全国各地名校2015届高三英语试卷分项汇编（1月）书面表达（含解析）.doc

1、F单元书面表达目录F单元书面表达1F1书面表达记叙文1F2 书面表达议论文3F3 书面表达说明文3F4 书面表达应用文3F5书面表达夹叙夹议文3F1书面表达记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高三上学期第二次适应性测试（201501）word版】第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分） 最近，你校的校园网将开辟一个英语学习交流博客（blog）。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个博客，并欢迎同学们积极参与。1.时间：2015年6月1日开通；2.目的：促进交流，提高英语水平；3.内容：交流经验，提出问题，参与每周讨论等；注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 请

2、勿提及学校真实名称； 3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear fellow students, Good news for you! _Thats all. Thank you.【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】Dear fellow students,Good news for you! A blog will be opened on the website of our school on June 1, 2015. It aims to help us students to communicate better and

3、 improve our English level. The blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find p

4、roper solutions to them with the help of enthusiastic schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.I am sure the blog will be of great benefit to our English study. And every one of us is encouraged to visit it. Thats all. Thank you!【思路

5、点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语serve as 充当；First of all首先；In addition此外；take part in参加；The blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things这个句子where引导platform的定语从句；In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.这个句子attracted做伴随状语；I am sure the blog wil

6、l be of great benefit to our English study这个句子运用到be of 名词 等于be 形容词这个固定结构。【英语卷（解析）2015届云南省部分名校高三1月份统一考试（201501）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）“如果你想强壮，你就跑步吧；如果你想健美，你就跑步吧；如果你想聪明，你就跑步吧。”这是古希腊2500年前的三句名言。教育部(The Ministry of Education)也倡导学生：“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子。”请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，就高三学生是否需要每天花半小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。开头结尾已给

7、出。注意：词数100左右 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good afternoon, everyone:First, Im very glad to stand here talking with all of you. Thank you!【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】Good afternoon, everyone: First, Im very glad to stand here talking with all of you.As everyone knows, health is the most important thing in our life

8、. Firstly, by doing sports, we get our body trained. Secondly, doing proper activities keeps us physically fit. Lastly, when taking part in sports, we can learn not only the spirit of cooperation and optimism, but also how to deal with difficulties.Whats more, nowadays the Ministry of Education carr

9、ies out a national campaign of the students sports. The motto is that“doing sports for one hour each day, you will work healthy in fifty years and live a happy life forever.”As for me, I enjoy doing sports because this is a good thing for all of us. Some students in Grade Three think it is a waste o

10、f time, but I dont think so. Doing sports can not only let us relax ourselves but also get more chances to breathe fresh air and appreciate the natural beauty. We cant study all the time .We will be tired and have little progress if we dont relax. Relaxing can make better progress, and its good for

11、our study. So, lets do sports together and make our life more colorful. Thank you【技巧点拨】主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省德阳市高三第一次诊断考试（201412）word版 (1)】第二节书面表达（满分35分） 假设你是李冬，你的朋友新西兰交换生Nick约你一起喝茶，而你却因故失约。现在请你根据以下要点，用英语给他发一封E - mail道歉： 1表达你对

12、失约的心情： 2解释忘记约定的原因； 3拟回请她吃饭的理由； 4川菜馆的地点和特色； 5何时何地接她去餐馆。 注意：1词数120左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3开头语和结束语已为你写好（不计人总词数）。 4参考词汇：川菜馆Sichuan - style restaurant【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】Dear Nick, Im writing to apologize to you for not having gone to the tea house to have tea with you yesterday evening.I feel very terri

13、ble about it and want you to know what happened to me yesterday evening. I was busy writing my English composition, which was due today, till late into the night . I just forgot our appointment!To express my apology, Id like to invite you to have supper in a Sichuan-style restaurant with me . The re

14、staurant, located in the main street, is especially famous for its Sichuan food . If you think its OK. Ill pick you up at our school gate at 5:30 p.m this Saturday. Once again. I should apologize for any inconvenient caused. Yours sincerely Li Dong【技巧点拨】主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，

15、倒装句等；恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁省沈阳二中高三12月月考（201412）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）以 “What I Consider Important in Life” 为题，写一篇作文，作文必须包括以下内容：你认为什么是生活中最为重要的东西；你为什么认为它重要。注意：1.词数100左右：2.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。What I Consider Important in Life There is no doubt that different people have different goals in t

16、heir life, and they may have various answers to this question. _【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】What I Consider Important in Life There is no doubt that different people have different goals in their life, and they may have various answers to this question. My opinion is that the most important thing in my li

17、fe is health. First of all, life is short for everyone. Without good health, we wont have enough time to accomplish what we plan to do. We are entering a brand new century, blessed with new opportunities and faced with challenges. Without a healthy body, how can we catch up with the rapidly changing

18、 world? Meanwhile, when we have got wealth and fame but without a healthy body, we will suffer from pains caused by certain illnesses all day long. So wealth means nothing in this case. Beyond any doubt, health is more important than wealth. To conclude, I personally believe a healthy life is the so

19、urce of happiness. So lets join hands to make our life healthier, both in body and in mind.【技巧点拨】主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省安阳一中等天一大联考高三阶段测试（三）（201412）word版】第二节书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，你打算明年作为交换生到美国Michigan University去学习。你从网上得知一家美国机构提供寄宿家

20、庭的信息。因此你给他们发一封电子邮件，邮件主要内容包括： 1你对房屋类型及位置的要求； 2，要求免费提供一些生活设施； 3期望月租； 4期盼尽快回复。 注意1词数l00左右； 2开头和结尾已写好，但不计入总词数； 3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam Im going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【试题分析】本文是书信类作文，你打算明年作为交换生到美国Michigan Univers

21、ity去学习。要求给一家提供寄宿家庭信息的美国机构发一封电子邮件，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, Whats more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【范文】Dear Sir or Madam.Im going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year. H

22、aving learned from your website that you provide accommodation information for overseas students, Im writing to look for a suitable host family. My requirements are as follows:First of all ,Id like to have my own single room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. second，the flat should be in the c

23、entre of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, Id appreciate it if the host family could provide a washing machine and some essential equipment for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals, Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than $300.Im looking f

24、orward to hearing from you as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as follows 如下，look forward to 盼望，no more than不多于， Having learned from your website that you provide accommodation information for overseas students, Im writing to look for a suitable host family. 这句话用了现

25、在分词的完成式做状语， Id like to have my own single room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. second，the flat should be in the centre of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. 这里用了两个定语从句， Id appreciate it if the host family could provide a washing machine and some essential equipme

26、nt for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals,这句话用了it做形式宾语和结果状语从句，还有因为用了First of all ，second， Third, Besides, 这篇文章读起来很顺畅。【技巧点拨】主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省日照一中高三上学期第三次阶段复习质量达标检测（201501）】第二节 书面表达 (25分)动物是我们的朋友，目前濒危物种越越多

27、，很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，灭绝原因中人为因素居多，保护濒危动物人人有责。假设你是李华，请给编辑写一封信，以“保护动物”为主题，阐明动物濒危原因及解决办法。注意：1. 词数100字左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear editor,I am writing to_Best wishes! Yours,Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F1书面表达记叙文【范文】There are more and more endangered animals at present, so how to protect them has been our t

28、ask of top priority . Its wrong for people to hunt animals for their meat and feather, for they are our good friends.There are many reasons for animals dying out， but the most important one is the part that humans have played. First， many animals have been killed for food. Second， many of the places

29、 where animals used to live have been destroyed. Wet land has been turned into field. More and more trees in the forests have been cut down， but few trees are planted. Much land has either been changed into agricultural land or used for building factories and houses. Polluted rivers and lakes have a

30、lso been a cause of death of some of the animals.Luckily, some people are working to help save the animals. Some groups raise money to let people know about the problem. And they try to get the governments to pass laws protecting animals in danger. Quite a few countries have passed laws. These laws

31、forbid the killing of any animal or planton the danger list. Slowly, the number of some animals in danger is growing.【技巧点拨】主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；注意卷面整洁，书写标准。F2 书面表达议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省绵阳中学高三上学期第五次月考（201412）】第三节书面表达（满分35分）绵阳拥挤的道路给人们带来不便，引发社会广泛热议。是否应该拥有私家车，

32、有人赞成，有人反对。请你以Whether or not - Owning a private car为题，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出你自己的观点。字数：120字左右,开头已给出，不计入总词数。Whether or not - Owning a private carNowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person._【

33、答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Whether or not - Owning a private carNowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It

34、gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain

35、that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Whats more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem. Personally, I think private cars should be rest

36、ricted rather than encouraged.【思路点拨】范文是一篇议论文，并已给出首段，全文结构安排合理，层次分明。范文第二段、第三段阐述了人们的不同观点，用了Some people For example；However, others，Whats more,等词语，使全文条理清晰。最后一段使用句型Personally, I think发表自己的观点。并且范文使用大量非谓语动词和从句。整体来说，范文要点齐全，结构严谨，句式多变。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈六中高三上学期期末考试（201501）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）高三（14）班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应

37、该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息, 给报社写一封信, 介绍讨论的情况, 并发表你的看法。写作内容少数同学赞成处罚乘客大多数同学反对处罚乘客1. 减少交通事故,促进交通安全2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车,不仅是对自己负责, 也是对司机和路人负责1.乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒2. 即使乘客知道司机饮酒, 如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的你的看法：写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；开头已为你写好，不计入句子总数。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Dear Editor， Im writing to tell you about the discussion wev

38、e had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished._Yours sincerely，Li yan【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Dear_Editor,Im_writing_to_tell_you_about_the_discussion_weve_had_about_whether_passengers_who_ride_in_a_car_driven_by_a_drunken_driver_should_be_punished. The

39、minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reducetraffic accidents and increase traffic safety.Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver isnot only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the driver and otherpeople on the road. The major

40、ity of the students,however,disapprove of the idea,stating that it is difficult forcommon passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not.Whats more,evenif the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the drivernot to drive,it is unfair to punish the

41、passenger when the driver does not follow the advice. As far as I am concerned,punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfairbut also hard to carry out. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【思路点拨】这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，覆盖所有要点，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。段落安排合理，正文二、三段使用“The minority of the students hold the opinion tha

42、t”“ The majority of the students,however,disapprove of the idea”陈述了少数同学和多数同学的观点，最后一段用As far as I am concerned陈述自己的观点。文章段落层次清析，且应用了较多的语法结构。正文第一段第二句“Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver”使用了not短语位于句首的倒装句；第三段第一句 stating that.既包含了非谓语动词，又有that和know whether的宾语从句；紧接着，又有一个even if（尽管）引导的让步状语从句。【英语卷

43、（解析）2015届湖北省襄阳市高三第一次调研考试（201501）word版】第二节：短文写作（共1题：满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to dodifficult things easily Friedrich Schiller注意：1无须写标题； 2除诗歌外，文体不限； 3内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 4文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 5词数不少于120词，如引用提示语则不

44、计人总词数。【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】When it comes to the key to success， the most important thing lies in doing every simple thing well Doing simple things may help us develop good qualities needed in undertaking difficult and important task， which lay a solid foundation for our future development When I w

45、as young， I was under the impression that mother always nagged me how to do some housework well， like making beds， emptying rubbish or cleaning my room， which I was almost fed up with One day， after I finished washing dishes in the kitchen， mother criticized me for my doing a bad job， saying that if

46、 you dont do such a simple thing like washing dishes perfectly， it is impossible for you to undertake any difficult task Although I felt very wronged， my later life reminded me mother was right It was by doing simple things well that I gained many fine qualities to do something difficult， of which t

47、he most important one was patience From my perspective， under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing simple things Instead we should regard them as the sources of experience， skills and requirement of success“Great achievement only belongs to those who have the patience to do simpl

48、e things perfectly”just as Friedrich Schiller used to say 【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语When it comes to当提到；was almost fed up with厌烦；finish doing 完成某事；Doing simple things may help us develop good qualities needed in undertaking difficult and important task， which lay a solid foundation for our future developmen

49、t这个句子运用到动名词做主语，which引导非限制性定语从句；From my perspective， under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing simple things这个句子under no circumstances决不放在句首，主句用部分倒装；【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省绵阳中学高三上学期第五次月考（201412）】第三节书面表达（满分35分）绵阳拥挤的道路给人们带来不便，引发社会广泛热议。是否应该拥有私家车，有人赞成，有人反对。请你以Whether or not - Owning a priva

50、te car为题，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出你自己的观点。字数：120字左右,开头已给出，不计入总词数。Whether or not - Owning a private carNowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person._【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Whether or not - Ownin

51、g a private carNowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For

52、example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street

53、, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Whats more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem. Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.【思路点拨】范文是一篇议论文

54、，并已给出首段，全文结构安排合理，层次分明。范文第二段、第三段阐述了人们的不同观点，用了Some people For example；However, others，Whats more,等词语，使全文条理清晰。最后一段使用句型Personally, I think发表自己的观点。并且范文使用大量非谓语动词和从句。整体来说，范文要点齐全，结构严谨，句式多变。【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省成都市高中毕业班第一次诊断性检测（201412）WORD版】第三节书面表达（满分35分，将答案写到答题卡相应的位置上）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论班干部与同学关系问题。请你按以下提示，为该报写一篇英文稿

55、件。 1.班干部的重要性及主要职责； 2.班干部与其他同学可能会产生冲突； 3.产生冲突的原因（三点）； 4你对避免冲突的建议。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：班干部class cadres冲突conf lict(cn.）【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，要求学生就班干部与学生的关系进行讨论，故应用一般现在时和第三人称。 文章使用了一般现在时兼有灵活使用情态动词，且使用得当，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了when necessary做状语；高级词汇announcement

56、，furthermore，purpose等；还使用了in my opinion，however等关联词以及only if引导状语从句放在句首主句倒装等让文章一气呵成，堪称佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省唐山一中等五校高三上学期第二次联考（201501）】第二节：书面表达：（满分25分）最近，某英语交流学习论坛提出一个话题“ Should square dancing be forbidden ?” 邀请网友参与讨论。你打算参加, 请根据题目写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：广场舞的现状；表明你的观点；给出理由。注意：词数100左右。 Should square dancing be forbid

57、den ?_【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】Should square dancing be forbidden ?In recent years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in cities. Many people have a habit of dancing to music with others. However, the loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square. Should square dancing b

58、e forbidden ?I dont think so. Here are the reasons. First of all, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up. It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other. Besides, the square is a good place for people to work out.At the same time, th

59、e people living near the square have the right to live in peace. So I suggest the time when people dance on the square should be limited.【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语be popular in 在。中受到欢迎；have a habit of 有。习惯；first of all首先；at the same time同时；have the right to do 有权利做某事；However, the loud noise disturbs the peo

60、ple who live around the square.这个句子who引导的是people的定语从句；First of all, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up.这个句子运用到动名词做主语，which引导非限制性定语从句；At the same time, the people living near the square have the right to live in peace这个句子中living是分词做后置定语用来修饰the people。

61、【英语卷（解析）2015届安徽省屯溪一中高三第四次月考（201412）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）下图描述了一种令家长和老师担忧的现象，部分学生（甚至是即将面临高考的学生）在学习过程中，为了不费精力脑力地完成作业而利用网络抄袭的现象。请根据你对该图的理解写一篇英语短文，词数120左右。内容包括（可适当增加细节，使行文连贯）：（1）简要阐述图片反映的现象； （2）分析造成该现象的原因（至少两点）； （3）提出自己的看法。【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文【范文】The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that all

62、ows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend t

63、o make use of the Internet to gain information they need. There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. Whats more, theres no doubt that the pressure to s

64、ucceed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, its likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confid

65、ence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encouraging students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.【思路点拨】范文涵盖了题目所有要点内容，主题明确、行文连贯、逻辑性较强、语言流畅。段落安排合理，第一段直接切入主题；第二段、第三段、第四段按照要点分段。范文应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，如定语从句

66、as a wonderful tool that（第一段）、As is vividly shown in the picture,（第二段）、, where problems， which is not beneficial（第三段）；名词性从句the fact that（第二段）、what teachers and parents should do is （第四段）；theres no doubt that等等。全文结构紧凑，层次分明。To begin with,Whats more, In my opinion, Firstly， Besides ，Finally,等词语的运用，使全文条

67、理清晰。F3 书面表达说明文F4 书面表达应用文【英语卷（解析）2015届湖南省衡阳市八中高三上学期第六次月考（201501）】Section C（25 points）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近年来媒体不断报道一些商家为了获取商业利益生产制造一些对人体有害的食品。请你以此为话题，给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈你对食品安全的看法。信的内容应包括以下要点：1. 食品安全问题屡次发生的原因。（利益、道德、法律等方面）2. 减少此类事件发生的

68、措施。（对企业的法律监管，提高防范意识等）要求: 1.书写工整，卷面整洁；2. 词数不少于120个，开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词汇：food safety；producerDear sir, Yours, LiHua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】I am writing to say something about food safety, which has caused a great concern among the public.There are some reasons for this problem. Firstly, some of the f

69、ood producers just care about making money, ignoring its damage possible to peoples health. Secondly, we fail to recognize the importance of moral education. Thirdly, the lack of adequate laws on those illegal producers enforces the trend. Safety measures should be taken to deal with the problem. On

70、 the one hand, more strict laws should be made to punish the illegal producers and the sellers who break the law. On the other hand, consumers should avoid buying unsafe food. Whats more, the government should strengthen management over the food quality.In a word, if everyone can make a difference,

71、I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future. 【思路点拨】作文是社会关注的热点问题“食品安全”。范文按照要点合理安排段落，条理清晰。第一段直接提出食品安全问题，第二段解释了食品安全问题的原因，第三段针对食品安全问题，提出采取的措施，最后一段提出自己的观点。范文第二段、第三段采用总分结构，使用了Firstly，Secondly,Thirdly；On the one handOn the other hand, Whats more,连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟题意

72、的基础上，用平实的语言，逻辑性较强、语言流畅。【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆市巴蜀中学高三上学期第一次模拟考试（201501）】写作二 (满分20分) 假如你是李华，新华中学学生。你校最近成立了读者俱乐部。成为俱乐部成员的要求就是要推荐一本书给同学们。请根据以下要点，写一封邮件给俱乐部负责人David。 祝贺俱乐部的成立； 推荐书籍 Harry Potter，并简单阐述推荐理由；（故事有趣，包含许多人生哲理等） 读者俱乐部的成立对学生的意义，并表达想成为其中一员的愿望。注意：词数不少于80；不能逐字逐句翻译；邮件格式及开头已经给出（不计入总词数）。参考词汇： 人生哲理 philosophies

73、 of lifeDear David,I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Secondary School. _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear David,I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Secondary School. I have learnt that our school hasset up a reader club. Id like to be one of the members, so Im writing to apply for

74、 it.First congratulations on the foundation of the club，which will make contributions to the growth of the students and make great sense of our school life. I heard that everyone who wants be a member of the club should introduce a book to it. I recommend an interesting book called Harry Potter, whi

75、ch also can tell us a lot of life philosophy. In fact, I have read Harry Potter for at least 3 times and I think it is of great benefit to its readers.As far as Im concerned, being a member is helpful to colour my school life. Besides, by helping others, I can make a small contribution to school.Id

76、appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【思路点拨】题目要求用英语写一封申请信，申请成为一名英语志愿者老师。是常见的书信作文，写作的要点已经给出，按要求从写信目的，自我介绍与自我优势，对工作的认识等方面着手。用第一人称进行写作，对自己的评价尽量客观。注意书信的格式，标点和书写规范。范文注意使用As far as Im concerned, Besides,来衔接段意和句意，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了一些

77、重点语法知识，如：宾语从句I have learnt that our school has set up a reader club; 非限制性定语从句which will make contributions to the growth of the students and make great sense of our school life，固定句型Id appreciate it if.，动名词作主语being a member.等；语法功底较扎实。范文还使用了较多的短语Id like to, apply for, As far as Im concerned, make a co

78、ntribution to, look forward to等，使作文显得充实，有内涵。【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆市巴蜀中学高三上学期第一次模拟考试（201501）】写作一 (满分15分)请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。The Chinese Characters Dictation Competition, which requires contestants to hear spoken words and then write the correct characters, is shown on CCTV every weekend. Since July, organizers o

79、f the competition have been reviving (重新使用) characters that ha ve fallen out of general use, such as weirui (葳蕤) and liewen (裂璺).要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法； 2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 3. 词数不少于60。_ _【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】The revival of rarely used characters promoted by the contest seems ridiculous. Lookingat it in term

80、s of practicability, the contest is reading the public in the wrong direction. The development of a language can not be separated from its usage in reality. Throughout the course of history, outdated characters or words have inevitably been replaced by more modern and innovative versions. For one th

81、ing, many other simpler words can express the same meaning, why would people invest time in remembering the strokes(笔划) of such complicated word？ For another, the research of ancient Chinese characters should be undertaken by academics, rather than the general public. For a TV programme, using tradi

82、tional culture to attract audience is a great selling point, but we should be aware that the show has little power to bring those rarely used characters back to life.【思路点拨】题目要求用英语写对目前汉字听写大赛的评论。写作的要点已经给出，按要求从汉字的使用等方面着手。用第一人称进行写作，评价尽量客观。范文注意使用for one thing，for another等来衔接段意和句意，做到了语意连贯；范文使用了一些重点语法知识，如：

83、宾语从句that the show has little power to bring those rarely used characters back to life和v-ing形式做宾语remembering the strokes(笔划) of such complicated word；范文还使用了较多的短语in terms of, bring back to life等，使作文显得充实，有内涵。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省日照市日照一中高三12月校际联合检测（201412）】第二节 书面表达（25分)假如你叫王凯，是学校国际班学生，上周五晚从楼梯摔下造成左脚受伤。虽手术及时，但

84、仍须在家中休养一月。请你按以下要点给你的老师MrSmith写一封信：1请假并说明原因，表达歉意；2询问病假期间的学习方式；3表达个人愿望。注意：1词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Mr. Smith_Yours sincerely,Wang Kai【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】Dear Mr. Smith,Im so sorry to say that I have to stay away from school for some time, because I hurt my left leg when I was goi

85、ng downstairs last Friday evening. Fortunately, I was given an immediate operation, but the doctor told me that I had to stay in bed for a month. What a long time!So, what can I do during this long absence from you and other teachers and classmates? Im really worried about the lessons, and Ill feel

86、lonely without you. What can I do, Mr. Smith?Im looking forward to your reply, and I hope I can get back to school as soon as possible.Yours sincerely, Wang Kai【思路点拨】 本文主要就自己受伤情况写出一请假条，学生中耳闻目睹的事情，容易动笔书写。 文中使用了3个（that）引导的宾语从句，fortunately，as soon as possible，look forwardto等高级短语；也使用了because引导的原因状语从句和wh

87、en引导的时间状语从句；还使用了what引导的额感叹句，还使用了so，and，but等连接词，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。【英语卷（解析）2015届吉林省实验中学高三上学期第二次模拟考试（201501）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）火车、地铁、公交车内的“低头族”越来越多，尤其是青年人，上车后很快拿出手机，不管路程长短，不论坐着还是站着，人人都眼睛盯着屏幕，有的人走路也在看手机 针对这一现象 ，发表你的看法。 注意：行文连贯流畅；低头族：phubber 词数：100词左右 _ 【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】 The mobile phone has been part o

88、f our life. Mobile phones bring us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, would like to stare at their screen, surfing or playing games, no matter whether they are on a bus or a train, and no matter how far the journey is. And even they will not miss the chance t

89、o surf the in internet when crossing the street. They never care about what happened around. As far as I am concerned, phubbing on a moving bus does harm to their eyes. Besides, phubbing is also dangerous while crossing the street. Wish phubbers hold up their heads to enjoy surroundings.【思路点拨】 本文主要就

90、青年人中的低头族写出自己的看法，学生耳闻目睹的事情，容易动笔书写。 文中使用了no matter how 和no matter whether引导的让步状语从句，do harm to，care about等高级短语；也使用了不定式作定语；还使用了while + v-ing形式作状语，还使用了however，besides等连接词，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省洛阳市高三第一次统一考试（201412）】第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华。你的加拿大笔友Pcter给你发了邮件，说他叔叔Smith将于12月12日上午11: 30乘航班CA988到你所在的城市开

91、会，同时带来了你想要的巧克力，请你按时接机。请你速回邮件说明： 1乐意按时接机； 2接机方式：在飞机场出口处举一牌子“Smith is welcome； 3接到人后会立即回信。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头语和介绍语已为你写好。Dear Peter,How are you doing?_I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to our city. Yours Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear PeterHow are you doing?I have known from

92、 your email that your uncle Smith is coming to my city for a conferences. Many thanks for the chocolates that you will ask him to bring me .Also, Im willing to meet your uncle at the airport at 11:30am,December12. Please tell him that Ill raise the welcome board, saying “Smith is welcome” and stand

93、in front of the arrival gate to wait for him, Ill wait until I meet him. And then Ill take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to our city. Upon my meeting him, Ill contact you as soon as possible. Ill try my best to make your uncle happy here.I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to

94、our city Yours Li Hua【思路点拨】写信是中学生最熟悉的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们有话可说。写作时应注意下面几点：（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给笔友Peter写信。（2）注意时态的正确使用：信中对将来事情（如叔叔开会、航班抵达等）的描述与写信人的请求应用一般将来时，叔叔李明的情况介绍用一般现在时。（3）要点全面，层次清楚，语言简练。（4）注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。（5）适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水中学高三上学期五调考试（201412）word版】第二节：书面表达(满分25分) 假定

95、你是李化，你在网上看到你在市工作的英国人Rose发布的广告，说她想找一人陪跑族，并且愿意为此支付费用。你很感兴趣，请给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：自我介绍；询问相关事宜；希望被录用；注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：同伴companionDear Rose Im Li Hua, a 26-year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer._ Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hua【

96、答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Rose Im Li Hua , a 26-year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer. Ive seen your advertisement on the Internet that you want to find a running companion and youd like to pay him. Im quite interested in it. For one thing , I happen to be in the same city wit

97、h you. For another, I have years of experience in fitness training, so I know what works best for you . Id like to know something more about it. First , when and where do I have to go and ran with you and how ling does the running last each time? Besides, how much can I get paid each time? Consideri

98、ng my rich experience, I believe Im your best choice. I do hope I can be accepted. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hua【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语be interested in 对，感兴趣；get paid 得到报酬；Ive seen your advertisement on the Internet that you want to find a running companion and youd like to pay him这个句

99、子中that you want to find a running companion and youd like to pay him做advertisement的同位语从句；Considering my rich experience, I believe Im your best choice这个句子considering做介词表示考虑到；I do hope I can be accepted.这个句子do用来表示强调动词hope。【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省山大附中高三12月月考（201412）】第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是学生会主席李华。为提高同学们的阅读兴趣，你校将于寒

100、假过后(3月19日下午2：00) 在教学楼201室举行读书交流活动，请用英语写一篇通知，号召全体学生积极参加。要点如下： 1、活动时间，地点；2、活动目的；3、交流内容；4、欢迎参加。注意： 1.词数100左右，标题和落款已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节.Notice_The Students Union【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】NoticeIn order to improve the students interest in reading, our school is to hold an activity in Room 201 of the teachin

101、g building at 2 pm on March 19.All the students are welcome to the activity, where the participants are expected to exchange views about what they have read. Besides, you can recommend books to others to read. It is hoped that all the students should spend more time reading during the coming winter

102、holiday in order to have something to share with other students.Lets seize the chance and make good preparations for it!The Students Union【思路点拨】本文是通知类写作，中心明确，表述简练。范文中用到一些常见的短语in order to 为了；recommend sth to sb给某人推荐某物；spend time in doing 花费时间做某事；make good preparations for为。做准备；All the students are we

103、lcome to the activity, where the participants are expected to exchange views about what they have read.这个句子运用到where引导的定语从句；【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省康杰中学等四校高三第二次联考（201501）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的美国笔友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：表示祝贺且备受鼓舞；介绍自己目前的学习情况；请教学习方法。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数； 3.

104、 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter， I have received your e-mail. _ Yours, Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文【范文】Dear Peter, I have received your e-mail. I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard. First Id like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success an

105、d I also hope to enter a famous university just like you. Now I want to tell you something about myself. As you know, Im busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination. Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers. However, Im always feeling stressed out because

106、 my efforts dont seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to give me some advice?I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】范文是一封电子邮件，开头和结尾复合电子邮件的特点。范文要点齐全，段落安排合理，使用较多语法结构和词汇。第一段使用了同位语从句the good news that。第二段的

107、非谓语动词stay up late doing piles.以及一个非限定性定语从句pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted.【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省实验中学高三第三次诊断考试（201412）】第二节 书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSenior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。ASSISI ANTS WANTEDValuable chances ale open for high school graduates wh

108、o are good at EnglishTheir work is to tend the senior students during the breakRequirements attached：1Good at English2Experienced priorityContact us by e-mail：midesch163com注意： 1短文词数100字左右； 2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；Dear SirMadam，_ Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文 【范文】 Id like to apply for the post of

109、assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me. Ive just graduated from high school. Luckily Im good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looke

110、d after the old people in a nursing home on weekends. In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. Im available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer. 【思路点拨】 本文主要就广告写出自己的求职信，学生了解自己的情况，容易动笔书写。 文中使用了which引

111、导的定语从句，apply for，be available for等高级短语；也使用了used to短语以及be a great help for；还使用了appreciate it if +从句句型，还使用了in addition，in short等连接词，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【英语卷（解析）2015届湖北省荆门市高三元月调研考试（201501）】第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分)请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Nearly everyone likes traveling during vocations. Traveling can

112、not only enrich our experiences but also broaden our minds.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】As far as I am concerned, nearly all of us like traveling during vocations. On the one hand, traveling is a good way to relax ourselves. On th

113、e other hand, it is important for us to learn about the world.Take my personal experience as an example. I can well remember there was a time when my family went to Shanghai to see the World Expo in 2010. So many foreigners were there that I had the chance to communicate with English native speakers

114、. Meanwhile, I visited the pavilions created by different countries. It was through colorful exhibitions and performances that I learned about technologies and cultures of these countries. Above all, during my stay there, I could also see science and technology in China developing so fast. Our count

115、ry is becoming more and more thriving and prosperous, of which I feel very proud.Based on my personal experience, I am firmly convinced that knowledge is not only in books but also in experience. Not only can traveling open our eyes to the world, but we can also learn what we cant learn from books.【

116、思路点拨】范文覆盖所有内容要点，句式多变且条理清晰。第一段开门见山，首先点明了主旨。第二段以自己的亲身经历为例来谈论旅行带来的好处。最后一段与第一段呼应，再次点题。范文使用较多语法结构。第一段使用As far as I am concerned,（就我所知）和衔接词On the one hand，On the other hand。第二段使用了一个“So many foreigners were.”倒装句；一个强调句型“It was. that”以及一个非限定性定语从句“, of which”。最后一句也是一个倒装句“Not only can traveling open our eyes t

117、o the world,”。【英语卷（解析）2015届江苏省南通中学高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)如图所示，一群高中学生正在操场捡拾垃圾，旁边有部分学生在踢球玩耍，对捡垃圾者熟视无睹。请你根据对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。短文应包含以下内容：1. 简要描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2. 目前校园内环保状况；3. 你自己的感想和建议。注意：1. 可参照图片及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。As is vividly portr

118、ayed in the picture, _【答案】【知识点】F5书面表达夹叙夹议文【范文】As is vividly portrayed in the picture, some volunteers are bending down and picking up rubbish, with plastic bags in their hands and sweat on the their foreheads. Nearby are some boy playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing.While

119、 focusing in their studies, some students do not pay enough attention to their conduct at school, and littering is most common. Thats not appropriate behavior for us high school students, and it not only dirties the environment but also does great harm to the image of the school.As a matter of fact,

120、 a clean environment can never be emphasized too much. It beautifies out school, making it a good place to study in. We should develop good habit of protecting environment. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Lets keep in mind that better environmen

121、t means better life.【思路点拨】范文运用一引起常见的短语pick up拾起；focus on 集中注意力；keep in mind记住；As is vividly portrayed in the picture, some volunteers are bending down and picking up rubbish, with plastic bags in their hands and sweat on the their foreheads这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句；It beautifies out school, making it a good place to study in.这个句子making做伴随状语；Lets keep in mind that better environment means better life这个句子运用到祈使句和比较级。