备考2024届高考英语一轮复习 第二部分 读后续写 专题二 热考话题素材 4 同学关系.docx

1、热考话题4同学关系2022浙江1月改编When Dr. Henderson was assigning（指定） project mates for his psychology class， I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all， I hoped he wouldnt assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely s

2、erious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate（命运） would have it， Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced

3、myself. He looked at me as though I werent there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasnt mean or abusive； he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to

4、say， I didnt look forward to an entire term of being brushed off， but I tried to make the best of it and didnt say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis（假说）， set up an experiment to test the hypothesis， do the statistical analysis and

5、 present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project， I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop t

6、he class at one point， but stopped short because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasnt sure what it meant exactly， but at lea

7、st we had a topic.We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.人物主要人物my teammate：文中描述的fiercely competitive and extremely serious do whatever project. better if he did it alone和had a reputation for single-mindedness an

8、d good grades表明，my teammate成绩优异、性情高傲、学习专注、好胜心强，且我和我的队友关系冷淡，似乎互相看不上对方。主要人物I：从文中描述的make the best of it and didnt say anything single-mindedness and good grades the exact opposite of me和decided to stick to it no matter what可以看出，我学习成绩一般、性情随和、努力且不轻言放弃。两个主要人物几乎相反的性格为续写部分两人合作中的摩擦埋下了伏笔，第五段尾句I decided to sti

9、ck to it no matter what也为续写部分我在项目中起到积极作用奠定了基础。情节及情感线我被安排与一位自己原本想避开的同学合作（感到自己很不幸）我主动向队友介绍自己，却被冷漠对待（感觉自己被忽视，同时很担心俩人的合作）我与队友会面讨论项目（面对优秀的队友，我自惭形秽，想放弃但又不甘心，于是决定坚持）最终确定了课题（感到一丝宽慰）主题根据续写两段提示语可知，我和队友开始逐渐进入状态，但队友却因病住院，结合读后续写结局圆满的原则可以推测，我和队友在合作上应该是从消极配合到积极参与，最终研究项目一定会成功。文章最终是要体现战胜困难、精诚合作、队友情深的主题。续写第一段根据原文中讲到的

10、人物性格特征和续写第一段的提示语可知，本段主要讲我和队友定期碰面推进项目、相互磨合的情景，主要通过叙述和心理描写展现搭档在推进项目中的表现、我对此的反应、俩人关系的发展情况。续写第二段根据续写第二段提示语以及续写故事曲折，结局圆满的原则可知，本段应该主要讲述在得知队友生病后，我的反应、我对待项目的态度、为了最终完成项目我做了哪些努力等。尾句可以升华主题：我们意识到了团队合作的重要性。1.He took charge of the project.增加副词，凸显队友的专权。He took charge of the project totally.为句补充as引导的原因状语从句，讲述队友专权的原

11、因。As he was a fiercely competitive fellow， he took charge of the project totally.为句补充结果，并运用现在分词短语作状语，讲述队友专权对我的影响，体现初期合作的不顺畅。As he was a fiercely competitive fellow， he took charge of the project totally，leaving me doing nothing but simply following his steps and instructions.2.I went to the hospital

12、.增加副词，并用hurry替换句中的go，体现我想去探望队友的急切心情。Immediately， I hurried to the hospital.为句增加定语从句，讲述我在医院了解到的情况，使故事性更强，情节更完整。Immediately， I hurried to the hospital，where I learned that he had to be hospitalized for quite a while.3.I tried hard to do the project.用put all my heart into 替换try hard ，体现用词的丰富性。I put all

13、 my heart into doing the project.用原文中的表达细化句中做项目的过程，使情节发展更加自然完整。I put all my heart into doing the analysis and presenting our findings.用with复合结构优化句，并用副词体现我分析和呈现结果的状态，凸显我的努力和认真。With all my heart put into the project， I did the analysis accurately and presented our findings reasonably.Westartedtomeetre

14、gularlytodrawupourplans. As he was a fiercely competitive fellow， he took charge of the project totally， leaving me doing nothing but simply following his steps and instructions. Though unwilling（尽管不情愿）， I did my part but did it in a blind way. As the project progressed， I seemed to get the trick， w

15、hich built up my confidence（增强了我的信心） and made my teammate slightly relieved.At this point， we started to really work as a team.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtothehospitalforaseriousdisease. Immediately， I hurried to the hospital， where I learned that he had to be hospitalized for quite a while. See

16、ing the worry and weakness written on his face（看着他脸上的忧虑和虚弱）， I assured him that I would carry on with our project. With all my heart put into the project（我全身心投入到这个项目中）， I did the analysis accurately and presented our findings reasonably. Eventually， our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project， we both learned that one person can go far， but a group of people can travel farther（一个人可以走很远，但一群人可以走得更远）.