2025版高考英语一轮总复习 写作培优 第1部分 第1章 第2讲 感谢信、祝贺信、道歉信和告知信课件.ppt

1、第二讲 感谢信、祝贺信、道歉信和告知信第一章 书信感谢信是用来向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后，被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构为：文体(一)感谢信1吸引眼球开头句Im extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during.非常感谢您在期间给予我的无私帮助。I wish to thank you from the bottom of my heart for.我从心底里感谢您，因为Im writing to conv

2、ey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during.我写信感谢您在期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。Id like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and support.我想借此机会感谢您给予我及时的帮助和支持。Id like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help.在这封信中我为您无私的帮助向您表达我

3、诚挚的谢意。On behalf of.,Id like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.我谨代表对您的帮助表示真诚的感谢。2亮点出彩篇中句You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.您确实给我整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。I appreciate it more than I can say./I can never thank you enough.我的感激之情无以言表。Many thanks for all the things

4、 you have done in helping us to.非常感谢您为帮助我们所做的一切。Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help,without which I wouldnt have made such great progress.多亏您慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有您的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Its one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.非常感谢您给我寄来的礼物，这是我收到过的最好的

5、礼物之一。3韵味无穷结尾句It was kind and generous of you to do this for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.您对我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感激不尽。I wish there were a better word than“thanks”to express my appreciation for your generous help.任何语言都不能表达我对您慷慨相助的真挚谢意。Thanks again for your kind help./Again,I would like to express

6、 our sincere thanks to you.对您的友好帮助再次表示感谢。/再次向您表示我们衷心的感谢。I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by.如果我有机会通过报答您的好意，我会非常高兴。My true gratitude/appreciation is beyond any words description.任何语言都不能表达我诚挚的谢意。Dear_,I am writing to convey/express my sincere appreciation/gr

7、atitude for _(感谢的原因)If it had not been for/But for/Without your kindness and help in _(对方给予的具体帮助),I wouldnt have _(如果没有对方帮助的后果).During the trip/week I_(感 受)I shall never forget _(事件)in my life.It was you who _(给出细节)Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us _(细节事件).My appreciation is

8、 beyond any words.I will be more than pleased if I can_(所做的事情)to repay/in return for your kindness.Yours sincerely，Li Hua假定你是一名加拿大籍交换生 David,2024年来到中国华为公司学习，在此期间好友李华在汉语学习和生活方面给了你很大的帮助。请你给他写一封信，向他表示感谢，内容包括：1简述你在公司学习期间遇到的困难，如语言、生活等；2感谢好友李华给予的帮助；3邀请他来加拿大旅游。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分范文】Dear Li

9、 Hua，I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generoushelp given to me.Without your encouragement and advice,I wouldnt have benefited so much from the experience.During my stay in Huawei,I came across a lot of difficulties.First of all,Chinese was the major troublemaker for me.It

10、 was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in Chinese.Whats more,whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness,you were always with me,and were ready to give me help patiently.My appreciation is beyond any words and I will be more than pleased if I can show you around Canada in return

11、 for your kindness.Yours，David【名师点评】1文章开门见山，真诚地表达感谢；随后说明感谢的原因以及对方给予的具体帮助；最后表达希望，并邀请对方来加拿大旅游。2 范 文 中 使 用 了 大 量 亮 点 词 汇 和 句 型(gratitude，generous,overwhelmed,beyond any words)，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。虚拟语气(Without your encouragement and advice,I wouldnt have benefited so much from the experience.)、强调句(It was you w

12、ho encouraged me to be confident to express myself in Chinese.)以及时间状语从句(whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness)的运用，显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力，增加了文章的亮点。(2023广东茂名大联考)假定你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1表示感谢；2回赠礼物；3你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Mike，Im glad to receive the book“A Collec

13、tion of English Poems”Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture，especially Beijing opera，and therefore I will send a Beijing Opera facial makeup to you.Different types of facial makeup are based on a certain per

14、sonality，temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors.I hope you will like the facial makeup.Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.Yours，Li Hua祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对方有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩以及节日寿诞等。具体写作结构为：文体(二)祝贺信1吸引眼球开头句Congratulations on your wi

15、nning the first place in the Chemistry contest.祝贺你在化学竞赛中获得第一名。I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest.得知你在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名，我很高兴。I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the College Entrance Examination.我写这封信是为了表达我对你高考成功的祝贺。I am writing

16、 to congratulate you on.我写信来祝贺你It is with great pleasure that I hear of.我很高兴听说2亮点出彩篇中句It is no surprise to me that you are the winner of.你在中获胜对我来说并不奇怪。It is your.that lead(s)to your success.是你的导致你的成功。It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.这是很久以来我听过的最令人高兴的消息。3韵味无穷结尾句I wish you all po

17、ssible joy and happiness in the world.祝你开心幸福。Congratulations again!I wish you further success in the coming.再次祝贺！我祝你在将来的取得更大的成功。Congratulations again！I sincerely hope you can achieve more in the future.再次祝贺！我真诚地希望你将来取得更多的成就。Dear_,I have learned with delight that you_(祝贺事由).I would like to extend to

18、you my utmost congratulations.You must be _(此刻的心情).And I feel very happy for you._(对方所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news!I know this is surely owing to _(对方过去的努力).It is a reward you richly deserve for your _(对方的优点).Kindly let me know when you_(咨询对方何时有空).I hope _(表达自己的愿望).My best wishes for your further su

19、ccess.Yours sincerely，Li Hua假定你是校体育部部长李华，你校英国交换生Ivan在全市网球比赛中获得了第一名。请你用英语给Ivan写一封信，向他表示祝贺，内容包括：1表明得知Ivan获奖的消息；2对Ivan的成功进行积极评价；3表达衷心的祝贺。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分范文】Dear Ivan，I am much delighted to learn that you got the first place in the city tennis contest.I am writing to offer you my sin

20、cerest congratulations.As we know，you are really talented in playing tennis，but undoubtedly，you couldnt have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort.More importantly，you showed persistencein the competition，which contributed to your final success.We are all proud that you ha

21、ve won glory for our school.Again，Id like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt congratulations and best wishes to you.I wish you greater success in the future.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【名师点评】1文章开门见山，真诚地祝贺Ivan获奖；随后对Ivan的成功进行积极评价；最后再次表达衷心的祝贺。2 范 文 中 使 用 了 大 量 亮 点 词 汇 和 句 型(offer you my sincere

22、st congratulations，are talented in,undoubtedly,remarkable,persistence)，凸显作者扎实的语言功底。虚拟语气(you couldnt have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort)、定语从句(which contributed to your final success)的运用显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John获得了在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1祝贺获奖；2肯定付出

23、；3期待见面交流。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Dear John，Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear John，I would like to express my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.It is really good news that you became champion of this competition.I know you were not very good at Chinese at

24、 first.However,you practised speaking Chinese almost every day.As the saying goes,“Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.”And your efforts paid off at last!I believe you can achieve more in the future.Im looking forward to seeing you soon and catching up on all the updates.Yours，Li Hua道歉信是向对方陈述自

25、己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意，或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。具体写作结构为：文体(三)道歉信1吸引眼球开头句Im terribly/awfully sorry I couldnt.十分抱歉我不能I apologize sincerely for what I said that day.I didnt mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。I am terribly sorry to say that Im unable to attend your birthday party because my father is ill.很

26、抱歉我不能去参加你的生日聚会，因为我的父亲生病了。Im writing to apologize for./I am writing to say sorry for.我写这封信是为道歉。I am writing to express/convey my sincere apologies to you.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。2亮点出彩篇中句I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想让你知道实情。I express my deep regret over the misund

27、erstanding between us.我为我们之间的误会表示深深的遗憾。I feel sorry indeed for having put you to such great trouble.给你带来这么大的麻烦，我感到非常抱歉。I am sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that.我非常抱歉不能参加你的聚会，是因为The reason why I failed to show up was that I had something urgent to attend to/deal with

28、.我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。Please forgive/excuse me for not being able to inform you.请原谅我没能通知你。3韵味无穷结尾句Anyway,I feel terribly sorry for what happened.无论如何，我对发生的事感到非常抱歉。Ill try to make up for my fault.我将尽力弥补我的过错。I apologize to you for all the inconvenience caused.我为造成的所有不便向你表示歉意。I sincerely hope you can accep

29、t my apologies and understand my situation.我真心希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。Dear_,Im writing to convey my sincere apologies to you.Im terribly sorry that _(道歉的原因).The reason why_ was that _(事 件 的 原 因).Therefore,its my fault not to _(事件的结果)I will

30、try to make up for my fault.Once again,I do apologize for any inconvenience caused.Would you please accept my apologies and understand my situation?I hope _(提出期望).Yours sincerely，Li Hua假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1表示歉意；2说明原因；3另约时间。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分范文】Dear Bob，I am

31、 sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we can have more time to read an

32、d select books.If its convenient for you,lets meet at 8：30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Yours，Li Hua【名师点评】1文章开篇表明写作意图，表达歉意；随后说明道歉的原因并解释不能赴约的原因；“再次相约”部分，情节适当发挥，情真意切。2范文中使用了(convenient,available)等高级词汇，并运用了较多的语

33、法结构，如宾语从句(that I cannot go to the bookstore.和that I have to attend.),so that引导的目的状语从句(so that we can have.),if引导的条件状语从句(If its convenient for you)，条件状语从句的省略(If not)等。这展示了作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力，增加了文章的亮点。假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1表达歉意并说明原因；2提出建议并给出理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格

34、式作答。Dear John，Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Jim，Im writing to express my heartfelt apologies for my failing to hang out with you this weekend as scheduled.As you know,I am the chairman of the Chinese Martial Arts Club in our school.Recently we have been rehearsing for the coming school cultural festival.Th

35、e club has just decided to have a rehearsal this weekend.Therefore,I am afraid that I cant hang out with you.Shall we make it next Sunday if you are available?Please let me know if the time is suitable for you.Its my sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept the alternative time.L

36、ooking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua告知信是告诉对方有关活动或其他情况类变化的书信。告知信通常分为两类：告知某人有某事将要发生；回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构为：文体(四)告知信1吸引眼球开头句Im writing to inform you of a small change to your teaching schedule.我写信告诉你你的教学计划有一点小变化。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.我写信告诉你，下个月我们将有

37、一场排球比赛。Im eager/excited to inform you of an advertisement that you may be interested in.我迫切地告诉你一个你可能感兴趣的广告。I cant wait to tell you something about the“Clear Your Plate”campaign launched by our community.我迫不及待地告诉你有关我们社区发起的“光盘”行动。Im writing to inform you that the calligraphy class of next week will be

38、 put off.我写信告诉你下周的书法课将推迟。2亮点出彩篇中句The next class is about calligraphy,for which you should make some preparations.下一个课程是书法，为此你应做一些准备。Though/Although it is a pity that you have missed the opportunity,you can still explore other tourist attractions.尽管你很遗憾错过这次机会，但你仍能探索其他旅游景点。By the way,the repair will l

39、ast one week and your class will be changed to Room 102.顺便说一下，维修将持续一周，你的课将改到102室。I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble/inconvenience.我希望这一变化不会给你带来太多麻烦/不便。Not only does the activity arouse students interest in reading,but it also cultivates students love for knowledge.活动不仅激发了学生的阅读兴趣而且

40、培养了学生对知识的热爱。We had a pleasant time communicating and sharing Chinese culture.我们愉快地交流并分享了中国文化。3韵味无穷结尾句Looking forward to seeing you in the new classroom next week.盼望下周在新教室见到你。Come and experience real Chinese culture yourself.来亲自体验真正的中国文化。According to the notice given by the teacher the time of the co

41、urse has been changed too.根据老师的通知，上课时间也改了。Dear_,How is everything going?Im writing to inform you of_(某事/某种情况).In order to/To_(做某事/某种情况的目的)，we will _(事情/情况的内容一)Besides，_(事情/情况的内容二).Anyway，_(补充某事/某情况的其他细节).Wish you all the best./Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua假定你是校排球队队长李华。请你写封邮件告知你的队友

42、Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1比赛信息；2赛前准备；3表达期待。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分范文】Dear Chris，Im writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match on the afternoon of July 4th in our school gym.We will play against the team from Hongxing High School.With the intention of winning the match,we shou

43、ld get fully prepared and practice hard.Thus,from tomorrow,we need to train for two hours after school every day.Please come to the school gym at 6：30 pm.from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player.With you on the team,we are confident that we can win the game.Lets try hard together.Yours，Li Hua

44、【名师点评】1文章开篇表明写作意图，告知对方比赛信息和赛前准备；最后表达期待，情真意切。2范文中使用了inform,excellent等高级词汇，并运用了较多的语法结构，通过使用宾语从句(that we will have a volleyball match on the afternoon of July 4th in our school gym和that we can win the game)、介词短语(With the intention of winning the match)和with复合结构(With you on the team)，丰富了句式。get fully pre

45、pared的使用增强了语言的表达效果。假定你是李华，你校阳光志愿者俱乐部(Sunshine Volunteer Club)正招收新成员，交换生Terry有意加入，来信向你咨询相关情况。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1介绍俱乐部活动；2告知申请方式；3表达期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Terry，Glad to know you desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Volunteer Club.As a member I do think it is worthwhile to be e

46、ngaged in volunteering.Im writing to share with you the details about it.A wide range of regular activities is scheduled on a weekly basis,such as visiting the nursing home and organizing events to raise peoples awareness of environmental protection.Last weekend we collected books for the children in remote areas who have little access to them.We make great efforts to spread warmth and care and it does pay off.Once you decide,please fill in the attached application form and send it to me.Eagerly looking forward to your participation.Yours，Li Hua