2022-2023学年新教材高中英语 Unit 1 Back to school Section Ⅳ Writing 高中学校生活学案 牛津译林版必修第一册.doc

1、Section Writing高中学校生活1写作任务假定你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久随父母去了加拿大，她写信告诉你她觉得很无助，想征求你的意见去更好地适应加拿大新的高中生活。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。(1)学好英语，以便与外国人更好地交流；(2)多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；(3)积极参加各种活动，挖掘潜力，培养自信。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2写作思路(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：建议信主题：高中学校生活(2)二定：确定时态和人称时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅人称：第一人称()和第二人称(you)(3)三明确：明确写作

2、要点写作要点：表示理解给出建议祝愿(4)四分段：结合要点分三个段落3素材整理(1)关键词语利用take advantage of有做某事的机会 have the opportunity to do sth.集中于 focus on利用所有资源去做use all resources to do有助于 contribute to高中 senior high school对持有积极的态度 have a positive attitude to培养某人的自信 develop ones confidence起作用，有影响 make a difference盼望做某事 look forward to do

3、ing sth.(2)完成句子如果你采纳我的建议，它可以很容易改变。It can be easily changed if you _ my tips.为了有更多的机会与外国人交流，你应该集中精力提高你的英语水平。_ with foreigners, you should _ your English.我发现利用一切资源结交更多的朋友对你来说很重要。I _ use all resources to make more friends.在高中有各种各样的活动，你必须对它们持有积极的态度。_ all kinds of activities in senior high school, and yo

4、u must _它们将有助于发掘你的潜力，培养你的信心。They will help to _.我期待你的早日回复。_ your early reply.4满分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。参考范文：Dear Mary，Im sorry to learn that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in Canada, but it can be easily changed if you take advantage of my tips.Firstly, to have

5、more opportunities to communicate with foreigners, you should focus on improving your English. Secondly, I find it important for you to use all resources to make more friends, which can contribute to forgetting your loneliness. Thirdly, there are all kinds of activities in senior high school, and yo

6、u must have a positive attitude to them, because they will help to explore potential and develop your confidence. I hope it can make a difference to you.Im looking forwards to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua综合点评：(1)紧扣内容要点，结构清晰，内容接近实际且详略得当，并进行了适当拓展与发挥；(2)人称、时态运用恰当；(3)关联词运用恰如其分，如Firstly，Secondly, thirdl

7、y等，使得衔接过渡自然；(4)句式使用复杂多样，使用灵活自如。如There be结构，动词不定式，非限制性定语从句等。5佳作背诵(1)佳作一进入高中生活以来已经有一个月的时间了，在这一段时间里，一定有令你难忘的回忆，请描述令你印象深刻的一件事，并谈谈你的体会。注意：请勿出现真实的班级和姓名。_(2)佳作二假定你是李华，你的朋友张明来信说他进入高中后发现英语听力理解比较困难，向你寻求帮助。请你用英语给他回信并提几点建议。主要内容如下：常听英语对话；看CCTV-9；听英文歌曲。注意：词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；信件中不能出现真实姓名和地址。参考词汇：

8、对话dialogueDear Zhang Ming，Its nice to hear from you. Im sorry to know that you are having trouble in English listening comprehension._Yours truly，Li HuaSection Writing高中学校生活3答案：take advantage ofTo have more opportunities to communicatefocus on improvingfind it important for you toThere arehave a pos

9、itive attitude to themexplore potential and develop your confidenceIm looking forward to5(1)参考范文：Generally speaking, high school life is busy and fulfilling. In my opinion, my high school life is challenging and warm.I used to be very shy and had some difficulty making new friends. However, my first

10、 task in high school was to introduce myself in front of all my classmates. I got fully prepared and tried to learn every word by heart. Unfortunately, when it was my turn to make the speech, I was so nervous that I couldnt say a word. Seeing that, my teacher said gently to me, “Take it easy. Be con

11、fident and you can make it.” To encourage me, my classmates applauded me. Suddenly I was not nervous any more, and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly. Again, the classroom broke into thunderous applause.It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident. It was the most unforgetta

12、ble thing in my life.(2)参考范文：Dear Zhang Ming，Its nice to hear from you. Im sorry to know that you are having trouble in English listening comprehension. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help.Firstly, as far as I am concerned，you should listen to E

13、nglish dialogues spoken by native speakers frequently. If you do this, you will feel familiar with the English pronunciation and expressions. Secondly, why not watch the news and interviews on CCTV-9? That way, you will get a better knowledge of important events in English. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you listen to English songs. By doing this, Im sure youll find English interesting and make great progress as time goes on.I hope youll find the suggestions useful.Best wishes!Yours truly，Li Hua