Unit 4 Where's my schoolbag-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年七年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）.docx

1、Unit 4 Wheres my schoolbag?单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度谈论房间物品的位置The.is on the. .在.上面。方位介词的使用（in, on, under等）本单元写作是要求学生们可以用所学句型及方位介词对房间内的物品摆放进行简单介绍，可以熟练介绍学校、教室、卧室、客厅等场所，介绍物品位置时也可以涵盖物品的特点。在具体的写作中可以做到以下几点：1.确定时态：一般现在时；2.确定人称：第一人称；3.详细介绍房间内的物品位置；4.正确使用方位介词，以及连词and和but；5.注意名词单复数的使用;6.写作言简意赅，表达明确。（以思维导图的形式呈现）【词

2、汇积累】1. bed 床2. sofa 沙发3.bookcase 书柜4.chair 椅子5.schoolbag 书包6.tape 磁带7.model plane 模型飞机8.tape player 收音机9.dictionary 字典10.tidy 整洁的11.on 在.上12.in 在.里13.under 在.下【句式积累】 开头句1. Im.我是2. This is my room. 这是我的房间。3. I have a nice room. 我有一间整洁的房间。4. There are lots of thing in the room. 房间里有一些物品。5.Whats in my

3、room? 我的房间里有什么吗？6. Let me tell you something about my room. 让我来告诉你我房间里的一些东西。7.Here is my room. 这是我的房间。8.Let me introduce my room to you. 让我向你介绍一下我的房间。9.I like my room very much. 我非常喜欢我的房间。10.It is big and clean. 它又大又整洁。11.Its small but tidy. 它虽然小但是整洁。 中间句1. The.is/are on the. .在.上面。2. The.is/are in

4、the. .在.里面。3. The.is/are under the. .在.下面。4. Look at the picture. 看这张图片。5. Where are/is the.? .在哪？6. Its/ Theyre. 它/它们在.7.There is/are. in it. 里面有.8.My books are everywhere. 我的书到处都是。9.The withe model plane is hers/his. 这个白色的飞机模型是她的/他的。 结尾句1.Here is my idea room. 这是我的理性房间。2.I think the room is very n

5、ice. 我认为这间房很整洁。3.Where is my hat? Oh, Its under the bed. 我的帽子在哪？ 哦，它在床下。4.Do you have a nice room? 你有一间整洁的房间吗？5.You must learn to be a tidy girl/boy. 你必须学会成为一名干净的女孩/男孩。6.What about your room? 你的房间呢？7.Can you introduce your room to me? 可以向我介绍一下你的房间吗？8.She always asks:”Where is my.?” 她经常会问：“我的.在哪？”【谚语

6、积累】1. The cow-house is warm in winter and cool in summer. 牛房牛房，冬暖夏凉。2. One wood cant build a house, and one brick cant build a wall. 天一根木头盖不成房，一块砖头砌不成墙。3. The roof leak suffered from the continuous rain. 屋漏偏遭连夜雨。4. No house can be built on empty words. 空话上面盖不起房子。5. The word is doorway, study is room

7、. 字是门楼书是房。【万能写作模板】写出介绍的房间名称模板介绍物品位置并简单对其介绍I have a （写出介绍的场所名称). There are lots of things in it. I will introduce them to you. Look at the picture. Its on the （物品放置位置). Many apples are on the tree. （照片上有什么）There is （物品名称）in the room. 房间效果及是否喜欢Its near the （物品位置). My （物品名称）are under （物品位置）. My green （

8、物品名称）is on （物品位置), too. Where are my_（物品名称）? I cant find them. Oh, its （物品位置). Where is my green_（物品名称）? I love it very much.My room is very tidy. I like it very much.模板描述场所名称I will introduce a place to you. This is my classroom. Its very tidy. Here are many desks and chairs in it. 对物品位置进行描述First yo

9、u can see a black （物品名称）. Its very big. Its on the_.（物品数量）Then you can see a （物品名称）.Its next to the_.（物品数量）We have many （物品名称）. They are everywhere.询问他人场所内物品的位置I like my classroom very much. Can you tell me your classroom? 模板介绍场所名称Let me introduce my room.My room is very tidy.物品位置描述询问他人Its. Its on/i

10、n the.Theyre. Theyre under.I like it very much.What about your room?假如你是Mike，准备向你的好朋友Jack 介绍自己的新房间，请你给他写一份信，告诉他下面物品的位置。钥匙：在书包里闹钟：在课桌上模型飞机：在椅子下字典：在书架里收音机：在床下要求：1. 词数50左右。2. 语句通顺,句意连贯。3. 内容可适当发挥。_【审题思路】1.明确介绍的场所以及写作的时态；2.对各个物品的位置尽可能描述的详细一些;3.正确运用方位介词，句子之间要恰当的使用连词，使上下文连贯通畅。4.文章的词数50左右。【佳作欣赏1】Dear Jack,

11、I have a new room. There are so many things in it. I will introduce them to you.In my room, some books are everywhere. My keys are in my schoolbag. I have a clock. It looks like a bird. It is on the desk. A white model plane is under the chair. My dictionary is in the bookcase. My radio is under the

12、 bed. I have a tape player. Its on the bookcase. Do you have a room? Can you introduce your room to me?Yours,Mike【佳作欣赏2】Hi,JackI just have a new room. It is a nice room. Let me introduce it to you.I have a white clock. Its on my desk. Where are my keys? I cant find it. Oh, Its in my schoolbag. A gre

13、enmodel plane is under the chair. A dictionary is in the bookcase. My radio is under the bed. My room is very dirty.I cant find anything. My mum always said:”You are not a tidy girl. You must learn to be a tidy girl.” What about your room?Yours,Mike1. 跟据图片信息介绍一下自己的房间。【答案】略二、分别写出图片中物品的位置 The key is _

14、 the desk.The chair is _ the desk. The book is _ the schoolbag.Some pencils _ _ the schoolbag.【答案】 on；near; under; are; in三、写出下列物品的英文表达。 1. 磁带 _2. 收音机_3. 闹钟_4. 词典_5. 模型飞机_6. 书桌_【答案】1.tape player2.radio3.clock4.dictionary5.model plane 6.desk四、连一连1. Where is the tape player? A.Its a photo of a room. 2

15、. Are the books on the table?B.Its under the bed.3. Whats that?C. No, they arent.4. Is that your chair near the window?D. They are on the desk.5. Where are your keys? E. Yes, it is.【答案】1. B 2. C 3. A 4. E 5. D五、连词成句，注意标点和大写字母。1. is, the, your, bed, this, under, schoolbag (?)_2. I, find, it, cant (.)

16、_3.those, in, books, are, the, bookcase (?)_4. know, you, do, radio, this, green(?)_5.model, is, sofa, plane, the, my, on,(.)_6. is, your, jacket, black, where (?)_【答案】1. Is this your schoolbag under the bed?2. I cant find it.3. Are those books in the bookcase?4. Do you know this green radio?5. My m

17、odel plane is on the sofa.6. Where is your black jacket?六、按要求完成下列句子。1. My pencil is in the desk. (改为一般疑问句)_2. I know that red dictionary. (改为否定句)I _ _ that red dictionary.3. My keys are on the bed. (对划线部分提问)_4. Are your green books in the schoolbag?(写出否定回答)No,_ _ .5.Its a key in the bookcase.(改为复数句)

18、_ _ _ in the bookcase.【答案】1.Is your pencil in the desk?2. dont know3. Where are your keys?4. they arent5. They are keys七、根据短文内容，从方框中选择恰当的单词填空，每词限用一次。 room notebooks too tidy pink about it a of whereImFrank. Im have a new 1 . I will introduce my room to you. Here is a photo 2 my room. I like pink and

19、 everything in my room is 3 , too. Here is a clock. Its on the wall. This is 4 pink pencil box. Its on the desk. You can see a blue one is on the desk, 5 . My black jacket is on the bed. My dictionary is under the chair. _6_ are my model plane? 7 is on the floor. My room is not 8 .I always says:”Whe

20、re is my ruler? Where is my quilt? Where are my _9_?” What_10_ your room?【答案】1. room 2. of 3.pink 4. a 5. too 6. Where 7. It 8.tidy 9.notebooks 10.about假如下面是你房间的图片，请你写一篇英语短文描述一下房间的物品摆放情况。要求：1. 不少于50词，关键信息已给出；2. 必须包括所有内容提示，可适当发挥；3. 书写工整、规范。不得出现真实姓名、校名等。_【思路解读】题材：介绍自己的房间信息；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，按照所

21、提供信息描述物品位置。【写作步骤】第一步，表明描述的场所；第二步，对场所内物品信息进行阐述；第三步，表明自己对于场所的喜好，也可询问对方房间内物品的位置摆放。【满分作文】 This is my room. Its small and tidy. I will introduce it to you. A bed, a bookcase, a desk, a computer are in my room. My books are in the bookcase. Also you can see my red dictionary is in it, too. Look, there is

22、a picture of a singer on the wall. The boy is singing. Where is my schoolbag? Oh, its on the door. This is my nice room. Can you show me your room?【亮点词汇】tell me. 告诉我.tidy 整洁的introduce 介绍a picture of. 一张.的照片【高分句型】Its small and tidy. 虽然小但是整洁I will introduce it to you.我会把它介绍给你。Can you show me your room

23、? 可以给我展示一下你的房间吗？（2022湖南）请根据下列提示信息，以“My room”为题，用英文写一篇短文，向你的朋友介绍一下你的房间。提示信息：既大又干净；书桌上：一支钢笔，一个书包，五本书；墙上：一张地图、一张全家福；椅子下面：一个篮球。注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，50词作右；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 _【思路解读】题材：以我的房间为主题展开写作；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主；注意：正确使用方位介词。【写作步骤】第一步，写出房间的大小及整洁度；

24、第二步，对物品的位置进行具体阐述；第三步，询问他人房间布置。【满分作文】My roomThis is my room. It is very nice and tidy. There is a desk in the room. A pen, a schoolbag and five books are on the desk. A map and a photo of my family are on the wall. We are a happy family. Look! My basketball is under the chair. I like my room very much. What about your room?【亮点词汇】nice and tidy 漂亮整洁happy family幸福的家庭a photo of. 一张.的照片【高分句型】What about your room? 你的房间呢？There is. 这有.We are a happy family. 我们是幸福的一家。