江西省赣州市安远一中2014届高三高考英语复习课件 议论文写作.ppt

1、表示时间关系：first,second,then,finally/at lastin the end,suddenly,at the same time,meanwhile,recently表示对称顺序关系：for one thing.for the other thing,on one hand,.on the other hand，above all,first of all,firstly,secondly,next,finally，the former.the latter,表示递进关系：what is more,as well,moreover,besides,furthermore

2、,in addition，whats worse表示换一种方式表达：in other words,that is to say,表示举例说明：for example,like,such as,for instance表示陈述事实：in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth表示总结：on the whole,in a word,to sum up,in short,in conclusion,from what I have said above zxxk表示因果关系：as a result,thus,therefore,

3、so that,as,because,consequently,表示转折：but,however,while,instead,although,different from,not only.but also表达自己的观点：in my opinion,personally,as far as I know,I believe,I think,as we all know,It is known to us all that.范例1：假如你是李华，你班同学最近开了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点比例你的观点观点支持

4、反对主要理由.应该天天进行体育锻炼.做早操，打乒乓球,打篮球，但时间不要过长。.锻炼能增强质减少疾病.锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好.锻炼浪费时间.锻炼使人疲劳.锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习.锻炼中可能受伤1.关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt2.作文结构1.h

5、ave had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.As we know,every coin has two sides./Different students have different ideas.2.55%of the students think such as(举例)（原因）.3.On the other hand,45%of the students believe (原因）4.In my opinion,I prefer to 3.范文：Recently,

6、we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.As we know,every coin has two coins.55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day,such asdoing morning exercises,playing table tennis and playin

7、g basketball,but not spend too much time on them.As a proverb says,”all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Exercise builds up theirbody and reduce lots of diseases.Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.学科网On the other hand,45%of the students believe taking e

8、xercise is a waste of time and tiring.After taking exercise,they aretoo excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons.And its possible to be hurt in sports.In my opinion,I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.练习：“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？”请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文，客观的介绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点比

9、例观点上大学无所谓不上大学理由增长知识，提高素养，利于择业成功的路不只一条学费高，就业难我的看法关键词语：widen knowledge,improve qualities,high tuition,senior students关键句子：of us consider it necessary to go to college 10%of students think it no use going to college 30%believe “All roads lead to Rome.”范例：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teache

10、rs，which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师青年教师教学耐心.讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛.教学活泼.勇于创新你的观点?学生作品1：Compare with young teachers,I prefer elderly teachers.There are some reasons below.For one thing,most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching.They not only spare no effortto teach the students,but al

11、so give classes carefully.They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers!For another thing,elderly teachers are full of teaching experience.This is also the most important,especially for us senior students.This is only my opinion.I think young teach

12、ers are also good.学生作品1：Compare with young teachers,I preferelderly teachers.There are some reasons below.For one thing,most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching.They not onlyspare no effort to teach the students,but also give classes carefully.They will do all they can to make the students u

13、nderstandthe teaching content.What good teachers!For another thing,elderly teachers are full of teaching experience.This is also the most important,especially for us senior students.This is only my opinion.I think young teachers are also good.点评：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面

14、，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)try to make the classes lively and interesting不足之处：1.个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品2:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching,more careful

15、 in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However,the others have a different opinion.They think the teachers who are young are full of energy.Besides,their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas.Well,in my opinion,I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because

16、 fromthem we both can learn a lot.学生作品2:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching,more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However,the others have a differentop

17、inion.They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy.Besides,theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas.Well,in my opinion,I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.点评：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方：

18、1）2)3)4)1)prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2)with explana-tions3)the 去掉4)The young teachersOne possible version:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to b

19、e patient and careful with explanations.组卷网However,I prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them.So they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Be

20、sides,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas,including teaching.Thirdly,most young teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and effectively.In a word,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.范例：人们对于网上交友持不同的意见请用英语写一篇学生网上教友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的观点赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法广交朋友可自由表达思想利于外语学习浪费时间影响学习可能上当受骗关键词：make friends,express feeling freely,foreign studies,a waste of time,get cheated online.关键句子：Students should place their study,health,and safety before other things.