2021高考英语写作复习专题 ：专题18 话题写作-旅游 WORD版含解析.doc

1、专题18话题写作-旅游-2021高考英语写作复习大全应用文写作|邀请信-邀请周六爬香山你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下： 1. 时间：8am5 pm； 2. 集合地点：校门口； 3. 交通工具：公交车；4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。_翻译：1. 我写信是想告诉你，我们打算这个星期六去爬香山，我代表我们班诚恳地邀请你和我们一起去。_2. 我们应该在学校门口集合，早上8点准时出发。_3. 巴士是我们的交通工具。_4. 我们将爬到山顶，在那里享用我们的野餐午餐，所以请带些食物当午餐。_5. 下午2点左右。我们将沿着另一条小路下山，下午5

2、点左右返回学校。_6. 你可以给自己配备一个照相机来记录美丽的风景，雨伞或雨衣也是必要的，以防你被雨淋到。_7. 请抽点时间加入我们。_8. 你的参与肯定会给我们的旅行增添色彩，我们都期待着你的参与。_参考答案：1. 我写信是想告诉你，我们打算这个星期六去爬香山，我代表我们班诚恳地邀请你和我们一起去。Im writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.2. 我们应

3、该在学校门口集合，早上8点准时出发。We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. 3. 巴士是我们的交通工具。The bus will serve as our transportation. 4. 我们将爬到山顶，在那里享用我们的野餐午餐，所以请带些食物当午餐。We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.5.

4、 下午2点左右。我们将沿着另一条小路下山，下午5点左右返回学校。At about 2:00 pm. we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00pm. 6. 你可以给自己配备一个照相机来记录美丽的风景，雨伞或雨衣也是必要的，以防你被雨淋到。You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in

5、case you are caught in a rain. 7. 请抽点时间加入我们。Please spare some time to join us.8. 你的参与肯定会给我们的旅行增添色彩，我们都期待着你的参与。Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement. 范文赏析：Dear Chris， Im writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this

6、 Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. The bus will serve as our transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as

7、lunch. At about 2:00 pm. we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. Please spare some time to join us. You

8、r participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement. Yours,Joe应用文写作|邀请信-邀请周末参观西安假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jonah发来邮件询问你们班上周末参观西安的情况。 请给他回一封邮件。1. 参观时间及内容；2.发出邀请。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:兵马俑 the Terracotta Warriors 皮影戏 shadow play_请翻译：1. 我很高兴你对西安感兴趣。现在我想告诉你

9、我们上周末来西安的情况。_2. 我们星期六早上7点出发。_3. 到达西安后，我们去参观了兵马俑，在那里我们看到了中国古代人民的智慧。_4. 第二天我们去看皮影戏，这是一种古老的中国故事。_5. 之后，我们品尝了一些美味的当地食物。_6. 我觉得我从这次轻松而有意义的经历中学到了很多。_7. 期待您来西安旅游，我愿意带您四处看看。_参考答案：1. 我很高兴你对西安感兴趣。现在我想告诉你我们上周末来西安的情况。Im glad you are interested in Xian. Now Id like to tell you something about our visit to Xian l

10、ast weekend.2. 我们星期六早上7点出发。We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Saturday. 3. 到达西安后，我们去参观了兵马俑，在那里我们看到了中国古代人民的智慧。After arriving in Xian, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. 4. 第二天我们去看皮影戏，这是一种古老的中国故事。The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays

11、, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. 5. 之后，我们品尝了一些美味的当地食物。After that, we tasted some delicious local foods. 6. 我觉得我从这次轻松而有意义的经历中学到了很多。I feel that I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.7. 期待您来西安旅游，我愿意带您四处看看。Looking forward to your visiting Xian, I would be willing to

12、 show you around.【答案】Dear Jonah,Im glad you are interested in Xian. Now Id like to tell you something about our visit to Xian last weekend.We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Saturday. After arriving in Xian, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. The fol

13、lowing day we went out to watch some shadow plays, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. After that, we tasted some delicious local foods. I feel that I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.Looking forward to your visiting Xian, I would be willing to show you around.You

14、rs,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Jonah写一封邮件，告诉他上周末参西安的情况。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 参观时间及内容；2.发出邀请。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be interested in/ would like to do sth./ pay a visit to/ arrive in/ look forward to/ be willing to do sth./ have a better understanding of/ show sb. around/ be glad to do sth./ be

15、delighted to do sth第三步：连词成句1. Im delighted to know you are interested in Xian. 2. Now Id like to tell you something about our visit to Xian last weekend.3. We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Saturday. 4. After arriving there, we paid a visit to the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chi

16、nese people. 5. The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays, which is an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. 6. After that, we tasted some delicious local foods. 7. I feel I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.8. Looking forward to your visiting Xian, I wou

17、ld be willing to show you around.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：After arriving in Xian, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we s

18、aw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people.中where引导非限制性定语从句；I feel that I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.中that引导宾语从句。应用文写作|旅游接机假如你是李华，你的伦敦朋友Terry打算到成都旅游，将于本周六上午10点到达双流国际机场，写信询问你能否到机场接他并入住你家。请你写一封回信，要点包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 接机的具体时间和地点；3. 愿意当向导和安排行程。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

19、。Dear Terry,_Yours,Li Hua请翻译：1. 欢迎来到成都。很高兴在机场接你，让你待在我家里。_2. 我将于本周六上午9:50到达双流国际机场，在第四个出口，穿着一件红色夹克，这样你就不会想我了。_3. 另外，我想做您的向导，带您参观武侯祠、宽寨巷等名胜古迹，在这里您不仅可以感受到天府文化，还可以品尝到成都的特色小吃。_4. 我希望你在成都过得愉快，我期待着你的到来。_参考答案1. 欢迎来到成都。很高兴在机场接你，让你待在我家里。Welcome to Chengdu. Its my pleasure to meet you at the airport and have yo

20、u stay at my home.2. 我将于本周六上午9:50到达双流国际机场，在第四个出口，穿着一件红色夹克，这样你就不会想我了。Ill be at Shuangliu International Airport at 9:50 this Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit and wearing a red jacket, so you wont miss me. 3. 另外，我想做您的向导，带您参观武侯祠、宽寨巷等名胜古迹，在这里您不仅可以感受到天府文化，还可以品尝到成都的特色小吃。Besides, I wish to be your guide, s

21、howing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai Alley and other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a taste of special snacks in Chengdu.4. 我希望你在成都过得愉快，我期待着你的到来。I hope you can enjoy your stay in Chengdu and Im looking forward to your coming.【答案】Dear

22、Terry,How is everything going? Im glad to receive your letterWelcome to Chengdu. Its my pleasure to meet you at the airport and have you stay at my home.Ill be at Shuangliu International Airport at 9:50 this Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit and wearing a red jacket, so you wont miss me. Besides, I

23、wish to be your guide, showing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai Alley and other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a taste of special snacks in Chengdu.I hope you can enjoy your stay in Chengdu and Im looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li

24、Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假如你是李华，你的伦敦朋友Terry打算到成都旅游，将于本周六上午10点到达双流国际机场，写信询问你能否到机场接他并入住你家。请你写一封回信，要点包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 接机的具体时间和地点；3. 愿意当向导和安排行程。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：glad to receive your letter（高兴收到你的来信）；my pleasure to meet you at the airport（在飞机场遇到你很开心）；showing you around（带领你参观）；等。第3步：

25、根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。How is everything going?用问句开头问候；Besides, I wish to be your guide, showing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai Alley and other places of interest现在分词作伴随状语；Kuan Zha

26、i Alley and other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a taste of special snacks in Chengdu.句中运用where引导的定语从句。应用文写作|推荐信-推荐旅游网站假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）；2. 推荐旅游景点。注意：1.写

27、作词数应为80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Henry,How is everything going?_Yours,Li Hua请翻译：1. 一切都好吗？了解到您对通过虚拟旅游网站环游中国非常感兴趣，我强烈推荐您。_2. 该网站提供了中国许多令人惊叹的景点的三维虚拟旅游。_3. 您可以在网站上注册或下载应用程序。_4. 另外，如果你想在你感兴趣的地方拍照，只需点击鼠标。_5. 西湖、泰山和故宫博物院等许多受欢迎的景点一定会让你大饱眼福。_参考答案1. 一切都好吗？了解到您对通过虚拟旅游网站环游中国非常感兴趣，我强烈推荐您。How is everyt

28、hing going? Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend .2. 该网站提供了中国许多令人惊叹的景点的三维虚拟旅游。The website offers 3D virtual tours of many amazing sights in China. 3. 您可以在网站上注册或下载应用程序。You can register on the website or download

29、the app.4. 另外，如果你想在你感兴趣的地方拍照，只需点击鼠标。In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you are interested in, just click the mouse. 5. 西湖、泰山和故宫博物院等许多受欢迎的景点一定会让你大饱眼福。Many popular sights, such as West Lake, Mount Tai and the Palace Museum, wont fail to feast your eyes.【答案】Dear Henry,How is everything

30、going? Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend .The website offers 3D virtual tours of many amazing sights in China. You can register on the website or download the app. In addition, if you want to take photos in a

31、 place you are interested in, just click the mouse. Many popular sights, such as West Lake, Mount Tai and the Palace Museum, wont fail to feast your eyes.I wish you would have a wonderful time.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。

32、请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）；2. 推荐旅游景点。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be extremely enthusiastic about (对充满热情)；virtual travel website(虚拟旅游网站)；highly recommend(强烈推荐)；amazing(令人惊异的)；sights(风景)；register(注册)；download(下载)；in addition(另外)；take photos(拍照)；such as(比如)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处

33、文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend .运用宾语从句；In addition, if you want to take photos in a place y

34、ou are interested in, just click the mouse.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。应用文写作|介绍信-中国的历史文化并参观旅游景点假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom计划来中国旅游，想了解中国的历史文化并参观旅游景点。请你用英文给Tom写一封回信，给出你的建议。内容包括：1.要参观的景点； 2.景点简介； 3.推荐理由。注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Tom,_Looking forward to

35、 your coming!Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua请翻译：1. 我从你上一封信中得知，你计划去中国了解更多的中国文化。_2. 现在我想为你在中国的逗留提出一些建议。_3. 你需要参观的最重要的地方是我们国家的首都北京。_4. 首先，北京是中国传统和文化的最好代表。_5. 另一方面，有许多名胜可供你游览，如长城和颐和园等。_6. 此外，在北京你还可以品尝到许多不同的美食。_参考答案1. 我从你上一封信中得知，你计划去中国了解更多的中国文化。I know from your last letter that you plan to travel to China to kn

36、ow more about Chinas culture. 2. 现在我想为你在中国的逗留提出一些建议。Now Id like to offer some suggestions for your stay in China.3. 你需要参观的最重要的地方是我们国家的首都北京。The most important place that you need to pay a visit to is Beijing, the capital of our country. 4. 首先，北京是中国传统和文化的最好代表。For one thing, Beijing is the best represe

37、ntative of Chinese traditions and culture. 5. 另一方面，有许多名胜可供你游览，如长城和颐和园等。For another, there are many places of interest for you to visit, such as the Great wall and the Summer Palace, etc. 6. 此外，在北京你还可以品尝到许多不同的美食。Moreover, you can also enjoy many different delicious foods in Beijing.【答案】Dear Tom,I kno

38、w from your last letter that you plan to travel to China to know more about Chinas culture. Now Id like to offer some suggestions for your stay in China.The most important place that you need to pay a visit to is Beijing, the capital of our country. For one thing, Beijing is the best representative

39、of Chinese traditions and culture. For another, there are many places of interest for you to visit, such as the Great wall and the Summer Palace, etc. Moreover, you can also enjoy many different delicious foods in Beijing.Looking forward to your coming!Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封

40、建议信。第一步：审题。体裁：建议信。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。要点：1.要参观的景点；2.景点简介；3.推荐理由。第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）如：know about，offer some suggestions，pay a visit to，for one thing，for another，the best representative，places of interest，look forward to等.第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）1.表文章结构顺序：First of al

41、l, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, Finally, In the end, At last；2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also)；3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result； 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。第五步：润色修改。【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合

42、句，如The most important place that you need to pay a visit to is Beijing, the capital of our country.使用了定语从句，there are many places of interest for you to visit, such as the Great wall and the Summer Palace, etc.使用了不定式作定语，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。应用文写作|告知信-告知中国名胜的讲座有关信息假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学

43、生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；3.建议他去听这个讲座。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。_请翻译：1. 跟你说个好消息。星期六上午9点在市培训中心为外国留学生举办讲座。_2. 这个讲座是关于中国的名胜。_3. 所以你为什么不参加呢？对你来说这真是个好机会，因为你对中国旅游很感兴趣。_4. 你不仅可以了解中国的名胜古迹，还可以更好地了解中国的文化和历史。_参考答案1. 跟你说个好消息。星期六上午9点在市培训中心为外国留学生举办讲座。Good news for you. There

44、will be a lecture for foreign students at 9 on Saturday morning in the city training center. 2. 这个讲座是关于中国的名胜。The lecture is about places of interest in China. 3. 所以你为什么不参加呢？对你来说这真是个好机会，因为你对中国旅游很感兴趣。So why dont you attend it? Its really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelli

45、ng in China. 4. 你不仅可以了解中国的名胜古迹，还可以更好地了解中国的文化和历史。Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.【答案】Dear Mike,Good news for you. There will be a lecture for foreign students at 9 on Saturday morning in the city tr

46、aining center. The lecture is about places of interest in China. So why dont you attend it? Its really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China. Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese cultu

47、re and history.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；3.建议他去听这个讲座。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：places of interest (名胜古迹)；attend (出席，参加)；opportunity (机会)；get a better understanding of (更好地理解

48、)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Its really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China.运用原因状语从句；Not only will you learn more about famous places in

49、 China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.运用倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。应用文写作|中国十日游推荐路线假定你是李华，你的美国网友Mike因工作出色被公司奖励中国十日游，他来信请你推荐旅游路线。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.推荐旅游路线；3.期待回复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_请翻译：1. 我很高兴知道，由于你在工作中的

50、出色表现，贵公司授予你十天的中国之旅。祝贺 你！_2. 为了保证您在中国的旅行愉快而难忘，我向您推荐一条最受欢迎和经典的旅游线路。_3. 即北京、上海和海南的十日游。在旅途中，您可以看到许多古老的历史遗迹，欣赏美丽的风景，体验不同的中国传统文化，品尝各种中国美食。_4. 我相信这些都会给你留下深刻的印象。_5. 你觉得我的建议怎么样？期待您的回复！_参考答案1. 我很高兴知道，由于你在工作中的出色表现，贵公司授予你十天的中国之旅。祝贺 你！Im glad to know that youve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of Chin

51、a because of your outstanding performance at work. Congratulations!2. 为了保证您在中国的旅行愉快而难忘，我向您推荐一条最受欢迎和经典的旅游线路。To guarantee you an enjoyable and unforgettable trip in China, I d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes.3. 即北京、上海和海南的十日游。在旅途中，您可以看到许多古老的历史遗迹，欣赏美丽的风景，体验不同的中

52、国传统文化，品尝各种中国美食。That is, a guided ten-day tour of Beijing, Shanghai and Hainan. During the trip, you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines. 4. 我相信这些都会给你留下深刻的印象。I m sure youll b

53、e deeply impressed by all of these.5. 你觉得我的建议怎么样？期待您的回复！What do you think of my recommendation? Looking forward to your reply!【答案】Dear MikeIm glad to know that youve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work. Congratulations!To guarantee you

54、 an enjoyable and unforgettable trip in China, I d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. That is, a guided ten-day tour of Beijing, Shanghai and Hainan. During the trip, you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience dif

55、ferent Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines. I m sure youll be deeply impressed by all of these.What do you think of my recommendation? Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件。请你向Mike推荐旅游路线。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：三段式结构：第一段表达祝贺；第二段推荐

56、路线；第三段期待回信。要求：1.表示祝贺；2.推荐旅游路线；3.期待回复。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）ten-day；outstanding；performance；congratulations；guarantee；recommend；one of the most ；historical sites；beautiful scenery；traditions and cultures；Chinese cuisines；be impressed by；recommendation；look forward to等第三步：连词成句1. Im glad to know that youve bee

57、n awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work.2. I d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. T3. you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditio

58、ns and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines.4. I m sure youll be deeply impressed by all of these.5. What do you think of my recommendation?根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）That is；and等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较

59、多高分句式，如：Im glad to know that youve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work.使用了that引导的宾语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句；I d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes.使用了I would like to句式以及one of the 短语；you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines.使用了动宾短语的并列；I m sure youll be deeply impressed by all of these.使用了that省略的宾语从句等。此外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。