2020版高考英语二轮复习专项技能保分练二十一短文改错20191211449.doc

1、专项技能保分练(二十一)短文改错Test 12019湖北省联考Dear Wangping，How are things going with you? Its been six month since you studied abroad in England.It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about th

2、e food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I

3、often recall the happy days that we stayed together.Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua答案与解析：Dear Wangping，How are things going with you? Its been six since you studied abroad in England.It is the first time that you been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a fore

4、ign country. Have you got to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have English? Can you understand the teachers say in class and communicate with your classmates now? You are smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your

5、 studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days we stayed together.Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Huamonth改为monthsmonth为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。故将month改为months。had改为have此句“It is the first time that sb have done.”是现在完成时的固定句型之一，故将had改为have。在in后加withfit in with.为固定搭配，意为“适应”

6、，故在in后加with。accustom改为accustomedget accustomed to doing sth.意为“习惯于做某事”，为固定用法，故将accustom改为accustomed。learn改为learning分析句子结构可知，此处为have difficulty (in) doing sth.的变形。故将learn改为learning。that改为what分析句子结构可知，understand为动词，后接宾语从句，宾语从句引导词在从句中作say的宾语，故将that改为what。free改为freelycommunicate为动词，应用副词修饰。freely意为“自由地”；

7、free作为副词时，意为“免费地”，不符合语境。故将free改为freely。such改为sosmart为形容词，前面应用so修饰；such常用来修饰名词结构。故将such改为so。删除beenmake与其主语you之间为主动关系，故应用主动语态，故删除been。that改为when分析句子结构可知， . we stayed together为定语从句，先行词为days，定语从句引导词在从句中作时间状语，应用when引导。故将that改为when。Test 22019重庆一中检测Tea has a long history in China, dated back to 5,000 years

8、 ago. Obvious, it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many of distinguished poets and writers had written many masterpieces about the appreciate of tea and the love for it, among them was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, a first book on tea, but he was regarded

9、as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”Chinese people take delight in teadrinking. It served almost everywhere. Whenever guest visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese peoples daily life.答案与解析：Tea has a long history in China, back to 5,000 years ago. , it plays an import

10、ant part in Chinese culture. A good many distinguished poets and writers written many masterpieces about the of tea and the love for it, among was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, first book on tea, he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”Chinese people take delight in teadrink

11、ing. It served almost everywhere. Whenever visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese peoples daily life.dated改为datingdate back to.意为“追溯到”，无被动语态，此处应用现在分词形式作时间状语。故将dated改为dating。Obvious改为Obviously此处作状语，用来修饰后面的整个句子，应用副词。故将Obvious改为Obviously。删除ofa good many后可直

12、接加可数名词复数，和many的用法类似，此处意为“许多杰出诗人和作家”，表示泛指，不需要of。故删除of。had改为have句意为：许多杰出的诗人和作家写了许多对于茶的鉴赏和热爱的杰作此处表示诗人和作家关于茶的写作这件事从过去持续到现在，应用现在完成时。故将had改为have。appreciate改为appreciationabout是介词，后面接名词或动名词作宾语。故将appreciate改为appreciation。them改为whom此处是非限制性定语从句，引导词作介词among的宾语，在从句中作主语，应用whom，指代名词短语poets and writers。故将them改为whom

13、。a改为the“the序数词名词”表示“第几”，“a/an序数词”表示“又一/再一”。此处特指茶经是关于茶的第一本书，应用定冠词。故将a改为the。but改为and/so句意为：他写了第一本关于茶的书籍茶经，(所以)被认为是“茶圣”。根据句意可知，前后句存在顺承关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。在It后加is此处It指代茶，与serve之间是被动关系，又根据本段整体时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。故在It后加is。guest改为guests句意为：无论什么时候客人来访，给他们上一杯茶是一种基本的社交习俗。guest为可数名词，且根据后面的them可知，此处应用复数形式。故

14、将guest改为guests。Test 32019山西省联考This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to p

15、lay, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performanc

16、es. We came back of home at about seven pm., tired and happy.答案与解析：This morning my American Jack and I went to the temple fair in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at we saw. There were many different performances and booths selling handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to

17、play, food to eat, and performances to see, we at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came b

18、ack home at about seven pm., tired happy.friends改为friend此处指Jack这个美国朋友，故应用friend的单数形式。故将friends改为friend。holding改为held分析句子成分可知，此处为非谓语作定语，修饰the temple fair，且hold与the temple fair之间为逻辑上的被动关系，故应用过去分词作后置定语。故将holding改为held。that改为what分析句子结构可知，介词at之后是宾语从句，该从句中谓语动词saw缺少宾语，应用what引导该从句。故将that改为what。such改为so名词前有m

19、any修饰时，其前通常用so，构成“so many复数名词”。故将such改为so。快解：当名词前有many，much，few和little等词修饰时，要用so而不用such。tradition改为traditional此处修饰名词handicrafts，应用形容词。故将tradition改为traditional。spend改为spent根据语境可知，此处叙述的是发生在过去的事件，故谓语动词应用一般过去时。故将spend改为spent。在had后加ahave a great time为固定搭配，意为“玩得开心”。故在had后加a。another改为other根据语境可知，此处指许多当地小吃及

20、其他的菜，other意为“其他的；别的”，符合语境。故将another改为other。删除of句中home是副词，其前不加介词。故删除of。and改为but句中tired和happy的意思是相对立的，所以用but表示意义的转折。故将and改为but。Test 42019长春市质量监测二Its been a long time before I left my hometown. I remember it was the beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kindhearted.

21、Last weekend, I make a call to a friend living there, but he sent me some pictures of the city by email. From the photo, I can see that great changes have been taken place there. For example, the streets have become wide, and the buildings higher. Beside, the people are dressed modern clothes. Sever

22、al modern shopping malls are being built.My hometown has changed very greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.答案与解析：Its been a long time I left my hometown. I remember it was beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people th

23、ere were very kindhearted. Last weekend, I a call to a friend living there, he sent me some pictures of the city by email. From the , I can see that great changes have taken place there. For example, the streets have become , and the buildings higher. , the people are dressed modern clothes. Several

24、 modern shopping malls are being built.My hometown has changed greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.before改为since“It has been时间段since sb.did sth.”为固定句式，意为“自从某人做某事已经多久了”。故将before改为since。the改为a句意为：我记得那是一个有着宜人环境的美丽的地方，那儿的人非常热心。结合句意可知，此

25、处表示泛指，应用不定冠词，且beautiful的发音是以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。make改为made根据时间状语Last weekend可知，本句应使用一般过去时，故将make改为made。but改为and句意为：上周末，我给住在那里的一位朋友打电话，他用邮件给我发了几张城市的照片。此处表示顺承关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。photo改为photosphoto为可数名词，此处指不止一张照片，应用复数形式，故将photo改为photos。删除beentake place意为“发生”，无被动形式，故删除been。wide改为wider此处表示，现在的街道更宽了，楼房更高了，暗含与过去比较之意，因此此处应用比较级，故将wide改为wider。Beside改为Besidesbeside是介词，意为“在旁边”；besides是副词，意为“此外”。此处应用副词，表递进，故将Beside改为Besides。快解：学生如果看到beside单独在句首使用(后有逗号)，一般应改为besides。在dressed后加inbe dressed in为固定搭配，意为“穿着”，故在dressed后加in。very改为soso.that.为固定搭配，意为“如此以至于”，故将very改为so。