高中英语一轮复习备考策略---遣词造句HOW TO BEAUTIFY SENTENCES课件.ppt

1、By Miss JinPlease introduce one of your classmates within 3 to 5 sentences.Name Character/Personality Hobbies Hello,my dear fellow teachers!Id like to introduce one of the students in my class to you today.As you have seen here,this is a very cute boy,whose name is_.Short and skinny as he is,he is a

2、lways full of passion and energy.Above all,he is easy-going and warm-hearted,which makes him popular with us teachers as well as his classmates.Whats more,he always answers the teachers questions very quickly and actively.Huang zhong Advanced vocabulary Advanced sentence patternsWhat kinds of vocabu

3、lary andsentence patterns are advanced?How to Beautify Your Sentences1.Dont worry about your expensesfor university education,and we will try to help you.and we will make the greatesteffort/spare no efforts/do all we can/do whatever we can to help you.In Vocabulary2.At that time the taxi driver had

4、to ask the tourist for help.3.We should do something to protect our environment.At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.We should take effective measures to 4.I dont understand what you mean.I dont make sense of/figure out/make out/take in what you mean.5.I dont feel co

5、mfortable today.6.We all think he is a great man.7.She went to America in order to study music.I am not(feeling)well today./I am not quite myself today.We all think highly of him.She went to America for the purpose of studying music.8.Some people are in favor of the practice while others are not in

6、favor of it.9.You can find my house easily.10.We have much homework to do.are not for/are against/object to/is opposed to/disapprove of/say no toYoull have no trouble(in)finding my house.We have endless homework to do.In Vocabulary（小结）词组优先(Preference for Phrases)地道原则(Be pure)避免重复(Avoid repetition)高级

7、原则(Be Advanced)1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(定语从句)3.I wont believe what he says.（使用让步状语从句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.No matter what he says,I wont believe it.In Sen

8、tence StructuresThe girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.4.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(越 越)5.After we had gathered at the school gate,we left for the Xiaguang Nursing Home by bus.（分词）The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Having gathered at the school gat

9、e,we left for the Xiaguang Nursing Home by bus.6.We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.(感叹句)How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well!8.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.(倒装）Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.7.Now

10、 the pollution problem has become the focus of people.(强调句型)Now it is the pollution problem that has become the focus of people.9.I suggest that we should close down the factories which pollute the environment badly.（被动式）10.I have made great progress in English with his help.(双重否定）Its suggested that

11、 the factories which pollute the environment badly be closed down.I couldnt have made great progress without his help.一、肯定不如双否好二、自然不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲In Sentence Structures（小结）上网是中学生最热门的话题之一。对此，有的同学说好，有的同学则持反对意见。请根据下面所提供的信息写一篇短文并发表自己的意见。优点缺点1、对学生帮助大1、大部分同学上网聊天玩游戏，甚至上不良网站.2、可查阅有关课程信息，上因特网学习2、影响学生

12、正常的学习3、了解最新信息，开阔眼界，扩大知识面3、对学生身心都造成伤害Nowadays,going online is one of the most popular topics of the students.The Internet is helpful to students.We can look for information and study on it.We also get the latest news from it.It helps us see more and learn more.The Internet has a bad influence on our

13、study.Some students chat and play games on it.And someone even visits bad websites.These hurt both our body and heart.So we should make full use of the Internet to improve us.And we should also avoid the bad influences of the Internet.A Students VersionChallenge Yourself!Use the principles we have l

14、earned to beautify the sentences in the passage above to make it a better one.You can also write your own passage.A possible version Nowadays there is an increasing tendency that more and more middle school students are craze about surfing the Internet,about/on which opinions are divided.Students wh

15、o are in favor of it hold the view that the Internet is of great benefit to them.On one hand,not only can they consult the Internetfor the information about a specific subject butalso they can study on the Internet.On theother hand,they can be informed of the latestInformation.Moreover,they can broa

16、den theirhorizons and enlarge their knowledge.Meanwhile,there are some studentsdisapproving of it.As far as they are concerned,the majority of the students who surf the Internet merely waste their time in chatting,playing games or even visiting some bad websites,which has a bad effect on their regul

17、ar study.To make matters worse,it might do great harm to their physical andmental health.For my part,no one can deny the fact that the Internet is playing an essential rolein our daily life.Nevertheless,its of vital importance that students should weigh the advantages and disadvantages of the Intern

18、et.Only in this way can they make proper use of it.祝功成你!如何冲刺高分作文一：熟读优秀范文，依葫芦画瓢。二：背诵100句及过渡词，学会套用经典句式。三：熟背课文及课外优美句式，并学会运用。写作六步曲：1.审题。（体裁，人称，时态）2.抓要点，写提纲。3.扩展成句。（使用高级词汇、句式）4.连句成文。（加过渡词）5.查错改错。6.誉写。（润色，闪光点）卷面不工整扣5分书面表达六步法书面表达常见错误类型：一：Chinglish(汉语英语）1.He has a strong body.2.I very like you3.One thing/re

19、ason is that.He is in good health/condition.I like you very much.The reason why is that4.The population of China is many.5.I will instead of you to go there.6.Recently our village has taken place great changes.The population of China is large.I will go there instead of you.Great changes have taken p

20、lace recently.二、语法错误：1.There were 30 visitors came to our school.2.Though rained,we went on working.3.I am so tired,I must go to bed.4.60%of the students against the idea.5.I wish that China will become more stronger and more better.6.As our country developing,we should do all what we can to improve

21、 ourselves.There were 30 visitors who came to our school.Though it rained,we went on working.Being so tired,I must go to bed.60%of the students are against the idea.I hope that China will become much stronger and better.As our country develops,we should do all that we can to 三、拼写错误：1.belive 2.strick

22、 3.He teached.4was destroied.5.With the developing of our country6improve our studingbelievestrictHe taughtwas destroyedWith the development of improve our studiesWhats the difference?Whats the benefit?Well-written sentences make the passage more vivid and can convey more information.高考英语书面表达评分标准最高档次（很好）（24-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用较多的语法结构和词汇。具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。Writing GuidanceHow to Beautify Your Sentences