冀教版英语中考书面表达专项复习(共32张PPT).ppt

1、书面表达中考英语专项复习曹树林书面表达中考考试要求要求学生能根据所给提示或要求，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等；单词数量控制在80个词左右。一.评分原则 1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据短文的内容要点初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的语言要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.短文中若出现真实的人名、校名或地名，酌情减分。二.评分标准 1.很好（1315分）内容完整、涵盖了所有内容要点、层次结构清晰、语言流畅、地道，有新意。语言基本无误。2.好（1012分）内容完整，涵盖了基本内

2、容要点，内容基本连贯，较清晰、语言较流畅、地道，有少量错误。3.一般（79分）内容较完整，但表达不够充分，层次结构较不太合理、语言不够流畅、地道，有较多语言错误。4.较差（46分）只包含了少数要点，内容过少，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言表达错误较多，不能完整表达意思。5.差（03分）只包含一个要点或所写内容与要求无关，内容不完整，语言表达错误很多，仅有几个单词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意思。.书面表达的评分细则1.Cross-question(审题)u Style(体裁）u Person（人称）u Tense（时态）健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体

3、。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。Cross-question(审题)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle(体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）:_调查报告第一人称一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题)据实描写：适当发挥：度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲2.An outline drawingu List key points(列要点)u Arrange and Add (布局加首

4、尾)BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句Supporting sentence 支持句（细节、例子、数据或引文）topic sentence主题句开门见山，紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应总分总结尾通常总结文章主要观点结尾通常总结文章主要观点,或者发表自或者发表自己的观点等等己的观点等等.List key points1.A lot of people travel.2.Some people stay at home.3.Some other people visit friends or parents.4.A few people

5、work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.(th

6、e key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加(add)3.Sentence Making and Beautifying word phrase sentence Beautifying（美化）内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点 How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel.Some

7、 people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.(the ending)most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美化(beautify)方法一:善用意义相近的高级词汇，避免行文单调 Most people choose to travel

8、to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to h

9、ave a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.It makes people relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.方法二:活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.S

10、ome people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes

11、Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）方法三:妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）Try to use some Try to use some linking wordslinking words to make to make your writing more fluently

12、your writing more fluently连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well.（the ending）Most people choose to travel to get aw

13、ay from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the body)连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our repo

14、rt.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.As the saying

15、 goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。4.CheckinguSpelling(拼写)uTense(时态)uGrammar(语法)uHandwriting(书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号)Great changes in my hometown For the past several years,my hometownchanges a

16、 lot.Such as in the past,the houses old and small,but now the buildings are tall and beautiful.And at that time,farmers work hardly and made little money.But now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money.Because its relaxing work in the factory,so they lead a happily life.Inw

17、orked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywere5.Copying outu书写规范，卷面整洁书写不规范，卷面不整洁,0分。第三档（一般）：（79分）9分，再减去书写、卷面分。（2013,河北）书面表达（计10分）假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies（爱好）”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一份发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。提示：(1)Why do you like talking about hobbies?(2)Whats your reason for

18、not talking about lucky money?要求：（1）发言稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）词数：6080。参考词汇:ones own hobby,a proper topic(合适的话题),personal,unhappy I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money.It is提供中英文材料提供表格及文字说明（2015，河北）（计15分）英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的

19、计划提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数：80个左右（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）。Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend.Thank you!提供表格及文字说明（2016，河北）看图（2017,河北）(计 15分）英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你李华的名义写一篇演讲词，向同学们介绍一下自己。提示:(1）What are your strong points?(2）How do you improve yourself?(3)What is your dream for the future?要求：（1）演讲词必须包括所有提示内容，课适当发挥；（2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。(3)词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Hello,everyone!Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself._ Thanks for your attention!HomeworkThank You