专题11 九全Unit11写作主题：情感--2021-2022学年九年级英语单元话题写作（人教版）.docx

1、人教版九全册Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.写作主题：Feelings(情感）一、 话题分析本单元话题是“Feelings(情感）”，谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。与此相关的写作任务是根据文字提示或实际情况简单描述某事物或人给自己带来的情绪变化，写此类文章时，可以先点明发生的事件，然后具体描述事情发生的时间、地点、原因等，最后表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐。也可以描写生活或学习中的烦恼或焦虑。情感与情绪包括人际沟通与情感交际，既有家庭方面的，也有社会层面的。此话题主要会从以下两个方面进行设题： 人际沟通方面存在的问题。包括以下两点：家庭亲人之间的沟通；社会上与朋

2、友或同学之间的交流。对人际沟通存在的问题给出一些建议。二、 写作方法“4W1H法”写“叙事类作文”1. Who“人物” 2. where “地点” 3. when“时间” 4. what“事件” 5. how “感受”三、素材积累作文常用词汇和语块：词汇(名词)feeling感情；情感sense 感觉；意识 expression表情smile笑；微笑laughter笑声pleasure高兴；愉快 memory记忆；回忆regret懊悔pride自豪；骄傲 surprise惊奇；惊讶shame羞耻；羞愧love爱；喜爱 dream梦想；睡梦luck幸运；运气词汇(动词)hope希望wish愿望

3、fear害怕；惧怕trouble问题；苦恼 pity遗憾；怜悯cry哭；叫喊feel感受；觉得cheer欢呼；喝彩surprise使惊奇 regret感到遗憾 insist坚持；强调dream做梦 expect预料；期待seem似乎；好像worry担心；担忧 trouble使苦恼词汇(形容词)nice令人愉快的excited兴奋的glad高兴；愿意 happy高兴的proud自豪的lucky幸运的nervous焦虑的angry生气的sad (使人)悲伤的 afraid害怕的crazy疯狂的mad疯的good好的great伟大的patient有耐心的lonely孤独的tired疲劳的；疲倦的bo

4、red烦闷的；厌倦的短语1. be proud of 为骄傲2. cheer up 振奋起来3. to ones surprise 使惊讶的4. have trouble(in) doing sth. 做某事有困难5. worry about 担心，烦恼6. be tired of 对感到厌倦7. be angry with 对(某人)生气8. drive sb. crazy 使某人发疯/狂9. in surprise 吃惊，惊讶地10. keep up 跟上;保持11. keep ones word(s) 守信12. make a face/faces 做鬼脸13. be strict wi

5、th sb. 对某人要求严格14. stop sb. From doing sth. 阻止某人做某事15. allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事16. ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事17. I believe that 我确信18. deal with 处理写作句型1. It is known that being happy is good for peoples health.2. When Im in a low mood, I choose to stay alone.3. I feel blue/sad because I cant go t

6、o Jay Chous concert.4. My teacher got very angry because I was late for class again.5. What you said makes me sad.6. That news is so surprising that we all feel surprised.7. He is very nervous because he will take an important exam tomorrow.8. We will be very happy if we can have a long journey with

7、 our families.【开头句】1. Its important to learn how to get on well with others. 2. Friendship requires good communication.3. As we know, we should learn how to get on well with others.4. Let me tell some rules of my family.【中间句】1. He seems a little unhappy.2. Everyone gets these feelings at your age.3.

8、 She feels very lonely because she has no friends to talk with.4. You must be friendly to others.5. Always say less than you think.6. Keep your promise, no matter what it costs.7. If we cant communicate well, we can hardly get along with our friends.【结尾句】1. Only in these ways can we get along well w

9、ith others.2. I believe you can get on well with your parents if you put your heart into it.3. Well learn to get along better with each other.四、实例讲解【写作任务】(Section B 3a & 3b)明天英语课上的duty report该你发言了。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题写一篇英语短文，给大家讲述你的一次难忘的经历。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时人称：第一人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子

10、3.巧衔接在记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，同学们可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days before / on the day he left with his family .来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。4.添佳句 No one is perfect. (人无完人。)5.成篇章An Unforgettable Experience 五、写作训练一3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary.100词左右。活动形式：1.送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。2.帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生.3.陪老人聊天

11、；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人. _ _六、写作训练二有些父母在该陪伴孩子的时候，却选择沉迷于网络世界，不和孩子交流，这其实是一种“冷暴力”。今天英语课上老师给你们呈现了下面这幅漫画，要求你们写一篇短文描述漫画，阐述你对此现象的看法并给出建议。 七、写作训练三假如你是任慧，你校校报Speak Out栏目正面向全校征集关于“Something that made you happy orsad”的稿件，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。要点提示：1. Whats the thing?2. When,where and how did it

12、 happen?3.How did it make you feel?4. What did you learn from it?要求：不少于100词，可适当发挥。 八、中考典列帮助他人，快乐自己，李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学，请根据提供的信息介绍李华一家，描述他们上周六所做的事，谈谈你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参与类似的活动？说明理由。人物职业爱好具体活动爸爸电脑工程师修理为邻居检修电脑妈妈公司经理DIY为社区老人包粽子李华中学生下棋教小学生下棋你.提示词汇：manager 经理要求：1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.评价李华一家的傲法，表

13、达你的意愿，并说明理由：3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计人总词数：4.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整：5.文中不出现真实的姓名、校名及地点。I am Li Huas classmate and lve known that he and his parents often go to the community center to do somevoluntary work on weekends. 人教版九全册Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.写作主题：Feelings(情感）实例讲解【参考范文】2.谋布局、写句子(1) An experi

14、ence I think was unforgettable(2) Li Hua and I had different opinions about a math problem(3) I knew that it was my fault(4) I didnt realize we wouldnt see each other anymore(5) This made me feel a sense of relief(6) We shouldnt be afraid of making mistakes5.成篇章An Unforgettable ExperienceAn experien

15、ce I think was unforgettable was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a math problem. Such a little thing caused an argument between us.From then on, we didnt talk to each other. I knew that it was

16、 my fault,but I refused to admit it because I didnt want to lose face. I didnt realize we wouldnt see each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents.Two days before he left with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We made peace with each other. This made me

17、feel a sense of relief.No one is perfect.Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldnt be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.五、写作训练一【参考范文】Dear Mary,Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on March 5th. As a member of volunteers, 1 got u

18、p carly because I was loo ex- cited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers bought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent the old people our best wishes. Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them, After that, some of us performed for them, s

19、uch as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspapers for them. Some of us chalted with them. From this activity, we realized thal we should care for the old and respect them. What a valuable and meaningful activity!If you have the chance to come to China, I hope you can join us. LiHua六、写作训练二

20、【参考范文】六、 写作训练二In the picture, the parents are using their mobile phones. Their little boy is standing between them trying to get their attention. Maybe he wants to know why his parents are always on their phones, and not spending their time with him. I think parents should set good examples for thei

21、r children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less time on them. If so, parents will have more spare time to do lots of things with their children, like playing games, watching movies or playing sports, which can provide good chances to communicate with them. Good communication between p

22、arents and children is really necessary. It means children can share their happy things with their parents or talk about their problems so they can get some help from their parents. I think parents should always be there to listen to their children. It can not only help strengthen parent-child relat

23、ionships but also help childrens development.七、写作训练三【参考范文】Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th inCity Music Hall. On that day, I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried I would makemistakes during my performance. Then I remember

24、ed what my father told me-always believe in yourselfand you are the best. His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn,I walked up to the pianowith confidence and performed well. You wouldnt believe how much I wanted to know the result. When Ilearned I won the first prize,I hugged my pare

25、nts in excitement.This experience taught me that it is veryimportant to have confidence in yourself.八、中考典列I am L Huas classmate and Ive known that he and his parents often go he community center to do some voluntary work on weekends His father is computer engineer, Hles good at repairing things. His

26、 mother works as a manager in a company. She likes DIY. Li Hua is a middle school student. He plays chess well. Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father volunteered to check and fix computers for neighbors. His mother made rice dumplings for the elder peopl

27、e there. She O made these elder people feel very happy. Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess and I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua. It is necessary for us to help people in need. As we know, helping others is helping ourselves. It can also bring happiness to us all.