《名师一号》2011届高三英语重点突破：专题四 短文改错优秀试题热身.doc

1、优秀试题热身Passage 1(2010河北部分重点联考)Dear Anish，Here are the information about Manchester University.1._It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3._or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4._Im sure you will find one you like it. I

2、know you5._are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10._forward to see

3、ing you again.See you soon.Peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意

4、思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。10orand此处是“both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。Passage 2(2010石家庄质检)I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1._such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2._songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3

5、._interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4._to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5._and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6._able to improving the friendship between China and7._the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8._And I believe in nobo

6、dy can change my mind. I will work9._harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10._答案与解析：1hobbyhobbiesmany后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。2piano前加theplay the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。3去掉mostfavorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。45ButSo前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。6westwestern依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。7i

7、mprovingimprovebe able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。8hopedhope这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。9去掉inI believe that.我相信。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。10howwhatno matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。Passage 3(2010唐山联考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping I could get a chance to go to college.

8、I experience2._pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3._because I didnt want to let her off. I was born to a poor4._peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6._lead better life in the future. As the sa

9、ying goes, “No pains7._no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mothers push and the 9._pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._答案与解析：1去掉第二个was此处不用被动语态，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态

10、保持一致。3thatwhat这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4offdown结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。5butand或so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。6waswere此处主语为all the things，故应用were。7better前加alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。8mothermothers此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。910goodbad根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为

11、bad。Passage 4(2010保定调研)Last Sunday I went to the Birds Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chine

12、se culture. They were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to

13、each other later. They thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。2AmericaAmerican应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时

14、。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。Passage 5(2010重庆调研)Today is Sunday. We had not lessons. After breakfast1._I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me.2._He asked me to go to the cinema with he. I agreed, but3._I

15、have to finish my homework first. About an hour later，4._we went out. In the way we saw Kate; she was mending5._her bike. She looked very worry.“Let us help you.” Li Lei6._and I all said. “All right.” And we stopped to help her.7._There was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost8._us only seve

16、ral minutes time to finish it. Kate was very 9._thankful. When we hurried to the cinema, the film had10._been on for ten minutes. But we felt happy.答案与解析：1notno“没有课”应是have no lessons或dont have any lessons。2去掉withdo是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。3hehim介词后跟代词时要用宾格。4havehad本文是叙述过去发生的事情。5InOn“在途中”是on the way。6worryworr

17、ied“她看上去很着急”，应该用形容词作表语。7allboth因为只有我和李蕾两人。8costtook“花费时间做什么”要用It takes some time to do something。9去掉time有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。10Passage 6(2010成都检测)My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1._and August. We will travel for about two months but2._will tour the United States and parts of the

18、Canada. We3._have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4._as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5._think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6._we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7._and as few camping things as possibly. We will t

19、ake some8._medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9._some food for picnics. Im sure that we will have fun.10._答案与解析：1amare本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。2butand此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。3删去第二个the一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。4spendcost本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。5hadhave短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。6whatthat/w

20、hich或删去what“that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。7themus根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。8possiblypossibleas.as possible表示“尽可能”。9prevent前加to此处是不定式短语作目的状语。10Passage 7(2010绵阳诊断)Tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. One day he1._went to the cinema. It was

21、 the first time for him to do that. He2._bought a ticket and then went out. But after two or three minutes3._he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again. After a4._few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket. Two5._or three minutes later he came out and asked another tick

22、et.6._Then the girl in the ticket office who asked him, “Why do you7._buy so many ticket? How many friends do you meet？” Tom8._answered，”No, I have not friends here. But a big boy always 9._stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces.”10._答案与解析：1but改为and依据语境，这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。23out改为in依据语境，男

23、孩买票走进电影院。4the改为a下文bought a third ticket有暗示。序数词前用不定冠词，表示“再一，又一”。5comes改为came结合行文逻辑，这里应用一般过去时。男孩进去又出来了。6asked后加forask for sth.表示“要求得到”。7去掉who这里不是定语从句，假如是定语从句，原句缺少主句。8ticket改为ticketsso many后接复数名词。9not改为nonot是副词，不能修饰名词，应改为no。10tear改为tears这里stop和tear是并列谓语动词，要用第三人称单数的一般现在时。Passage 8(2010内江、广安模拟)Last Satur

24、day we had a party at home. Dads friends come1._along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad2._and I had to prepare everything, so it turned out such a miracle3._that they did make it! Everything went perfectly fine.4._A lot of kids who came that day. I had the most wonderful time5._wit

25、h Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much6._like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed7._short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time8._to continue the conversation. Hopeful were going on9._a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10._答案与解析：1co

26、mecame整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。23sobut前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。4theywe根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。5去掉who本句为简单句，去掉who。6amazedamazing主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。7byin固定短语have.in common表示“有相同之处”。8去掉hadwish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词动词原形，因此把had去掉。9HopefulHopefully副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。10在als

27、o后加thenext summer指明年夏天，the summer after next指后年夏天。Passage 9(2010郑州质检)We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1._study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2._and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3._take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4._

28、Theres many different kinds of sports we can do them，5._such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6._However, now we have too much homework to do in7._every day. We hope that well be giving less homework8._and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9._that our school can hold a

29、sports meeting every term. 10._答案与解析：1healthyhealth这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。2byon/upondepend on/upon是固定搭配。3helphelps这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。4butandfeel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。5去掉them这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。6swimswimming应用动名词

30、与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。7去掉inevery day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。8givinggiven这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。9take前加to此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。10Passage 10(2010河南五校联考)After I finished the school this year, I began to1._look for work. Now several month later, I still hadnt 2._found the job that I was interested

31、. Last Sunday morning，3._I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4._He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5._studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6._his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7._will go through the jobhunting talk today and

32、he would8._take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9._what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10._答案与解析：1去掉thefinish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。2monthmonthsmonth是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。3interested后加inbe interested in是固定搭配，表示“对感兴趣”。4himhimselfcalling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。5dodid根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。67beatenbeatinga beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。8willwould这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。9surprisedsurpriseto ones surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。10said后加waswhat he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。8