高中英语复习北师大版《高考英语书面表达备考策略》(共28张PPT).ppt

1、静下来，铸我实力；拼上去，亮我风采。安庆一中 黄姗姗-浅谈高考英语书面表达备考策略一、高考英语书面表达的命题规律近三年高考英语书面表达考情横向比较表年份卷别类型体裁题材2016新课标全国卷提纲类求助信请外教帮忙修改自己的求职材料新课标全国卷提纲类邀请信邀请英国朋友参加国际中学生摄影展北京卷（第一节）提纲类回复询问信介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物上海卷图表类调研报告写一份关于“父母是否以子女为荣”的调研报告浙江卷（6月）提纲类议论文对英语名言“Planning is good,but doing is better”的看法浙江卷（10月）提纲类询问性咨询去加拿大做交换生应做何准备开放类读后续写根据

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4、籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友高考英语书面表达命题规律：1.全国卷近十年一直以提纲类应用文为主要考查内容2.第二张表格中求助信十年内考查了四次之多说明：高考真题具有重复性，在备考时考生需要仔细研究高考真题二、高考英语书面表达的评卷流程和评卷原则疑问 改高考作文时，老师会不会因为天气炎热，工作量大，随意给分？我的作文字数不够会被扣几分？我的作文有几个拼写错误会被扣几分？评卷流程 工作人员已将考生答卷快速扫描至电脑并进行图像切割 改卷之前要集中培训，强调改卷原则：宽严适度，给分准确，前后一致，规范评阅 每份答卷会由电脑评卷系统随机分发给任意两名评卷老师进行评分 如果两次得分差距为4分以内，则该考生

5、的成绩为两次得分的平均分 如果差距大于4分，该份答卷将被随机发给第三位评卷人员进行“三评”三次得分中取差距最小的两次得分的平均分作为该考生的成绩。发给阅卷组长做最终的“终评”。终评成绩为该考生的最终成绩。评卷原则 评分原则：一档漂漂亮亮（21-25分）二档像模像样（16-20分）三档马马虎虎（11-15分）四档糊里糊涂（6-10分）五档一塌糊涂（0-5分）先整体定档，后定该档次的上下档，然后评分。作文的整体效果非常重要。要点齐全，层次清楚，表达流畅，卷面整洁，语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性，高级词汇和高级句式结构的使用常见的不足1、汉语式英语2、无过渡语3、句式单一,平铺直叙应试策略

6、后期要多背范文 在作文训练中学会审题 写好开头和结尾 注意英语表达的连贯性 注意使用较丰富的句式 卷面要整洁，书写要规范后期要多背范文 多背范文，增强语感。常见的搭配、固定短语和句式结构在作文训练中学会审题 应审清题目，包括文章的体裁，文章的要点及文章的结构。在草稿纸上写下提纲写好开头和结尾 画龙点睛“Thank you!”或”Thats all.Thank you!”“May you enjoy your stay here!Thank you!”或“May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.！”高分句开头：1.I am writing to e

7、xpress my gratitude/apologies/interest/dissatisfaction regarding2.I am excessively sorry to tell you that I cant do sth because.3.I am writing the letter in purpose of inquiring/seeking/obtaining/requesting information concerning/regarding the following aspects.4.I would greatly appreciate it if its

8、 so kind of you to give me some essential information regarding the following aspects.5.I am very glad to know that you are soon coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday.I have been looking forward to your arrival.6.As you are a close friend of us,we would very much like you to participate

9、 in the celebration and share our joy.高分句结尾：1.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.2.If you have any questions,please feel free to contact me at 1234567.I look forward to hearing from you soon.3.If you do not have any prior appointment o

10、n April 1,we look forward to the pleasure of your company.4.Therefore,I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.5.If my application could be taken into favorable consideration,I would be most grateful.An

11、d I am looking forward to your early reply.6.I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as possible.And I am looking forward to an early reply.7.We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.注意英语表达的连贯性 表并列关系的词语：and/besides/furthermore/In addition/Whats mor

12、e 等 表转折关系的词语：however/but/on the contrary/on the other hand/yet/although等 表达观点的词语：In my opinion/I think/I believe/Im sure/I guess/As far as I am concerned等注意使用较丰富的句式（1）肯定不如否定好（2）陈述不如倒装（3）主动不如被动好（4）分词结构不能少注意使用较丰富的句式 他们到达机场时受到了热烈的欢迎When they arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.a.As soon as

13、 they arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.b.On arriving at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.c.They were warmly welcomed directly/the moment they arrived at the airport.d.No sooner had they arrived at the airport than they were warmly welcomede.Hardly had they arrived at the airport

14、 when they were warmly welcomed.卷面要整洁，书写要规范书写过小，下笔过轻，字迹潦草，胡乱涂改的作文-模糊不清书写过大，单词间距稀疏-词数不够，内容不充实书写工整、规范，卷面要保持干净整洁-一目了然，赏心悦目好作文是读出来的！写出来的！改出来的！1.Decide what theme to convey2.Collect information and assess/evaluate it3.Organize the information chosen4.Choose words and make sentencesMain Steps of WritingPractice every day!Hold on and youll make it。Thank you!