2012高二英语精品课件：UNIT16 COMMUNICATION WORKSHOP （北师大版选修6）.ppt

1、 Unit16 Communication WorkshopUse the following given words to make up a short storyWarm-upbus,wait,walk,hot,teacher,remind,competition,prepare,last,tearReadingRead the three drafts of a students composition on the topic A Day When Everything Went Wrong.Decide which one is the most interesting.Think

2、 about how the writer:attracts the attention of the reader.shows the order of events.shares feelings with the reader.uses vivid language to make the writing more interesting.May 24th was a bad day.The day everything went wrong was may 24th.May 24th,2005 will live in my mind forever.How the writer at

3、tracts the attention of the readerHow the writer shows the order of eventsBecause the school bus did not First,I had to wait 30 minutes for the school busThe day started to go wrong the instant I left home.At school,Mr.fan The next problem happened when I arrived at school.But the trouble was only j

4、ust beginning.When I got into bed that night,I The last problem of this terrible day happened when I got intoEven then,my troubles were not over.As I got into bed,This was a big mistake!and you can imagine how I felt by the time.What a clumsy end to an awful day!How the writer shares feelings with t

5、he readerHow the writer used vivid language to make the writing more interestingIt was hot and tiresome.The day was hot and tiring.The sun was already boiling hotMr.fan,the English teacher reminded me of the This surprised me Mr.fan,the English teacher,a large but friendly man,gave me a nasty surpri

6、se.He reminded me in his loud voice that As I climbed up the stairs to the classroom,I heard a booming voice behind me.I felt awkward and had to look down at my book during the competition.There was only a little applause when I left the stage.There was no time to practice at lunch time and I read f

7、rom my book instead of reciting the poems.As I left the stage,there was only some quiet applause.I was not surprised when I came last in the competition.I tried,and failed to practice during the lunch break.The result?I couldnt remember any of the poems and had to keep looking down at my book.The mo

8、re I looked down,the redder my face became.I felt tense and dizzy.When I left the stage people didnt applaud very loudly and it came as no surprise that I was last in the competition.layoutintroductionbeginning of the narrativeconclusiondevelopment of the narrativeMake draft A and B more interesting

9、by replacing some phrases with more colorful language.1.really sleepy 2.was a terrible shock 3.burning with shame 4.The first sign of things to come was 5.my troubles only got worse 6.the final horror camePredict answers before listeningEurydice and Orpheus loved each other.One day,they went out,and

10、 Eurydice fell asleep under an apple treeThe king of Fairies took her away,and Orpheus felt sad and left the palace with the harp.one day,he followed a group of people in the woods,and came to the palace of the king of Fairies.He played the harp and the king of Fairies promised him anything.He took Eurydice away and lived a happy life.