

18、中使用了较多主从复合句，如： it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句使用了一些固定词组，如 show great fancy in; sign up; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5.（2017全国I卷）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：

19、学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Leslie,I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you

20、are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on

21、 time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；

22、4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in

23、in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。6（2017天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知

24、你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Mrs Green,Im so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study a

25、nd life. Im very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in

26、 the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking f

27、orward to seeing you again. Yours Li Jin【导语】本文为提纲类作文。【详解】这是李津给Mrs. Green的一封电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称，基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含: (1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句；非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。第三,要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。最后，要注意一下卷面整洁， 书写工整。【点睛】本篇书面表

28、达要点全面，结构紧凑, 本文要点齐全，适当增加了细节，选择使用了高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量短语,为文章增色不少,如: make great progress取得很大的进步，build up增强。还使用了定语从句，如As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.，又如I interviewed many people from all walks of lif

29、e, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.和宾语从句、条件状语从句，如I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。7（2017北京卷图画作文）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频 video_【答案】 Graduation finally came. My classmates and I

30、decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated

31、over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.【导语】本篇

32、书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。【详解】1.词汇积累最终：finallyeventually困难的：toughdifficult不可避免的：unavoidableinevitable当然；无疑：surelycertainly2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：We debated over what to put into the video.拓展句：We debated over what we should put into the video.【点睛】高分句型1 Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. (运用了when引导的状语从句)