吉林省舒兰市第一中学高中英语 unit 写作导学案 新人教版必修1.doc

1、Unit 1 Friendship Reading & Writing【learning aims】Master how to write letter of advice.【learning important points】Master the structure of letter of advice.【Warming up】请同学们课前回答这个问题Q: How to make friends with others?【Reading & Writing 】下面的是课上完成的哦2. Suppose you were editor, please write your advice to

2、Xiao Dong._II. Discuss in groups of four. Collect your advice to Xiao Dong and your attitude.Useful expressions: In my opinion, you should My advice is I think/ believe Im afraid that I advise you to I dont think Dont worry I agree/ I dont agree. I think so./ I dont think so. After discussion I get

3、some advice to help Xiao Dong : III. writing (Suppose you are Miss Wang and write back to Xiao Dong)【审题要素】 写作时应注意下面几点：1. 确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2. 主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3. 主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。4. 内容要点：问题介绍；建议一；建议二；建议三；我的愿望。5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。【思路引导】 本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：

4、 首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。 其次，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。Ideas Whyto ask people their likes and dislikes1. to find classmates with the same intereststo join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly3. .3. . 最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对

5、你有帮助等等。【语言积累】1. Introduction: Im sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends. I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on .However, the situation is easy to change

6、 if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2. Ideas & Reasons:First(ly), why not .? If you do this, .Secondly, you should / can . Then / That way, .Thirdly, it would be a good idea if . By doing this, .L

7、ast but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) .3. Conclusion:I hope you will find these ideas useful.As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful .I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get alon

8、g well with your classmates.I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.【写作练习】 Dear Xiao Dong， Yours, Miss Wang (Please exchange with your neighbor to correct the mistakes in the composition. )【Homework】下面的是课后完成的哦假设你是王林， 得知你的好友李华近来经常熬夜看电视，不吃早饭，还不参加体育锻炼，而且上周考试没有通

9、过。请你根据一下啊提示给他写一封建议信：得知李华成绩不及格感到很遗憾；劝告李华放弃不健康的生活方式：熬夜，不吃早饭，不参加锻炼希望李华听从自己的劝告注意： （1）可根据内容需要适当拓展，以使行文连贯；（2）词数100左右【参考范文】Dear Xiao Dong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.Firstly, why not take a

10、n active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views.Secondly, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more diffe

11、rent people and show them that you are friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours sincerely,Miss Wang 通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如何写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。