江苏省张家港市崇真中学高三英语复习：WRITING BASED ON CARTOONS 课件 （共20张PPT）.ppt

1、苏州市2015届高三零模作文As is shown in the caricature,two men are painting on the canvas._ How to write based on cartoons?Outer Outer appearanceappearancehandwritingparagraphsBasic elements of a good compositionInnerInnerqualitiesqualitiesSentence patternsWords&PhrasesConjunction Step 1:Describe the cartoon b

2、riefly Step 2:Figure out the inner meaningStep 3:Voice your opinions Writing process发现问题分析问题解决问题Whats in the cartoon?Observe it carefully and find some key information:-People;things;words;actions;feelings.Step 1:Describe the cartoonA boy is occupied in chatting on the Internet.He refuses to talk wi

3、th his mother.The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy.She is depressed.Make at least four simple sentences.A boy isoccupied inchatting on the Internet.He refuses to talk with his mother.The mother can do nothing butstand behind the boy.She is depressed.Useful sentence structures:As is viv

4、idly shown/portrayed/depicted/illustrated/indicated in the picture,.As can be seen in the picture,.As is vividly portrayed in the picture,occupied in chatting on the Internet,a boy refuses to talk with his mother.The mother can do nothing butstand behind the boy,depressed.Combine the sentences.Step

5、2:Figure out the inner meaningWhats behind the cartoon?Think twice.A picture is worth a thousand words.Reveal related factors.1.The internet:provide us with convenience be addicted to the virtual world keep distance from2.The pressure from study:drive us to do3.The parents:be occupied with their wor

6、k spare little time to stay withSome useful sentence structures:It is the exact reflection of Several factors contribute to the phenomenon.The caricature vividly reflects a social phenomenon that1.The internet:provide us with convenience be addicted to the virtual world keep distance from2.The press

7、ure from study:drive us to do3.The parents:be occupied with their work spare little time to stay withSuggested version:Para 2 It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children.Several reasons contribute to it.Firstly,the Internet provides us witha place where we can co

8、mmunicate with different people,in which case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us.Additionally,pressure from study drives us to seekexcitement on the Internet.Last but not least,parents,occupied with their work,spare little time to stay with their childre

9、n,resulting in the less communication.Find out some solutions.Children:be aware of cut back on parents:spare as much time as they can exchange ideas and feelings withStep 3:Voice your opinionsSome useful sentence structures:As far as Im concerned,some effective measures should be taken by.On my pers

10、onal note,From my perspective,Only when people work together can we ensureOnly with joint efforts may we believe that the better we are looking forward to is around the corner.solutions.Children:be aware of cut back on parents:spare as much time as they can exchange ideas and feelings withSuggested

11、version:Para 3 As far as Im concerned,some effective measures should be taken by parents and children.In terms ofchildren,we should cut back on the time when we play computers and be aware of the importance of communication with parents.In addition,parents and children should exchange their ideas an

12、d feelings regularly.Only with joint efforts may webelieve that the better communication between children and parents we are looking forward to is around the corner.最近中国的空气质量引起了广泛的关注。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：1.简要描述漫画内容；2.简要分析产生这种现象的原因；3.针对以上现象谈谈你自己的看法（至少两点）。参考词汇：口罩mask；雾霾hazeOne Possible Version：Pa

13、ra.1 As is indicated in the picture,an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths.As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier,they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.Para.2 What the picture conveys here is that air pollution

14、 is quite severe in China.Many factors account for this phenomenon.In the first place,vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution.Furthermore,factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality.Besides,burning materi

15、als like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.Para.3 Personally,to better the air quality,the government and the common citizens should make joint efforts.Riding and walking are wise options for public travels.Meanwhile,effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.112233Arrangement条理性Accuracy准确性Fluency流畅性