2021届通用版高考英语二轮复习题型精练学案： 新高考书面表达之应用文（4） WORD版含解析.doc

1、邯郸市2020-2021学年高三年级期末质量检测66. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter得知你所在的城市有家餐馆推出“大人放下手机，为 儿童免单”的服务。对此他很感兴趣，想了解具体情况,请回信告知。内容包括：1. 为何推出这样的服务：2. 如何免单。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 开头、结尾已经给出。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing to give you so

2、me information. Seeing many diners lost in their own smartphones rather than talking with their family, the boss of the restaurant feels sad and wants to solve the problem. During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the diners will be given the chance to put their phones inside a no phon

3、e zone box. As a reward for giving up their devices, the children can eat for free.This is the new service. Next time you come here, we will go there to experience it in person.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写信，告诉他“大人放下手机，为 儿童免单”的服务的详细情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法

4、总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍为何推出这样的服务：2. 讲述如何免单。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be interested in； rather than；come to；for free；in person第三步：连词成句1.Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing to give you some information. 2.Seeing many diners lost in their

5、 own smartphones rather than talking with their family, the boss of the restaurant feels sad and wants to solve the problem. 3.During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the diners will be given the chance to put their phones inside a no phone zone box. 4.As a reward for giving up their

6、devices, the children can eat for free.5.This is the new service. 6.Next time you come here, we will go there to experience it in person.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more

7、, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

8、 （供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1 Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing to give you some information. （现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）高分句型2 During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the diners will be given the chance to put

9、 their phones inside a no phone zone box.（when引导时间状语从句）河北省石家庄市2021届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）46. 你们年级计划举办一场英文演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括：1. 运动项目；2. 喜爱原因。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。My Favorite SportHello, everyone._【答案】My Favorite SportHello，everyone. My favorite sport is swimming and here are m

10、y reasons.First, its an affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isnt pricey though. Second, swimming is beneficial to your heart and lungs. In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax. Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is alwa

11、ys my favorite pastime.In conclusion, as a very good workout, swimming can give you peace of mind to continue with your day.【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。【详解】你们年级计划举办一场英文演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括：1. 运动项目；2. 喜爱原因。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可

12、以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isnt pricey though.让步状语从句的运用；Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime. 动名词作主语。“决胜高考”2021届新高考八省第一次模拟测

13、试46. 假定你是李华，你校羽毛球俱乐部下周将举行校羽毛球比赛决赛，请写一封邮件，邀请你的外国朋友Sam与你一起观看，内容包括：1. 比赛安排；2. 见面时间、地点；3. 表达期待。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。_【答案】One possible versionDear Sam,Im extremely excited to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 oclock in the afternoon. Knowin

14、g that youre rather interested in it, Im sure you will want to watch it.As scheduled, the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building. Therefore, if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon? There is no doubt that you will be

15、 extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.Sincerely hope you can come. If so, I will reserve a seat next to me for you. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文属于邀请信。要求考生书写一篇电子邮件

16、，邀请外国朋友一起观看学校举办的羽毛球决赛。【详解】本文属于应用文之邀请信写作。写作时内容需要包括三点，首先是比赛安排，即比赛的时间及地点，可以增加对比赛精彩程度的预测以增加其吸引力等有关内容，然后是见面时间及地点，具体内容考生可以适当发挥，合理即可。最后是表达期待，表示真诚邀请他参加的意愿。写作时可合理运用一些句式及词汇，以提高作文的得分档次。【点睛】本文从书写上涵盖了全部内容要点，用词精炼，句式多变，语句之间衔接自然，充分说明了作者的语言驾驭能力。可以作为很好的范文来使用。本文中的高分句式如下：运用了宾语从句：Im extremely excited to tell you that ou

17、r school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 oclock in the afternoon.运用了现在分词做状语：Knowing that youre rather interested in it, Im sure you will want to watch it.运用了条件状语从句：if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon?运用了同位语从句：

18、There is no doubt that you will be extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.2020年夏“武汉襄阳荆门宜昌四地六校考试联盟”46. 假如你是李华，你听说好友小明因为压力太大想辍学。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信：1.劝小明正确对待压力，并提出减轻压力的几个方法；2.希望小明接受自己的建议。注意：1.词

19、数80左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Xiao Ming,_Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】DearXiaoming,Imsorrytolearnthatyouintendtodropoutforhighstress. As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.Firstofall,youshouldhavearightattitudetowardsstress.Stressisasmallpartinournormallife.Second,Isuggestyoucalm

20、downandfindoutthecauseofyourstressandmanagetocomeupwithwaysofdealingwithit. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.IhopethatyoucantakemysuggestionintoaccountandImconvincedthatyouwillmakea right decision. Yourstruly,Lihua【解析】

21、【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信给好友小明，让小明正确对待压力和提出一些建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文人称：第一、二人称时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总-分-总法要点：1.劝小明正确对待压力，并提出减轻压力的几个方法；2.希望小明接受自己的建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）intendto；dropout；best friends；give up；havearightattitudetowards；normallife；calmdown；findout；manageto do；comeupwith；dealwith；as to；take exercise；l

22、isten to；turn to sb. for help；takesth.intoaccount；makea right decision等第三步：连词成句1. Imsorrytolearnthatyouintendtodropoutforhighstress.2. As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.3. Youshouldhavearightattitudetowardsstress.4.Isuggestyoucalmdownandfindoutthecauseofyourstressandm

23、anagetocomeupwithwaysofdealingwith it.5. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.6.IhopethatyoucantakemysuggestionintoaccountandImconvincedthatyouwillmakea right decision.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：F

24、irstofall；Second；2.表并列补充关系：as to；and；or；连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Imsorrytolearnthatyouintendtodropoutforhighstress.这句话使用了由that引导的宾语从句；I hope that you can give up the idea. 这句话也使用了由that引导的宾语从句；Isuggestyoucalmdownandfi

25、ndoutthecauseofyourstressandmanagetocomeupwithwaysofdealingwithit.这句话使用了省略that的宾语从句；IhopethatyoucantakemysuggestionintoaccountandImconvincedthatyouwillmakea right decision. 这句话使用了由and连接的并列句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。江苏省苏州四市五区20202021学年第一学期高三期初调研试卷46. 假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请

26、Green教授做一个关于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会的名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括：1. 讲座的主题；2.时间和地点；3.听讲座时的注意事项。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A notice_The Students Union【答案】One possible version:A noticeThere will be a lecture on western manners by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university. The lecture

27、 will be given in the Meeting Hall from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon next Tuesday. All the students in our school are to attend it. Everyone must keep quiet and make notes while listening to the lecture attentively. After the lecture, Professor Green will answer the questions raised by the teachers

28、 and students. Be sure not to be late.The Students Union【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生以学生会的名义写一份通知，邀请学生参加有关西方礼仪的讲座。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般将来时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 讲座的主题；2. 时间和地点；3. 听讲座时的注意事项。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）invite sb. to do sth./ come from/ give sb. a lecture/ attend/ be sure to do sth./ there be/ on time第三步：连词成句1.

29、There will be a lecture on western manners given by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university.2.The lecture will be held in the Meeting Hall from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon next Tuesday. 3.All the students in our school are supposed to attend it.4.Everyone present must keep quie

30、t and make notes while listening to the lecture attentively.5.After the lecture, Professor Green will answer the questions raised by the teachers and students.6.Please be on time.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇

31、或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：There will be a lecture on western manners by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university.中who引导非限制性定语从句。宁波效实中学2021届高三9月月考英语试题46. 假定你是李华，你和你的英国笔友Peter都对中文诗词很感兴趣，他目前正在参加 “全英中文诗词大赛”，并成功晋级决赛。他写信告知你这个好消息，希望得到你的帮助。请你用英语给

32、他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.表明愿意提供帮助；3.表达祝愿。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】One possible version:Dear Peter,On hearing that youve entered the final round in the Chinese Poetry Competition, I feltextremelyexcited! Congratulations! It came as no surprise to me because I know you are obsessed with Chinese

33、poetry, and youve been devoted to learning it for years. Im proud to see all your efforts have paid off. If you need any help, feel free to let me know. Im delightedto offer you any kind of assistance and enjoy the pleasure of learning Chinese poetry with you.Wish you greater success in the competit

34、ion and in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter回信，向他表示祝贺并表示愿意在诗词和比赛方面给他一定的帮助。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 表示祝贺；2. 表明愿意提供帮助；3. 表达祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be glad to do sth./ be devoted to/ be interested in/ be proud to do sth./ pay off/ be free to do sth./ be del

35、ighted to do sth./ offer sb. sth.第三步：连词成句1.Hearing that youve entered the final round in the Chinese Poetry Competition, I felt extremely excited! 2.It came as no surprise to me because I know you are obsessed with Chinese poetry, and youve been devoted to learning it for years. 3.Im proud to see al

36、l your efforts have paid off. 4.If you need any help, feel free to let me know. 5.Im delighted to offer you any kind of assistance and enjoy the pleasure of learning Chinese poetry with you. 6.Wish you greater success in the competition and in the study of Chinese poetry.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：On hearing that youve entered the final round in the Chinese Poetry Competition, I felt extremely excited!中that引导宾语从句。