2020-2021学年九年级英语全册 单元写作训练 Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restaurants are（含解析）（新版）人教新目标版.doc

1、Unit3 Could you please tell me where the restaurants are?写作训练本单元介绍如何指路，也是写作要涉及的话题。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：(1) Let me tall you how to get there.(2) You can walk along.(3) Turn left/right to.(4)Go straight along.通常的指路句型：1. The post office is between the factory and the hotel. 邮局在工厂和旅馆之间。2. Its next to Zhongsha

2、n Park. 它在中山公园隔壁。3. Youd better take No. 92. 你最好乘92路车。4. Its about ten minutes walk. 步行大约要十分钟。5. Its about 700 metres from here.离这儿大约有700米。6.Walk along the road, and turn to the left at the third turning. 沿着这条路走，在第三个拐弯处向左拐。7. Go straight down / along this street. 沿着这条街一直走。8. Turn left at the second

3、turning. 在第二个路口向左转。9. You will find it on your right. 你会在你右手边发现它。10.Youd better take a bus. 你最好坐公交车去。（Youd better+动词原形）11.Take along with this street,and is on you left.12.Go down this way, and turn left at the first crossing,and you ll find is right there, on your left.13.is behind(near,next to,on

4、the left of)14.You can just take NO.111 bus, and get off at the second station.And you ll see it.15.is in front of us far away,right there!有用短语：1. turn left 向左转2. get a pair of shoes 买一双鞋子3. on one s right 在某人的右边4. go along Main Street 沿着主大街走5. have dinner 吃饭6. go to the third floor 去三楼7. go past th

5、e bookstore 走过书店8. a room for resting 休息室9. be special about. . 有独特之处10. pardon me 请再说一次11. come on 过来;加油12. hold one s hand 抓住某人的手13. one one s way to. 在去.的路上14. pass by 路过15. a rock band 摇滚乐队16. something to eat 一些吃的东西17. mail a letter 寄信18. in the shopping center 在购物中心19. in some situations 在某些场合

6、20. such as 例如21. lead in to a request 引人一个请求22. use proper language 使用合适的语言23. park one s car 停车24. an underground parking lot地下停车库25. change money 换钱26. the way to. 去.的路27. travel to. 28. thank sb. for doing sth. 为感谢某人29. look forward to.期盼30 meet sb. for the first time 第一次见到某人31in a rush to do st

7、h. 仓促地做某事32. be convenient to do sth. 做某事很方便有用表达：1. notuntilYou never know until you try something.凡事只有亲身经历了才能了解。2. It seems (that)It seems a rock band plays there every evening.那里好像每天晚上都有乐队演奏。3_ do you know.Excuse me, do you know where I can buy some medicine?打扰了，请问哪里能买到药？4. Could you please tell m

8、e. ?Could you please tell me how to get to the post office?你能告诉我去邮局怎么走吗？5 .1 wonder.I wonder where we should go next.我想知道接下来该去哪里。6. sb. suggest+ 从句The clerk suggests they go to the. museum.工作人员建议他们去博物馆。【典型例题】你有两张红旗剧院的戏剧票，想要邀请Rob和你一起去看。请你给他写封信，邀请他并告诉他具体该怎么到达红旗剧院。_【优秀作文】Dear Rob, Are you free next Sun

9、day? There will be a concert in Hongqi Theater. I have two tickets and I hope you can go with me. Now let me tall you how to get there.First , you can walk along Zhaowuda Road after you leave your home. Thenturn left onto Third Street. Go straight along Third Street. When you get to Walking Street，t

10、urn right.Then go along the street until you see Hongqi Theater on your right.I will meet you at the gate of Hongqi Theater.【常考类型】Writing1（2019山东初三单元测试）5月12日母亲节那天，你们班同学用不同的方式为妈妈庆祝了节日。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你认为哪一种方式最好，并简单说明理由。有人花很多零花钱为妈妈买礼物有人自制礼物或贺卡给妈妈有人帮妈妈做家务你的看法和理由注意：1.不少于80词；2.文中不要提及自己的姓名、学校等相关信息；3.无需写

11、标题，内容可适当发挥。参考词汇：pocket money零花钱 _例文May 12th was Mothers Day. My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways. Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves. Some students did as much housework as possible to help t

12、heir mothers.All the ways above are OK. Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. Our mothers have given us so much love and care, so we should give them more in return. Whats more, working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy. Lets take action to express o

13、ur love to our mothers faithfully.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇表格作文，内容谈谈为妈妈庆祝节日的不同方式以及自己的看法时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。2.写作思路：这是一篇所给材料比较详细的表格类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：in different ways 以不同的方式；spend 金钱+doing 花费金钱做某事；as as possible 尽可能的

14、；in return 作为回报；Whats more 更有甚者；take action to do sth 采取行动做某事。句型：Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves.；Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. ；working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make o

15、ur mothers happy.Writing2（2018山西初三单元测试）复活节是西方国家最重要的节日之一。请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇90 词左右的英语短文。EasterTime on the first Sunday between March 22 and April 25The activitiesexchange Easter Eggs and presents (money, clothes, chocolate or going on holidays together), children enter an Easter competition, prize is an

16、Easter eggMeaningcelebrate the return of the warm weatherSpecial symbol give the Easter bunny(长耳兔) to each other in Britain, the Easter bunny “hides” the eggs in the houses, children search them on Easter Sunday EasterEaster is celebrated on the first Sunday between March 22 and April 25. _【范文】Easte

17、rEaster is celebrated on the first Sunday between March 22 and April 25. It_is_celebrated_by_exchange_of_Easter_Eggs_and_other_nice_gifts._Gifts_may_be_money,_clothes,_chocolate_or_going_on_holidays_together._Children_sometimes_go_to_enter_an_Easter_competition_and_the_winnergets_an_Easter_egg.Easte

18、r_is_a_day_to_celebrate_the_return_of_the_warm_weather._The_Easter_bunny_is_a_part_of_the_Easter_tradition_in_Britain._People_buy_them_in_order_to_give_them_to_each_other._The_Easter_bunny_“hides”_the_eggs_in_the_houses_and_children_search_these_treats_on_Easter_Sunday.【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据表格中的提示，写一篇文章介绍西方

19、的复活节。题目中利用表格的形式介绍了这一节日的时间、活动、意义和特殊的象征等，是用英语叙述，因此写作前，应先仔细阅读这些内容，弄清楚他们的意思，从中确定写作的要点，然后用正确的英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并对这些内容进行合理的安排，串联成完整的、有逻辑的文章。其次应注意使用正确的时态和人称来表达，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态叙述，注意正确使用be动词和实意动词的形式。句式表达应符合英语的表达习惯，写完整的句子，以常见的简单句结构为主，确保表达的准确。穿插使用并列句或者复合句，调整文章结构。最后应注意使用恰当的句型和短语，语句直接使

20、用恰当的连接成分，使表达流畅，意思连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了西方的一个重要节日复活节。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容。短文主要从复活节的时间、活动、意义和象征等四个方面进行了介绍，层次清晰，结构合理，逻辑性强。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主进行叙述，符合表达的需要。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、明了，符合英语的表达习惯。最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，例如It is celebrated by exchange of Easter Eggs and other nice gifts 、Easter is a d

21、ay to celebrate the return of the warm weather、People buy them in order to give them to each other、The Easter bunny “hides” the eggs in the houses and children search these treats on Easter Sunday等。Writing3（2018全国初三单元测试）关于万圣节，你还知道哪些信息？请根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文，和同学分享分享万圣节的相关趣闻。万圣节是秋天的节日，每一年美国人都庆祝它它不仅是教堂的节日而且是孩

22、子们的节日。每年秋天蔬菜成熟可以食用的时候，孩子们就会挑出大个儿的橙色南瓜。然后在南瓜上刻上一张脸，把一根点燃的蜡烛放在里面。看起来就好像有人在向南瓜外面张望。这些灯就叫做“jackolanterns”，意思也就是“杰克的灯”。写作要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。_【范文】Halloween is an autumn holiday and Americans celebrate it every year.It means “holy evening，” and it comes every October 31.However, it is not really a church holi

23、day, it is a holiday for children mainly.Every autumn, when the vegetables are ready to eat, children pick large orange pumpkins.Then they cut faces in the pumpkins and put a burning candle inside, which looks as if there is someone looking out of the pumpkins! Those lanterns are called “jackolanter

24、ns”， which means lanterns of Jack.【解析】本文是材料作文，也是提纲类作文，根据提示介绍万圣节。首先确定文章的时态，本文介绍节日，可知本文的时态是一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。本文的汉语提示就是本文的提纲，写作时，内容要包括所有要点，不要逐字逐句翻译，可根据提纲适当扩充。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲，本文给词的要点就是提纲，把要点中的重要短语翻译成英文：（1）万圣节是秋天的节日，每一年美国人都庆祝它Halloween is an autumn holida

25、y and Americans celebrate it every year. （2）它在11月31日，它不仅是教堂的节日而且是孩子们的节日。October 31. It is not really a church holiday, it is a holiday for children mainly.（3）每年秋天蔬菜成熟可以食用的时候，孩子们就会挑出大个儿的橙色南瓜。然后在南瓜上刻上一张脸，把一根点燃的蜡烛放在里面。看起来就好像有人在向南瓜外面张望。这些灯就叫做“jackolanterns”，意思也就是“杰克的灯”。Every autumn, when the vegetables

26、are ready to eat, children pick large orange pumpkins. They cut faces in the pumpkins and put a burning candle inside, which looks as if there is someone looking out of the pumpkins! Those lanterns are called “jackolanterns”， which means lanterns of Jack.（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，再阅读一遍，检查单词拼写

27、，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。【点睛】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。Writing4（2

28、019山东初三课时练习）这个周末你的好朋友李明第一次来你家做客。请根据李明家的位置,为他设计合理的交通方式,并且描述清楚你家的位置,周围有哪些标志性的建筑物。100词左右。_例文Youre welcome to my home, Li Ming. Since you live on Center Street, I think its very convenient to take the No. 2 subway to my home. You can get off at the last stop and then go along Main Street. You will pass

29、by a post office and a bank. Then turn left at the first crossing. Now you are on Bridge Street. You will see a big library on your left. My home is right behind it. You cant miss it.When you arrive here, we can ride bikes together in the park nearby. Im looking forward to seeing you.【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇

30、给材料作文，周末你的好朋友李明第一次来你家做客，要求你根据李明家的位置，为他设计合理的交通方式，并且描述清楚你家的位置，周围有哪些标志性的建筑物。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容列出写作要点，让后紧扣要点动笔写作。2.例文分析：本文时态用的是一般现在时，人称是主要是第二人称，辅以第一人称。文章语句通顺、结构合理，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：get off，go along，pass by，at the first crossing，look forward to。句型：I think its very convenient to take the No.

31、2 subway to my home. 我认为乘2路地铁到我家很方便。think后面接宾语从句，its+形容词+to do sth.是固定句型，意为“做某事是的”。Then turn left at the first crossing.然后在第一个十字路口左转。本句为祈使句，这是指路的固定句型。Writing5（2018山西初三单元测试）假设你叫Carl，你的朋友Lisa下周五要到你家来做客。请你根据下面地图中标出的Lisa到你的家的行走路线及你的具体位置，写一封email。要求：1.语言简洁流畅，条理清晰，可适当发挥；2词数：80100。_【范文】Dear Lisa，I know you

32、 are arriving at my home next Friday. Now let me tell you the way to my house. When you go out of the bus station，please go down the Garden Street. When you see a post office on your left，turn right to the Center Street. Go straight down the Center Street，you can see a hotel and a bank on your right

33、. They are near my house. So its convenient for my family to live here. When you pass a school on your left，turn left and you can see my house at the end of the street.I hope youll have a good trip.Yours， Carl【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍到你的家的行走路线及你的具体位置。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏

34、材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。Writing6（2019山东初三单元测试）假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往翠湖公园的路线，并简单介绍一下公园的情况。要点提示：1.路线（见上图）；2.公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等；3.要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Cuihu Park is not far from here. Its easy to get there.

35、 Just go straight_例文Cuihu Park is not far from here. Its easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.The park is really a good pla

36、ce to have fun. Its beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. Its very relaxing. You can also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料内容，指出去翠湖公园的路以及介绍翠湖公园情况。短文的开头已经给出，写作时考生需要首先审清主

37、题，围绕主题展开作文；其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1路线；2公园介绍公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3其他。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称和第二人称。文章紧扣主题，连句成篇，层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。而且语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：go straight直走，turn right右转，at the first corner在第一个路口，have fun玩的开心。句型：Walkalongtheroadandturnleftwhenyoufindahospital本句是用来指路的祈使句，其中含有when引导的时间状语的应用。 The park is really a good place to have fun. 公园真的是个好玩的好地方。本句中的动词不定式tohavefun作为后置定语，修饰place。