2016年高考英语短文改错集训营课件：高考英语短文改错1——说明文.ppt

1、高考英语短文改错1说明文(一)Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school.I really want share with you some problems Ive been experiencing.As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.toldtofriendsWe hang out together whenever we can.Weve been spending much time sing in karaoke bars.Its been

2、 three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a wasting activity.muchsingingIn fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Gracethemw

3、ereWhatbut(一)这是一封求助信，表达了作者的困扰。作者交了三位新朋友，经常一起闲逛和K歌，实际上作者并不想出去但又担忧失去这份友谊，她想寻求一些建议。1.在want后加to 因want后用不定式作宾语。2.tell told 由后面的时间状语last time可知应用一般过去时。3.friend friends 由前面的three可知要用复数。4.sing singing 由固定结构spend(in)doing sth.意为“花费做某事”可知。5.many much 根据句意“它真的花费了我很多钱”，故用much指代钱(不可数)。6.so but 此处显然存在转折关系，故用并列连词b

4、ut。7.How What 因作do的宾语，故要用what。8.are were 此处是虚拟语气。虚拟条件句中的系动词是be(对现在事实的虚拟)时，要用were。9.him them 根据上文可知作者交了三位朋友，故要用复数them。10.去掉help后的with 因动词help是及物动词，可直接带宾语，不需加介词with。注意：help sb.with sth.意为“帮助某人做某事”。wasting adj.浪费的hang out 闲逛karaoke bar 酒吧share with sb.sth.与某人分享某物see this as 把这看作 (二)Dear editor,Im sorry

5、 to occupy your precious time,and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping pets nowadays.I take the problem seriously for the following reason.First,as it is known to all,pets make much noise that trouble people greatly.troublesreasonssomethingbutAdditionally,its w

6、idely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment,where makes people uncomfortable.Many owners like taking pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people.theirwhichMost important,pets can spread some diseases that have attracted much attention.Take these factors i

7、nto consideration,I sincerely hope I can get help to you and expect the media to do something for this.Yours truly,Li HuafromTakingimportantly(二)作者(Li Hua)向媒体写信就人们养宠物这个问题寻求帮助。1.and but 表转折用并列连词but。2.anything something 肯定句用something。3.reason reasons 下文列举的原因不止一个，故用复数。4.去掉is known前的it 由常用结构as is known

8、to all意为“众所周知”可知。5.trouble troubles 先行词noise是不可数名词，故此处要用第三人称单数。6.where which 引导非限制性定语从句，并在从句中作主语。7.在taking后加their 表“他们的宠物”，故要加their，此乃英语的习惯表达，交代清楚是“谁的”。8.important importantly 修饰整个句子要用副词。9.Take Taking 此处Take作非谓语，与逻辑主语I存在主动关系，故用现在分词。10.help后的to from 此处理应表“从你那里”，故用from。occupy vt.占据 precious adj.宝贵的fol

9、lowing adj.下面的additionally adv.此外frighten vt.吓唬 spread vt.传播sincerely adv.真诚地factor n.因素takeseriously 认真对待；重视Its widely accepted that 人们普遍认为takeinto consideration 把考虑在内attract much attention 引起很多注意(三)Dear Feng Ying,Ive received your letter,in that you said youwanted to lose weight by dieting.Its nat

10、ural thatgirls of your age hope to look beautiful,and in my opinion,health overweighs beautiful.For a student,study is the first thing to consider but appearance is the second.whilebeautybutwhichSo dont let others ideas affect your normal life.However,if you did want to lose weight,its good idea to

11、do it by taking exercise and change unhealthy eating habits.changingadoFurthermore,you should keep for a healthy state of mind,which is helpful in many aspects.I hope my advices will be helpful to you.Im looking forward to hear from you.Yours,Li Huahearingadvice(三)作者(Li Hua)给Feng Ying回信就如何合理减肥提供建议。1

12、.that which 非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。2.and but 表转折用并列连词but。3.beautiful beauty 作宾语要用名词形式。4.but while 表对比用并列连词while。5.did do 此处是强调谓语，而全文的主体时态是一般现在时，故要用do。6.在good前加a 由常用句型its a good idea to do sth.意为“做某事是个好主意”可知。idea是可数名词。7.change changing 作介词by的宾语要用动词-ing形式，与前面的taking并列。8.去掉keep后的for 因keep是及物动词。9.advices adv

13、ice 因advice是不可数名词。10.hear hearing 由固定短语look forward to doing sth.意为“期待做某事”可知。overweigh vt.比重要appearance n.外貌affect vt.影响furthermore adv.此外lose weight 减肥of your age 你这个年龄的normal life 正常生活state of mind 心态in many aspects 在很多方面Its natural that 是自然的(四)I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can wa

14、tch TV after school.She holds view that Senior 3 students must make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.fullthewithIt seems to me that once Im allowed to do that,Ill be unable to control myself and forgetting all about my study.She also thinks its bad for my eye.But I really cant

15、 accept her ideas.eyesforgetherIn my view,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a days hard works.Besides,its important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad.Thus,we shouldnt be forbidden to watch TV.hasworkwatching(四)本文作者和母亲关于自己能不能看电视展开了争论。1.about with 由固定短语quarrel with sb.意为“和某人争

16、论”可知。2.在view前加the 由固定短语hold the view意为“认为”可知。也可以说，view后有定语从句，表特指。3.fully full 修饰名词use要用形容词full。4.me her 根据上下文意思可推知，此处是指“对她来说好像”。5.forgetting forget 情态动词后用动词原形，与be并列。6.eye eyes 因eye是可数名词，此处理应是指“双眼”，故用复数。7.watch watching 作主语要用动词-ing形式。8.works work 因work是不可数名词。9.had has 全文的主体时态是一般现在时，故此处要用现在完成时。10.去掉ab

17、road前的at 由固定短语at home and abroad“在国内外”可知。abroad本身可作副词，前面无需加介词。quarrel vi.争吵；吵架thus adv.因此once conj.一旦Senior 3 students 高三学生work hard at 努力学习be forbidden to do 被禁止做in my view 在我看来set my mind at rest 让我的头脑休息一下(五)Time is valuable but limit.There is a famous saying,“Time is life”,this shows the importan

18、ce of time.When time had gone,itll never return.Its a pity when many people make poor use of time.thathaswhichlimitedThey spend their precious time oversleeping,drinking and hanging around.They dont realize wasting time is equal with wasting their life.They always regret having made little achieveme

19、nt so far.toHowever,we should form the habit of value time.Dont put off what can be done today tomorrow.Laziness will not only bring us the failure,but also lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths.deathtill/untilvaluingTherefore(五)本文告诉我们，时间是有限的，我们要珍惜时间。1.limit limited 作表语要用形容词。2.this which 引导

20、非限制性定语从句。3.had has 全文的主体时态是一般现在时，故此处用现在完成时。4.when that 由固定句型its a pity that意为“很可惜”可知，that引导主语从句。5.with to 由固定短语be equal to意为“与相等”可知。6.However Therefore 根据上下文，此处理应表“因果”关系，故要用Therefore。7.value valuing 作介词of的宾语，要用动词-ing形式valuing，意为“珍惜”。8.在tomorrow前加till/until 由固定短语put offtill/until意为“把推迟到”可知。till/until

21、在此作介词，并非连接词。9.去掉failure前的the 抽象名词前不加冠词。此处是第一次提到，而且并无特指，故不用定冠词。10.deaths death 因和poverty是并列关系，故用单数death。deaths意为“死亡人数”。valuable adj.有价值的precious adj.珍贵的oversleep vi.睡过头poverty n.贫穷so far 迄今为止put off 推迟hang around 闲荡form the habit of 养成的习惯(六)Do you read reviews after you see a movie?I use to do that,b

22、ut I usually regretted.I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all.goinginusedbeforeThe writers point out everything thats wrong with the film,but seldom mentions anything good about them.They also tell many things and even the ending of the movie.Lately I h

23、ave changed way I choose movies to watch.theitmentionI read reviews afterwards.Whats importance to me is that I dont watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies.I dont ask others how they like of it.Now,I enjoy myself even more.whichimportant(六)本文作者就“看电影评论的方式”谈了自己的观点。1.after before 根据下文可知，应该是

24、在看电影之前看的评论，故用before。2.use used 由固定短语used to do意为“过去常常”可知。3.on in 由固定短语in advance意为“提前”可知。4.go going 由固定短语end up doing意为“以结束”可知。5.mentions mention 主语是复数名词writers，故不用第三人称单数。6.them it 指代前面的the film，故用单数it。7.在way前加the 此处表特指，故要用定冠词。8.importance important 作表语要用形容词。9.people前的that which 在带有介词的定语从句中不能用that。1

25、0.去掉like后的of 因like是及物动词。review n.评论regret vi.后悔afterwards adv.事后point out 指出talk show 访谈节目even more 更多地(七)Last week,students in our class held debate on whether we should shop online.Most students are in favor for it,think that shopping online can help people save time.thinkingofaBesides,shopping on

26、line not only allow people to browse many items without leaving our homes,but also lets them compare the prices of goods in a short time.theirallowsMore important,the Internet is open all day long,so it is of great convenient for those who are busy in the daytime.However,special attention must be pa

27、y to the safety of online shopping.People need to make sure of that they get that they have ordered before paying for the bill.whatpaidconvenienceimportantly(七)本文论述了网络购物的优点和缺点。1.在debate前加a 因debate是可数名词，故要加不定冠词。2.for of 由固定短语in favor of意为“赞同”可知。3.think thinking 分析句子成分可知此处think作非谓语，且与逻辑主语students存在主动关

28、系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。4.allow allows 本句主语是shopping online，谓语动词要用第三人称单数。5.our their 由前面的people可知要用their。6.important importantly 作状语要用副词形式。7.convenient convenience 因be of great+抽象名词=be very+形容词。8.pay paid 此处是被动，故要用过去分词。9.去掉make sure后的of 因make sure that+从句是固定句型，此处of显然是多余的。10.get后的that what 引导宾语从句。根据语境可知应该用what

29、才符合逻辑。debate n.辩论browse vt.浏览item n.物品compare vt.对比goods n.商品order vt.定购；定(货)save time 节省时间in a short time 在很短时间内in the daytime 在白天pay for the bill 买单(八)With the development of our countrys economy,more and more people buy cars,that causes serious traffic problems and environmental pollution.As far

30、as I am concerned about,the solutions of this problem are presented as follows.towhichFirstly,the government should restrict the amount of car-buying and raises the costs of owning private cars.Secondly,cars from other places ought be limited to going to big cities.raisetoBeside,the government shoul

31、d design different reasonable traffic system to help solve the traffic problems.In the word,traffic problems have increasing affected many aspects of our life.Therefore,we must spare no efforts to solving this problem.solveincreasinglyasystemsBesides(八)本文就私家车越来越多从而引起的交通环境问题提出了一些解决措施。1.that which 引导非

32、限制性定语从句，关系代词只能用which。2.去掉concerned后的about 由固定结构as far as I am concerned意为“在我看来”可知。3.of to 由固定搭配the solution to sth.意为“解决某事的方法”可知。4.raises raise 因与前面的restrict并列，故用动词原形。5.在ought后加to 由固定短语ought to意为“应该”可知。6.Beside Besides 因beside意为“在旁边”，besides意为“此外”，故填Besides。7.system systems 根据前面的different可知要用复数。syst

33、em是可数名词。8.the a 由固定短语in a word意为“总而言之”可知。9.increasing increasingly 修饰后面的动词affected要用副词形式。10.solving solve 由固定短语spare no efforts to do sth.意为“不遗余力地做某事”可知。cause vt.引起solution n.解决办法restrict vt.限制present vt.介绍；呈现amount n.数量reasonable adj.合理的aspect n.方面 as follows 如下be limited to 被限制 spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力地做某事as far as I am concerned 在我看来with the development of 随着的发展