山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错 书面表达精练精析7.doc

1、山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析7. 短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。China, with a huge number of bicycles, called “the Kingdom 1. _of Bikes

2、”. Bikes, what many people still ride to go to work, serve 2. _as an important means of transportation. There are some reason 3. _for it. First, the price of bikes is low, comparing with that of cars. 4. _Second, many people go to work by bike to avoid the traffic jam. 5. _However, riding bikes save

3、s money and time for most people. 6. _Besides these two advantages, riding bikes is also effective way 7. _to keep fit for those working in offices or lacking of exercise. 8. _Many people believed that cars are more comfortable and faster 9. _than bikes, but bikes will remain importantly in our dail

4、y life. 10. _. 书面表达近年来，食品安全问题在校园内外时有发生；你校上周就发生了一起食物中毒事件，两名学生在校外吃了一种油炸食品而引起胃痛。请你以李华的名义用英文给某英语报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一现象的看法。词数：100左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容必须包括：. 有些商家只顾赚钱，无视人们的健康和安全；. 学生应尽量在校园内吃饭，不要到校外乱吃；. 为了防止类似事件发生， 提出你的建议。Dear Editor, Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomach ache because they a

5、te some poisonous fried food outside campus. Yours faithfully, Li Hua答案解析. 1. 【解析】called前加is “被叫做”，表被动，前面缺少系动词。2. 【解析】whatwhich which引导非限制性定语从句。3. 【解析】reasonreasons reason“原因”，为可数名词，其前有some，要用复数。4. 【解析】comparingcompared compared with“和比起来”，为固定搭配。5. 6. 【解析】HoweverThus/Therefore/So 由上下文知，句子之间是因果关系，故用T

6、hus/Therefore/So。7. 【解析】effective前加an an effective way“一种有效的方法”。8. 【解析】去掉of lack“缺乏”，是及物动词，不需加介词。9. 【解析】believedbelieve 整篇文章主要运用一般现在时，此处用一般过去时不符合全篇时态。10. 【解析】importantlyimportant remain“仍然是”，是系动词，其后加形容词作表语。. 【参考范文】 Dear Editor, Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomach ache because

7、 they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus. Nowadays in our country, some business people care little about peoples health and safety as long as they can make money. Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers, and this often leads to serious health problems. In order to prevent s

8、uch tragedy happening again, we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school, and we should have meals in school dining rooms. Only in this way can we protect ourselves. Besides, the local government and the school should take practical measures to ensure students health and life security. Im expecting your advice and ideas. Yours faithfully，Li Hua